The Wicked Revenge

by FradUck

Rating: mature
Tags: Queen Chrysalis, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Sex, Human, Main 6, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Princess Cadance, Dark, Romance, Original Character
Length: 3223

Queen Chrysalis seeks revenge on the ponies that stopped her evil plans.

After being defeated Queen Chrysalis seeks revenge on all the ponies who foiled her plans to take over Equestria. She travels to the human world and brings back human who she transforms into a pony. She curses him and orders him to carry out her revenge...

The Prologue and Chapter 1 are finished, I'll be working on Chapters 2 and 3 when I get some spare time :)

Published 2014-02-21 00:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-02-21 00:30:03 UTC

Prologue : Curse is Set

"What? Where am I?"

Ben opened his eyes and glanced down. He tried to move but was restrained at both wrists by two dainty, metal shackles. He clenched his hands and tried to wriggle free, but it was no use. The room was dark with only a few shafts of light piecing in through the slits in the rafters. It was cold and there was a somewhat eerie atmosphere. Ben tried to move his legs, noticing more shackles locked to each of his ankles. He was not going anywhere soon.

There was a sudden change in the lighting. A small shadow edged its way along the ceiling, and it drew ever closer towards him. It paused above Ben; he shivered.

"Welcome, stranger, to my kingdom. My rightful kingdom," uttered a voice from out of the darkness.

Ben could sense his heart racing, his fear of the voice was building.

"Can you not speak? I thought you were supposed to be able to talk. Maybe I'm not speaking clearly enough".

There was a long, painful silence. Ben could sense a distinct presence in the room, moving in the darkness. He heard a noise behind him, and then a light touch on the back on his neck. He tried to remain calm.

"Lets try this again, shall we" said the voice, now louder. "I am the Queen of this world and you will answer me when I command it. Now speak!" - there was a hint of growing frustration and anger in the voice.

Nervously Ben spoke, "Hello, yes I can talk, most people can, unless they're..-"

"Silence already!" interrupted the voice. "At least I now know that I can talk with you. Yes, you'll do nicely." Ben remained silent. He felt something run down his back and then back up to his neck; the touch was gentle and relaxing. "Now if you do exactly what I say, you'll be unharmed. Disobey me and you shall be punished." Ben's neck began to clench; something was pressing down on it with force.

"Now, look at me!" A figure appeared in the darkness; Ben could not make out any details. The figure lunged closer; he could make out two eyes, glowing green out of the darkness. He fidgeted in his chair, trying one last time to break free. The eyes got closer, both focused on Ben. Suddenly they jumped forward, right close to him. He could make out the faint outline of a face; harsh, sharp features and a small strand of turquoise hair hanging down slightly over one eye. The creature whispered, "Do you promise to obey me, every one of my commands?"

Ben remained still for as long as he thought he could. Eventually he found the courage to speak, "I will obey every command you give me."

"Oh good. I was hoping you'd say that." The face pressed up to him and he felt a kiss on his left cheek. He trembled slightly but remained still whilst the creature caressed his neck and back. "Kiss me" demanded the creature. Ben stared helplessly into the unnerving eyes. "I said kiss me!" ordered the creature. Ben quickly obeyed and pressed his lips against what to him at least looked like lips. He could feel a tongue entering his mouth; it tasted bitter. The kiss continued. Ben could feel himself struggling to breath but he could not stop himself. Lips locked together they continued to engage.

Something softly moved over Ben's leg and began to make its way up along his thigh. He could feel himself becoming aroused against his will, but there was nothing he could do. The part of the creature reached his groin and began to rub against his penis; which was quickly becoming erect. The pleasure was becoming too much for Ben. With both the agonizing kiss and the ferocious caressing of his penis he began to jerk in the chair. The pace of the movement increased; Ben's penis now throbbing. The creature forced its tongue deeper than ever into Ben's throat, until he could take no more. He felt a warm explosion from his genitals that slowly ran down his legs. The kissing ceased and the creature pulled its face away from his mouth.

"I am very much going to enjoy this, he-he" chuckled the creature. Ben suddenly began to feel faint; his head began to sway. "Goodnight my dear" whispered the voice into his ear. "Sleep well...-"

Author's Note

My first attempt at a FIM fiction (definitely adult rated!), I'm not exactly a writer but I thought I would give it a go :) This is very early days and is just the start.. Comments and ways to improve would be much appreciated! Thank you, I hope you like it :)

1 : Lustful Order

"Mmm-ooh." Ben awoke to a dull moaning sound; the room was now pitch black. "Urgh.. Mmm.." The moaning got louder. Ben felt a beautiful sensation in his penis; it was wet, sticky and extremely pleasurable. He could feel something sliding along his shaft; it was warm and sweet smelling. The feeling grew more and more powerful, and he became more and more excited. As he approached climax, he could feel the wet walls surrounding his penis contracting. He began to thrust, desperate for more; he lusted for it. He drove his erect penis in and out until he heard a wailing shriek and felt a hot, juicy explosion from inside.

The creature turned around and showed it's face to Ben. "You are mine now, my dear. We'll be doing this rather often, as long as you don't object" said the creature sexily.

"I will never object if that's how it feels". He could not stop herself from saying it, despite knowing it was wrong. Ben could feel his penis swelling again as the creature rested over him.

"I've changed you, Ben. You're in my world now." He felt the creature leave him and move across the room. "It's time you got to gaze at my beauty, and at your own." A faint amount of light burst through the ceiling and began to grow brighter. Ben could now look upon the creature. She had four legs, long turquoise hair and a large horn on her forehead. Her bright green eyes stood out distinctively from her pitch black fur coat.

"What are you?" exclaimed Ben.

"I am Queen Chrysalis. As for what I am, maybe you should take a look at yourself."

Ben gazed down at his body. "What am I? I'm like you!" Chrysalis moved over to him and released the shackles attached to his two upper legs. "There's a horn on my head! What did you do to me?!"

She grinned at him and edged slightly closer. "I made you part of this world. I gave you my power so that you can wield it. I made you better. I made you, mine." She glared at him with a smirk on her face.

Ben turned back to her; just by looking at her defined figure he felt aroused - he could not control himself. She laughed to herself whilst he watched. "I know something that you want" said Chrysalis. She walked up to him and began to slowly turn around. Once she was facing away from him she bent over and thrust her ass towards him. "You want this, don't you. I can feel it. You lust for it. For me. You can't stop thinking about it. What it would be like. How different from before it would be."

Her asshole was a mere inches away from him. He tried to restrain himself; it was no good. His two legs now free, he grabbed her by the torso and dragged her onto him. Her asshole was calling for him. He brought her closer in, so close that he could smell her sweet pussy. He moistened his tongue and gently pushed it around the outside of her asshole. "I knew you wanted me, Ben". He continued to move his tongue around; then forcing it inside. The taste was sensational; he felt her tremble as he forced his tongue further into her ass.

Chrysalis reached down to Ben's legs and unlocked the remaining two shackles. He jumped to his feet and pushed her towards the wall. He pulled his tongue out of her and stood up to face her. She lunged forward to kiss him.

"Now Ben..-" she kissed him, "I have a job..-..that I want you to do..-..for me..-" They continued to kiss.

"Anything" murmured Ben. As he spoke he lifted a limb and pressed it against her pussy and began rubbing; she was dripping wet.

"I need you to..-..OOH-" she moaned loudly. "I need you to punish those who took my kingdom from me, Ben. Do that and you can have me anytime and any way you want. I know that's all you want now."

He breathed heavily to recover the strength to talk. "Who must I punish, my Queen?"

Chrysalis excitably smiled, "Princess Cadence, and her associates. They deserve and must be punished for what they did to me."

"How would you have me punish them?" he questioned.

"Make them bend to me. Destroy their innocence, their friendship, their happiness. Make them admit to their wrongdoings."

"I will see it done, my Queen" replied Ben.

"Good, now go. I will be here for when you return." She came close and kissed him. Ben smiled and walked slowly towards the door pulled to on the opposite side of the room; he was still getting used to walking on four legs so he stumbled several times. Chrysalis spoke from across the room, "I have given you my power, Ben. Do what I want you to do." Ben acknowledged and then left the room via the door.

Chrysalis began to talk to herself, "At last the plan is in motion. The curse worked perfectly. All he wants is me, and he'll do anything to get me. Finally, Equestria will be mine!"

Outside Ben found himself in a dark forest. The trees were grimy and bent over, and thick nets of ivy blocked out any sunlight from above. He looked behind him at the hut; it was small, overgrown with repellent moss and buried under a large tree. Completely unaware of his surroundings, Ben began to walk through the forest. He continued to trip up as he walked, still getting used to his new form. Ben could hear faint whining sounds from the distance, which echoed through the trees. He followed a narrow, slightly overgrown cobbled path.

Eventually Ben reached the end of the forest, where he came across a small road overlooking several fields. He paused to assess the area, "Princess Cadence, where are you.." he whispered to himself. The light was bright for the first time that he could remember and he took a moment to adjust to it. Through the haze he could make out a few buildings in the distance; what looked like a farm. "I wonder if anyone there knows where I might find the princess" thought Ben.

Suddenly he felt something crash into the back of his head. He looked around to find a large red apple lying on the floor; presumably it was what hit him. "Sorry! I didn't see you there!" called a voice. A bright orange pony emerged from the behind the fence across the road. On her side Ben could make out the image of three apples marked into her fur. The pony walked quickly towards Ben. "You alright? I was just practicing my juggling and I kinda lost control" she said. Her hair was tucked neatly under a brown hat, but some of her beautiful blonde locks hanged down across her face. Her tail was the same blonde as her hair; she flicked it sideways.

"Anyway, names Applejack. Haven't seen you around here before, you new to these parts?" she said enthusiastically.

"Yes, I'm from a fair way away," he spoke cautiously.

"So what brings you to Ponyville? What did you say your name was again?" questioned Applejack.

He paused. "I'm here to see Princess Cadence, do you know where I might find her? And I didn't, but it's Ben" he said boldly.

"Pleased to meet ya, Ben, and yeah course I know her! She's visiting Ponyville next week with Shining Armor. You can see her then" said Applejack happily.

Ben took a moment to think about what he had just learnt. "Do you know where I could stay for a week until the Princess arrives, Applejack?"

"Well if you've got no place to stay, you can always stay at the farm tonight, Big Mac won't mind an' it'll be dark soon."

"As long as it's no bother, that would be fantastic; thank you" Ben said delightedly.

"Sure! It's no problem at all! I'll take you there now, I was about to head back anyway". Applejack walked down the road towards the farm and beckoned Ben to follow. "So what business do you have with the Princess, Ben?" asked Applejack.

He quickly fabricated a lie, "I've got a message to deliver, from a friend of hers" he said. Applejack looked at him puzzled.

"Sounds important, if you came all the way out here to tell her. What were you doing in the Everfree forest anyway?" spoke Applejack.

"I lost my way and ended up in the forest, I'm glad I managed to find my way out" lied Ben again.

They continued on towards the farm and they soon arrived at the entrance; Applejack ran ahead to open the gate. "Come on in! I'm afraid everyone's out today, so you'll get to meet everyone tomorrow!" she beckoned. "You can stay in the barn tonight, there's loads of room 'cause Big Mac's not in." Ben chose to ignore her running commentary and just nodded.

By this time it was getting dark; the sun appeared to fall very fast here. Ben sat down on a hay bale in the barn. It was itchy however far more comfortable than the chair he spent the night in at the forest hut. Ben looked across the room to see Applejack; she was curled up into the corner, with a bale either side. "She really is beautiful" he thought to himself.

Ben stood up and walked over to where she was sleeping. "Hey Applejack? You awake?" he asked, hoping for an answer.

Applejack lifted her head off the floor, "Sure I am, what's up? Can't sleep?"

"No, it's not that." He smiled at her. Ben moved in closer and sat down next to her. "Thank you for letting me stay here tonight, Applejack" he whispered to her. Ben felt her shake as he spoke.

"It was my pleasure, Ben." Applejack grinned back at him.

Ben reached out and touched his hoof against her cheek. Suddenly he felt an energy from inside him and there was a bright flash of green light; it burst out and flowed into Applejack. She shuddered. There was a brief moment of complete silence; Ben did not know what he had done, but he could feel it within him. The same feeling he had with Chrysalis. That lust he had for her, that he now had for Applejack. She stayed completely motionless; staring into space. Ben's eyes were focused on her. She abruptly spoke to him, "I want it, Ben. I want it." She sounded forceful and adamant. Ben continued to stare at her. "I want you, Ben. Please, give it to me, please," she moaned loudly. Applejack was constantly swaying up and down along the bale; her head pushing into Ben's side.

Applejack moved her hoof over to Ben and slowly raised it up his leg; her touch was firm. Ben felt his heart begin to race and his penis began to swell. Her hoof reached his groin; they both pulled closer together. "You're hard for me, so hard, and so big" she groaned. Ben moved his hoof down between her back legs; she was so wet, it was dripping down her. Applejack shivered as Ben drew closer to her pussy. "Oh, yes" she whispered into his ear. Ben's hoof reached her pussy and he began to push it inside. The smell was magnificent; the scent of ripened apples was clear.

She rolled over onto him and bent her head down to look at his erect penis. She gazed back up at him and grinned. "How sexy am I? Hmm?" she queried him.

Ben looked into her eyes, "You're very sexy Applejack" he said seductively. She giggled to herself and looked back down at his crotch.

"I want to suck it, you'll like it if I do." Applejack bent further down and forced her face close to Ben's penis. She pushed her tongue against it; her saliva wrapped around it. Applejack grabbed his shaft with her hooves and began to force it into her mouth; she gagged several times. Ben felt ecstatic. The feeling of Applejack's lips moving along his penis and her tongue caressing the head was paralyzing. She forced it deeper and deeper down her throat; failing to engulf the entirety of it. Ben grabbed her hair and pushed firmly down on her, forcing it further into her. Applejack coughed and spluttered. Ben could make out slurred moans of pleasure from Applejack as he forced her to go further. She began to choke; her eyes grew white. Ben continued to push and she continued to suck. He began to force his hoof into her pussy again and he spanked her ass with his other back leg.

Applejack pulled her head up and Ben released her. "Get that in me, now! I'm so horny, Ben! You've made me so wet!" she whined. She pushed Ben's hooves aside and climbed further up onto him. She directed his penis with her hoof and slid it into her pussy. Ben thrust it up and down; she screamed. "Faster!" Applejack begged. Ben accelerated, attacking her pussy as fast as he could. They both moaned passionately. She lifted her head and pushed it towards Ben's face; the two kissed.

Both the pace of the intercourse and the sensation of the kissing meant that they were both ready to climax. Applejack ceased kissing and whispered into Ben's ear, "Do it, I want to feel it burst within me." They returned to kissing. Ben could feel her contracting around his shaft as he moved it ferociously within her. She let out a beckoning scream. The sound triggered Ben to erupt; fluid shot out from his penis and filled Applejack's pussy. She contracted and burst herself, forcing outwards a jet that flowed down over her asshole and over Ben's penis.

She collapsed over him, exhausted and satisfied. Ben stared down at Applejack's body lay over him. He felt faint, as he had done before. He swayed, then collapsed onto the hay bales around him; Applejack still lying motionless over him.

Chrysalis watched from the barn rafters. "My power within him is working. No pony will be able to resist it. That pathetic farm girl was the first to fall, beware Princess, he's coming for you."

Author's Note

Finally finished the chapter, phew.. Hopefully people like it anyway :) Again, feedback would be much appreciated, thanks! :)