Chapter 1: The Main 6 Bronies

GOVERNMENT HQ-MAY 12- 1 WEEK AGO

It was 10:56 in the morning; offices were jam packed with people working and chatting with each other, but there are others being lazy, and others pulling pranks on their friends to kill time. All the other rooms were having fun as they pleased, but in the war room up on the Fiftieth floor a serious conversation was taking place.

"Chief if I may ask as to why we have to keep protecting the poor people of new port city?" One asked

There chief known to all of new port city as chief commander Lucy, was wearing a black long sleeve shirt, baggy pants, and a silver necklace with a ruby in the center.

She sighs, "Look I’ve been over this with the three of you time and again!"

This causes the three men flinched as she barks at them, "I have to protect the poor souls of new port city for my fucking reputation! If this wasn't about my reputation then I would leave them to fucking die and rot for all I fucking care! DO I MAKE MYSELF CLEAR?"

The last sentence left the room echo and made the room silent. Three men looked at one another and did nothing, but to just nod in agreement. The Chief was somewhat satisfied, thinking that she sacred these men and dismissed them.

As she walked out of the room the three men sighed, but then looked at each other and smiled evilly. One man that tried to talk to the Chief transformed into a black Alicorn with a white horn and red zebra stripes on his body. His body structure changed and made him lay on his front hooves.

He spoke, "Well our master was right, she is the one that our master is very interested in."

"Well Vanish let's hope that Lord Discord and Lucy will be a wonderful and chaotic couple" said the one of the men

They all then chuckled in unison in the dark lit room.

New Port City - May 17

"Clayton...Clayton wake up; you’re going to be late!" his mother said knocking on his door, she then heard him fall out of his bed and groan.

"Uh.... Hey mom what time is it?" he asked.

He walked through his bedroom and entered his own bathroom to brush his teeth. Next was to wash his face and when finished, he proceeded to open his door. When he walked out of his room he was shirtless, but was wearing his sweat pants with a number five on the side.

His mother only chuckled and gave him an answer "It's nine in the morning and you have plans to do with your friends today."

Clayton walked back into his room and closed his door gently and started getting dressed.

“Anything else I should know about today mom?" he asked as he put on his army pants and blue sleeveless shirt.

He continued by putting his polo lace less shoes, his worn out old Brooklyn express jacket, which he got 3 years ago from his mother, slipped on his black fingerless gloves and slid on his black Kamina sunglasses that he got last week.

When Clayton was finished, he was about to leave his room, but looked back to see his bed side. Right next to his bed was his ‘Devil May Cry 3’ Yamato Katana that his father had gotten him as a gift last month. He smirked as he grabbed it and pulled it over his shoulder as he walked out of his room.

He walked over and hugged his mother. He stepped back a bit when his mother snapped her fingers, "Oh, that reminds me Clayton, you did kind of missing your show today.”

Clayton just blinked as he had no idea what his mother was talking about until it hit him.

‘Oh shit!’ He thought.

He ran downstairs to see his father watching ‘My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic’ lying on the sofa.

"Dad! Did I really miss it!?" he asked.

His father looked at him and sighed with a smile "Sorry bud, but yeah you did; it was the one with your girlfriend doing a Sonic Rainboom."

What his Dad said made him blush and he ran his right hand threw his black curly hair.

Clayton recovered, "Come on Dad; don't tease me like that. Just because I have a huge crush on Rainbow Dash, hell you and mom keep wishing that she was real so she could be a member of this family."

His father only smiled; he then saw his wife walk downstairs, passing Clayton into the living room and sat with him.

Clayton’s mother spoke, "Yes and we will keep doing that because you are like a male version of her. I think that the two of you dating, would be very sweet."

His mother and father gazed each other and they chuckled in unison.

Clayton looked away from his parents trying to hide his blush, ‘Living with a family full of Bronies.... Best family ever.’ he thought to himself.

His iPhone went off in the kitchen and he walked over to answer it. He saw two new messages on his phone, one was from his friend Corey and the other was from his older sister... Lucy.

He looked up at his parents who were watching another episode of MLP. Clayton cleared his throat making his father pause the show.

His father turns and looked at him with concern, "What's the matter bud?"

Clayton stared at him "I got a text from Lucifer.”

Both of his parents knew who this was; they stared at each other with concern and looked at Clayton.

His father broke the silence, "So, what does Lucy want with you all of a sudden?"

Clayton put his phone in his pocket, "I don't know dad and to be honest I really don't care about Lucifer nor should I say my ex-Brony of a sister."

Clayton then remembered some memories then shuddered in reply. He looked at the clock and saw that it was 9:46 am.

"Crap I got to go; I will see you guys later. Love you both, bye." Clayton said as he sprinted out the door.

He met up with his third and sadly prized possession; a custom made chopper that his sister got him for his 18th birthday last month.

He got on, pulled out his key out of his jacket, which was attached to a black and red rabbits foot. He slid the key into the ignition and started the engine up. The motorcycle roared to life and he drove off towards the park.

‘Ok, to the park to meet up with Corey. From what he told me, he said that we would all be hanging out as our personal spot." He thought.

As he drove away from his home towards the park, Clayton had a cocky grin on his face.

THE PARK

At the park Corey, Clayton’s Brother Max, his cousin Dillon, and his friends Sam and Jack were all sitting on a large blanket talking amongst themselves about their favorite pony.

Since all of them were young and they lived very close in the area; they have been friends for life and were even Bronies as well. All of them decided to make a team which they called "The Brony Family". Each member had their favorite pony that they loved dearly: Max had Twilight Sparkle, Corey had Rarity, Sam had Applejack, Jack had Pinky Pie, Dillon had Fluttershy, and Clayton had Rainbow Dash.

"So guys can someone please riddle me something" Max asked.

Dillon spoke, "What is it man?"

"Where the hell is your cousin!"

Dillon sighed, "Dude, Corey text him already. Don't worry about it; he'll be here."

Max only rolled his eyes and looked at his Full Metal Alchemist pocket watch. It was 12:11 pm, he sighed again and put his watch back into his pocket. He looked up at the sky as he then felt a hand on his shoulder and looked over to see it was jack's hand.

"Hey, I'm sure that he and his family are just enjoying some time with him at the moment, but I know he'll be here man just be cool." Jack reassured him.

“He can't jack, you forget today is Saturday and plus summer has started too" Sam sighed, "So that means a lot of people are going to the park to hang out and shit.”

Jack turned to Sam and stuck his tongue out at him as Corey intervened, "Oh come on you guys cut it out he will be here, just wait a litt-”

Corey was cut off when a football hit him in the chest causing him to fall over.

"Aw damn! Did I hit the little pussy?"

The boys then looked over to see an overweight boy with brown hair and glasses wearing a black and blue shirt with green shorts walking over to them.

Dillon face palmed himself as he knew that voice, “Leave us alone Richard were not here to mess with you.”

Richard only growled at his remark and walked over to Dillon and grabbed him by his shirt. For an overweight guy he did have a lot of grip.

"Why should I not mess with you little fucks huh!?" Richard said, he continued, "Since summer is here; it means I get to have all the fun I want in fucking with you pussy fags!"

Dillon only looked into his green eyes and spitted into his face causing Richard to drop him and giving him time to hide from the unnatural bullying.

"Ah! You little shit! I'm going to break all your fucking bones when I find you!" Richard said wiping off the stinging spit.

Before he could chase Dillon, he felt a tap on his shoulder and when he turned around a hard punch was thrown to his face making him fall face first into a tree.

As he looked up at his attacker, he didn’t care who it was he was going to beat the living shit out of him, but he immediately realized who had hit him.

"Not you." Richard said getting his feet on the ground.

The boys all smiled when they saw Clayton grinning at Richard still balling up his fist, "Yeah! That's right fat ass it's me! Now what were you going to do to my cousin fat ass?"

He stretched his left hand and started to go for his sword on his back. Richard saw this and he grabbed his football and walked right in front of him.

He put his hand on Clayton's shoulder and whispered, "You think you’re so strong with that sword? Huh?! bitch?"

Clayton only smiled darkly as he whispered back to him, "Careful now, someone may get hurt."

Just as he finished his sentence he quickly backed away from Richard and drew his Katana over his head. Clayton cut Richards left eye and cutting the left lens of his glasses into several pieces. Richard screamed as the surge of pain on his left eye and quickly covered it over with his hand. His vision was blurry and realized his glasses were on the ground, but were in pieces.

"Come on guys let's go before he recovers" Clayton said putting his sword away.

He walked away from Richard, they all smiled at what Clayton did. Dillon had the biggest smile out of all of them. He always wanted to do that to Richard for all the bullying that he suffered from him at school. Clayton ran over to the group and walked beside his older cousin with joy.

The joy ended when they all heard Richard yell at him, "THIS ISN'T OVER YOU BASTARD! I SWEAR I WILL GET YOU BACK AND WHEN I DO YOUR DEAD!"

Hearing that from Richard caused Dillon to shiver a bit in fear, but as he looked up at Clayton. He saw him flip Richard off as they walked out of the park.
Max turned to Clayton as his smile then faded into an uneasy look on his face, "Dude you know that he is really going to get you back for breaking his glasses and cutting his left eye man."

Clayton only huffed "So what? He had no right to mess with you guys at all. Besides were a family and we must always protect this family no matter what or die trying.”

Max just looked at him as he then turned his head and mumbled, "I swear you and those crappy words of motivation.”

Clayton just rolled his eyes pretending he didn’t hear that, but Jack broke the silence when he tapped his shoulder.

"Hey Clayton?" Jack said.

"Yeah?"

"What took you so long to get to the park? You always get there before us?" He asked.

Clayton then looked away from his friends, "I was busy."

Sam turned to him "With what? Admiring Rainbow Dash with your family of Bronies?"

Everybody snickered except for Clayton.

Clayton blushed slightly, but kept his cool and glared back at Sam, "W-what no! If you MUST know as I was driving through the city. I happened to pass by the Star Fire Rave Club and I asked the owner of the club if we could go and hang out there tonight.”

"And?" The other boys asked together.

Clayton then started to smile, “He said that he'll be happy to let us hang out there for free whenever we want."

Everyone in the group had their mouths drop, the Star Fire Club was one of the most popular and very expensive rave club. To get in there you had to buy $300 dollar tickets in advance or you had a VIP pass to get in.

Clayton then felt the group of his fellow Bronies suddenly hugging him as tight as they all could.

Dillon shouted, "Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!"

Clayton tried to speak, but couldn't because of the lack of oxygen from the combined strength to make the hug. Their friends realized this and they all started to let their friend go.

Max simply rubbed his head chuckling, "Sorry about that Clayton."

Clayton recovered and looked at him, “It is no problem dude, I've would done the same thing, but for now let's go have some fun! Shall we boys?"

The boys all nodded, and they headed for the club.

STAR FIRE CLUB 4:58 pm

The club was blasting with music, laser lights and people mostly teens were dancing. The people that were dancing were grinding on each other. Clayton watched his fellow friend’s dance their heads off while he was leaning back on the wall smiling at them.

Max was dancing away from the group because his mind was too much into the music and he accidentally bumped into someone making them fall. Max looked down at the person he knocked down was a girl.

Max gasped, "Oh my god! I'm so sorry for knocking you over.” He knelt down, held out his hand and continued, “Are you ok?"

Max looked at her and she stared up into his eyes with her purple eyes. For some reason, Max felt like she was looking into his mind, she reached for his hand and gently took hold of it. Max pulled her up gently back to her feet.

"Sorry I was too much into the music" Max said sheepishly in embarrassment.

The girl only giggled at his apology and smiled at him, "It's alright I'm not hurt or anything, but thank you for helping me up. Um?"

He held out his hand in front of her “Max.”, he said with a smile "My name is max, and who might you be?"

The girl put her hand through her purple long hair as she then dusted off her purple short sleeve shirt and purple shorts.

She grabbed for his hand, "My name is Iris; it's a pleasure to meet you max.”

Max smiled showing a little blush, "The pleasure is all mine Iris"

He got her hand and killed, which surprisingly made her blush as a rose.

Max asked the question, "Um… Well if it's ok with you Iris, I would like to know if you would like to stay at my house for the night. I mean if that is ok with you I mean?"

Iris blushed more at his offer which made her stutter, "Y-yes I would like that very much M-max."

Max looked over at his friends who were cheering him on, and started lip sing "Kiss the girl" making Clayton chuckle a bit as he still watched from the wall.

As the party ended for the night all the boys walked to Max's SUV and got in except for Clayton and Dillon who got on his cousin's chopper. They waved to the guys before heading out; when their two friends were gone, Max drove his friend’s home to their houses. As he dropped off Jack and Sam only he, Corey, and Iris were left in the car. Max drove into the driveway of their house who see a figure on the porch.

Corey got out first and walked to the porch to meet their father who taped his foot when he saw the boys.

"You two got home late I see." their father said with a calm voice.

Corey patted his father on the chest, "Yeah old man we did, and we are sorry if we made you worry about us. Clayton got us into the star fire club for free."

Their father then raised an eyebrow at him "How in God’s good name did he pull that off?"

Max walked towards the house with Iris behind him.

Their father saw the two and snickered, “I take he helped you with this as well huh Maxwell?"

Max groaned when he heard his father call him by his full name. He really didn’t want Iris to think that is was a lame name.

"Ugh! No old man, this was all me" Max said in a bored tone.

He then turned to iris then back to his dad, "Hey old man, is it alright if Iris can spend the night over here with us please?"

Their father rubbed his grey beard in thought, never once had Max or Corey been with a girl in… Well ever. Seeing this now in front of his eyes was a very wonderful thing to him.

He sighed happily and nodded, "Well why not, after all it's only a sleep over. It's not like you two are doing anything else tonight."

Their father winked and made Max and Iris feel very awkward. This also made Corey face-palmed.

Corey looked at his father "Come on old man, Max is only 19 and still a virgin, sex is one thing that he would not be good at."

Max just stood there twitching madly as Iris broke the awkward moment, "W-well that is what we will not be doing I promise you.”

Corey and there father nodded in agreement: Max was not like other men out only looking for just sex all the time, he was extremely smart and he always loved to read on his spare time. When he wanted to find a girl that would have the same tastes as him and that is why he turned to MLP and fell in love with twilight sparkle. It was because that was the kind of woman or pony that he wanted in his life.

As their father looks at the clock and turns to them. He snaps his fingers signaling that they all should get some rest. Corey, max, and Iris all head upstairs and go into their room and close the door.

It didn’t take long for their father to hit the hay, so that they can talk to one another while staying up. Iris sat on Max's bed and looks at his collection of Twilight Sparkle ponies making her smile. She then looks over to his Brother Corey's posters of Rarity.

‘Wow, Rarity would love him to death if she saw this.’ Iris thought.

She looked at Max who was sitting on the floor next to the bed, she pokes Max's arm making him turn his attention to her. He looked up at her into her purple eyes that seemed to draw him into a trace.

"Yes Iris what's up?" he asked.

Max noticed that she had a worried look on her face, "Um. Max would you um... Believe me if I told you that I'm not what you think that I am?" She asked.

She twirled a bit of her hair with her finger. Max blinked in confusion at what she said and scratched his brown spiky hair.

"What do you mean Iris?" He asked.

Iris could see that he was still puzzled by her words, she sadly sighed and got off the bed. She then sat in front of him.

"Allow me to show you what I mean." She said closing her eyes.

She started to glow a purple aurora around her body and started to change. Her hands, body, and legs morphed into hoofs, back hoofs and formed a pony body. Her face formed into a muzzle and a purple horn rose out of her forehead. This Iris, grew a purple mane and a purple tail with a red stripe across them both.

When the purple glow dissipated; Max's mouth dropped at what he saw before his very own eyes. This Iris transformed into the pony that he had loved in his house. The purple pony, which he thought was still Iris, began to speak to him.

"My real name is Twilight Sparkle and I am a pony from Ponyville" she said with a smile.

Max didn't know what to do after hearing this Twilight or Iris spoke to him. His brain was frying itself and it made him faint right in front of her.

Twilight jumped at his action "Max!" she shouted.

It was no use, Max was knocked out cold. Twilight bit her lip, ‘Maybe it was too much for him?’ she thought.

She looked at a stunned, but awake Corey and she nodded.

"Oh dear, looks like I will have to do some explaining to him when he comes to.” She said.

Author's Note

hey everyone, How are you all. Now I bet your all wondering why there are so many changes to the first chapter. Well let me explain.

I have an editor! And his name is TankFrankDrill9

Since the story is finished, He asked me if he could be my editor, And I said yes.

So now I will be posting up the new and improved chapters to the first story.

He deserves all the credit. And I can't thank him enough.

Hope you all enjoy.