I'm just Saiyan

by Deathstar47

The 'great' intro (edited)

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It's a cold day tonight in the everfree, as I trot through it. I can feel the cold winter wind dance across my striped fur, while making my way to the area I heard the sound in. I'm not sure what the sound was, I've been living in this forest for a few months now and yet, nothing like this has ever happened. I was about to go to sleep when a sudden crashing sound happened. For all I knew a Ursa could have fell over, but it could have also been a Pegasus, Celstia knows Pegasus crash a lot.

I continued on my way, passing the various plants and insects, as I usually do when going through the forest when I hear it. Crying. As quickly as I can, I make my way to the source of the noise, only to find an odd site. Now when I say odd, well...

A monkey, a furless, crying monkey is sitting in the middle of the forest crying his heart out, with that appendage I'm pretty sure he's male. I should just turn and leave, his mother will probably come soon. But...

"Hello" I say while walking towards him. This seems to stop his crying and makes him look at me. Now that he's doing so I can see him a bit more of clearly, that being his strange hair (goku's hair) and onyx eyes. He's kind of adorable, I wonder if he can understand me?

"What are you doing here all alone, where's your mother?"

This seems to only make him cry. Perhaps something happened to his mother?

"No, no, no, don't cry" I whisper to him while picking him up "if you want, I could be your mother, I've always wanted a child of my own." This seems to calm him down, as well as make him play with my mane.

"Ha, I see that you like my mane." This causes the child to giggle." Well, this could of gone a lot wor-"

*growl*

"Oh no" I whisper to my self, as a pack of timber wolves come out of the bushes. I just had to say that didn't I ? It's then that I realize that the young monkey has gotten of me and is now staring at the moon.

*growl*

Another growl...but that wasn't from the timber wolves. Turning my head I realize that it was the child, and was his eyes always red? The child then starts growing, gaining more fur and growing a snout. Soon he's above the tree line and is a gigantic monkey yelling into the night sky.

One of the timber wolves goes and bites the monkeys leg, only to be crushed by the monkeys foot. This seems to frighten the other timber wolves making them flee. But to my surprise the monkey shoots some kind of energy at them, completely obliterating them, though a few escape. The former small monkey then looks at me and reaches out to grab me. I run or try to, before he picks me up. I'm lifted up to his face. He stares at me. I stare at him, my heart pounding as I stare into his red eyes.

'This is it, he's going to eat me.' I think as he reaches out one of his hands...and strokes my mane. Wait, what?

"Mommy!" He near enough shouts.

"Y-yes mommy" I say. The monkey then lays down and cuddles against me, luckily not crushing me. Right now I'm terrified, but as long as he thinks I'm his mum he won't hurt me, right?

After a while he falls asleep. I try to escape but I begin to feel tired

'Surely I can sleep here, who's going to mess with a giant monkey' I think before drifting off.

Morning

I wake up. The events of last night clear in my mind.

"But where's-"

*snore*

I look to my side to find the smaller version of the monkey laying next to me.

'Funny, it doesn't even look like he would hurt a fly. But what caused- the moon it must of, I mean, he looks straight at the full moon and turns into a giant great ape like creature, like from the stories I've heard when I was young. If the stories are true then removing the tail should stop him from turning into 'the great ape''.

I pick the young boy up and place him onto my back and make my way to my hut. On my way I notice most creatures are quiet, too quiet.

'Maybe it has something to do with his whole 'scaring a pack of timber wolves off' show last night?'I think to myself. It makes sense or as much sense that can be made from this.

What ever it was, I still make my way into my hut, and place the sleeping boy on the table. I get some various potions and get him to drink the potions, these specific potions should act as a pain killer so when he wakes up it won't hurt much and will only last a second. I then tear his tail off.

The young boy wakes up at is quietly staring forward.

"Huh I expected him t-"

Canterlot

"-s why we-"

"Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh"

'Thank the maker'

"I must leave my planet needs-i mean, I must investigate that noise." I say

"Yes Princess Celestia"

The Zebra Hut

"..." I stare at the young, and loud, child.

'Could of gone better, but what ya gonna do' i think, before stroking his mane, or hair I believe its called. The young boy seems to like this and nuzzles my hoof. He seems so innocent, so...alone. Maybe I can adopt him at least until I can find his real mother.

"I think I need to call you something, how about Orion?" The-Orion seems to like this and nuzzles me even more. Why Orion? Well he was found at night and Orion was the first thing that came to my mind.

"Well, hello Orion I'm your mother, Zecora.

"Zeora!" He says in a cut baby like voice.

"Close, Z-core-a." I repeated to him. It's hard to believe he can scare of timber wolves.

"Z-core-a" he repeats. I then point my hoof at him.

"Orion"

He then points to himself using one of his...fingers? Yes fingers.

"Orion" he says, getting it right the first time.

I then pick some food and give it to him. He then eats and eats and eats...

'I need to buy some more food'.

*burp*

*snore*

"Well you know what they say, they eat, they sleep an- I should probably get some pants for him".

*sniff*

"Yeah, gonna need that towel".

After clearing that up I think about that energy he shot out. Can he still do it in this form? If he can then that could be dangerous without control.

"Maybe I'll teach you some martial arts to help you learn control. And if you are what I think you are, then maybe I can see if the legends are true, and just what you can do.

Canterlot

I stare out of my window, thinking about that shout I heard.

'It sounded like the one I heard last night only more...childish? Yes, childish. Whatever that shout was I know it was from something strong, I could feel the power it held, its definitely stronger the an the normal pony, definitely. I just hope nothing bad happens. I should keep an eye on the everfree just to be sure.

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