evil

by Shadow Lance

Rating: everyone
Tags: Human
Length: 346

this is a story i made you can tell me if its good or not

this is a story i made you can tell me if its good or not and if you want more. need revewers

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-06 12:59:52 UTC

prologe

EVIL

PROLOGUE

MY NAME IS JEFF BROWN I CAME TO MY BEACH HOUSE 10 YEARS AGO IT SAYS IT IS GOING TO LET ME LEAVE BUT I KNOW IT’S A LIE. IT’S DONE THIS A FEW THOUSAND TIMES…

I CAN’T REMEMBER WHAT I DID. I DON’T KNOW HOW I GOT HERE OR MY NAME. ALL I KNOW IS THAT SOMETHING WRONG HAPPENED WHILE I WAS AT MY PRIVATE ISLAND BEACH HOUSE AND SOMETHING GOT ME, AND IT WON’T LET ME LEAVE…

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BEEP BEEP BEEP (ALARM 7:30) WHAT HAPPENED?  WELL IT’S TIME TO GET DRESSED SO I CAN TAKE THE BOAT BACK. JEFF LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM AND FINDS THAT THERE ARE THERE ARE TWO DOORS AND A WINDOW, THE DOOR TO THE PATIO IS LOOKED. JEFF LOOKS BEHIND HIM AND GOES TO THE OTHER DOOR AND IT’S ALSO LOCKED, HE TAKES A STEP BACK AND HE NOTICES A THIRD DOOR. HE OPENS IT AND HE LOOKS INSIDE AND SEES A PITCH BLACK HALLWAY AND AT THE END IS A CHALK DOOR THAT IS FAINTLY GLOWING.

WHAT’S GOING ON, HELLO??? ANYONE THERE, THERE IS NO REPLY. JEFF CHECKS THE WINDOW AND IT IS BOLTED DOWN. HE THINKS TO HIMSELF FOR A MINUTE.? (WHAT HAPPENED ALL I CAN REMEMBER IS THAT I CAME IN THE HOUSE AND EVERYTHING AFTER THAT IS BLURRY). HE GOES BACK TO THE DOOR AND WALKS IN SIDE, HE FEELS AROUND AND CAN’T FIND A SWITCH OR A WALL (IT SEEMS AS THOUGH THAT THE ROOM GOES ON FOREVER). I HEAD FOR THE DOOR EVEN THOUGHT THAT ITS FAKE AND TOUCH THE NOBE… BEEP BEEP BEEP (ALARM 7:30) WHAT THE**** JUST HAPPENED. I HEAD DOWN THE HALLWAY A GENE TOUCH THE DOOR NOBE AND LOOK BEHIND ME AND A MONSTER WHICH ONLY APPEARS TO HAVE A HEAD GLOWING WHITE FACE WITH RED EYES AND BLOOD SPLASHED ON ITS FACE IT LOOKED RESENT. … BEEP BEEP BEEP (ALARM 7:30) WHHHHHAAATTT?!?(PUTS ON CLOTHES.) WHAT WHY DOES IT LOOK LIKE I AM IN A 1980’S MOVIE FILM. GOES TO DOOR AND OPENS