Pomfalicious

by Thestoryteller100

Rating: teen
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Original Character, Comedy
Length: 1163

A normal night at the bar and a normal life changes once you meet... her.

When you go into The Cider Shack, your favorite bar, you're just hanging out with your friend, Neon Lights. As always, Neon's girlfriend, Vinyl Scratch, is passed out on the couch. But then, 'she' enters: A beautiful mare, making all the stallions stare. You know that instant it was love at first sight; but could she feel the same way?

Published 2014-03-02 17:00:06 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-02 17:00:06 UTC

Introduction

The days are long and the nights are... well, also long, where you live: Ponyville, Equestria. Ah, yes, life as an equine is rather nice, except: you haven't found love. Your best friend, Neon Lights, is always encouraging you to keep looking for the perfect mare, since your basically depressed about it. You're only 20, though, so there's plenty of time. You have a dark blue coat, with a mane a few shades lighter, with a similar style of the Doctor's mane; except your mane is blue, not brown. You have eyes about the same color as your coat, so your practically a BLUEBERRY. Your Cutie Mark is a light blue orb of some sort.
You've been hoping to find your dream mare some day: A hot pink mane, her coat the same color, with even hot pink EYES. You're quite fond of mares with pink in their look, for example, you're great friend of Fluttershy. And Twilight, with the pink streak, of course. And Pinkie, OF COURSE! She's practically cotton candy, she's so pink!

Now that you've learned a bit about yourself, why not jump into the story now, eh? Better find some romance!

Author's Note

This is my first fan fiction with my OC, Pomfalicious. I am thinking of doing a separate story of you (Star Bright), where you did not meet Pomfalicious, but grown-up Scootaloo. Copyright goes to the cookie monster :3

At The Bar

You and Neon were at The Cider Shack, chugging down green and red Apple Ciders, as you were accompanied by Button Mash, a random filly, actually getting drunk by MOTTS APPLE JUICE. MOTTS. APPLE. JUICE.

You were just there, well, um... just... sitting, when finally, after at least 2 hours, the food you had ordered (three plates of shrimp and hay-fries) finally appeared at your table. You and your friends dove in, not leaving a single crumb. Button, Neon and you talked about how you were each different types of ponies: You were a Pegasus, Neon was a Unicorn, and Button was an Earth pony. Then, Neon said something... for the first time in forever!

"Hey, I'm gonna go hit on some mares," Neon said, as he usually does. After a few seconds, Button tipsily said, "I'm gonna go find Sweetie Belle." He literally dragged himself across the floor towards Sweetie Belle.

So, there you were. All alone. On your right, you could see Neon flirting with a yellow mare with a shiny light blue mane. You actually knew her, and she was Coco Pamel. On your right, you could see Button and Sweetie Belle giggling over something, but you thought you caught a glimpse of Sweetie Belle hugging Button, and with that glimpse, you thought you heard Button saying "I love you." Oh well. None of your business.

Suddenly, the old-fashioned-like bar doors swung open, only to reveal a very attractive mare, with what seemed to be her two friends on her left and right side. But there wasn't anything ordinary about this mare: she was your dream mare. Yes, that mare with the pink hair, pink coat, pink eyes, optional cutie mark, such and such. Everypony stared at her, and you mean EVERYPONY.

She took a few steps and sat at a stool next to you, and gave you a shy smile, as if to say, "Hi there." You smiled back, and, even though she was a pure pink, you could see her blushing when she looked at you. 'Could this mean... MY dream mare has a crush on me?' you thought, a bit of blush on your face yourself. With that thought, you decided to make the first move... to make small talk, of course.

"Hi, I'm Star Bright," you said, trying to keep calm, since you were sitting by the cutest, and, well.. sexiest mare you had ever seen.

"Erm, hi, I'm uh, Pomfalicious," she said, stuttering through her words, as if she thought the same way about you. "But you can just, uh, call me, um... Pomf."

She seemed to be getting less shy, as a more content and secure smile began to stretch on her face. She flipped a few dangling strands of her hair out of her face, giggling slightly. It only made you blush more, because you thought it was adorable whenever mares did that. You just kept squee-ing on the inside, making light squee noises.

"You okay, Star?" She giggled, snapping you out of your 'Oh my GOD. She is so sexy and cute and hot and meep and ASDAFAHJK' reverie.

You snapped back to reality. "Er uhm uh perfectly fine!" You hid your face sheepishly, and Pomfalicous, or, POMF, as she said, suddenly hugged you.

"So, um... wanna hang out?" She said, a bit confidently. This is your one chance to find true love!

"Sure, sounds great," you said calmly, giving her a reassuring smile, knowing she was nervous. You grabbed her hoof and she blushed furiously. You giggled and you went to a booth. As you sat down, you could see the gleam in her eyes.

You made some small talk, and eventually it turned into a joke battle...

"And then I said, My vision was so blurry when you said to cut the purple wire I cut the red and blue ones together! HAW!" You and Pomf screamed with laughter and you both thought this was the best time of your lives.

A couple hours later, it was 6 am, and you decided to call it a night. You offered to walk Pomf home, and she agreed and thanked you. As you got to her house, you gazed into each other's eyes, a smile on Pomf's face. It turned into a smirk, and she planted a soft kiss on your lips. She quickly pulled away, the realization of what she had just done setting in. You were comepletely dazed, as the natural response would be.

"I... I'm sorry, I shouldn't have-!" You cut her off, pressing your lips against hers, as it formed into a passionate kiss.

Meanwhile, at The Cider Shack...

"Because YOU. ARE NYLON TIGHTS!"

"Neon Lights-"

"EXCATLY! And you don't even know how amazing you are! But I do." Button said as he drunkly rubbed his head against Neon's shoulder.

Meanwhile, at the two love bird's scene...

Pomf wrapped her arm around your neck, and a few moments later, she broke the kiss, gazing into your blue eyes.

"You know, you can stay at my house for tonight..." Pomf said, a light smile on her face. You accepted, as Pomf gave a devilish smirk and a wink as you returned the flirty gesture.

Oh you COULD NOT wait to get inside her house.

Author's Note

I'm gonna be making a second chapter in a while, so hang in there! And didn't get the comedy? There was a Frozen reference and some Button Mash moments. Much more comedy in the next one, I promise!