Paying the Rent

by KynkyPie

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance, Pinkie Pie, Sex, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Human, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy
Length: 3896

Pinkie finally makes her move, but is Louis ready for a relationship yet?

Living with a human has been a strange wonderful experience, and Pinkie is finding herself increasingly attracted to her roommate. Now she wants something more than friendship and will fight for it, at all costs.

This is an outtake, from Drax99's "Room for Rent", and is not part of the main story. Thanks to Drax for letting me write this, and editing it for me!

Published 2014-03-09 21:30:13 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-09 21:30:13 UTC

"I smelled Frosting!"

I stretched out in bed, slowly coming awake. The first thing I noticed was that I was not in my own bed, the second was that I was not alone. I rolled over to see the dark shape of Louis asleep in the bed next to me, and tried to remember how I had gotten here. The last thing I remembered was feeling all warm and twitchy as my heat made my head go all loopy. All I wanted was to make the emptiness go away and cool the fire that was burning me from my bottom to my brain. And Louis. So strong, so warm, so nice to me. And so overwhelmingly male. Breathing deep, I inhaled his scent, and felt the fire rekindle in my belly.

Leaning forward, I stuck my nose in his short mane and filled my lungs with his smell. Warm, spicy, and musky all at once. I felt him stir, and pulled back, but my sudden movement must have woken him, and he quickly scrambled out of the bed away from me.

“Oh, Pinkie. You are awake now? I was worried about you after yesterday. Are you alright?” Nervously he backed away from me, looking as if I was going to attack him. Well, I guess I kinda did, but I couldn't help it, he was just so sexy, and I wanted him so badly.

“Yeah, I’m okay now. Most of the heat is passed, and I feel a bit more in control.” I smiled shyly at him, still feeling the fire simmering, but under control now, letting me think.

He seemed to relax as the tension flowed out of him. He was still looking very sexy in his boxers, his bare chest showing the corded muscle beneath his coffee colored skin. Skin that shimmered faintly from sweat in the early morning light that filtered through the curtains.

“That’s good, you had me worried. You were acting all kinda crazy, and I didn't want you to hurt yourself.” He still shuffled, as if unsure how to approach the subject.

“It’s okay Louis, it’s a normal thing for us ponies, although I am usually better prepared for it. I’m glad you were such a good friend and took care of me.” It was my turn to look nervous, as I was still fighting back the urges to tackle him.

“It’s all good, Pinks. I’ve had girlfriends that got too drunk and lost control, and I’d never take advantage of a friend when they weren’t thinking straight.” Moving closer, he sat beside me, and pulled me into a hug, which I melted into. It was so hard to keep my thoughts straight as he held me close.

“Um, Louis?” I nervously started, biting my lip.

“Yea Pinkie?”

“What if I was thinking clearly. What if I really did wanna.. you know.” I felt the tears threatening to fall as his silence stretched on.

Finally he answered. “I really don't know, Pinkie. I really like you, but I’m not sure I could do that with you. At least not yet.”

“What would it take? Name it! Anything at all.” I pleaded with him, feeling my tail twitch in anticipation.

“No Pinkie, I couldn't do that to you. I respect you as a friend too much. Let’s just keep it at that.” He started to pull away.

I took a chance, quickly reaching up and taking his head in my hooves and kissing him. He started to pull away at first, but soon relaxed into it as I used my tongue to tease his mouth open. His human mouth wasn't too much different from a pony’s, and I felt him melt against me.

Too soon, he pulled away, looking scared. “No Pinkie, this isn’t right. I... I want to, but not like this.” He started to get up and move away.

“No! Don't go. I need this. We need this Louis. You are my bestest friend, and I want you to be my special somepony. I.. I love you Louis.”

Again he stepped away looking scared, and I knew I had pushed too far. It was happening again, and I was going to lose him. I was going to lose a friend.

“NO!” I felt myself yelling. It was like I was being pushed to the back of my own mind, as the world narrowed to a tunnel with only Louis at the end of it, and I felt my heat flaring up again like bottle of super spicy hot sauce. I felt like I had rolled it it, and drank an entire bottle all at once. And I remembered something that my friend Fluttershy had once told me. ‘If you really love something, you need to be willing to fight for it, no matter what the cost.’

But in that moment, Louis had fled. I looked up to see him gone, and knew I had to go after him. I smiled my biggest smile, and brushed my straight hair behind an ear. Bouncing to my hooves, I stuck my nose in the air and inhaled the sweet musky scent of my man, and turned to face the way he had gone.

“Louis! Wait up my love! I know you are only nervous, but this is normal for young love.” I bounced along through the house, my hoofsies like four springs as I skipped after the delectable scent of my sweet Louis.

“Louis, my sweet, I am coming to you! You cannot hide from the sweet embrace of our love!” I rounded the corner into the kitchen, only to see him slipping out the back door, slamming it behind him with a bang.

I bounced along, taking only a moment to buck the door open and following outside. I saw him dashing away across the yard, but like Rainbow Dash, he could not outrun my love for him, and I skipped along effortlessly on the wings made of passion.

“Pinkie! Snap out of it, dammit! You aren’t thinking straight!” He yelled back as he pelted out of the yard and down the street.

“Nonsense! I am thinking clearly for the first time, and I can finally see the purity of our love and how much we care for each other!” Smoothly I glided and soon caught up to him as he rounded a corner. Dashing across the street, he paused as a car screeched towards him. With a mighty leap, I lifted him in my hooves and delivered him safe from harm across the street.

Looking into his eyes, I saw the love for me there, and leaned forward to kiss him deeply, but his fear of the unknown still struggled with his love, and he managed to wiggle free of my embrace. With a sigh, I pulled myself upright and continued my chase, now back towards the house.

It was only a blink of my eye and I was once again at the house, the door shut between me and my love. However he had forgotten my earlier escape, and a quick bounce brought me up to my open window and inside the house.

It was back at the beginning I found him, looking frightened on the bed in which we had awoke, until he saw my smiling face and finally gave in to the inevitable. Looking down he finally opened his arms to me, and with a squeal, I leapt into his embrace.

Clop Starts Here<

As he ran his hands over my coat, I felt the electric tinglies spread over my body. My tail began to twitch, but not the Pinkie Sense kinda twitch. This was the sexy time twitcha-twitch, and the fire in my Pinkie bits began to spread to the rest of me. Leaning forward I kissed Louis deeply, this time with no resistance, and I slid my own hooves over his back and up into his curly mane. So much like my own, and yet entirely different.

Soon, our lips parted, and I could feel the saliva stretch out coldly between us, only to break against my chin. He smiled at me, and I saw the depth of the love in his beautiful brown eyes.

“You are so soft. It feels like I am petting a warm cloud.” He breathlessly whispered to me.

I giggled at this, knowing he had felt my coat before, but never so intimately. “What did you expect, silly? I’m not just some silly old plush toy, and I spend a lot of bits on mane conditioner.”

“It’s just... I dunno. I expected it to feel like an earth pony, all coarse and bristly. You are so warm and soft, it’s amazing!” He leaned in and buried his face in my mane.

I took the chance to run my hooves down his back and give his tushie a nice squeeze. “You feel pretty nice yourself, Louie.” I caught myself, “Oops, sorry, Louis.”

Pulling back he looked deeply into my eyes as I nervously bit my lip, expecting him to be upset. Instead he smiled warmly and planted a quick kiss on my nose. “Pinkie, only for you, you can call me Louie if you really want.”

Tears in my eyes, I leaned forward for another quick kiss, before pulling back. “Thanks Louie!” I could feel the warm trickle as the tears ran down my muzzle.

“So, now what?” He once again became nervous, still holding me in his strong arms.

I felt my face grow warm as my smile spread across it. “Now you get to find out just how soft I can really feel.” I started to plant small kisses down his chest. “And warm.” And I trailed lower along his stomach, as I heard him gasp. “And wet.” I let my voice drop to a husky whisper that would make Dash proud as I reached the top of his boxers and tugged at the band with my teeth.

“Oh, Pinkie.” he moaned, while I gently pushed him back onto the bed with a hoof, as my teeth tugged harder on the waistband. I almost had them off too before I suddenly lost my grip and they snapped back, causing him to yelp in surprise.

“Oopsie! I’m not used to doing this with cloths. Eheh.” I felt my face burn, and he laughed at my mistake. Quickly he yanked the shorts down and kicked them across the room, and I finally got a glimpse of my prize.

Standing tall at attention, it was about the size of a stallion’s, although shaped entirely different at the end. I had seen pictures of humans naked before, and every one looked slightly different, This one was stranger still and I recognized that he hadn’t had the creepy mutilation that so many humans seemed to favor. Why anypony would want to cut down there made my mind boggle and my marebits twinge in sympathetic pain. But this one was all natural, and I felt my marebits getting all drippy instead. I could feel them winking eagerly, awaiting the fullness that came from having a stallion inside you.

It was the color of coffee, like the rest of him, with a little patch of curly fur around it. I couldn't help but wonder if it tasted like coffee as I leaned close to nuzzle it. I felt him twitch as my muzzle brushed against it, and Louis let out a gasp as I took a slow taste with my tongue. It didn't taste anything like coffee, but it made my entire body tingle just the same. Gently I took it into my mouth, running my tongue over the surface. I could feel the steady throb of his pulse as I explored the surface, slowly probing from the base the tip and around the end of his sheath. I could hear him groaning softly as I played with the new toy, and the sounds made me quiver even more as the dampness began to flow down the inside of my flanks.

Finally I pulled back with a pop, and smiled up to my lover as he tried to catch his breath. “Mmm, you taste yummy, Louie. This is even better than a rainbow lollipop made with real rainbow.”

“Wow Pinkie, that feels amazing. That tongue of yours must have magic all its own.” Breathing hard, he stroked the side of my face and I leaned into his hand, relishing the feel of his touch.

“Would you like to have a taste of mine, Louie? It’s feeling a bit lonely right now, and getting all winky waiting for you.” I turned around to wiggle my bottom at him, my tail held high and winking urgently. “My little Pinkie wants to party with little Louie!”

I felt him grab my flanks, and the feeling of his hands on my cutie marks sent another electric shock through me. I backed up so that he could reach my marehood, and squatted down over his waiting mouth. My tushie was dripping by this time, and I was quivering at the anticipation of his touch. It was my turn to gasp as I felt his tongue make contact with the blazing heat of my nethers, as it felt practically frigid in comparison. He hesitated at first, touching, and then taking a generous lick at my folds.

“Mmm, it tastes so sweet. It’s nothing like a woman. It’s like eating candy!” He leaned forward and started eagerly lapping at my tender folds, as I gasped with the waves of pleasure flowing forth.

I almost forgot that I had my own candy within reach to dine upon, and after a few moments, I descended to the feast. Taking the full length of little Louie into my mouth, I easily began bobbing on the shaft. With my longer muzzle, I was able to take it all and barely reach the back of my throat, and I started to take up a steady rhythm, as the waves of heat and pleasure exploded from my own nethers. It grew harder to concentrate as my mind was assaulted with electric jolts, and I began slobbering as much as anything over my meal. I knew it wouldn't take much longer for my party cannon to go off, and if the groans and twitches were any indication, Louie wasn’t very far off either.

Suddenly I felt it, the base of my tail went numb, and my nose itched. I pulled back my head and moaned at the top of my lungs just in time to avoid the hot stream to shoot past my nose. Louie wasn't lucky enough to have my Pinkie sense, and he managed to take a face full of mare juice, coughing as he let out a moan of his own.

“Jesus Pinkie, you gotta warn a fella before you fire that thing off! I almost drowned back here!” He laughed, still coughing slightly, but I was still twitching from nose to tail as I rode the waves of my own party, and my brain rebooted. I couldn't have spoke a word if I wanted too, and I just let out another long moan.

Finally my brain rebooted enough to think, and I finished the job of cleaning off my new toy. It was more salty than sweet, and reminded me of fresh bakes soft pretzels, but without the mustard. In short order I had everything clean and shiny, and little Louie was ready for another round.

“Oh god, Pinkie, that tongue should be against the Gevalia Convention. It’s inhumane torture.” I could hear the joke in his voice, still thick with passion.

“Well yours is pretty good at whipping the pony too. I’m gonna be feeling that tongue lashing for days.” I giggled as I nuzzled into his crotch, enjoying the heady scent of his sweat and arousal. I even gave a nice lick of his furry balls, although I managed to get some fur on my tongue in the process and had to spit it out with a cough. “Ugh, I like playing with little Louie, but his friends need to shave.

“Hah! That’s a manly beard they got growing. Good luck talking them out of it.” He laughed, giving my flank a smack. I couldn't help but squeal as he hit my cutie mark, sending my brain into another spin of joy.

“Hmmm, I dunno.” I purred, slowly turning around to face him, “I can be a pretty good negotiator.” I wiggled my tongue at him, and watched his eyes bulge at how far I could stretch it. “But I think I will let little Pinkie make my argument for me.” I blew a kiss at him and started to turn back around, lifting my tail in the air to present my case. I winked a few more times, the wetness practically making bubbles as I twitched my tushie for him. Now was time for the main event!

“Hmm, I have a better idea.” I felt him lean forward, putting an arm under my barrel. I closed my eyes and leaned back into him, but suddenly I was in the air, and being spin around to land on my back with a bounce. My hooves wiggled helplessly in the air as I tried to look between them to see what was happening. Standing between my hind legs was a grinning Louie, with little Louie bobbing up and down like a spring.

“What’s going on, Louie? I want you in me! Stop teasing and fill my party cannon! I want you to rut me good like the dirty mare that I am. I need it so bad!” I pleaded with him as he stood there grinning, before reaching down to tweak one of my teats. I let out a squeal, as jolts of molten fire shot into my belly and made me almost explode again. “Oh Celestia, that was amazing! Do it again!”

He obliged, giving the other teat a tweak, and I squirmed on the bed, flailing my hooves in the air. Suddenly, I felt him lean forward, bracing himself on either side of me with his arms, as I felt something poke at the entrance to my marehood. I wagged my tail desperately as I winked to try pulling him inside.

“Stop teasing! Rut me now! Rut me, rut me, FUCK ME!” I screamed as I felt him drive home, and the burning pit filled up with his stallionhood. For one brief moment, I felt whole. And then he withdrew, slowly as I moaned in despair, my marehood winking madly to pull him back inside. But then he thrust again, and the fire was again quenched for the briefest of time. Soon he was building a rhythm as the itch that burned in my body was scratched and the waves of pleasure took their place. I moaned low in my throat, as he grunted above me. I tried to time my hips to his as we met in the middle and the sparks exploded between us. Wet, sloppy sounds joined the grunts and groans as we became two animals straining for release, instead of two thinking beings sharing an embrace. Thoughts of love were replaced with mindless pleasure and the glorious struggle for release. I felt hotter than I had ever felt in my life as the constant jolts of pleasure assaulted me.

I may have even started giggling at one point.

But then I felt it coming, the great wave crested, and like a balloon blown too full, I was soon stretched too thin and about to pop. Louie’s face went slack a moment, and I felt him give one final thrust, as liquid fire coated my insides, and gushed out the entrance. I was so close myself that I whimpered in pain, seeking release, and in return was treated to a vicious twist of my nipple, making my own body explode over the edge like a rocket. My world went white, and my head spun as the biggest party explosion I had ever felt rocked me. I swear, I smelled frosting.

But soon the wave ended, leaving me exhausted on the shore of Louie’s bed, as he leaned down to kiss me tenderly. I hooked my hoofsies over his back and held him close for what seemed like hours as the shaking stopped and our breathing slowed.

“Wowie.” Was all I was able to get out between panting breaths.

“Fuck yea, wowie.” He responded, giving me another slow kiss. He leaned in and we shared another long tender kiss, before pulling away. “You know we are gonna have to have a talk about this.” I nodded, knowing things may change now, but still hoping. “For one thing, we may want to renegotiate your share of the rent.”

My ears flattened and I felt a pain in my chest. “What? Do you think that’s what this was? I’m not some whorse who sleeps around for bits!”

Leaning forward he stroked my face and shook his head. “No, no! That’s not what I meant. I just don't feel right charging my girlfriend full price for a bed if she is going to be sharing mine.” He grinned widely, and I just threw myself back into his arms.

“I love you Louie!” I cried into his mane. I gelt my own poof back into its normal mess of curls as the hole in my heart filled up again.

“I love you too, Pinkie.”

We both crawled onto the bed, embracing despite the dampness of the sheets. I snuggled up against him and held him as his breathing slowed, finally falling into the slow rhythm of sleep. I nuzzled at his neck, breathing deeply the musky scent of him, and letting the warm afterglow sooth me on my own way to slumber.

Suddenly, I felt my mane crawl, and my Pinkie Sense told me that somepony was watching us. I lifted my head and looked out the window to see it open, and a dark pony peering in. Her teal eyes held laughter, as her flowing gossamer mane told me her identity.

“We trust that this favor makes us even for your part in releasing us from our own nightmare?” A cocked eyebrow made her amusement even more apparent.

“Oh yes, Princess! Thank you ever so, so much! This has been the bestest dream ever!” I happily replied, nuzzling my man tenderly.

“I must say, he is a handsome specimen of his kind, although we still do not see the attraction you have to them. But it is not our place to judge the ways of love, only to look over our little ponies as they dream.” Turning way to the sky, now suddenly dark, yet lit with stars and a bright moon, she sighed. “Farewell Pinkamina Pie, and may your dreams one day become truth.”

“Thank you Princess Luna! Oh, and sorry about calling you Black Snooty.” I grinned. In reply, she merely snorted, and turned away, vanishing like fog.

Turning back to my handsome lover, I buried myself into his short mane with a sigh. This may only be a dream, but for this night, at least, he was all mine.

Author's Note

Thanks again to Drax for letting me ruin his story with my clop, lol. Now everypony go back and pester him to write more chapters!