The Day I Met Her
chapter 1 (rewritten)
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"Okay, Twilight we're here." Pinkie said. "Oh, what’s this?"
"I don't know Pinkie but let’s be careful." I said.
"Okay Twilight." Pinkie said. "Twilight, it's opening!"
"How can you tell?" I asked Pinkie.
"The Smoke Silly" said Pinkie
P.O.V change
"Time to head out." I said
I opened the hatch and went out and to my surprise I find two strange alien beings.
"Hi there I'm Twilight Sparkle nice to meet you." Twilight said "And this is my friend, Pinkie Pie."
"Hi, what's your name since we just introduced ourselves?" Pinkie Pie asked.
"Yes, hello, I'm Gold Aran I'm an intergalactic bounty hunter and son of retired intergalactic bounty hunter Samus Aran. Both of us, I might add, used to work for the Galactic Federation." I said calmly, hiding how I was very nervous and freaked out I was.
"It’s nice to meet you, Mr. Aran." Twilight said, and at that moment I realized they're friendly.
"It's nice to meet both of you as well." I sighed with relief and while deactivating my power suit. "And just call me Gold." I said.
"Okay, Gold." Both said at once.
"Have to go, bye you two!" Pinkie said before zooming off.
"Um… what was that?" I asked Twilight.
"Best not to ask, it’s just Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie." Twilight said. "How about I give you a tour?"
"Sure, let’s go." I said and we walked away.
End of chapter 1!
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