Blaze Blue vs Soul Stealer

by HurricanePigeon

Rating: teen
Tags: Adventure, Dark
Length: 7028

Blaze blue is back and know he must face his deadlist foe yet

Blaze and friends were having a normal day until Celestia summons them the Princess explains that a very dangerous stailon has got his hooves on the Soul Stealer and with he plans to steal the elements of harmony's power but will Blaze blue and the rest of the colts be able to stop him *this is a sequel to Blaze Blue fire mane in case your were confused*

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-09-13 10:21:44 UTC

Chapter 1

Blaze Blue vs The Soul Stealer

by Russell hockey/hurricanepigeon

Location Pony-Ville market

Time 10:35

Three months after the fall of Discord

“Thank you sir, see you tomorrow” said Applejack as she started to pack up her stall.

“Man I can’t believe we sold out so fast” Blaze stated as he helped Applejack.

As they were just about to finish they saw Twilight run towards them holding a letter.

Twilight panted “Applejack! Blaze! I’m glad I found you. The princess wants to speak with us and the rest of the Colts”

Applejack and Blaze look puzzled

“Umm why?” they both asked.

“I don’t know but please tell me you’ve seen Rainbow Dash! I can’t find her anywhere” Twilight was panicking and then Rainbow landed next to her.

“Umm Twilight? I told you that I always nap up there” Rainbow pointed to cloud above the market. Rainbow continued as she yawned, “So what’s up?”

Blaze interrupted, “The princess wants us for some reason...”

Then Rarity and everyone else including the colts walked up to Twilight except Pinkie who bounced.

“Good, good, everypony here” Twilight gave a sigh in relief as the group wondered what the princess could want with all of them. A horn sounded as a royal carriage landed next to them

“Twilight Sparkle and friends. Commandos and the Catastrophic colts. The princess has summoned you so could you please board quickly, we must depart” ordered one of the Royal guards

As the group flew across equestria they all gave their ideas for why Princess Celestia wanted them so urgently.

“Miss Sparkle, we will be landing soon” said the guard as they approached Canterlot castle.

Twilight and friends exited the carriage and headed for Celestia throne room.

“Princess what happened why do you need us” Twilight asked.

“Good you got here safely but i'm afraid that you are grave danger” spoke the princess who was relieved to see her student.

“Well Celestia, what is it and why did you drag us out here” Blaze pointed to the rest of the colts.

“Yes, I have a report that a very dangerous stallion by the name of Rouge as got his hooves on-”Celestia was about to continue but Smasher interrupter her.

“Did you say Rogue?” He then mumbles to himself, “...so he wasn't full of. If its the same Rouge we have to hurry!”

“Got what princess? What has he got?” Twilight asked.

The princess explained, “He has got the Soul Stealer and with that he plans on take the spirits of the elements of harmony from you girls. He is extremely powerful as, and if he gets his hands on them, he will become invincible. You must not let him get to you...”

Blaze interrupted Celestia, “What's your great plan? We hide here and dig our own graves! well?”

“Well what do you purpose Blaze?” Celestia asked.

“It's simple, we have several hideout's scattered across the land and you never found any so he shouldn't either. So we shall split into groups of two and head out. All you have to do is just supply us until we find a way to kick his ass”

Commandos continued, “Yes Blaze, that might work but there are five hideout's and there are six Pairs”  blaze looked puzzled as he tried to think of a passable location to hide.

“I know of a place! An old war tower in the city of Flames Blaze. You're the only one that can lower the heat so, for the safety of the others, will you go?” the princess plead.

Blaze nodded but didn't say anything.

Commandos broke the silence “Ok here are the pairs: Smasher take Fluttershy and go to Crystal cove, Psy-Psy take Rarity to Sector E-102, Tornadus take Rainbow Dash to Soleanna castle, Thundurus take Pinkie Pie to the Sinjoh ruins, Blaze you take Applejack to the war tower. I'm sure the princess will take you there and Twilight you're with me, we’re going to Kakariko village”

The group split into three pairs and began to head out before Celestia stopped them

“Wait take these earrings; they will allow me to find you and to speak to you”

She handed out one to each pair and they went their separate ways.

End of Chapter

Chapter 2

Chapter 2

As every pony prepared to leave, the princess wished them good luck.

As Smasher and Fluttershy began to walk to Crystal Cove Fluttershy turned and asked

“Um Smasher, you said that you knew Rogue. Do you mind telling me how?... That is... If you don't mind....”

Smasher Stared and began to walk, “I suppose I should tell you why. It was a few months before I joined the colts and I was on the streets because every pony feared my strength. They called me a monster and forced me out. Anyway one night I met a chap and he said that he knew of a magical artifact that allowed him to become immortal. He said he could use some help but I wasn't interested. That whole live forever thing nerve sounded interesting but after I became a thief, we met again but this time he begged us to help. We refused and tossed him out but that's the last of it”

They continued walking for what seemed forever but at last they made it.

“There it is...” Smasher pointed at a large group of rocks in the middle of the ocean.

“Um... but how are we going to get there” asked Fluttershy

Smasher walked over to a large bolder and pushed it to one side to reveal a large hole.

“That's great but I'm kinda scared of the dark and how are we supposed to close it after we jump down” asked Fluttershy as she backed away from the hole.

Smasher chuckled as he grabbed Fluttershy and a chain which was attached to the bottom of bolder before leaping down. Fluttershy screamed as they fell down. As they approached the bottom, the wall started curve and became like a slide. They slid down and they eventually made it to main room. Fluttershy looked around in awe. The entire base was made of crystal.

“Celestia, we made to Crystal Cove. I repeat, we made it to Crystal Cove. Feel free to send suppliers when ready” said Smasher.

About five minutes later a large group of packages appeared before them containing food water and other necessities.

“OK Fluttershy let me give you the grand tour” said Smasher.

“First right is the bedrooms. You can take any bed but the middle left; that's my room. First left we call that the fish spotter, basically it's really see through Crystal and don't worry about getting spotted, we’re 200 meters from shore and we are roughly 75 meters down. The room at the back is the bathroom. If you do go for a bath, look out, some fish like to bite”

“Um ok...” she whimpered.

One Week Later

Time 00:54

A loud crash came from the roof followed by several smaller bangs.

“He's here” yelled Smasher as ran out of the bedrooms shortly followed by Fluttershy

“I've finally found you Fluttershy. The element of kindness” said rouge as he landed.

Smasher stomped the ground. “Don’t think for one second that you gonna win because, spoilers, you going down”

Rouge laughed and charged at Smasher who quickly punched him across the room.

“So you’ve gotten stronger? Too bad it’s not going to help you”

Rouge charged again but before Smasher could even blink Rouge punched him to the ground. Smasher tried to punch him but Rouge blocked him and punched him in the gut. Smasher gasped for air but Rouge grabbed him and throw him face first into the wall. Blood dripped from Smasher as he went in for one last attack. Rouge smirked and spun around and kick Smasher back into the wall. Smasher slammed into the floor and he didn't get up. Fluttershy ran over to him.

“Please get up! Please!”

Rouge turned to Fluttershy who cowered in front of him. He picked her up.

“You see this neckless it's the soul stealer”

The gem in the center opened up and what came out was a small black claw which pierced Fluttershy’s chest without leaving a mark and pulled out a small pink light. The pain was unbearable. Fluttershy screamed and Rouge laughed.

“And this is your element and now its mine...” Rouge thrown her next to Smasher and as the soul stealer finished absorbing the element, it glowed and Rouge left.

“Celestia help...” Fluttershy moaned before she passed out.

End of Chapter

Chapter 3

Chapter 3

“So these earrings allow the princess to find us eh?” wondered Psy-Psy.

“It’s a shame that had to be horrid colour“ complained Rarity.

Psy-Psy sighed as he began to walk into the forest with Rarity.

Shortly behind him but were quickly stopped by Rarity screaming.

“What is it?” asked Psy-Psy

“I just stepped it to some sticky mud” Rarity whined.

Psy-Psy growled.

“That's it? Mud?” he let out a deep breath. “You know what, here...”

Psy-Psy used his magic to pick Rarity up and placed her on his back.

“Happy now you won't get muddy and I won't have to hear you complain every five minutes”

Rarity tired to say something back but she didn't. Psy-Psy continued to walk until they got to an old abandoned building in the middle of a field.

“We're here” said Psy-Psy as he put Rarity down and began walking inside.

“What happened here? Everything is destroyed” asked Rarity.

“Sector 102 was the most advanced science labs in Equestrian history but something happened which killed ever pony and all their research” Psy-Psy replied look around for something.

“Here it is” said Psy-Psy as he lifted up a couple of floor tiles to reveal a staircase.

“This is the hideout” he said as he began to walk down the stairs.

As Rarity followed him, Psy-Psy closed the entrance with magic and lit a couple of lanterns. As they got to the end, they found a room with a sign “Lab X2”. Psy-Psy contacted Celestia for some supplies.

“Well its not exactly five stars but it will have to do” moaned Rarity.

She looked around and found a sealed door but the sign on the was was removed.

“Hay Psy-Psy, what’s behind here” asked Rarity.

“Nothing of your concern” snapped Psy-Psy.

 “Well what happened to the nice Psy-Psy who helped me with my designs and helped Sweetie Belle with her homework?” Asked  Rarity.

Psy-Psy look away in disappointment, “Look Rarity, I'm sorry for being angry and I know I shouldn't take my frustration out on others but..” he stopped.

“But what darling?” Rarity asked.

Psy-Psy’s horn glowed and the sealed door opened.

“Go on, take a look” said Psy-Psy.

Rarity walk into the room and found tons of papers and journals. She started to read one. She then dropped it in shock.

“This can't be true you're not” before she could finish, Psy-Psy interrupted her.

“I'm not an android... Well... I am” he said in disappointment.

“I am the first and only. I was the one who destroyed this place. I am a lie” Psy-Psy began to cry.

“Now listen here, you might not be as real as me or Blaze or anyone else but you're not a lie. You are how you want to be and I believe that you're one of the most wonderful ponies I ever met and you being an android does nothing to change that. Now close that door forever and never look back”

Psy-Psy look at Rarity and hugged her, eyes full of tears, but before he could speak his stomach growled.

“Now that sounded pretty real to me” said Rarity as the two looked at each other.

Psy-Psy began to speak, “Rarity do me a favour, don't tell anyone. You and Commandos are the only Ponies that know so please...”

Rarity silence him with her hoof and nodded, “Now could you help me prepare dinner? You must be starving?” Asked Rarity.

Psy-Psy nodded and showed her to the kitchen.

4 days later

“Come on you stupid computer, work!” Psy-Psy growled as he slammed his hoof on a computer monitor. He turned around when he heard a door open.

“Psy-Psy, why in the name of Celestia are you making so much noise?” Rarity complained as she removed her eye pads.

“Sorry but i'm try to fix the training machine that hehe broke”

Rarity glared at him and left the room.

*Boom*

“My bad” yelled Psy-Psy.

“Why does he have to be, argh, noisy. I hope Sweetie belle is all right she most probably worried sick or breaking something or problem both”

*Boom*

“Oh darn it! I thought I had it”

Rarity face-hoved as she got out of her bed clothing and put on her make up “He’s lucky he doesn't have any family to worry about”

3 days later

Time 01:23

While they were sleeping, they were woken up by the sound of hoof steps getting louder.

“Rarity, behind me now” whispered Psy-Psy.

“Well Well... Look who it is, Android 0001... or Psy-Psy” said Rouge confidently.

As he started to walk closer, Psy-Psy’s horn began to glow.

“Get a load of this”  Psy-Psy said confidently.

Rouge stopped but then laughed and slowly continued to move.

“What! But your central nervous system should've stopped!”

Psy-Psy struggled as Rouge got closer. Psy-Psy tried to punch him but Rouge blocked and punched Psy-Psy in the stomach. He coughed blood before being punched across the room and slammed into the sealed door. Psy-Psy used his magic to throw a table and Rouge but it did nothing to him. As Rouge approached him, Psy-Psy tired to stand up. Rouge picked him up and slammed him to the ground. He then turned to Rarity who used her magic to throw everything she could at him but it had no effect. Rouge picked her up and proceeded to remove her element but before he left he turned to Psy-Psy, “For an Android, you’re pathetic”

When he left Rarity spoke, “Celestia, please help”

End of chapter

pigeonsprite:

ok here i am lets do this

Chapter 4

Chapter 4

“You better be ready for a long flight” asked Tornadus as he started to stretch his wings.

“Are you kidding me? I'm always ready for a long fly” said Rainbow over confidently.

Tornadus smiled as he took off with Rainbow dash right behind him.

As the two Pegasi flew across Equestria. Rainbow began to overtake Tornadus who smirked as he bolted past her but Rainbow was quick to catch up and soon they were neck and neck.

“Hey your pretty fast” said Rainbow, her voice had a hint of surprise.

Tornadus just smiled as he began to speed up.

“If you look down now, you see the City of Water, Soleanna” said Tornadus. “...and over there the Castle” he continued.

As the two landed in front of the castle, Tornadus lead Rainbow past the guards and into the wine cellar. The two walked to the location of their hideout. Tornadus stopped and started to drink some of the wine out of the barrel. Rainbow gave a disappointed look. Tornadus then stopped.

“What? Do you want some or something?” he asked drying his lips.

Tornadus walked up to a group of barrels in the corner and looked at one of them. It had a sign saying “Out of order” on it.

“Well that's new” said Tornadus puzzled.

He turned to the one next to it and pulled the front off to reveal an entrance.

“Ladies first” he said as he bowed.

Rainbow climbed into the barrel, followed by Tornadus who closed the entrance behind him as the two crawled through the tunnel.

“This is the best view i’ve had all day”  Tornadus muttered to himself as he followed Rainbow Dash.

Tornadus let out a huge burp.

“That's disgusting” whispered Rainbow holding her nose.

Tornadus shrugged. As they continued they could see the light in front of them. Tornadus grabbed Rainbow’s tail.

“Ow, what was that for?” she asked angrily.

“There is a pressure switch right in front and I kinda don't want the alarm going off right now” Tornadus replied.

Rainbow dash Growled as she stepped over the button. The two Pegasi finally made out of the tunnel.

“Welcome to our training base here you find everything you will need to keep fit” stated Tornadus as he began to show Rainbow around.

“Oh, before I forget, I better tell the princess we made it” said Rainbow.

“Um princess, we made it“

Later that night

As Rainbow was sleeping, Tornadus woke up and began to sneak to a door at the back of the room. On the door it had a makeshift sign saying “The bosses room, No entry”. Tornadus slowly opened the door and began to rummage through all the drawers and shelves until he found a safe. He pressed his ear up to as he turned the dial. After twenty minutes of trying, he finally opened it. Inside was a look of jewelry but Tornadus only took out a locket. He opened it to reveal a picture of family of Pegasi.

“Mother, father, I hope you’re proud of what I’ve become and not what I was but I hope, one day, I meet you face to face again”

Tornadus closed the locket and went back to bed.

One week later

Time 1:56

As the two Pegasi were sleeping, the alarm went off. Rainbow and Tornadus quickly jumped out of bed and were quickly greeted by Rouge.

“Well well, one twin without the other. This is gonna be no challenge at all” complained Rouge, but before he could prepare, Rainbow dashed and punched him into the air. Tornadus began to fly all different directions around him punching him at every pass as he was joined by Rainbow. The two both slammed into the ground as they landed, exhausted. They heard rubble move as Rouge stood up and charged at Tornadus who tried to dodge but Rouge punched him in the face, and before Tornadus hit the ground Rouge span around and bucked him into a pile of weights. Tornadus tired to go get but collapsed. Rouge turned to Rainbow dash who charge at him but she was quickly stopped as Rouge grabbed her. Rainbow quickly headbutted him but he didn't flinch. Rouge grinned as the soul stealer opened up and jabbed rainbow in the chest and pulled out her element. Rouge tossed her aside and left. As Tornadus regained consciousness as he stumbled over to Rainbow dash and picked Celestia’s earring.

“Celestia, I'm sorry I failed you” and collapsed again.

End of chapter

Chapter 5

Chapter 5

“Ok Pinkie you better bring something warm. The Sinjoh ruins are freezing this time of year” ordered Thundurus.

“Okie doki loki” she replied joyfully.

Thundurus and Pinkie left towards the hideout.

As the Thundurus flew and Pinkie bounced north they had a quick stop in hoofington.

“Stay here, I'm just gonna post a letter” said Thundurus as he sealed the letter.

“Ok, I hope Fleur doesn't mind you missing your date” said Pinkie happily.

“Wait, how did you know i'm dating Fleur de lis?” asked Thundurus with a puzzled look on his face.

“Oh you say everything you write and you just told me silly” replied Pinkie.

Thundurus face hoofed  as he entered the post office.

As they were getting closer to the Ruins it started to snow and the closer they got, the colder and heavier it got.

“Hey Thundurus, I got a question: How did Blaze get up here?” asked Pinkie.

“Well you see, we normally had two unicorns so we could have a shield” Thundurus replied.

The two reached a large slope and a lone tree. Thundurus walked up to the tree.

“Hay Pinkie, ever been snowboarding?” he smiled.

“A bunch of times! It's really fun” Pinkie replied.

Thundurus lifted up a panel next to the tree and revealed a bunch of snowboards. He passed one to Pinkie who was still rambling on.

“Ready to shred?” Thundurus smiled.

Pinkie nodded as as they began to ride down the mountain. As they got about halfway down, the snow storm began to clear and a bunch of ramps came into view. Thundurus began to speed up and began to show off. He approached a large ramp and he faced Pinkie Pie.

“Any requests?” he smirked.

“Ohh ohh, do a barrel roll!” she replied.

Thundurus launched off the ramp and began to spin. As he landed he turned to Pinkie Pie who was doing several backflips and landed next to him. Snow splashed Thundurus which snapped him out of his shocked state and pointed to an old run down mansion.

“There it is, lets go” Thundurus said as he began to accelerate with Pinkie following him.

When they finally made it to the ruins, Pinkie and Thundurus both were covered in snow but Thundurus quickly ran over to the back wall and flew up and pulled a lever which opened up a hide out.

“Ooh now that a door handle” said Pinkie in shock and as she began to look around.

Thundurus lit a campfire and asked Celestia for some supplies. While Pinkie was looking around, she found a pendant. When she opened it, there was picture of a Pegasi family.

“Hay Thundurus, is this your family?” Asked Pinkie Pie.

“Yes its my family” sighed Thundurus.

Pinkie put down the pendant

“Hey, what’s the matter?” she asked, concerned for her friend.

“No parent wants to find out that their sons are thieves but mine were disheartened when they found out so much that when we last met them, they trapped us and called the police. We manage to escape but I don't know how they would react now I'm different” Thundurus walked away, head hung low and went to bed.

One week later

Time 02:23

Pinkie and Thundurus were woken up by the sound of the door opening.

“Ah, there you two are!” said Rogue as he slowly walk towards them. Thundurus quickly leaped in front of him growling at him Rouge began to laugh.

“You are gonna fight me~? Come now, your brother couldn't beat me so what chance do you have?”

Thundurus lowered his guard as Rouge smacked him across the room.

“Now if you know what's good for you, stay down!” Rouge turned to Pinkie Pie who began to cower.

“I feel kinda bad for you miss Pie, being paired with weakest member of the colts. In fact look at him, he’s given up without his brother. He's a spineless coward” Pinkie turned. Thundurus who was sat next to the wall.

“Its a pity, you want your parents to forgive but you won't fight to help somepony in need” yelled Pinkie.

She braced herself for the worst as the soul stealer opened the sound of electricity filled the room. Rouge turned around to see Thunder clouds spiral around Thundurus until he was completely covered in sparks. Thundurus burst out of the ball of clouds as he charged at Rogue, his body became covered in lightning and when he collided with Rogue, he gave of a massive explosion of energy. When the smoke and dust cleared, Rouge was still standing he was holding Thundurus by the throat.

“How funny you tried so hard to redeem yourself and you failed but now you are starting to annoy me so be gone” Rouge threw Thundurus into wall as Pinkie tired to leave without being noticed. Rouge grabbed her by mane and removed her element. He threw her to the ground and began to leave.

“I'm not done with you” said Thundurus trying to gain his balance.

He charged, Rouge stepped out of way and grabbed both of Thundurus’ wings and then kicked him the back. The kick was so powerful, it broke both of his wing. Thundurus screamed out in pain as Rouge slammed him to the ground and then stamped on Thundurus until he stop moving, then Rouge left. Pinkie walked over to Thundurus’s body.

“Pinkie i'm sorr-” Thundurus passed out and Pinkie called Celestia for help.

End of Chapter

Chapter 6

Chapter 6

“You two, Celestia has asked us to take you to the City of fire so please board quickly so we may leave” said the Royal guard as he opened the carriage door. Blaze and Applejack boarded and were soon on their way. Applejack looked over to Blaze.

“I know you're not happy but thank you” Blaze looked away.

“Hay Applejack, do you remember what your school said about how the great war was started?” Applejack paused and thought.

“Well they said that there was once a fire lord who thought that the fire manes should rule so they went to war”

“Just what I thought, Celestia changed it” Blaze said unsurprised.

Applejack looked shocked, “What do you mean Celestia changed it?” she asked.

“Well you see, a few years back, I found a fire manes war journal it belonged to General Fire Hart. The king's right hoof man and he put that there was a drought in Equestria and the Princess wanted the fire manes to give up most of their food and supplies but they refused because they barely had enough food for themselves but the Princess was furious so she ordered the Pegasus to make it rain for sixty days which killed all their remaining crops and lead to the almost extinction of my race” Blaze explained as Applejack got more and more confused on which story to believe.

As they landed, Blaze and Applejack looked around the war torn city. The buildings were crumbled or completely destroyed. Blaze walked on, he didn't say a word but Applejack knew he was upset. As the to two continued they noticed a graveyard. Blaze looked as he could see all fire manes dying in front of him.

“Blaze are you alright?” Asked Applejack who was getting more concerned for Blaze.

He didn't reply, he just pulled a out a red flower and placed at the entrance the whispered something  before turning to Applejack..

“Come on Applejack” he said sorrowful.

When they made to the tower and began to climb up the large staircase.

“Are you sure this is a war tower? It has a library and what looked like a child's play area” Applejack continued to climb as Blaze looked at what was left of the city.

“Well this is a problem” Blaze went upstairs to see what Applejack was complaining about.

“What is it?” he asked.

Applejack pointed to the...

“There only one small bed” Applejack stated.

Blaze looked around but he couldn't find another bed.

“Sorry AJ but I can't find anything bed related” Blaze look at Applejack with a bit of disappointment.

“Well that's too bad oh and I already called Celestia” Blaze smiled as he went on to the down stairs.

“A library this could be interesting” Blaze thought to himself as he entered.

As Blaze looked around, he found a large book under a glass dome.

“The law of the fire manes? Lets have a little look”

Blaze began to a look through until he noticed  a particular law.

“If the king/queen dies without an heir then a tournament will held to find the new king/queen and as I'm the last of my kind that makes me king” Blaze muttered to himself and continued reading.

“Huh, if peace is to be held between Equestria and the land of the fire manes then the fire mane prince/princess must marry the princess/prince of Equestria” Blaze paused as he began to chuckle.

“There's no way I'm marrying Celestia. Luna maybe, but no way i'm marrying that Royal mass murderer”

Blaze closed the book and went up stairs.

Later that night

“Howdy Blaze, I brought you some food”

Blaze smiled and continued looking out into the desolate wastelands.

“Why do you keep looking at it if it is making you upset?” asked Applejack.

Blaze sigh “It’s all I have left of my race and its just pile of rubble” Blaze looked at Applejack.

“Applejack do you believe my side of the story or hers?”

Applejack thought hard, “I don't know who to believe Blaze but I know how you feel right now” Blaze looked at her with curiosity.

“You feel alone that nopony understands the pain you felt and for most pony, you're right but I want to help you”

Blaze looked confused, “What do you mean?” he asked.

“I love you” she blurted out and instantly blushed in embarrassment.

Blaze stared at Applejack. He was confused and at the same time glad, “Really?”

“I wanted to tell you on hearts and hooves day but I missed you” Applejack continued.

“Hey after this is over and Rouge is stopped, I know a place not too far from ponyville. How about you and me have a congratulation date” Blaze suggested.

“Yeah sure, a little something to relax” Applejack said with a hint of sadness in her voice.

She knew Blaze didn’t feel the same way as she did.

The next day

Blaze was back on the roof he heard Applejack but didn't turn around.

“I thought I’d find you here” said Applejack as she stood next to him.

“I didn't hear you go to bed”

“I didn’t, I stayed up trying to find the truth but all I found was propaganda and now I'm more confused than ever”

Blaze looked annoyed, his mane was flickering more than usual. Applejack stared at him then whispered something in his ear.

“Are you sure?” Blaze asked.

Applejack nodded and left.

Blaze stared out at the ruins and thought to himself.

“Well that was an unexpected surprise but back to what I was doing. This is too much damage to be done by rain. If there was a fight here then why hide the journal? It doesn't make any sense. Who is right? Who started this war?” blaze yelled out. “WHAT HAPPENED HERE?”

Six days later

Time 02:43

The sound of footsteps echoed through the tower. Blaze and Applejack woke up

as Rouge entered the room.

“Aw young love, how sweet” he said overconfidently.

Blaze's mane flickered.

“Calm yourself Blaze, I'm not here to fight you”

“What do you mean?” Blaze snapped.

“I propose a team up, I know how sad your life is. Having your parents murdered by the stallion you trusted more than anyone told to kill for no reason and then forced to live life like a rat for a year while your co workers didn't. You’ve been treated like dirt and it’s all because of Celestia and together you can watch her die”

Blaze thought for a moment and began to laugh, “You know there is one thing that's keeping me from joining you and that is you said I could watch her die and that's not got going to work because I'm the only one that is going to kill her and that all I have to say to you”

Rouge glared at Blaze. “That’s a pity” Rogue.

He charged at Blaze who dodged out of the way. Blaze launched several fireballs at Rouge who jumped over them and slammed Blaze into the ground, the floor cracking below him. Blaze got up and bucked Rouge away as he charge the floor collapsed beneath them and the two fell. Rouge grabbed Blaze and they spun in the air as they crashed through the floors until they hit the bottom. Blaze shook off the dust and he charged and slammed Rouge into the wall and launched several more fireballs.

“You know, you're becoming a pain” growled Rogue.

Applejack finally made down stairs. Rouge started to build up energy. Blaze quickly grabbed Applejack and braced for Rogue's attack.

“It's time to end this! CHAOS BLAST!” Rouge released a massive explosion which engulf the entire tower. When it stopped, Blaze was out cold and Rouge walked up to Applejack who jumped up, adjusted her hat and braced for Rogue's attack. Rogue swung his foreleg, Applejack jumped back and then charged head first into him. Rogue stumbled back, Applejack span around and bucked him in the face. Rogue flew through the air and then rolled across the ground before colliding into the rubble. Rogue got up like nothing happened.

“What’s the matter? Did that big old attack make you all tired out” Applejack yelled as she charged again. she wailed on Rogue, not giving him a chance to attack but after every strike Applejack got more and more exhausted eventually she started to lose her balance.

“Ah, it seems like you can't take the heat without your boyfriend to lower the temperature. You're on a timer and it's about to run out”

Rogue smacked Applejack to the ground and the soul stealer opened up and Rogue stole her element and left.

“Celestia we need help” said Applejack as she passed out.

End of Chapter

Chapter 7

Chapter 7

Commandos and Twilight were just out of Canterlot and headed into the everfree forest, where they found a small market. Commandos stopped and had a look around.

“Ok Twilight, this place is known as the Dark sider Market but its the fastest route to Kakariko so stay close to me”

Twilight looked nervous. “So why is it called the dark side Market?” she asked.

Commandos began to walk as he explained.

“Its called that because this is where most of strangest ponies are. There’s every type, cannibals, mass murderers, insane freaks, you name it. As for the market part, this where you can get anything here: Pony flesh and organs , illegal and experimental drugs, sex slaves, again you name, it is here”

Twilight began to panic as she stood as close as she could to Commandos. As they walked many strangers approached them.

“Hey there pretty, you look like you’ll sell well” asked a creepy pony as he licked his lips.

Twilight panicked as she could hear mares screams coming from his hut

“Back off” ordered Commandos.

The merchant grinned, “Or what eh tough guy?”

“Or I'll make sure you never do it again” glared Commandos as he used his magic to raise a knife.

“Fine have your way but if she not up to your standards then you know where to come” he said as went back into his shop.

Commandos walked on with Twilight right next to him. As they continued through the market, another merchant approached.

“Howdy there strangers how you doing?” he asked.

“W-we’re kinda in rush” Twilight stuttered.

“Ah I see but this won't take long but anyway as a unicorn, do you ever have the urge to fly? Well now you can. You see I can give you pegasus wings and you know the best part, you can have them in any color” he said in a business tone.

Twilight began to get really nervous, “No no no we're fine really”

The merchant wrapped his leg around Twilight and pointed, “Come one mama, it's safe and just for you, I give 50% off”

Twilight looked into the shop there were blood soaked knives and large metal tables covered in blood and what appeared to be vomit. The walls were covered pony body parts. Twilight was shaking and her breathing was fast. Commandos could tell that she was getting upset.

Commandos spoke out, “Thank you sir but we really have to go but next time we come back I might consider it”

Commandos grabbed Twilight and left the shop.

As they walked through the market Twilight got more and more worried until she finally cracked.

“I can't take it any more” Twilight ran as fast as she could.

“Twilight wait!” Commandos stamped the ground and he was about to give chase but he was stopped by a mysterious mare.

“Well it looks like you did break her in enough” she said as she started to get something from her bag.

“Excuse me!” Commandos replied as he turned to her. The Mare pulled a syringe which was full of a purple liquid.

“Here you go, on the house. This little brew will get her craving your manhood”

“Wait you don't understand... arg fine i'll take but i have to go”

Commandos snached the syringe and dashed off.

Commandos searched for ages but when made it to the exit there was no sign of her

“You're looking for the purple unicorn aren't you?” said a croaky voice from the shadows. Commandos nodded.

“She left not so long ago the poor thing, it was her first time here wasn't it” she continued. Commandos nodded again then thanked the lady and left. As he continued down the path he started to hear crying as he looked around he saw Twilight under a tree. She was crying heavily Commandos approached and Twilight sprung up and grabbed Commandos.

She continued to cry, “It it was horrible. There was ponies queuing for pony meat and and” Twilight was crying too hard.

“Twilight it's over now. You never have to go there again I promise you” Commandos continued to comfort her.

At Kakariko village

“Ok we're here” said Commandos.

Twilight didn't reply. She was still shaken up about the market. Commandos opened one an old run down house and lifted some of the floorboards to reveal the hideout.

As the the two walk through the tunnel Commandos lit a lantern and looked at Twilight. He wanted to say something but he didn't know if was the right time to.

“Mind the step” said Commandos as he hopped down.

“This is it and if you're wondering, the bedrooms and bathroom are on the right” he said as he pointed to the rooms. He looked at Twilight who just nodded.

“Twilight pass me the earring, I'll make the call you get comfortable”

Twilight passed the earring and left

“Celestia we made it, you can send supplies and I need a favour. I took Twilight to the Dark side market and well it was too much for her so as your teacher, do you have anything to help her”

As the suppliers appeared there was what you expect, food, water but there was something else. A small blanket with stars on it. Commandos went to Twilight’s room. She lying there trying to sleep. Commandos placed the blanket at the end of the bed and left. As he lied down he started to hear crying.

“Poor kid, I should've guessed, I’ve seen the same reaction too many times, we should of gone around” Commandos closed his eyes and went to bed.

2 days later

Twilight was wandering around the hideout. As she was entering the “junk room”, she kicked Commandos’ saddle bag and out came a lot of pictures, a hat and a vial of some sort of liquid.

“Hay what this” Twilight asked as she picked up some of stuff with her magic.

Most of the pictures were a group photo of the Catastrophic Colts but some was of a brown mare in different parts of the world but the strangest part of all was that Commandos was smiling. He just normally smirked for a couple of seconds. Twilight put down the photos and the hat and focused on the vial. After pondering for a while, Twilight decided to ask Commandos.

“Um Commandos, sorry to disturb you but what in this?” Twilight asked.

Commandos put down what appeared to be a photo album and turned to Twilight.

“That well, when you ran away, some mare gave it to me it's well a sex drug basically it make you desperate” he explained.

Twilight giggled, “Riiiiiight well I hope you don't mind but I'm going to get rid of this”

Twilight left then a smash could be heard from across the room.

“There now if you don't mind, I’ll be going back to my studies now” Twilight said as she went back to her room.

5 days later Time 03:13

Commandos looked at the entrance as he heard footsteps getting closer.

“Well we meet again Rouge” Commandos said as Rouge emerged from the shadows.

“Yes Commandos and now prepare to die” he said as charged at Commandos.

As Rouge swung, Commandos ducked and blasted him with his magic and then followed up with small combo before slamming Rouge though the roof. As Commandos turned around Rouge was standing right there.

“How the?” Commandos asked in shock.

Rouge laughed, “I have absorbed five elements. I am unstoppable now”

As Commandos fired a magic blast, Rouge jumped over and pinned Commandos to the ground and started beating him. Blood dripped from Commandos’ mouth. As Rouge raised his hoof for what seemed like the final the blow, a magic blast blasted him into the wall.

“Commandos are you still able to fight?” asked Twilight as she walked out of her bedroom. Commandos wiped the blood of face and nodded.

“There's only one way to beat him but you have to give everything you got” said Twilight. Commandos nodded and he began to charge his power.

As Rouge walked out of the hole, he looked slightly surprised as he saw Twilight and Commandos charging their final attack.

“Ready twi?” asked Commandos.

“Ready” Twilight replied as they fired a massive beam of magic.

Rogue let a scream as he was engulfed by the beam and as the smoke cleared he was crushed under a pile of rubble. As Commandos and Twilight panted they looked at each over and smiled but it was short lived as they heard the sound of Rocks moving. As Commandos turned to face Rouge all he saw was his hoof smacking him across the room and rendering him unconscious.  Rouge dashed over to Twilight and then pinned her to the wall. Twilight gave out one last scream as her element was ripped out and absorbed and as Rouge was about to leave he ripped the earring from Commandos’ ear.

“Hello Celestia, just thought I should say that I have all the elements and now your next” Rouge laughed as he shattered the earring and left.

End of chapter