On Azure Wings
ideas for next chapter (need help with decisions)
Previous ChapterNext ChapterAuthor's note: this will be deleted once the next chapter is ready to be posted, but here are my following thoughts on what I'd like to do:
Rainbow Dash works at the rainbow factory and her co workers are Derpy, Cloudchaser, and Flitter. Thunderlane is her supervisor. There are two ways I can handle rainbow production:
The factory is like a prison and criminals have all the colour drained from them by a machine, which is where the spectra comes from, these criminals then have to either face exile or be branded as social outcasts because everypony can tell that judgment has been passed on them for a heinous crime. The spectra's colours relate to the criminals'. It would also potentially create more conflict in the case of a criminal escaping or trying to keep them under control.
The factory produces rainbows via a magical means using something along the lines of a crystal suspended above a magical ooze, when light shines on the crystal it disperses it into the colours of the rainbow which is then absorbed by the ooze and changes its colour to form spectra.
Either way while there Dash converses with her co workers about adopting Scootaloo and one of them suggests that she take her to see a prestigious private doctor that helped one of her foals who had the same problem. With that idea in mind, Rainbow Dash could take Scootaloo to the practice and prepare to have her treated (I'm not sure on the nature of the disability yet, I've always theorised that Pegasi have an innate magical ability to negate weight, perhaps this innate magic isn't working for Scootaloo) but with the ridiculous cost of the operation, Scootaloo will need to find employment and will work with Dash at the factory for the time being until they can afford it.
Comment below on criticisms, ideas, etc. and I'll get around to doing the next chapter asap :3
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