Fallout Equestria: Dream of Darkness

by Xx soul sorrow xX

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash, Romance, Original Character, Rarity, Tragedy, Adventure, Derpy Hooves
Length: 17102

In the Era of Starvation and Plague, Rarity must find a way to survive while finding love along the way.

Rarity is living in the poverty of the Era of Starvation and Plague in the land of Equestria. It's a horrible land and it's a struggle every day just trying to survive... But Rarity can make it through and she will find a way to love once again, and survive the Era.

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Thanks to candycrusader for making the cover!!! I :heart: you!!!
Also special thanks to MontyTheToast for being my new editer~~ I :heart: you guys and I hate my old editors. :)

Published 2014-02-26 14:10:02 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-09 18:49:04 UTC

2. In The Asylum

As Rarity and Derpy trotted down the street, the streets were scented of death and starvation. A dog lied in the streets with flies buzzing around a pool of carnage. It had been there for days.

They smelled of mildew and blood in the streets. Smog rose in the sky from a factory nearby, making bystanders cough. All of the buildings in the down-town area had barred windows and barbed wire on the gates. A burnt-down hospital was the sight that greeted them when they started walking. A car zoomed by with duct tape on its windows and a flat tire. It was dented and rusty and Rarity and Derpy hid behind a dead plant to hide from it. The police were always out, and always watching for a pony who might be breaking a law or two. Rarity didn't think she had broken any laws, but she wasn't quite too sure. She wasn't that sure if she had, but Derpy had a nervous look in her eyes and she sweated. They had to be careful and stealthy like the old ninjas of lore. They had to whisper and walk silently, otherwise they might get caught and get sent to the Town House, which had been a beautiful home once but now belonged to the city and was basically a prison.

Finally Derpy gulped in a breath of tainted air. She said in a threatened tone, "Come on, Rarry, the asylum's this way."

Rarity nodded silently and stared at her hooves. She saw a knife near her feet that was stained with blood. She levitated it with her magic, wanting to stab something to get rid of her bottled up anger flaring inside. But Derpy said "Come on, Rarry! We don't have time to waste!" with a concerned look and Rarity put it down with a sigh. She walked off and followed Derpy and left the knife in the dust.

They walked silently through the dingy and dirty alleys full of trash and some corpses. Graffiti covered the walls that were brick-colored since they were bricks. There was some gum and there was mud and blood and some dirt and carnage. A rat skittered around and Rarity stared at it until it ran into an over-turned trash can. Finally they escaped the alley and came to a rundown old shack that was falling apart. Derpy peeked inside and gestured at Rarity.

"Look around for some guns... We could shoot things if we need to," she said in a deep and threatening voice.

"All right... Do you need some food for our trip?" Rarity asked.

"Nope. I've got plenty in this sack on my back."

"Okay," said Rarity whispering so they wouldn't get caught. The smoke in the air made them breathless but it was okay since they had lungs of steel living in the city so long.

Rarity searched the shack. The floorboards were old and moldy. Underground a few corpses could be seen, and there was a stench of death in the air. Rarity looked in every nook and cranny but only found a few peices of broken glass and some empty shells. So she went back to Derpy. But then, a screaming sound pierced the air... Rarity gasped. She recognized the voice! It was Rainbow, and she would recognize the voice of Rainbow Dash anywhere! Even if she was insane now...

She looked outside the dirty window and saw Rainbow running in jcircles. She ran around wildly and sometimes she ran in ovals instead of circles. Her pupils were small like she was scared and a foamy yellow spit oozed from her maw. Derpy gasped and pushed Rarity's head down so Rainbow wouldn't spot her. Derpy kept an eye out on the blue insane pony.

Rainbow walked to a wagon and behind it was a pony girl hiding. She chased the pony and attacked her and the pony screamed. Derpy nudged Rarity to leave while she's distracted.

Outside, Rainbow ate the pony. There were sounds of screaming in agony. The best friends galloped together to another street, but Rarity tripped over an old shoe and she fell and her leg bled and she cried out in pain. Derpy looked scared but she helped her buddy up. But Rainbow had heard that cry, and she turned around and started snarling. She chased Rarity and Derpy like a quick speeding wolverine chasing down prey. That's what she thought her friends were now.

Derpy ripped a chunk off the sack on her back and some almonds spilled out. They were dirty and kind of stale but they were okay food. She frowned when she saw the food gone to waste, but she wrapped the sack chunk around Rarity's leg quickly and made a quick cast. Then they made a break for it and Rainbow was still snarling and pursuing them and they were chased for a few blocks. Finally Rarity said "I'm sorry Derpy... I can't make it... You'll have to sacrifice me."

But Derpy said "No! I'm not losing my best friend, not on my watch!" And she swiftly put Rarry on her back with the sack and flew up into the air. They flew for a while and Rainbow down on the ground looked confused. Then she found some of the almonds that leaked out of the sack and she started gnawing on them. Derpy flew quickly away but her wing suddenly felt like it snapped and she fell several feet. She screamed as she fell.

Luckily, Derpy had landed in a pile of dirt. It was okay since it was soft, and Rarity had gained enough strength to run now. She said "Thank you Derpy" and there was a growl from behind them. Derpy looked in horror and saw it was Rainbow!!!

They ran and came up to a building with a sign that said "Fat Man Coffee." Derpy and Rarity went inside and slammed the glass door shut. Rainbow licked the door and blood got all over it. She roared like Katy Perry and broke the door. Some shards of the glass got in her coat but she didn't seem to mind.

Derpy smacked her and Dash fell down on the floor. Dash screamed like a monkey and growled at them again. Derpy and Rarity escaped out of the coffee place and found the asylum. They went through the back doors and looked through a window in the front. Rainbow ran around looking for Rarry and Derpy but she didn't find them. They walked through the halls of the asylum. All the doctors were on they're potty breaks so no one saw Rarity and Derpy come in. Rarity took a deep breath and then she looked into the first room she saw since her leg was feeling better. Inside was a screaming guy who said "GO BEFORE IT'S TOO LATE" and Rarity slammed the door in shock.

Derpy and Rarity walked away. Derpy said "Come on Rarry we need to find a reception desk to know where Rainbow's room is." They walked around and found a desk but the reception lady was a man. He said "Hey, you guys can't be here. Everyon'es on their potty breaks right now."

"Sir, we just wanna know what room Rainbow Dash is staying in." said Rarity gasping for breath. It was really stuffy in that room and the air fresheners blasted artificial scents everywhere.

"Oh yeah. She escapeded. Her room is in F86E2."

"Oh okay, thanks. What's your name by the way." Rarity asked.

"My name is Reginald MacGorgee."

"Oh, cool. Thanks" The two bestest buddy's ran away and they made their way to Rainbow's room.

They went up 6 flights of stairs and down Wing E, 86th hall and found the second room which was Rainbow Dash's. When they opened the door, Rainbow had eaten stuff and wasn't there anymore. Derpy sniffed at a stain and said "She's eaten here." They found a cabenit, but the lock on it was missing. The cabninet was old-looking and old. Derpy smiled a sigh of relief and then Rarity opened the door. But then she gasped in shock.

"Oh no.... The medicine!" whispered Rarity. "It's gone."

3. The Search For The Cure

Derpy gasped and started frowning. "Oh no... Now she can't be cured..." she whispered. Rarity started crying silently and some tears spilled down her cheeks.

Derpy hugged her friend. "It's okay Rarry..." she started to say in a soothing tone. But Rarity's words broke in and she said "No, Derpy! It's not okay! Rainbow trusted me to make her better and now she's insane and there's nothing I can do!" She started crying and sobbing loudly and Derpy tried to hug her and make it better. She said "Don't worry Rarity. We'll find the meds somehow."

Rarity looked up at her friend. Her eyes were yellow but they were soft and friendly-looking. Another tear rolled down Rarity's cheek. She said "What are we going to do?" Derpy stared into the blue eyes of Rarity and said "We can do it... I know we can."

Rarity stood up and started making her way to the window. It was big and cracked where Rainbow had busted out. It was late now, and the sky had become dark with dread. Only one star shined through the smog, but when Rarity looked at it, she saw it was really the moon.

Derpy and Rarity jumped out of the window. They landed on the streets below and brick pathways that were covered with grime. Derpy's wing was still sore from earlier, so she couldn't fly. Luckily, Rarity's leg had healed up right away. So the two friends sat on top of a dumpster and ate some food from the sack on Derpy's back. They ate some slightly moldy cheese and some lettuce and a beef brisket. Finally they were full, but Derpy looked in the sack in horror. She said "Oh no, Rarity. Now I'm out of food." She looked concerned at Rarity and Rarity was sad too. "What are we going to do now?" asked Rarity. She looked at Derpy in worry.

Derpy replied "Don't worry Raritty. I still have 3 bits left over, so we can buy more food. Also, we can go and dumpster-dive and pick out the good stuff before the rats and roaches get to it. I know a good restaurant in the streets over there." She pointed with her hoof and Rarity smiled, a rare sight. "Oh, okay, Derpy. Let's start with this dumpster we're sitting on."

"That's the spirit!" said Derpy and they jumped down. Rarity pushed the lid open with her strong legs. A dead rat was in there and Rarity kicked it. Derpy peeked inside the dumpser and said "If you find a gun you should keep it, okay?" Rarity said okay and they both jumped into the dumpster. The smell was so overpowering that it was powerful. Rarity said "ow!" and she picked up what poked her. It was a dagger and it was stained. Rarity put it in Derpy's sack to keep in case they needed to stab something.

They found a moldy banana peel and a cushion full of laser beams. There was also a broken light-bulb and some other stuff. But they did find some fries and Rarity munched on one to see if they were good. They were mushy and cold, but they weren't stale yet. It was a miracle that they weren't since they were near the bottom of the can. Rarity squeed because she was happy and then she said "Look what I found Derpy!" Derpy smiled and said "Good work!! Put 'em in the sack." So Rarity put the potato fries in the sack and saved them up for later.

They went to a market called Market Mart and they went there. Rarity pushed open the door quietly. The building was condemmed but a guy still ran a business in there. Rarity knew in her heart that she had to get her friend Rainbow's medications back, but for now they had to buy some food from the Market Mart just to survive. If they died before they got Dashie's medication, she would be insane forever and no one would help her. So they had to buy the food since it was the only way.

The door was made of metal and there was a sticker on it that said it was closed and unfit for the health of ponies and other beings. It was dark and rusted with some rusty dents in the material. There was a sign up above the door with some letters missing. It had been red once, but now, it was a pale pink with the sun-faded wood. It said "market". That's all. Except the R was missing and an abandoned bird nest was made in the E.

Rarity looked inside and saw darkness and some dark, dusty shapes of furniture. She did the secret knock on the wall and then a whispery voice said "Come on."

Rarity closed the door after Derpy followed, and the door closed with a loud bang. Rarity lit up the night with her horn and a light appeared that was from her horn. It was red, like her magic. Inside, a market could be seen.

A shady-looking guy was sitting at an old wooden table. The whole place was dusty and kind of small. Derpy sneezed because of the dust. The guy pony was wearing a trench cost and some sunglasses even though it was really dark. He lighted a candle and it was fat and waxy. The flame lit up the night and Rarity stopped making her horn glow. A pile of food was sitting on the table in front of the shady guy. He said "Oh, my best customers. What do you want today? I got beef jerky that just expired 2 days ago."

Rarity smiled at the guy since she had a crush on him. She said "Yeah, can I have that? We've got 3 whole bits." Derpy said "I like beef ahaha." Rarity smacked her and gave the guy 2 out of 3 bits. He handed over the jerky and they stuffed it in the sack. Then Derpy said "Got anything else?"

The shady guy who's name was Shady Sparkle stared at the pile. He said "Yeah, most of this stuff is overpriced and moldy and yeah. But since you guys are my bestest customer's I will give you a disscount. You can pick any 1 can from that pile for just 1 bit no matter what the price says Okay?"

"Thanks!" said Rarity. She walked over to the pile of cans. Some of them were all rusty but most of them were okay for consumption. She saw a can of beans and a can of corn and a can of tropical fruit. Derpy came over too and both of them considered the options. Derpy was about to pick up the corn but then Rarity screamed "WOAH WHAT'S THAT." She picked up a can of Spam that was buried in the other cans at the bottom of the pile. It was dented and it smelled artificial and processed. Rarity loved the smell. She said "Derpy we gotta get this!!!" Derpy said "okay" and they went and bought it. The guy smiled real big and they left. They slammed the door behind them.

Rarity looked at the new can and she loved it. Derpy shoved it in the sack and Rarity stared at it through the hole where Derpy ripped a chunk out earlier. The sky was grey with clouds and cloudy smoke. Rarity looked up at it and she said "I think it's gonna rain."

"Nope!" said Derpy. "Come on, Rarity. We gotta go and find that medication for Dash to make her better."

Rarity didn't listen. She said "I like that guy and I like Spam and he sold me spam so I gonna call him Spammy instead of Shady."

"Yeah, that's great," said Derpy. "Come on, Rarry, we gotta go." Rarity followed Derpy and they went to a big fat sky-scraper. It was abandoned and it was big. Some pigeons flew away and screamed when the two pony people approached. rarity busted the door down with her strong and muscular legs. It fell inward with a crash of metal. They went inside and Derpy found a box. She said "Look, it's a box."

Rarity said "Oh." Then Derpy climbed in the box because she likes boxes. Except the box ripped in half when she sat in it since it was too small for her to fit. A bottle of medication pills fell out when it ripped. Derpy gasped in surprise. She picked it up and ran to Rarity. "Look Rarity it's Rainbow's meds!!!!"

The bottle was orange and Rarity looked at it. It was full of some pills. There was a info sticker that said "RAIN BO JENNIFER DASG :)" on it. Rarity gasped. She said "omg it's Rainbow's pills!!! She must have hided them here when she wasn't insane!!!"

Derpy put the bottle in the sack and they ran away to find Rainbow and cure her.

4. Fallen Love

Rainbow chewed on a bone of some pony guy. She gnawed on it with her teeth and gums where she lost some. Her hair was all ratty and she drooled a lot. There was foamy spit coming from her mouth since she still had rabies. She had eaten a few bystanders since she had gone insane and she was crazy and she was a cannibal now. One time she even tried to gnaw off her leg but she didn't because she got distracted by a pigeon and forgot all about it. One of her wings got broken when she first escaped, and it healed on its own but it was bent weird now. She didn't know that she even had wings so she didn't fly ever.

Rarity and Derpy hid behind a fat lamp post and watched as Rainbow ate her fellow citizens in what used to be Ponyville. Now it was so bad and full of famine it was called Bonyville. It was really bad. Anyway, Rarity jumped out of the bushes and she held down Rainbow against her will. Rainbow kicked and tried biting Rarity, but Rarity had skills and got away in time. Derpy quickly pulled out the pills from the sack on her back and she shoved them down Rainbow's throat. Derpy held down Rainbow's legs while Rarity used her hooves to push Rainbow's head to the ground. Soon, her body drained of her rainbow power and strength. She began to pant from flailing around until she was almost unconscience but she wasn't. She was just tired.

"You guys. Is that you?" Rainbow asked.

"You okay, Rainbow Dash?" Derpy asked.

Rarity starting laughing manically. Everypony looked at her and she stopped.

"Sorry, I was laughing because Rainbow's face is all covered in dirt."

"Your face is covered in dirt too." Derpy replied. Rarity stopped laughing and the two pegasi stared at her.

"Anyway, thanks for doing that. I must have done some damage." Dash sighed.

"Yeah, I just don't know what went wrong..." Derpy sighed along with her.

Rainbow looked around and saw the corpse of the pony that she had been in the middle of eating.

"Wh-ha.."

"Oh yeah. You were eating that pony when you were crazy." Derpy said.

Rainbow started crying.

"OMG, I can't believe I did that. Oh em gosh..."

Rainbow Dash sobbed tears into Rarity's shoulders.

"Ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... its OK, Rainbow Dash. We know you didn't mean it."

"My insanity is a burden, Rarity..."

"I know, Dash, but you gotta get it get it goin'. I did it I done it."

"I know, Rarity..."

They hugged for a while until the smell of the decaying corpse Dash was eating started to make them gag. So they sat next to a building and ate some grass they found 'cause they were horses.

"Dash, I think telling us about the war will make you feel better." Derpy suggested.

"Maybe, but It's so traumatizing. But I guess I can cope, y'know." she asked.

"I know what you mean, girlfriend." Rarity agreed.

"Well, it all started when I was born... My mom loved me as a girl and named me Rainbow Jennifer Dash. My dad wanted me to be a boy, so he stole me from my mom as a baby and he raised me up to be a tomboy. Yeah, but that wasn't all. You see, back then, I was born with yellow hair like Derpy, but he wanted me to grow up and be a clown, so he died my hair rainbow color and it stayed forever... So sad... But then, when I growed up, I got rid of my afro, so I have straight rainbow hair so it looked better. then my dad made me promise I'd go to war when the time came... So I had to make that promise and keep it. I ran away from home later and came to Ponyville and was the coolest one and I acted better then everypony... I even had a boyfriend. He was Thunder Lane. But my dad hunted me down and killed him on the day before our wedding. It was my fallen love...I regret all of my mistakes and regrets and I wanna take it all away forever..."

"Oh Rainbow you'll be great someday." said Rarity comforting.

"No" she sad back. She cried a little more.

"I can't ever be a normal pony, but I can fix the mistakes in the past..."

"What do you mean???" Rarity said.

"I have information about the griffons and King Sombra. I found that the griffons are planning to attack Sombra's army. That technically includes us since he took us over. But we can form an alliance with the griffons and overthrow Sombra, but we can't do it on our own. We got a stick together as a teamwork. Teamwork makes the dream work. Whose with me?" Rainbow asked.

"Rainbow... I don't know about this. What exactly are we doing and why?" Rarity hesitated.

Derpy spoke up...

"I think what Rainbow plans to do is make friends with the griffons, despite the war we had with them, then team up against Sombra for the good of the ponies."

"Oh" Rarity said.

"But the only problem with that is that it'll be really hard to get ahold of the griffons and form a army without Sombra finding out." Derpy explained.

"Well, we should talk over this after we find shelter for the night. My house is two miles from here and it's almost five a clock. We might not make it before midnight......." Rarity sighed.

"That's okay. We can just stay in the asylum for the night. My room is empty since I ate all the things there. That a'ight with you?" Rainbow asked.

Rarity said "Yeah" and Derpy agreed so they went to the asylum and they went.

The group walked to the asylum and Rarity was excited to see the handsome receptionist and be able to show him how good she was at catching insane people. Rainbow opened the asylum doors and everyone walked in there. Rarity ran over to the desk and started yelling, "Reginald! Look at what I--"

She stood in shock. It seems that Rainbow Dash had eaten the resepcionist while they were looking for the medication bottle. Rarity was about to cry, when a bunch of police people came out and they grabbed Rainbow and tackled her and tried stabbing her, but Derpy stopped them. Though they took her away and Rarity and Derpy couldn't get passed the crowd of guards to save their friend. She cried out and said "stop" and Rarity but they couldn't do anything to stop it...

Suddnenly, there was a flash of light, followed by an explosion and then another. The glass door shattered. Rarity and Derpy turned around and looked outside as buildings caught on fire and more bodies lay on the ground dead. Screaming and a death feeling filled up the air.

"Rarity, Derpy! Help! Let go of me, you meatballs!!!!!!!!!!" she screamed as she was carried off down the hallway.

Derpy immediately took cover under the desk and Rarity just stood by the glass door that had shattered and backed away towards the desk slowly dodjing the debris and pony limbs. She didn't know what to do now. Not this time.

Author's Note

You guys......... this is first time i write a chapter and cried. MontyTheToasttook out alot of the details I wroite though so it made me mad but its O.K./.......... :C He chhanged my wording so I might half ta deal with this sichuation if he keeps it up but i a forgiving perosn i am good for now. i hope U enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! coment and subscribe if it made you cry like me when wrting :')

5. Insanity

Rainbow screamed as she got shoved back into her old room. She had got stabbed many times and now she was bleeding everywhere and there was blood everywhere. She screamed at the police people but they still thought she was insane and they slammed the door. Rainbow licked the tiny window in the door but they didn't do anything about it. Rainbow sat on the bed that had all it's blankets everywhere and not orderly. She looked around the room and saw what she had caused.

The window was still broken but it had been fixed with a chunk of cardboard and a lot of duct tape. Most of the furniture was gone since she ate it earlier, but there was a table that was knocked over. It was brown and it had a missing leg and a lot of teeth marks where she gnawed on it. The walls were licked and the ceiling was cracked like someone head-butted it.

When Rainbow was pondering the ceiling the door opened and Rainbow started screaming that she wasn't insane again. But a guy just screamed back and he shoved a different guy into the room that was a girl. It was her new room mate and it was purple unicorn. Rainbow stared at the pony while someone slammed the door again. Then she realised it was her old friend Twilight Sparkle from high school. "Oh hi Twilight" said Rainbow. She smiled but Twilight sat there with a blank expression.

Rainbow said "Yeeeah, I was insane and I was a cannibal and I had rabies, but I took my meds and I'm okay now." She smiled real big and Twilight ignored her and her eye twitched.

Rainbow stopped smiling and said "Oh no Twilig are you insane??? Because I'm not insane I got cured."

But Twilight didn't say anything and she just breathed loudly. Rainbow got up and sat on the bed and looked out the window at the depressing sky and the streets down below. She thought about how she was craycray and she ate some corpses and furniture and food and she thought about her friends that tried to save her. She thought about how her friends found her meds somehow that she put in that building when she was insane. Then she thought about how the police guys stabbed her and shoved her in this room since they thought she was insane still. But she wasn't. She wondered where Rarity and Derpy were now and if they were going to bust her outta here.

A few hours later Rainbow looked at Twilight. She was still in the exact same position as earlier. Rainbow wondered if Twilight wanted to eat the table or something since it was the only thing left.

Rainbow Dash walked over to Twilight with the pain in her flesh from when she got stabbed. Twilight sat there and her eye twitched again and she breathed heavy again. Rainbow said "Hey Twilight, I don't have any food but when they feed me I can give you some okaaay???"

So when they gave Rainbow food and she screamed to show she wasn't insane. It was alfredo n' chicken sauce. She ate some and put some on the floor in front of Twilight so Twilight could eat too. Twilight sat there and Rainbow ate her food and Twilight didn't. When Rainbow Dash was done eating she said "Twilig you gotta eat or else you'll starve. Rarity's mom always told me that when I went over to Rarity's house."

But Twilig didn't do anything so Rainbow punched her and she fell down. But Twilight still had the same facial expression and stuff and her face was emotionless like a big fat rock. So Rainbow kept punching Twilight and then she said "You gotta eat your alfredo, Twilig."

Then Twilig exploded into life and started screaming and Rainbow smacked her. Then Twilig sat there but her face looked normal and she ate the pasta. So Rainbow smiled and she said "Yeah, you're okay now." Twilight said "Yeah I'm sorry Dash but I had to bomb the town... You wouldn't understand my sorrows..."

Rainbow said "No twilig I truly do understand. I was in a war and I killed people and then I got insane and I ate some people and some chairs and some food. Then I got rabies when I ate a animal. Then I got my meds back and I ate 'em and now I'm better."

And Twilight said "Yeah, cool. Well, I had depression and I was emo since my fanfictions weren't good and I hated the world and I decided to bomb it. Yeeeah. So I got hired by Sombra and he gived me bombs and I did it. I done it."

Rainbow said "Oh."

Then they ate the alfredo that was left over and they ate it and it was good. They had a great time. Then Rainbow said "Yeah, since your not insane anymore and I'm not insane we can break out. My friends are apposta come in and break me out I think. But we can find a way if we put our minds to it. Y'know?" Twilight said "Yeah... We gotta break the window again. They put cardboard on it. Gotta break it."

So Rainbow went and Twilight stabbed the cardboard with her pointy horn. It broke off and fell into a gross puddle below. Rainbow yelled and Twilight jumped out the window. She made a magic cushion with her magic. It was pink like her magic. Rainbow jumped down and she landed on it with Twilight. They made a break for it and they ran to the front of the asylum. They went inside the front doors which were really heavy and hard to push. There was a big fat crowd of ponies there. But they made it and Rainbow ran into the crowd. She said "Hey, Rarity! Derpy! We escaped!"

The big crowd of ponies was large. There were a lot of polices there and one came up to Rainbow and said "Hey, did you escape?" But Rainbow said "Yeeeeah, but I'm not insane anymore so it's okay." So the police guy said "oh okay" and left into the big crowd.

But when the crowd moved, Rainbow saw a sight for sore eyes. It was Rarity and Derpy! Derpy's hat had fell on the floor and she was in a tussle with some police-ponies. Rarity was being hoof-cuffed and she was crying silently.

Rainbow gasped and she ran to them and Twilight looked like confused. Derpy was fighting but they hoofcuffed her too!!! Then they got walked away into Wing B. Rainbow yelled "Stop! They're not insane! They're innocent!!!"

Twilight followed politely since she didn't even know Rarity or Derpty, but she followed Dash. Rarity cryed and Derpy screamed at the guards that were police guys. Rainbow kept yelling "Stop" but they ignored her and locked her best friends into a room. Rainbow growled at them and she was so mad. Her friends were locked in F23B8 and she didn't have the key... So what would she do?

6. Reflection In A Puddle

Rainbow ran to the front office reception desk and saw that most of the police officers had left. Some of them were sitting there with donuts and coffee but that's all. One of them came up to Dash and said "Hey, you're not supposed to be here. Weren't you insane?"

But Dash said "Yeah but I took my meds and now I'm okay. Do you know where the keys to the rooms are kept?"

But the police guy ignored her and said "Hey... Do you have any info on who bombed the town?" Rainbow was shocked by the question and she ran away. She ran to the 23th floor and she went to Wing B and she went to the 8th room and she was at room F23B8. She stared through the tiny window in the door at her friends. Rarity sat by the wall and her eyes were swollen cause she had been crying. Derpy kept smacking the wall which was painted yellow bricks. She had her hat back and she had it on sideways and her ponytail in her mane came out.

Rainbow knocked on the door and screamed at them but the door was soundproof so they didn't hear her. This room didn't have a window unlike Rainbow's earlier, so Rainbow thought about a plan to make them escape. She licked the window and Rarity stared at her. Then Rainbow left and went to search for the keys.

Rainbow Dash went back to the main front office. The police offices were all gone now. They didn't get a new guy to replace Reginald so the redemption desk was empty. Rainbow looked at the desk that was brown and big. It had gnaw marks on the side so Rainbow must've chewed it I guess. Anyhow she went up there and she went to the desk. Rainbow climbed up the desk like it was a big fat mountain and she sat on the top for a while. Then Rainbow turned around and she saw what was behind the desk. It was a large board made of cork with some pins stuck in it. All the keys were on the pins!!! It was so surprising that Rainbow fell and she did a barrel roll onto the floor. The floor was typical white tile with some grout. Some blood and assorted stains were on it.

Rainbow sat up and stared at the board made of the cork. She looked at the keys and scanned her eyes down them emotionally. Then she finally found it: It was the key for F23B8! Rainbow grabbed it in her mouth and yanked the pin out. The pin poked her face and she said "ow." Then Rainbow ran with the key all the way up to the 23rd floor Wing E and the 8th room. She stabbed it into the key-hole which was hard since she used her mouth. Then she put her mouth on the handle and turned it so the door opened with a loud click sound when the lock hit. The handle tasted like metal and it was dull gold. Rainbow pulled it open and her friends emerged.

"OMG Rainbow you saved us" said Rarity breathlessly. She ran to Rainbow and Derpy ran to her too. Rarity fluttered her eyelashes and Rainbow said "um okay."

"Come on let's get outta this dump" screamed Derpy. They ran out and they went back into the streets. It had rained earlier so there were muddy puddles in the streets. The sky was dark like a smoke. There were tall metal structures around that were buildings. ``` Rainbow ran with her friends and Derpy had the sack on her back. They ran and they did it but Rainbow tripped on an old rock. She fell and she scraped her kneecap. Then she looked up and she cried. She cried all the time. She looked down at her knee and saw it was bloody. She said "oh man" and she got up and tripped again and she fell. Again. She looked ahead and saw a puddle with a dead worm floating in it. Her friends Rarity and Derpy galloped ahead and ignored her pain. Rainbow looked at the puddle with the worm and a few tears fell in it. Why did she have to go through this pain? Why was she the one who had to fall and get a scraped kneecap? Why did she have to go insane and go to war and get rabies and be a cannibal? Why did her friends abandon her???

Rainbow saw her muddy reflection in the water. The worm floated across the reflection Dash's nose. Rainbow stood up but she fell again. Her kneecap hurt too much to stand. So rainbow sat in the puddle with the worm while it started raining and her friends galloped off ahead.

The rain became strong and there was a mysterious music in the air. Rainbow sat in the puddle but she felt kind of dizzy as the rain fell around her. The worm floated off and the puddle became bigger and bigger. Soon it was a big ocean in the sea and the cerulean mare with the vibrant mane sat in the middle of it. She wasn't floating, yet the water didn't come up beyond her hooves. The buildings in the distance dissolved away and the rain pounded even more. Rainbow looked at the massive lake-like puddle she was in and saw her reflection. She stared at it for a while and blinked and the reflection did too. Then the reflection stood up and glared at Rainbow and walked away.

Rainbow watched the reflection go. "No, Reflection Dash! Don't leave me!"

But it faded into the distance like the buildings had. The rain pounded and it was heavy in sheets. The wind blew like a hurricane and Rainbow stood up and stood in the water. Rainbow cryed and her tears flooded the ocean of puddle.

Suddenly, a big fat wave emerged from the distance and engulfed Rainbow. She was under water but could still breathe. It wasn't that weird, being underwater. It was just more wet.

Then Rainbow floated down to the bottom of the ocean, looking off into the distance, searching for Reflection Dash. Where had she gone? The sand at the bottom of the sea was soaked and kind of squishy. Rainbow cried, but the tears mixed with the waters of the ocean. She didn't know what to do... She just didn't know what to do...

A bunch of bubbles suddenly appeared and wrapped around Rainbow's whole body. She started screaming underwater, but the bubbles brought her to the surface. Soon she gasped a big breath of air. The air was salty, and it had stopped raining. The buildings were still gone, though.

Gradually, the sea began to freeze. It started far away, but then came to Rainbow. She screamed and tried to swim away, but the ice chased her. She was frozen for a few moments, and then it melted as quickly as it had frozen. The sky was gray and hazy.

The smoke in the sky thinned. A light appeared. Rainbow blinked at it for a while. She then saw her mane and realized it wasn't wet. It must've dried because of the light, she thought.

The light came closer and closer. It got bigger and bigger. Rainbow floated in the sea and squinted because of its brightness.

The light came closer... It kept coming closer and closer. Soon the whole world was full of light and Rainbow was blinded.

Author's Note

dreams
Thats ware ill haveto go
Just to see your beautiful
FACE anymore i stare at a picture of you
And listen to the raddio

...........oops sorry I like that song XD

7. The Awakening

Rainbow blinked at the big fat light in her face. A big lamp was shining in her face from above. Concerned faces of Rarity and Derpy were blurry and then they were clear. Rainbow blinked at them and then Derpy smiled and Rarity smiled. Rainbow sat up and she realized she was on a chair. "Oh man, what happened????" said Rainbow.

"After you tripped on that old rock you went unconcious and we picked you up and brought you here. Then we did the Heimlich menuever and you weren't breathing so we were really scared. So we spilled water on you and we shined this light in your face and you woke up." said Rarity.

"Yeah okay but where are we." Said Rainbow. "I had a disturbing dream that had a worm in it. It also had bubble's and a light."

Derpy said "We bringed you to Rarity's house."

Rainbow looked around the room and saw Rarity's mom sitting there eating some muffins. Derpy loved muffins and she baked some for Rarity's mom. Derpy stuffed one in her mouth and she ate it. Rainbow got up and ate some muffins too. Then Rarity ate some and they all ate the delicious muffins.

The muffins were soft and they had crunchy peices in them. The pieces were almonds and also some choclalte and/or blueberries. Derpy ate a lot of muffins since she liked them. She really liked muffins and she liked to bake them a lot. she did it.

All of them ate the muffins since there were 26 of them. Derpy ate a lot like 12 or something. But they shared it and they all ate some. Rarity's mom sat at the table that was brown. Derpy and Rarity and Rainbow sat therre also and they ate some muffins. The muffins tasted good and Rarity's familly could never afford flour to make some muffins, so it was Rarity's first time eating them ever in her life. She stuffed some in her mouth and started talking with her mouth full. It was gross. She said "I like muffins and I like them almost as much as spam, haha." Derpy laughed and they ate some more.

Finally all 27 muffins were gone and they were all eaten. Rarity hugged her mom and then they all left. They went outside into the radioactive landscape. Rarity looked up into the sky and saw it was about to rain again. "I think it's about to rain again" said Rarity. Derpy looked up into the sky. "Yeah, probably," she noted. Then Rarity said "Can we go see Spammy again at the Market Mart?" Derpy smacked her. "Don't say the name of it!" she whispered in a threatening tone. Rarity cried a little bit and then she hugged Derpy and Rainbow. They all hugged and they went on their way.

Derpy and Rainbow flied but Rarity couldn't so she levitated. "Where are we going?" asks Rainbow. Derpy shrugged with a cool expression. Rarity said "Wherever the wind will blow... Wherever the wind will take us."

They landed back in a landing in the smog city. Rarity landed gracefully and Derpy flapped down. Rainbow crashed into a pile of cans and they spilled everywhere. But Rainbow Dash got out of it and she walked over to her other two friends. Derpy said "Okay guys, let's eat that food."

Rarity grabbed the sack on Derpy's back and stole the fries out of it. They were mushy and she gave them to Rainbow. Derpy ate the beef jerky and Rarity ate the Spam. It was a good meal and they were all full and focused when they finished. When they were digesting it, a rain fell from the clouds of smoke sky.

The three ponies hid under a fat balcony that was old and abandoned. The wood planks were parted and some drops of rain fell through. But most of it stayed out with the wind and the chilling wind. Rainbow hugged Derpy and Rarity and they hid under the old balcony. The rain crashed and it rained alot. Rainbow started being scared because it reminded her of her coma dream. But Derpy told her it's okay and they hid until the storm passed through. Some carnage and death in the streets was blown away by the wind rain. The rain washed the streets until the death was washed away.

After it stopped raining. Rarity looked up and saw the sagging balcony. "Come on Derpy we need to get out" she said. The rain left and they jumped out of the way just in time. The balcony fell and crashed into the gross street below. Rainbow screamed and Rarity said "What's wrong???"

"It fell on me and it crushed my foot" yelled Rainbow. Rarity gasped and derpy gasped. Rarity ran to Rainbow and grabbed her and the other 2 ponies dragged the rainbow one out from under the balcony. Rainbow's foot fell off and it was stuck in the balcony. Rarity screamed at it.

"It's okay Rainbow you'll be fine" said Derpy. Rainbow was getting dizzy from the blood loss. "No don't pass out" yelled Rarity. Rainbow got really dizzy "Oh no I think she'll pass out!!!" said Derpy. They rushed her to the burned down hospital and stayed the night in there.

"No Rainbow don't leave us" whispered Rarity. Rainbow cried silently and Derpy touched her rainbow hair. They sat in the night and Rarity lit a fire with some magical sparks emitting from her horn. The fire burned and it was blue. Derpy cried because she was hungry but their friend was dying. It was really ironic that they were in a old hospital since there was already a few corpses in the corner.

Rainbow said "I will join the corner corpses" and Derpy said "NO!" But it was too late. Rainbow cried in a pool of her blood and it got everywhere in a fat bunch. Derpy sobbed into Rainbow's corpse but she wasn't dead just yet.

Rainbow looked up and said a whispering omen. She said "The wolves run in circles." Derpy gasped and shook Rainbow. "What does it mean??? What does it mean, Rainbow?!" she screamed with tears running down her face.

Rainbow saw Derpy screaming something but she couldn't hear. It was really fuzzy and blurry like the buildings in her dream. Rainbow thought about her dream earlier and she was really dizzy. She was losing 95% of her blood. Then, Rainbow had a sign.

A guy appeared out of the mists of death. Rainbow was in a white space and she was standing in it. The guy came and said "Rainbow!!! I'm so glad you're close to death. Now I can pass on the message."

But Rainbow said "Okay, what message?"

The guy said "Tell Rarity... I'm sorry that I didn't let her fight in the war. I know she's tuff enough to do it. She's super cool and radical. She would have been really kill-tastic in the war... I'm so sorry I went in it and died instead. I was stupid."

Rainbow ran to the guy who was Rarity's dad. She hugged him. She said "Don't worry, I will pass on the message."

Then Rarity's dad smiled and faded away into the void of death. Rainbow ran around since she was healthy in the death void area. She said "I don't know how to get back." Rainbow Dash stopped smiling. She ran around panicking. "I don't know how to pass on the message but I have to!!! I got to!!! Otherwise Rarity will never know the truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She ran around screaming and crying and then she fell to the floor of blankness. She sat down and cried... Crying forever for all eternity.

Rarity ran to Rainbow Dash who was still on the floor. Derpy was crying and Rarity said "What's wrong?"

"Rainbow... she dieded."

A tear went down Rarity's cheek and she kneeled down in the blood of her friend who died. She cried with Derpy. "Rainbow was a good friend, even though she was a insane cannibal most of the time and she got rabies. But she was a good loving friend and she died and it was all my fault." Said Rarity.

Derpy hugged Rarity "No Rarry it's not your fault. She just got her foot in the balconny and it was the balcony's fault. Don't worry. She's in a better place now."

Then Rarity stopped crying and Derpy and Rarity spit on the fire to put it out. Derppy kicked Dash's corpse into the pile with the other ones. They went to sleep in the old hospital and Derpy was sleeping next to Rainbow's corpse. Except Rarity hated corpse smell so she slept somewhere else.

Author's Note

heyeey hey o hey yo yay i say yay thru the night
omg this chaptert made me cry ;00; aaaaaaaaaa it was so sad srry i need to go wach 100 ways to die to make me fell betteer~<3 :heart:
yea but sory it was late guys. i moved out my house with my parents so its been realy rough lateely.... ive had life issues and MontytheToast is being mean to me.m i would relly apreciate youre support. thanks during this time of need. :))

8. Darkest Moments

In the morning the sky was yellow and bright with the sun. The sky was yellow and shiny because the sun was bright. Smog came and covered it and the sky was grey once again. It shined into a hole in the old hospital. A hooligan burnt it down many years ago. It was just a chunk of burnt metal and some rubble now. Rarity and Derpy took a refuge in there earlier.

Derpy looked up into the sky and saw some birds eating Rainbow's corpse. She said "Nature is so beautiful~ :heart::heart:" Rarity woke up and ran to Derpy with the corpses. Derpy said "Come on Rarry we gotta get more food. We're all out. Again."

Rarity said "Yeah I want to go to Market Mart again!" Derpy laughed and she flew up and Rarity levitated. They got to the old market again. They got down and dropped down out of the sky. They landed and they were okay. Rarity ran into the building and did the secret knock. But a voice didn't say "come on" this time. Rarity did the knock again. There wasn't a response.

Derpy went into the building with Rarity. Rarity lit up the night with her horn. Inside the dusty furniture was there. But the food was all gone and Spammy was gone!!!

Rarity looked around and called Spammy. But he didn't come. "Oh no!!!" said Rarity, "How are we going to get food now????"

The ponies were not even sure what to do, but they had to do something. Something... but what would they do??? They had to do something. They had to do it. They snuck around the store and Rarity stole some food. Then Derpy caught her eye on something.

"Rarity look! Look with your eye balls!!!" screamed Derpy in shock.

Rarity looked to where Derpy was looking. She gasped with a shock, full of electricity emotion. She saw her beloved friend on the floor, Spammy. His face was covered in dirt and some old food.

"Someone torutered him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Rarity cried tears and she cried while Derpy comforted her. Derpy hugged her.

"Our love is lost like Rainbow's soul in despair." said Rarity as tears went down her cheeks. "I... I loved him, Derpy. I had a crush on him and I didn't even know what the colors of his eyes were. He always wore those sun glasses. Even though it was dark in there. And he always wore that trench coat. I thinked he looked so hot in it. And he sold me spam and I love spam. I ate it, I eated it." Her words were emotional and flowed like a flowing river of passion.

Derpy hugged and comforted her friend. Then she said "Don't worry Rarry, it's okay. He's in a better place like a lost soul drifting through the wind on the breeze." Rarity sniffed and she stopped crying. She said "Oh, okay Derpy. Well, I stole some food from that trash can, so we cat eat it later. I guess I'll be okay... I can find love another way..."

After that Derpy hugged Rarity and then Rarity kissed her. She said "I love you Derpy. I love you more than a friend. I love you like a love song." Derpy was surprised and she said "Oh. Well, I have a secret" she said kissing Rarity back. "I've always loved you, for ever and always, through the burning sun night." They kissed for a while and then they left the Market Mart and left Spammy's corpse.

They flew up and Rarity levitated. She could levatate because Derpy was carrying her. Derpy had wings so she could fly. Her wings had feathers. That feathers made it real easy to fly. Derpy flied up and Rarity floated with the magic. She levitated. They flew around and looked through the clouds. Finally Derpy said "I'll show you my secret place. It's my secret place full of beauty for love." Rarity whispered "okay" breathly and they soared like an eagle through the sky.

Derpy flew up high above the sky smog. The smog was dark with the green and pollution of factories nearby. Rarity saw that if she could bust through the smog, it was a thin layer of smoke clouds. Rarity broke through the barrier that was holding back her love. The barrier was the clouds that were full of the smoky fog from the city and pollution. Up above the smog, the sky was clear and bright like a shining sea without garbage in it. The sun shined like a flaming orb in the sky. The clouds were orange and pretty and cool. Rarity gasped and Derpy walked on the clouds since she's a pegasus and she can do that. And she had wings so she can fly. Rarity made a enchantment so she could walk in the clouds too. They walked there and Rarity ran since she was so excited.

They sat there for a long, long while. It was a long time in the evening until the sunburn set in the evening sky, burning up the atmosphere like drops of jupiter. They watched the sun set so beautiful. Then Rarity fell asleep so Derpy sat there watching her until the morning sun came back for them again.

The sun shined in Derpy's eyes and it made them feel burning. She stayed up all night watching Rarity like a creep so her eyes were really blurry and unfocused. Rarity woke up and she grabbed the sack from Derpy's back. She grabbed food and she ate it even though it was kind of moldy. Derpy ate some food and they had a cloud picnic in the clouds.

Then they flew down, back down through the smog layer and into the streets below. The streets were dirty and there was a scent of death and carnage in the trash cans and streets. Some pollution was in the distance. They ran far and Rarity ran. They ran like the river of Love bending into curbs against the land. It flowed beautfully and it was the water binding within that keeped them together in the river. they flowed but no and it did for real. Derpy ran with her since they were in love. They kissed under the morning sun-light and they ran in their love. They ate breakfast on a building. Their love was overpowering since they loved each other, for ever.

Author's Note

srry guys i been havin life isues lately yknow?????? yeah I got moved out and i live in a trayler now so wish me luck my frends :)
illl wrap up teh story in a few chappers ok

9. The Love Fib

They ran in love but Derpy stopped in her tracks. She started crying. She said "Rarity, I can't do it. I can't love you. I don't think I can love you any more." Rarity hugged her and said "No Derpy. It's okay. I'm not gonna break your heart, I'll give your heart a break." Derpy shrugged away. "I'm sorry... I have to say, I'll just have to say you were the one that got away," sobbed Rarity. Derpy said she's sorry. Their journey went on for a long time, but now it might be coming to a close...take turn know.

Rarity ran away, her tears going down her cheeks that had fuzz on them. She trotted away. Derpy sat in the fog. She flew up and her wings were light with the air.

Later Derpy flew up into the fluff of clouds. She sat on one with her peggasus magic. She thought about her life. She thought about a plan and if she should love Rarity. Then she ran down and ran to Rarity who was crying in a ditch. She said "Rarity I can't love you. But we got to make a plan. We gotta make a plan to ally the griffons. Okay?"

"Okay" said Rarity.

"We gotta do it, we need to do it to stop the war. Lets do it for Rainbow. She died in my arms and she been through so much. So we need to make a plan." said Derpy. Rarity said "Okay."

"Let's make a plan." said Derpy determinedly.

They sat and they plotted through the night. They made a plan that was extravagent and amazing. Rarity said "Okay Derpy. Let's do this thing, okay." Derpy nodded in grim relief. The plan was in place. They were ready.

Rarity said "This plan can't fail, Derpy." Derpy agreed. "We got to do it fast, before King Sombra takes over the world. That would be bad." Rarity said 'Okay."

They flew up into the sky above. Rarity used her normal magic and Derpy used the wings on her back. She shined with a red glow, her magical aura color. She leviated and Derpy flied. They soared through the air.

The journey took many long months. They flew through a mountain and windy air and some sand. They flew through vegetation forests and some cactus. They flew over the river and through the woods. Finally they ended up at the evil castle where the king was ruler.
"Derpy, look! There it is." said Derpy.
She pointed to the castle with her huff. They landedd on a platform balcony bya room in the castle. It was a bedroom. It was empty. They looked both ways and then again and then hopped inside. They ooked around the bedroom and noticed a bed. They notised the wall was a forest green and the floor was a wood one wood floor and they noticed that there was a closte they looked in it. There was a clothes and some show boxes.
"Hey, Rarity try on some shoes."
Rarity put on some of the shoes. they looked super great on her, but one shoe got stuck to her foot. It was stiuck!!!!!!!
Derpy grasped the shoe and yanked but it wouldent budge. Close but no sigar!!!
Rarity had show stuck on her foot, and she said. "My leg hurts."
Derpyt was worried. She tried getting the shoe off, it didn't work. Rarity was weak. Her leg was losing cerculasion. And she was lose. She lost it oh no.
Then a dark figure came in the room. It was a grifin!!!!!! oh on!!! Derpy jumped to her feet hooves and punched it .
the grifing fell to the floor in agaony and then depry dragged rarity out of the room with t he shoe still on her foot.

Author's Note

Soryy shipers out there. i just dont feel a connecsion beteen Derpt a nd Rareity so i stoppe it it didnt ring a belll you know.? I think ill ship her with someone else it a supprise, though, o, okay?? ;) **wink**
oops i acidently deletted the chapter, im so sorry ;U; i hadto redo it so i take a long time. :( :fluttercry: the other was funyer, but thats fine im getting the pint across you know. im sorry its short. im jusr loosing my motivasion for this chapter. itll get real good. Getting close to theClimax/ dont you worry dont you worry child see hevans gotta plan for you....................<3 lovr that song lol

10. Meeting with BUcky Chucking

Derpy heard a scream from the green bedroom they were in;., She turned around and draged Rarty with her. In their the grinffin was blooding. He moanede and Deroy helped him up. He was bulky but strong and had brown feathers. He had cutie mark it was a green dimond jewel. He had a scar that ran from his back to the side o his eye ball on the left sside of his face/
"Why u go n pushed me like that?" he said. he had a rasp voice like he smoked.
"I'm sorry, can you help my friend out of the shoe??" Derpy said.
"Yeah'
He bit the shoe and pried it off.
"Om god Thank you so much, Rarity said.
"No biggy. No problem bro."
Rarity looked him in the eye ball. She really like him, but hse liked everybpony, so depry rolled her eyes.
"Oh uh" she was speachless. "I am rarity. im white and a unicorn."
Derpy looked at him. "I'm deorpy hoofs."
The brwn grifin looked at raridy and Said, "My nae is Bucky chucking. Im the leader of the griffon armsy. S0o what are you dion here anyways?"
Derpy walked over because she was far away.
"We are here to make an ally with the griddind fs army. We want sombrera killled. We came to tell not to kill other ponies only him only. will you acksept?" derp said.
"Wait, so you arent workin for im?" bucky asked.
"No way girl, we dont like him. He tore churs the other ones othier ponys. he is wicked bad.
Bucky gaped. Lets go asssemle my army of pigeons griffin"
Whats thats?" asked Derpy.
"They are my army. They are griffins that have color of a pigon like in new Yorek. you Dig? hon :)"
Rarity smiled. She tink Bucky was super funny.
"OK lets go." said derpy in a serius voice. She moved aorund her baseball cap it was moving around her head/

Bucjy Chucking lead them down a corridore and they turned a few times. Then he opened a door and in it was a office. It was supe small, but they fit. No pone was in there was so dark.
"This is my office, the Buck y central." Buck said.
They awed as he went to his fat desk and pulled out a key from a drowr.
He plugged it into a door on the irhgt and the small door opened. It was a closet. He took a broom from the clost. He used the brrom to sweep away cobwebbs on the brown ceiling. On the seling was another dor. He grabbed his desk chiar and used it to stand up. He felt with his bird hands to feel for something. He found a small handle and opend it. It was a secret door that no one knew about but him and his frined Andrew K. Jemmings. Bucky crawlde the celing into the door and the girlys followed.

"This is the secret hallway." Buck7y whispered,.
Rarity and Derpy didnt say anywtjing. They didnt even question where they were going. Bucky fell through and landed out of the vent. He was on a floor. He started cryinf from bloew.
Rarity scotted through the hole and she landed next to him.
"OMG what it wrong??" He had a fat bruise by his butt where his cutty mark was the green jewl. Derpy flied through and lookeda orund. They were in a room. She helped comfort Bucky and they walked out. They were in the room he was wanting to be in. It was just a empty room with a door. Through the door was talking where people were talking they were griffons. Rarity saw the faces of the griffons. They were part a the army of Buckys/
"That;s my amry." he said. "I knw." said Rarity Rat=ity .

The griffon at the front of the room was had a chalkboard and was holding a stck and ponting to a graph. The chart had a plan of war on it. It was there plan to kill the ponies.
"We cant let them see you guys," Bucky said. He put black cloaks over there bodies and openedthe dorr. They walked to some bmetal chairs and sat init.
The griffon in the front of the room coughed in hiz throte and said, "Cornmander Chuckibng, why wer you so late to the meeting.?"
"Sorry, Sir Jimmy. I tripped ona rock a nd these bystanders helped me. They are great griffons warriors. They can help i think if ya give em a chance. man" Bucky said.
"Okay. have a seat." Jim said.
Sir Jummy didn't notice that they were really ponies with the black cloaks on im. Now they had to faqke being griffons. But how could they live such alie.? What if the Sir found out? woudl he kill them? What if they kill Bucky? that be bad so.'"
Sir Jimmy continued the lecture.

"Okay, now we were last discussing the battlefiled. There will be lots a sorrow and death, but we got willpower. We got gbuts. Spare no body. Kill the ponies. be vicktorious."
Rarity was frightended. Dery looked at Bucky and he nodded like he got a plan good.
The Sir Jimmy talked more.
"We will be using speacial weapons and today I will demonstate how they workk."
He turned it on it had buttons.
He flipped a switch and it shot a laser pointer that shined in someones eye. Evereone got scared. Then he punvh a nob and it talked. It said "please insert ID letters."
Sir Jimmy typed in his and it activia ed into a mega weapon. He pressed another mutton and a bunch of knives shot out. Rarity had ot duck for it. Bucky higged her and said "Hry watch it buddie."
Rarity was okay though. She didnt get hit by the nifes. She felt embrassed and protectied in his bird arms orf war.
Derpy ppafu close attention to there methods of war to take notes later. Rarity ust enjoyed Bucky. Bucky had to think of a plan to protect the ponies without lettunig Jimm know about the visitors he had brought. The same visitors who knew the truth. The visitos that would reign like the prophecy said.

Author's Note

This epiChapter was real good i though. I think writing for griddfins will be fun so keep in touch or KIT for short!!!!!!
I love Buck yy chucks character hes got potentiL

i drew him of r refrence in case i get more fanart ;o)
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11. Making aragmants

After the confence, Bucky lead the hooded figues to Sir Jimmy’s office/ It was bigger than Bucky’s but Bucky didn’t care because Sri Jimy had a big fat job. He had to plan the war and get ready for it. He was the organizer for it. Bucky did the secret knock ofn the door and Sir Jimmy’s throat yelled “WHO IS IS IT?’””
Then Bucky spoke up.
“It is I, Commander Chucking.”
“Oh, okay, colol” Sir Jim said.
Bucky opened the door and went in it. Rarity and Derpy followed with their cloaks on.
“Oh, I see you brought your warrior friendds.” Sir Jimmy said.
“Yeah. They’re vool.no biggy my friend my buddy.” Bucky smiled.
“What are your soldier names, boys?” Jim aksed/
Derpy spock “My name is Isac Flea”
Then Rariyt said “And my name is Jarvis.”
Sir Jimmy sdood up and tapped their shoulders wuth a big stick. He still couldn’t even see their feces under their cloaks.
“I dub the as Solder Flea and osldier Jarvis. Thank you for joinin the army, boyz”
“No problem Derpy said. She couldn’t see what Jimmyt look like but she thought he looked like a griggin. He was probly a gruffin.
Derpy and the other guy went to the office. They sat on the floor. So nice. Then commandeer Jimmy said “Hey you want a coffee.?”m Nope they replied in unison like a creepy guy. Ok he said. Commander Bucky said “Alright, time to go. Gotta go murder. yeeeah.” They ran to the battel-ground.
They saw some solders sitting there like a fat group of bye standers. Then Busky said I dunt kno guys. I don't know if it's a good idea. A good deed."
"Shut Up" said Jimmy. "Lets have a serius talk of serious. Okay. We got to kill em all so they listen. Ok????"
They agreed. The soldiers sat there and they started having a battle. Rarit ran after a guy and stabbed it with her horn. Derpi flied up and smacked em with her wings and kicked tem with her strong legs. It was a big battle/ A big, fat battle. Then Raritys cloak fell off. But she put it back on. "Im mysterious" she whispered.
Suddenly, it syopped. The battle was won, and no one was hurt! They wond! No feelings were hurted in the proces !!
Jimmy said "Time for our private meeting."
The horses and Buck7y walke dondown in the orfice and sat down in chairs.
"What did ya wantns to talk about, my most fathful soldier." JimmA said.
"I came to disciss Somerba and hus arms. We gotta get em.we gotta do it. I did it, I done it. Yeah,."
"WHart about his army??" said Jimey.
"We caomnnot kill the other pponies. The sonies are unslaved by him. theyre the good quys 2." C Bucky sad.
Derpy was brave enough to speak> "The ponies WANT tohe grippon amry to take over cause som bra is badd. He's a big fat bad guy. He's like a antagonist."
"Oh" said rarit.
Then she said Rarity said "ANypayz you cant kill thr e ponies becaus e they ant to heop you out good like good.'"\
Sir Jimmy sniffed, "And who toldu that, son??"
"Bucky said "I can did it. he ponies are goood ones. They want to help. They toll my so."
"Why did you talk to the pones? your jOb is to KILOLL them, Commander Blucky . you dispbeyed y orders.
"Hay, im the commander here! ANd I say that we cannot kill phe ponys ." Bucky was a screamin loudlie,,, like a loud.
Bucky licked heis lips. He was salty lips. He was thinking about burgers. Froom beef from a green cow. Mmmmm he said loudly. He keeps screaming.
Rarity thinks hes hansume. She smiled and was reminded of when she wnet to Detrot and some guy in a truck hgave her a buger. Itr jhad meet.
"Deroy said theyre nice pe`ople. I havent met em but i think It's so." explained buckle.
"No. We gots to kill ALL the pony's. Its in the instruction manuel." intensified Jimmy.
"Nop!" screamed Mucky./ "We can't kill em. then ill get a blemish on my perminent records....... My records of space and time in my bahvior graph chart exposition. Well have to make an acception to the declaration of InDipendince. Im sorry, but thats how it got to be." he said in whispered tones.
"pklz" said Derpyn. "We cant kill em."
"Yeah" agred Buck.
Finely, Rarty said "Ok, Jimm. I'l date yuo if you dont make us kill em." She fluttered her eyelashes like Fluttershy and did a duck face. fluttershy eyelashges.
Jimmy lookd at Rarity and said Ok hot mama. Yeah we wont kill em alright??????"
Rarity put a kiss in Jimmy's cheek. Yeah she said.
It was time for the battle. The next battle in the ranging utopia in the world. It was a post-apocalyptic dystopian society. It was like Detrot.
But untilt the wor started, Rarity, Derpy, and Becky, Jimmo would reasembly a meeting for the war guys to tell them about not killing the ponies.a Bucky went to town with the girls and the guys Jummy.

"Aright. >ets get it started HAH."
"Lets get it started in here" said Rartuy""
"SAy mumumumumumumum." derp said. Rraity smakced her NO.
Then Buckyy said no foolin around gyrls scquirrels, its time to get serious. We gotto tell the army about ponies,../ =iop[""""""

Author's Note

Hey guyz srry my editedr bailed on me like a whale froma big fat ship so Yeeeeaw. i had to hire Sparkelshipper agein. Hope yo dont mind. idk. but then sparkleshipper quit so i hyred a new one called Acorn Harvey. he sounds like hes on a farm. i like farms.
i think sparkshipler is just ipset cus i took her marmalade and she I didnt know. it was hersh.
So yeah my temporarary editrs: MontyTheToast, Acorn Harvet
my real ones: kittykay67, ~XSparkleShipperX~, EgoreFrimzCud, and my mommy :heart:~~~~ her names Beth
So yeh enjoy~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :O :pinkiegasp:

12. Back from The Past o

"Okay laddies, we gotta spread out wide. I'll tell the armsy about the new plan. You guys know what to do write?" Jimmy sai.
"Yeah" they said .
]' "I'm gonna go to the meeting with my new love." Rarity jumped up and followed sirJimmy to the meeting room where the army guys were confused about what. The war was appoaching and it was abouta strom. The rain trickeld down the street lamps were broken. It was sunset outside. The timber wolves was a holwin/. as gammy smith would predicted.
Bucky and Derpy walked throug the rain. Then Derpy thought about soumpin thats bin on her mind. She looked at Bucky who wa ss taking notes on the city they were in. It was the griffon Captal, Ermworm. The streets was mud with some rocks. Everypony/evrygriffn was walkign around in the rainy mud streets. the building was big and advanced. It had a mustache. ut had a door anf a window. The windows were dirty with the mud streaks rain. Their was only 1 bulidng in it. All evryone lived in it, tye building. The big building
She

He approaxhed it with cautio. They spreaded out wide like a big fat butter. Mmm said the/.they went away

Bucky looked at the building. It was closed . they sign said CLOSED GO AWAY
Derpy spoke up finely

"Hey, Bucku????"?>
{}:"?"
"Whut?" he said.\\

"I had a friend.........hername was Rianbow Jenifer Yam a dn she died..............."
"O0 a'" said Bucky.
"I was wonderng if there was a way to virng her back from the dead......back form th e pakst....''......"
Bucky stopped and he ha a tear. t was transparant.so asad
"I had a friend once to." Bucky said
"You had a friend? I didint know that...." dery replied/
"Her name were Chickpea Tuna." he was crying now in fornt of Derpy. Derpy put her flabby arm on him across his brown back with the scar.
"I was goin to ask her to propose but on the night at the restsiant she died. The waiders dropped a pot on her head that had boyling water :("
Derpy almost cried. She wouldve told Bucky about Rainbob's death but she didnt want to talk about it.

After snifling for a minuete or too, Derpy said, "So, Bucky, my buddy in crime..... Do you think we cN bring Rainbow Dash back?"
"We can do anyfing with the power of friendsgip. come on, I'll lead you to the ofishall army enchantment hall. We can whip up a litlle someting for your corplse friend."
Derptr hugged him and he hugged her back. She hugged

Then they went to the cool place where they went down a big hall way. There there was a room with lots and lots of potions. Derpy sniffed it and it smelled funky like a monkey. Then Bucky said, "The one is a blue one the back to life potion "
Derpy looked around but didnt find a blue one. All the ones she sad was ones that were like pink cough medicine and she wanted to ddrink ir but she wasn't aloud. She searched and the Bucky Guy did to, but she was a about to give. Thats when sh esaw a miravcle. In the back on of a shelvf, she saw the blue potions qz! !!!!!
She picked it up
"I think i found it!~!!!!!" she sang like a robin in the spring that is pregant with a egg.
Bucky smiled "Oh yeah there is it"
Bucky smelled th poton that smelled like rasberry.
"This potion just so hapnd to have my favorit brand of shampo in it. It's Razaroo 'Round Town.
erpy smelled too it was good like a dream. aboiut Rasberrys/
"We gotta get this potion to your friend Rainbwo Dah. We gotta get it to her. We gotta. Gotta get it.. Get it goin'. Gotta do it. I did it I done it."

then they went to the burned hospital where hte pile of corses form earlier were there. They was nasty things now. Rainbow lied there. Her bod was still okay, but sitting by the other ones made hrer smell lie a dead beet foot.
"I can fix it."Bucky said like fixit Felix.
He flipped Dash over and poured some potion into her mouth ahole and she woked up!O_KP){{{I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Derpy flipped her lid and hugged Rainbow. She didn't even smell like a foot anymore. She smelled like a rasaroo, what ever that was.
Rainbow owke up and looked at Derpy and was still dizzy. It had seemed like she had been trapped in her death nightmare world for a year, but Derpy said, "You've been dead for about a day I dont know "
Rainbow hugged Derpy. The feeling in her body was slowly coming back, but he r body was so cold. She needed warm. Derpy handed her a piece of her hair she ripped out just for. She didn't mind helpin out a friend from dead.
Rainbow sniffed it and a tear rolled down her pale bloe face, "Thank sDErpey.
Bucky said, "It's so nice to meet you in person Rainbow Dash."
"Please call me Dee Dee. Only m exclusive friends call me Dee Dee ;)"
Derpy giiglled she loved her frend back.
Rainbow tried stnading and it took a few tries like a baby cow just born like newborn Cuties.
"I'm so hungry Derpu and......?????? ///" rainbow sad
"Oh I forgot ot introduvce you to Bucky Chicking, He was the one with the potion to bring you back to live."
Rianbow had solutude She thanked him for her act and thanked him. Sheep
"Anyway Im starvin whats for lunch Bros?" Rainbow said cooly.
"Well, I still have a babbit I kill earlier. Want ta sit down for a little bruch much?"
"Aw yeah" they all said even the rabbid.

Author's Note

Hey GUYs!!!!!! Been wokring real hard on the chappers. Hope you all are enjoiing. Have a great day even if your on China in the other sdie of the whorld ;)

13. Dream Messaige

Fater eating their meal of bunnibbit they sat around under s tree in the rain that was wet. They relaxed and then Bucky
"Hey, you guys we should get back to Sir Jimmy. He and Barityt should be odne with the meeting. The war begins tomoorw sometime.
Derpy was glad to get Somnbra out a town. Rainbow had a thought of realtizationand renembered Rarity.
"Om hy GoD. I have to get t Rarity, guyas."
"What for?" Derpy said.
"There was a message form her father I had to deliver whehn she when I was deAD. I DIED BEFORE I COULD GIVE IN TO HER.

THEN DERpy said, "Don't wrrsie, were going their right now to her and Si Jimmy. You'll love him he's cool."

Derpy and the gang of rithmatic gatherd up round up and they went to the suberbsan where the army place was. When they got there Raunbow Dashed to the room and saw Sor Jimmy.
"Are you sir jimmmy."
"Yeah bro wy>"
"Im g\looking for a whit eumicorn girl. where is she is she trapped??????????
"Wait what I thought rarity was a griffin are you pony????"
"Heck yeah wjere is it?"
"Shes in da bathfoom"
"oh cool bye,.
Rain bow went into the batheroom and screamed for Rrauty . The stal door might have made her voice muffled so she scread it
:RARITYUUYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYUh"
Nobody answered.

Om my gfd. I cant find her in this bathroom. jk,m"

Maybe she had already left. Rainbow checked outside the bafoon and lookded around Loked arouynd TOWN.
Rarity was no ware in sight outa sight outa mind.
She sawed a tril of tears like the Cherokkee. Rainbw rememberd that Rarity was a Cherokee indaina and followed it. It head down may ways of life, but it stoppe at a room. when Canebow went it, she saw Rarity on the ground in blood. She picked up her body stlll breathing. Rainbow breathed on it. It was brieyhonh breating
Raibooow said "Whyd you have to die Rarit?/?//?????" she taken the body to Bucky. Hes still breathing" sh explained. "OK Ill fix her right up" said Buckiy.
Raincow cried in the corner of tears and she thought about it. If rarety died then she couldn't pass her fathers massage to her and Rainbow would be puniched in the after world when she dead.
Rarity sat up but was Dizzy.
"Rainbow, you saved me. Ear/ Am alive.
Rainbow ranned over and higged her tightly. But Rraity said "No time for hugs. I gotta go.""
Rainboo casing her down the halls like a buffaloo. Raritt screamed in pain and fell down. Hah I got you" sai Rainbow since its Aprill Fool in Pony Times. "Oh" siad Rrarint. The laughed the night away. Then they got up and drank coffee.ee. Coffes good for teh soul" explained Rianbob. "Ok" said Rarietty.
Then Rarity kep runnig til her heart waspumping with adrenilin she was ruining.
She popend a door to room with a elavator but the elvadoor closed befpre Rainbow could squeeze in it.
"But Rarity its inportaint! Pleeeeeese!"
Rainbiw sat down next to the esculator and cried.

Meanwhile, Bucki and Sir Jimkky and Derpy were plotting something reeall good. tow

Meanwhile Rarity was trotting along when she felt a tap on her shoulder outside of the fat buildigng. Se turned around in a panic and saw someone she recognised.
"NNIOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP?"""""

Rainbow heard sher screamed from outside. Oh NOO . Then she ranbowed outside through the window and she wa soutside.

Im out side she said. n she was outdied. Seh didnt saw raritttttttttttttttry. Oem ge" she sad. "Ware are you.?"
Rainbow looked both ays before she crossed the street and went into the middle of the street she sawl a note.

It read

"Hey girl,

If ya want yore friend Tarity back, you gotta find me. I'm a dr=ark horse like in Katy Perry Song. I'm like a ghost in the nihght. Come to my castle. THERE SWAY OPIYT.

That swat you get for leabing the kindgom,

llove
Subrua"

Rainbow went back inside and perpare for the war tomorrow.

Amy Terry Davidson was eating ketchip. She was reading the newspaper about a splosion. Her mom who was old came in. Hey can I take the kiddies to my house fo the weekedn"
"No said Amy. You had em last week. Jackie and Matilda need to have quality family tie.
Ok said her mom who was a gramma. She pikd up a food and ate it. Mmmmmmm........ Tastes like life she said.""""""""""

Rainbow joined Buckh and Derpy an dthe other one to plan how to get Rarity back. ..... But they couldn't think of anything.
"I can't Somra stole Rarity." said the derpy/
"I only knew for a day or so, but we gotta geter getting yeah going to it get her back." bUcky said,
Then Rainbow said "I should have stopped her... I should have stoped her......"
They sat for a wile.... thining, but night fell apon them and they parted ways and went to sleep, getting ready to wake up at 4 the moroning the next day.

Author's Note

hey guys my editer wasent at school 2day so I did this one allby myself~~~~~ kiklike a big girl. big girls dont cry :pinkiegasp: :fluttercry::rainbowwild::heart::heart::haert:

Epjilouge

Wait no i dont want an epilouge the was already explained. nevermind :)
bye

1. Battles From The Past

The sun warmed and shined it's rays on the battlefield. It had been a normal field one day, many ages ago, but now corpses lay across the field like dead leaves on a windy autumn day when it's just about winter and there's a chill in the air. The sky was orange with a scent of death. Wispy clouds floated across the moon, high up in the sky with the burning sun. The clouds were pale and gray like a spirit, and they looked like lost departed souls floating their way to the after-life. Broken armor and swords were there and some deformed chunks of metal were embedded in the corpse's bodies. The smell of decay wafted across the field with a feeling of dread.

Alla cross the kingdom there was a starvation disease in the Era of Starvation and Plague. As the sky burned down and the sun was hot with the death in the air, a dingy pale grey coat appeared in the carnage. It had been white once, but now it was grey like the clouds in the sky of death. It belonged to a unicorn who had once made her mane and tail beautiful every day. But now, she was here to investigate the battle and the deaths in it, and her hair was all tied up in back in a sloppy sock bun. She sweated from the heat that blared down like a loud horn in the heat and humidity. Many years ago, she would care about her hair, but there was no need for such frivilous things in these days of war and famine.

Rarity investigated a corpse with an arrow lodged in the foot. She picked up the arrow with her magic, which was red, and investigated it. Maybe, just maybe, it could be saved for later.

All of the supplies were short in these days, so anything that could be salvaged from battle scenes was good to the environment. The cities were all polluted now, and mostly of the plants died long ago. That was in the age of Celestia... Now, King Sombra reigned.

He had killed Celestia along with her sister Luna many years ago and taken over the whole land of Equestria. Now, it was his domain, and death and war were everywhere. Starvation happened a lot in the streets, and ponies were dying and corpses piled up in the sewage. It was horrible times in the kingdom of Equestria.

Things had gotten way worse when they had just lost a war with the griffon kingdom. A lot of captives were taken and millions of lives were lost. It was a horrible and bloody war and many lives were lost to that noble cause. It was very costly to their new Shadow King, and it was a horrible era in the whole land... Not only for Equestria, but for the Dragon Kingdoms and Griffon Kingdoms as well.

Now, since Equestria had lost the war, the griffons had taken a large chunk of land from what had once been the Crystal Empire, many years ago. It was cold up in the Northern Lands, but the griffons took whatever they could and they thought it was a good idea to take over all of the land. Someday, Rarity thought in her heart that all of the world would be ruled by the griffons...

Soon Rarity saw a corpse that she recognized. It was her father, and he was in a pile of carnage. There was blood everywhere. It was gross. She remembered her father died in the war yesterday. It was long battle that lasted for six years of nonstop fighting and killing. The streets were covered in blood and there was so much famine that some people became cannibals to survive. Rarity wasn't a cannibal, though. She gathered her father's body and put him in a sack. She brought him to the old cemetery. Nobody had been there in years since the war. She cried real loud and cried tears of sorrow and she dug a hole and threw the sack in it and burried it. The last time her father and her had talked, they argued about Rarity going to war. She was a fghter. She could do it, she was cool. Rarity was the toughest of the bunch but was emotional and probably couldn't take all the killing, but she would have made a great warrior. Rarity sat there crying. She wanted to make a marker so she could remember where her father was buryed. She stabbed a stick into the earth and sobbed and started yell, " Why, dad. Why did you leave!!!!! I could have fight in the war!!"

She stayed there for a few hours and cried until her mother found her.

"Rarity, I've been looking for you. Get inside the annex before the fumes get to your brain."

Rarity followed her mom but didn't tell her about her dad's body. It would sadden her.

"Rarity, tonight we're having a guest over for dinner. "

"Oh, who is it."

"It's Derpy. She said she has some news for us. It must be important."

That night, for dinner, Rarity's mom made a moldy carrot and put it in some water. Rarity's family couldn't afford warm water, so that's just what they ate. Derpy frantically came inside the house. Her yellow hair was sweaty and cut short in a short haircut. Her mane was up in a ponytail and tied up with a rubber band which was kind of ironic since she's a pony. Her eyes were yellow-ish as always like mustard gone bad. She was born with messed up eyes, but now she was okay. She panted breathlessly and started to whisper-yell...

"Rainbow Dash escaped the asylum and is running around town like a maniac."

"Don't you mean MANE-iac!" laughed Rarity's mom, holding in a snicker.

Rarity smacked her mom.

"Mom, this is no laughing matter."

"I'm sorry, Rarry, I just want to brighten the mood."

Rarity stomped to her room. She hated her mom. She was so stupid and thought everything was a big fat joke. Sjhe was worse than Pinkie Pie was... before she died because she took an arrow to the knee. Pinkie had been Rarity's friend many years ago but now she was dead and it was really sad. My life sucks, thought rarity.

Derpy sat down, "That was the news. Rainbow is crazier than ever. After the war, they locked her up... and she got rabies."

Rarity's mom was like "Oh, that's so sad."

Then she said to Derrpy, "Can we help her??"

"Yes, we can. Her medication is in a cabinit at the asylum. If we can get there and take the medicine we can get her to normal again."

"I'm still sick with a fever so maybe you and Rarity could go. I wish you luck in your jurney."

"Thanks Pearl."

"Don't say my name out loud. Rarity must not know my name." she said.

"Oh, sorry. I forgot..." Derpy grabbed her dusty old baseball cap and knocked on Rarity's door.

"Rarry, come out. We have to save Rainbow Dash.'

It took a minute, but Rarity came outside and they decided to leave.

"Bye, mom."

"Bye, Rarity. Be safe. Don't forget to eat or you'll starve."

"... I know, mom..." A tear rolled down Rarity's fuzzy white cheek.

Derpy tipped her hat to Rarity's mom and they left and they were on their way. They left.

Author's Note

hi guyz i gpt a neew amaxzing editer!!~!!! his anme is MontyTheToast and he's so super cool yeea I love him. I gpt a crush on him I found him on fimfiction and he volinterred to be my ederter yAnyways this was my frist time riting a FalloutQuestria story so sorry if i did smething wrong....... but if i did, don't tell me i'm stupid of messe up because thats not even Nice. enjoy the story but dont yell at me I will icknore all bad comments.

14. The War Deathss

"Rainbiw Dash, wake up." Derpy shuck the pegsister awake.
Rainbw heard a shot gun outside and some big bombs that shouck the bilding.
"The war is start! Let's get out!"

Rainbow jumpedl up adn the horses ran to the eclator and were about to get in it, but the elvator made a loud bang and it gell all the way down tot the basement war room. Derpy backed up and lead Rainbow to the staircase and they trotted dpwn exess Rainbow fly instead and walked with feet.
They wnet down 15 flips of stairs and in the lobby, there was multiple fires and Derpy snuck to the ba=ck door with Tainbow. They got out and snuck across to the next town over. It was a lng journey ahead of the,m.

................~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~**************************************<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<,

Later, Derpy and Rainbow made it to the northern Crystal Mountains where the CRystal empire was before Sombra tore it fown and built the Sombra Liberal Conserving Democraptic Republic, or teh SLCDR for shorts. They snuck around the big armies of pony slaves. They were loasing connons up with bombs that would explode in midair. It was a stragedy really. Then Derpy found a shack she remembered from her childhood memories. She lead Rainbow to the shack and inside, there was a meatball looking object She went n here. No one was in three, except Derpy and Rainbow Sash. The shack was a small shack with walls painted like a rose clor that was pinkish. like Pinkie Pir. She saw the rug that was a dirty tile. the shsck had been a small village shop back in the day. They used to sell things like medicine and cardbox cutouts and some gardening shovels. When Derpy was a kid, the store was called "Kati Hole Essentials", but before that the store was owned by Jobs the Great and was called "Hearty Warehouse". After the second store owner Katoli Holanda sold the stroe, it was bought by Sombra and he named it "syupid store" Then he abomdoned it and let it rot bad.

Derpy saw the meatball thing and touched it. It was squish and it smeeled like a rotting corpse like a chickne if it died like Bucky old girlfriend Chickpea Tuna. Except they werent at resterant they were at the shack. The love shack. Except they werent in love only like friends except Rarity cause she likes every piny guy and some off griffin like Jimmy sir,. Anyway the meatball dinent do do anything. Then Derpy realized that the meatball was really a dead rodent like animal. They ate it since they dont like to waste food. After eating, Derpy serched for supplies. They found a medicine bag with cough drops except they were mint so Rainbbow couldnt eat em cause shes allergic to mints. Derpy kept them tho in case they got stripe throat Times were Tough.

Derpy was aboout to exit, when a slave pony gounf em and yelled "HEY THESE PONIES ARE FROM THE SOUTH. REPORT THEM THE KING SONBRA NOOOWWW."
Then the guards grabbed them and the pones tried to get away but the guards gouys were too strong.
"No" cried Derpy
"No" cried Rainbow
HA HAH said the guards

Then Rainbow did a rainbow Kick and Derpy bit theguard arm guard. They got Awau!!!!!!!!!!

The armies of ponies the crystal ones swarmed the two pegsuis ponies. They flew super fast towards King Sumbra's castle where they could get Rarity back.

Meamwhile, Comabder Chucking and Sir Jimmy were off fighting in the war. At the moment, they were sneaking around a crystal pony slave camp where the soldiers were preparing to load weapons and march to Boneville. Bucky lead Troop #43 to the camp. They began Attack!!!!!
Bucky jumped out from behind a push and tackled a guy with a gun. The guy dropped his gun and Bucky punched him in the eyeball.
Sir Jimmy raided the camps armory room in a tents. He found a nife and took it. Then the rest of the troop attacked and after they left.

The trip to the castle was hard an the pegasises. they flew through cold and snow and cold. They might hav got sicked but the were okay. They saw the castle thing in the distance. they fly as hard and fast ad they can. Rainbow Derpy found the castle. They flew to it do it to it I did it i done it. They made ti finally!!! Derpy and Rainbow landed on the highest tower of the towers. They snuckiin through the nearest window and in it was a guard who was at a vanity. The guard saw them and tried attacking, but Rainbow beat him up and they stoled his armor. Derpy wore the helmet and the letaher boots he had. Rainbow put on the breastplate and the leg warmers, but he also had another helmet on so Rainbow wear it too. Derpy nd Rainbow went out into the hallway and passed mutiplee guards that waved at them friendly and they waved back. Derpy decieded thta they neeed to find out wehere King ßombra was to kill him. They continuesd the path down the hall and they saw a room that had a sign. The sign oni t it said "Sullivan Sombre" on it. IT WAS HIS ROOM!!!!! They walked in it and Sombra was in there at his desk and writing a leytter. They went to him and said "WHERE FAT IS RARITY."
Then Sombra laughed and turned around to them and said "I see you fond me."

Meanwhile, after the battle, Sir Jimmy and Bucky Chucking were about to leave the camp when allala suddeen, a group of crystal ponies troop came over and yelled "THERE THEY ASRE<"
They rushed to them and surrounded Bucky's troop. A mustache man came out and approached Jimmy and Bucgy.
"ah the trroop here beeped in and I got the message on the pager They said there was trouble. I didn't realize they had all died."
"Yeah well they did." said Bucky.
The mustache pony pulled out a kniffe and stabbed one of the troop guys on the gruffin army. The he pulled the nife out and stabbed it to Sir Jimmy. he stabed. Jimmy fell to the ground and was dying and Bucky lenaed next to him.
"No JIMMY! Don't die man I need you, buro."
Then Jimmy, weakly, turned to him and said his final "Tell Isaac Flea I love her. She'll want to know for sure before she hears of my dea-" then he died.
Bucky hugged him but guickly got up because the bad guys were attacking. He flew to the castle to see if Rainbow and Derpy were alright and to help if the helping is or was needed. He need to save Raritu and Derpy and Rainbow Dash.

"Where's Rarity!" shouted Rainbow dasp.
"I killed her. i got blood on hmy hands I was caught red handy." Somnbra said sinister likely..
Derpy gasped and started crying and Rainbow hugged her. Somtra dragged Rainbow And Derpy to a room and closed the door and let them starve.
"Derpy?"
"Wat,"
"Our journey ends here.........wewilll rest down in history. Hopefully the army wins it all. We won't be there to see it, but I'm sure the children will."
"It makes me sad we can't see Rarity and Bucky one last time.... And My True love.... Jimmy."
"You liked Jummy to?"
"Yeah... You?"
'YEAH.......... AT LEast we are away from our misery lifes. You can join me in my death world. Do you accet my invite?"
"Do I have to RSVP?"
"Nope. :)" sad rainboob w
"Ok" they agreed. They sat in the room.
After a fow minutes....
".....Take me there." derpy said.
"huh what"
"Take me to the death world Rasbow."
"OK"

The began feeling like a float floating. They were high apove their bodies and were in a new place. It was the death place. There was the buildings that rianbow remembered. It was a utopia not a distopia ;like bonyville. But then Rainbow saw Rarity's dad and she saw him and they hugged. They brought Derpy closed and Rarity dad whispered loving words in their ear flabs.

Bucky flew to the castle. He flied and he flied away. It took many minutes to get to there to it. yeah
Bucky finally found the castle. He saw that there were snow prints on the tower where Rainbow and Derpy had gone in through that one tower right up in there,
Excet when he got there he was stabbed. It was Kidg Kombra.
"I predcited you would come here to rescue your frieneds.... BUCKY CHUCKING."
"What did you... ugh.... What you do with them??" the pain was unbareable.
"THEY'RE DEAD." then Sombra stabbed Bucky again, and he was dead.

The good guys had died, but they had not lost hope. The ponies of Bonyville would find a way to win the wards and they could make it. Make it or break it yeah

Author's Note

....... ..........:(......................I had a confession to make. I actually fired MontyTheToast bcak in chaper 6. It was for me own gude. He was bad edit because he took details out it wook characetr from the way the story was wrten it wasnt even my story anymore. so I can toooked it ovar....But thats' why the gremmer is so bad. Am sorry for being a botber. ::::::::::::::::D((((
I deciededc I woiuld try my grammer beter in the story or i can try makin up to IXSprakleShipperXI cause she was m ygood editwerr. :(
soryry

anyway this chapter was intense Huh? :)
Yeah im sad it end... im gonna write a quick eplouge after this is publiched. tahnk to you guys forthe support to keep my spirits running like a river. Stayed tuned for other storys coming up bye!!!!