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Impurities

by Steadfast Bulwark
Even the greatest of us can fall

Twilight Sparkle was sent into the Crystal Empire with the intent of saving it from the Dark Lord King Sombra.
However in the midst of her search for the Crystal Heart she is confronted by an entity that shows her entire life to be a lie conjured up by the Princesses.
Not knowing what to believe Twilight tries to make sense of a world turned upside down, in doing so she will either find herself or lose herself.

Set in an alternate timeline where King Sombra is less of poorly written villain and more of a bad-ass dark lord.

Rated M for Mature due to graphic violence
cover art by Baxtermega, crop by me for easy use in iBooks, image NOT owned by me.
MLP is owned by Hasbro and not by me

Story is a horrible amalgamation of amateur and semi-proficient writing skill so I've decided to rewrite the whole thing.

No planned sequel.

!Warning: Spoilers in the Comments!

Complete
Tragedy
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Alternate Universe
Sad
 
KTMPO

42436 words: Estimated about 4 hours to read
Download:textHTMLePUB

40 Chapters:

  1. Misgivings 2014-02-22 02:35:06 UTC
    2480
  2. Denial 2014-02-28 16:48:28 UTC
    1569
  3. Arrival 2014-03-26 19:50:15 UTC
    1417
  4. Evacuation 2014-04-09 23:38:17 UTC
    1794
  5. Aftermath 2014-04-25 14:06:15 UTC
    1470
  6. Choices 2014-05-01 17:38:01 UTC
    1629
  7. Recovery 2014-05-07 14:30:37 UTC
    2086
  8. Kindling 2014-05-07 18:54:02 UTC
    950
  9. Awakening 2014-05-21 03:00:47 UTC
    1585
  10. Treason 2014-05-28 01:28:35 UTC
    1339
  11. Reckoning 2014-06-13 23:10:14 UTC
    2034
  12. Ramifications 2014-06-27 06:31:48 UTC
    1632
  13. Training 2014-07-11 07:51:28 UTC
    1636
  14. Acceptance 2014-07-15 23:41:05 UTC
    1365
  15. Report 2014-07-16 04:08:54 UTC
    1088
  16. Preparations 2014-07-21 22:48:45 UTC
    1355
  17. Umbra 2014-07-25 15:21:32 UTC
    1538
  18. Grief 2014-07-29 00:57:08 UTC
    1135
  19. Ritual 2014-08-26 02:22:39 UTC
    2333
  20. Confusion 2014-10-08 23:09:24 UTC
    1357
  21. Downpour 2014-10-08 23:09:34 UTC
    1334
  22. Confrontation 2014-10-14 01:10:55 UTC
    2357
  23. Despair 2014-10-21 00:57:45 UTC
    3110
  24. Remembrance 2014-11-14 07:18:36 UTC
    2912
  25. Forgotten 2014-11-19 18:20:50 UTC
    931
  26. Indecision 2014-12-03 22:19:29 UTC
  27. Decision 2014-12-07 01:02:54 UTC
  28. Power 2014-12-07 08:44:54 UTC
  29. Speech 2015-01-17 04:50:42 UTC
  30. Dragon 2015-01-19 20:54:02 UTC
  31. Resolve 2015-01-24 01:26:24 UTC
  32. Defeat 2015-02-07 02:18:29 UTC
  33. Fallen 2015-03-12 03:25:12 UTC
  34. Renounced 2015-05-09 06:34:03 UTC
  35. Vulnerabilities 2015-05-16 03:20:40 UTC
  36. Horror 2015-05-19 21:39:07 UTC
  37. Offer 2015-06-03 16:52:56 UTC
  38. Battle 2015-07-26 01:00:08 UTC
  39. Slaughter 2015-10-06 21:40:30 UTC
  40. Godfall 2016-03-08 05:37:16 UTC