The Wicked Revenge

by FradUck

Prologue : Curse is Set

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"What? Where am I?"

Ben opened his eyes and glanced down. He tried to move but was restrained at both wrists by two dainty, metal shackles. He clenched his hands and tried to wriggle free, but it was no use. The room was dark with only a few shafts of light piecing in through the slits in the rafters. It was cold and there was a somewhat eerie atmosphere. Ben tried to move his legs, noticing more shackles locked to each of his ankles. He was not going anywhere soon.

There was a sudden change in the lighting. A small shadow edged its way along the ceiling, and it drew ever closer towards him. It paused above Ben; he shivered.

"Welcome, stranger, to my kingdom. My rightful kingdom," uttered a voice from out of the darkness.

Ben could sense his heart racing, his fear of the voice was building.

"Can you not speak? I thought you were supposed to be able to talk. Maybe I'm not speaking clearly enough".

There was a long, painful silence. Ben could sense a distinct presence in the room, moving in the darkness. He heard a noise behind him, and then a light touch on the back on his neck. He tried to remain calm.

"Lets try this again, shall we" said the voice, now louder. "I am the Queen of this world and you will answer me when I command it. Now speak!" - there was a hint of growing frustration and anger in the voice.

Nervously Ben spoke, "Hello, yes I can talk, most people can, unless they're..-"

"Silence already!" interrupted the voice. "At least I now know that I can talk with you. Yes, you'll do nicely." Ben remained silent. He felt something run down his back and then back up to his neck; the touch was gentle and relaxing. "Now if you do exactly what I say, you'll be unharmed. Disobey me and you shall be punished." Ben's neck began to clench; something was pressing down on it with force.

"Now, look at me!" A figure appeared in the darkness; Ben could not make out any details. The figure lunged closer; he could make out two eyes, glowing green out of the darkness. He fidgeted in his chair, trying one last time to break free. The eyes got closer, both focused on Ben. Suddenly they jumped forward, right close to him. He could make out the faint outline of a face; harsh, sharp features and a small strand of turquoise hair hanging down slightly over one eye. The creature whispered, "Do you promise to obey me, every one of my commands?"

Ben remained still for as long as he thought he could. Eventually he found the courage to speak, "I will obey every command you give me."

"Oh good. I was hoping you'd say that." The face pressed up to him and he felt a kiss on his left cheek. He trembled slightly but remained still whilst the creature caressed his neck and back. "Kiss me" demanded the creature. Ben stared helplessly into the unnerving eyes. "I said kiss me!" ordered the creature. Ben quickly obeyed and pressed his lips against what to him at least looked like lips. He could feel a tongue entering his mouth; it tasted bitter. The kiss continued. Ben could feel himself struggling to breath but he could not stop himself. Lips locked together they continued to engage.

Something softly moved over Ben's leg and began to make its way up along his thigh. He could feel himself becoming aroused against his will, but there was nothing he could do. The part of the creature reached his groin and began to rub against his penis; which was quickly becoming erect. The pleasure was becoming too much for Ben. With both the agonizing kiss and the ferocious caressing of his penis he began to jerk in the chair. The pace of the movement increased; Ben's penis now throbbing. The creature forced its tongue deeper than ever into Ben's throat, until he could take no more. He felt a warm explosion from his genitals that slowly ran down his legs. The kissing ceased and the creature pulled its face away from his mouth.

"I am very much going to enjoy this, he-he" chuckled the creature. Ben suddenly began to feel faint; his head began to sway. "Goodnight my dear" whispered the voice into his ear. "Sleep well...-"


Author's Note

My first attempt at a FIM fiction (definitely adult rated!), I'm not exactly a writer but I thought I would give it a go :) This is very early days and is just the start.. Comments and ways to improve would be much appreciated! Thank you, I hope you like it :)

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