An ole ponies tale

by Genocide 4 Kids

Rating: teen
Tags: Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Main 6, Romance, Original Character, Spike, Adventure
Length: 3022

New story i made i hope the grammar is better on this story

The once heavenly land of Equestria was a beautiful place, until the dragon race doomed the poor land. Now the dragons rule the land, however the six main ponies along with some new friends they meet try to take back the land of Equestria.

Published 2012-03-26 09:44:01 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-26 09:44:01 UTC

the surprise visitor

the surprise visitor

   The land of Equestria, it was once a beautiful place where harmony and friendship showered the land. However those peaceful times in the heavenly land ended, now Equestria has been taken over by dragons. These fire breathing creatures attacked the heavenly land by surprise causing the land, along with some ponies to die in the disastrous fire. Now the surviving ponies along with some zebras are now prisoners with hardly anything to eat, some are dying from hunger, however the dragons that see deceased pony bodies, they just burn them into a pile of ashes. Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Flutter Shy are all in the same cell, now they all sit there yearning their escape.

“C’mon you filthy ponies, it’s time for lunch. I don’t see why we even feed you four legged rejects, we should let you all just starve until you decide to eat one another.”

The six ponies, (they are all covered in dirt, also the two unicorns had their horn chopped off by the dragons so they won’t be able to use their magic to escape) where behind the red and purple dragon whispering to each other,

“That ruffian, he wouldn’t be so tough if he hadn’t cut of our horn.”

“Shrrrrrrr, do you want him to hear us Rarity, say those type of things later.”

“Ah Twi, she just mad because of those darn dragons, all dragons need to be banished to a faraway place.”

“SHUT UP! Not all dragons, my Spikey wikey aren’t one of those…dragons!”

“Quiet pony or I’ll throw you in the lava pit and make your friends watch as you burn your life away.”

“Yes Zentrax I’ll obey forgive me” said Rarity as they arrived to the abandoned cafeteria (which is now used for ponies to eat grass that has been drenched in mud, also the water is brown like there is mud inside it as well.) In this ruined cafeteria, there were ponies from pony vile along with Zecora who has now become isolated. The ruins of this place had all the ponies in a mood of depression as they were eating their unhealthy food.

“Okay ponies, eat your food then it’s outside for some labor. Remember if you get hurt we’ll kill you, HAHAHAHA” the infamous prison guard “Zentrax” push open a door (the door had an emblem that was shaped like a dragon blowing a big amount of fire.) When the doors opens, a big light showing the outside world will appear, however there not much to see considering the dragons destroyed the beautiful pony vile, the dragon then left while the door was slowly closing behind him, leaving the room deem without the light from the sun’s rays.

“He’s gone, now how are we going to get out of here? It seems like we been here forever.”

“Dashie it hasn’t been that long it’s only been one month.”

“Will you two stop! We got to analyze our abscond, now what is our options?” asked Twilight while laying down and countlessly stroking her chin creating an idea in her head.

“We can wait until night time and just walk out.”

“Pinkie it’s not that easy sugar cube, I say we should just dig a hole thingy on the ground and quietly sneak out.”

“Forget that I say we just attack them head- on if we team up there’s no way they can stop us” yelled out Rainbow Dash while she was hopping on two hooves and hitting the air imagining she was hitting a dragon.

“Now that’s just barbaric Rainbow Dash.”

“Oh yeah!  Then what do you think we should do then Miss Rarity?”

“I think we should just wait until the time is right then we should just leave, I’m pretty sure Spike will save us” Rarity looked like she was blushing while she was gently putting two hooves together from embarrassment.

“C’mon Rarity, you know Spike is…gone.” (After the surprise attack Spike, who was badly injured from protecting Rarity has gone missing after she been captured)

“SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP! You wasn’t there Rainbow Dash, don’t you ever say that about Spike again! Rarity was looking quite furious, her cheeks were bright red, also her eyes were running with tears.

“Oh my gosh I’m…I’m sorry Ahh, I didn’t know” Rarity whipped her tears and walked towards the corner of the cafeteria where it was isolated and dark. Twilight also whips her eyes due to the tears that were rushing out of her eyes.

“Um…Twilight I think I have an idea” mumbled Flutter Shy while looking down towards the ground due every pony staring at her,

“What, you have a plan what is it?”

“Well Uh, maybe when we go outside for work, I can tell Angle bunny to find Spike maybe he’s not… well you know.”

“Flutter Shy, I think that’s nice and all but how will he fin-”

“Hold on Rainbow Dash, I think she’s on to something” Twilight turned her head towards her tail biting a strain of hair.

“Twilight, what are you doing? This is no time for playing with yourself.”

“No Pinkie, I have an idea thanks to Flutter Shy. Okay this is what where going to do, I’m going to give this strain of hair to Flutter shy so she can give it to Angle bunny. However she not going to go look for Spike, he going to go look for Winona Applejack’s dog, from there Winona is going to smell the hair and go to my house and find a jewel I was going to give Spike. After that Winona is going to smell the jewel giving her the scent of Spike so she can find him and hopefully be fine.”

“Okay sounds good and all but how is Spike going to find us?”

“My Spike will find us, our bond is greater than the heavens them self’s.” Said Rarity as she was walking out of the shadows from the corner,

“Okay, sounds good then we have a plan” all six ponies formed a circle putting in a single hooves, each hooves touching one another,

“Okay this is for Spike, if he is out there he’ll come back and save us” every pony smiled while Twilight gave her speech about Spike, then soon after she finished talking all their hooves lifted towards the air while they all said, “ for Spike”  yelling those words loud to the point where every pony was looking at them.  The six ponies giggled lightly until a loud sound from the door opening appeared.

“Okay lunch time is over! It’s time for you ponies to start working so follow me.”

“Okay, here is our chance, let’s hope this works,” Twilight said to herself while she was walking towards the bright outside world. Once she was outside there were all different ponies digging, and clasping heavy rocks. Twilight took note on how sometimes the guard wouldn’t be around for a minute or two. Flutter Shy nodded at Twilight, giving her a signal to start their plan.

“Okay ponies grab some rocks and take them over to the east side of the field, when you’re done with that, you ponies will dig a six foot ditch if its more than six foot will bury you alive, got that ponies!” the six ponies all bowed responding to the guard, “Yes” then putting their attention on the rocks sighing. Rarity then lifted her noise forcing the rock she was lifting to rise, while she was lifting the heavy boulder onto her back, Pinkie Pie who was smiling at Rarity, helping her lift the giant bolder,

“Thank you ever so much Pinkie, I was having a bit of trouble lifting this.”

“It’s no problem, Rarity I love helping a friend especially if their having troubles.”

“Okay you two not to sound rude, but we need to find Angle bunny.”

“Oh no, Twilight, Angle bunny always comes here at this hour to see me.”

“He does? Well that sure does make things a lot simpler, Okay Flutter Shy here is my hair, give it to Angle bunny and tell him excited detail about the plan okay.”  Twilight who is next to Flutter Shy’s mouth, letting go on the strain of hair she had in her mouth to give to Flutter Shy. Twilight blushes and quickly looks away, however looks back with intensity,

“Please do be careful…Okay.”  Flutter shy cheeks began blushing, while giving Twilight a gentle smile,

“I’ll do my best, I won’t get caught I promise.”   Twilight gave a smile of relief; she then went towards the pile of rocks to aid her friends. Flutter Shy, and Twilight helped Pinkie Pie lift her bolder, when all six ponies had their heavy boulders, sustaining the pain they endured on their backs. They then began walking a dirt road, guiding them to the east side of the fields. The six ponies were getting fearer away from the guard and the others ponies, thus giving them the perfect time to begin their plans.

“Okay, Flutter Shy, drop your bolder here and go to the usual location you and Angel bunny meetup.”

“Okay, Twilight, I won’t take that long but do please be careful okay.”

“Flutter Shy, we should be telling you to be careful…just try and be safe okay.” Twilight Looked at Flutter Shy, her heart was pounding due to the fact Flutter Shy might get hurt by some dragons. The yellow Pegasus nodded and ran towards the ruins of the forest.

“Please, do come back…please,” said Twilight, looking worried while she seeing Flutter Shy running getting further away, Applejack put a single hooves over Twilight’s shoulder attempting to try and comfort her. The purple pony cheeks rose, she then looked at Applejack and continued to walk the narrow pathway, leading them to an unfinished statue, on what seems to be the god of dragons and ponies.

“Eww, I hate him! He’s the reason why our land become this…this tragedy!”

“I know, Rarity he even… turned Celestia into, stone”

“His going to pay big for what he’s did,” said Applejack while she dropped her bolder on the ground in front of the statue, Rainbow

Dash looked at the unfinished statue in annoyance then stating,

“He doesn’t even look that tough; he just came here uninspected that’s why he beat us!” Rainbow Dash stomped her hooves to the ground while looking down worrying, “maybe… we just wasn’t strong enough, that’s why we’re here and Spike is, well I don’t know, I just want things to go back to normal that’s all.”

All the five ponies looked at Rainbow Dash feeling depressed, until Flutter Shy came dashing towards their direction.

“Hey look its Flutter Shy, she’s back.” All the five ponies looked towards the ruined forest and noticed a yellow Pegasus rushing towards them.

“Oh my gosh, it is Flutter Shy, she’s back quick early.” Twilight looked extremely happy to see the yellow Pegasus, she then whispered to herself,

“I’m glad you’re safe, Flutter shy”, the yellow Pegasus finally stop running, and she was in front of her friends,

“Flutter Shy, how did it go is everything at go?” asked Pinkie Pie anxiously waiting for the answer,

I, (pant) told Angle bunny about it, he going to your house right now Applejack, so everything is at go” said Flutter shy, while she was still trying to catch her breath. Then the ponies shouted out an, “Yay” in excitement.

“Okay, now we sit and wait, this is our only hope Spike is okay I can just feel him” said Rarity while gazing at the sky that was looking red, due to the sun sinking down for the night. The ponies did their labor taking them quite some time to finish. However once they finished a guard came to escort them back to their cells for rest.

It’s now morning, and every pony eyes were red and also they had bags under their eye due to lack of sleep all the ponies get. When it’s morning time in dragon fire, (use to be pony vile), all the dragon guard escort the ponies for their breakfast. After the poorly made food that dragons find on the floor filled with other animal’s urine, the dragons then forcefully make the ponies do facial labor, such as maneuvering heavy boulders for the statues, making the statues, and making new church buildings for parsing the dragon god, “Magma Rock”. Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity all work on the statue building, while Pinkie Pie, Applejack, and Flutter Shy, all work on the churches being built in the image shown on the blueprints giving to them.

“Gosh Applejack, the guards would of totally killed us if I held on that blue paper.”

“Aw shucks Pinkie, it was all yall’s hard work that got this church here built.”

“Yeah, but you told us what thing goes where, you did a better job me that’s for sure.”

“No Pinkie Pie, we all worked hard on this church.” Said Flutter Shy while the other two ponies including herself was staring at the blueprints, then looking up seeing the perfect job they done. They all smiled while hitting each other on the hooves for a job well done. Meanwhile at the fields where Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity, were making statues things where I little different.

“AH! I don’t even… why do we have to do this again?”

“Cause Rainbow Dash, if we don’t the guards will kill us if we don’t.”

“Oh…yeah, good point well at least this statue looks like that bucking Magma Rock.”

“Yes I have to admit, we did do a good job, despite the countless bickering.”

“Well now that’s done, it’s on to the next one.”  They all sigh as the three were walking with their heads down due to all the statues that had to be done. Hours went by and now they sky looks red like it was covered in blood, however that just means it’s the afternoon and it was time for lunch. A loud siren sounds off, telling the ponies that the time was now lunch time. They all looked tired from all the hard work they done so far, However the ponies did not look too enthusiastic about lunch since it’s just dirty not cared for food, but they couldn’t complain or they would die by the guards.

“Hi Twilight I’m guessing there is no sign of Spike?”

“Oh, Hi Applejack, and…no there is no sign of him. Angle bunny hasn’t even come back yet so I don’t know at the moment.”

“Don’t worry there’s always tomorrow, so don’t give up just yet you got to smile!”

“Yeah, but sometimes smiling is just too hard, especially…if your hearts breaking.” Said Rarity while looking down as a tear falls down her eyes, the six ponies eat their food and returned back to work. Several more hours later when the air was getting colder and the sky was turning black showing the stars appeared, all the ponies then returned to their cells to go get some rest and return to the same routine the next day. All ponies where sleep, the sky was still black even the guards were asleep until a loud explosion sound woken up the ponies including the guards. A thick cloud of smoke was filling up the prison, all the guards rushed towards the three mysterious shades that were shown in the smoke but barely.

“Holt, in the name of Magma Rock,”

“You three are all under arrest come out now.” The three mysterious figures in the smoke did not respond, however one did inhale in deeply then blowing a magical green flame. This flame made the guards take immediate reaction causing the three dragons to blow a large amount of fire colliding with the magic flame. Unfortunately the magic flame was too strong for the three dragons to handle the flame then hit all three dragons causing the dragons to get severely burned. The three then rushed towards the office of the prison to find a button labeled, “prisoner releasing cell door”  suddenly, all the cells the ponies where trapped in was suddenly  released without warning. The ponies then rushed out the cells, however couldn’t really see since the smoke was still around. The guards then woken up dizzy then blindly rushing towards a direction they think the three mysterious figures went, the smoke finally cleared up giving all the ponies vision.

“Oh finally, I found you all” the six ponies turned around and noticed that Spike was behind them along with Angle bunny, and Winona. Every pony started crying tears of joy except Rarity, who rushed to Spike while hitting him gently on his head while hugging him with tears running down her eyes,

“Don’t you ever disappear from me again Spike,” Spike smiled and rubbed on Rarity’s back gently and saying with a soft voice,

“I’m sorry Rarity… I won’t leave your side every again.”  Twilight then looked at Spike walking towards him looking a little serious then asking,

“I’m glad your back Spike, but how are we going to get out of here alive… the guards are still alive right”

“Yeah Twilight there still alive, my flame only knocked them out, but I learned this new move that I’m going to try on them if we do bump into them, but for now we run follow me I’ll take you to this pony who held my injuries  after that fight I had while trying to protect Rarity.” The six ponies all nodded to Spike then flowing him trying to escape the prison. The six ponies sow the whole in the door Spike made while trying to break in they were almost home free until the three guards rushed in front of the door blocking the doorway,

“You trader! Why are you helping these…these things?”

“These things are my friends and I will not let you talk to them like that.” Spike, Angle bunny, Winona, and the six ponies began to rush at the three guards ready for a fight.