Awoken

by InsanityHD

Rating: everyone
Tags: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Other, Romance, Adventure, Princess Celestia, Dark, Sad, Main 6, Princess Luna, Original Character
Length: 2997

Luna and I were best friends. We played together, laughed together. But something went horribly wrong...

Luna and I were best friends. We played together, laughed together. We were the best of pals. But she started to act a little weird... I asked what was wrong she said nothing and blushed. I remembered the gala was coming up but I was only a little colt. How could I go to the gala? Especially with the filly Princess Luna. But I asked her and she said yes! I was so excited. I hopped all around my room when I got home. But why would Luna wanna go to the gala with me? I'm just a little colt that lives in a shack in Ponyville.... Is it because I look like her?

Published 2014-04-10 20:20:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-20 05:31:23 UTC

Best Friends Forever?..

Awoken
Chapter: Best Friends Forever?..

Luna and I were best friends. We played together, laughed together. We were the best of pals. But she started to act a little weird... I asked what was wrong she said nothing and blushed. I remembered the gala was coming up but I was only a little colt.

How could I go to the gala? Especially with the filly Princess Luna. But I asked her and she said yes! I was so excited. I hopped all around my room when I got home. But why would Luna wanna go to the gala with me? I'm just a little colt that lives in a shack in Ponyville.... Is it because I look like her?

I mean I love her back. But why was the question. I shake my head and go for walk. Luna pops down in front of me. I stumble backwards and fall on my butt. “Hey Shadow wanna come play?” she says with a very exciting voice. “Sure but where?” I ask getting up.

“Anywhere, how about… Oh!” She stops her sentence and picks me up.

“Put me down Luna!!”

“But I wanna show you something” she replies.

So I hang from her arms even though I could fly myself but apparently she thinks I’ll fly off so I stay there as she flies me over a mountain. Finally we get to where we are supposed to be. It’s a huge crater.

“You brought me to see a crater!” I snap at her. She stumbles back nearly falling off the edge of the crater. I quickly catch her as she starts to fall back. She lets out a faint scream.

“You-you saved my life” She says muttering and stuttering.

“Yeah I gues-” She cuts me off and hugs me. I stiffen and then loosen. I wrap my hooves around her and we sit down on the ground and giggle together. “I can’t wait for the Gala” She says muttering into my ear.

My ear tingles as her warm breath grasps at my ear. “Neither can I” I notice her ear twitch and it turns around behind her. I can hear the sound too. Celestia comes around the corner and shoots me spot on in the chest. “Sister!!” I can her yell at Celestia.

Luna runs up to me. She touches my chest I flinch and curl up. I lay back down and moan. Luna’s aroua grew on her horn. I look up at her my eyes open wide. “Luna no” I say weakly.

I touch her face and fell. She cried on my singed chest. Luna turned to Celestia. Tears down her face. Celestia stood strong. “He is not good for you. Leave him now sister” Celestia’s voice powerful. Luna got up but held me in her hooves.

“No sister!” She lits her horn again and strikes me with it. “Sister no! Do you know what you have done!” Luna only mutters something in my ear: “For you my love I grant you immortality!” She shots the last part and looks at Celestia.

I open my eyes. “goodbye… Sister” She says to Celestia and shoots up flying with me in her arms. She drops me at my doorstep, kisses my cheek and flies away. I can hear her crying. Only rarely did she ever visit me.
She said Celestia said that she was more powerful and that she should always listen to her. I kissed her and told her it was ok. But I was wrong…
She turned on Celestia and called herself Nightmare Moon.

Nightmare Moon visited me once when I was grown up. She only looked at me with a tear down her face and flew off. I went for a walk. Distracted in thought, I fell, into the crater. Breaking all fours I layed there for days being immortal was worse than I thought.

I hoped for somepony to find me but nopony did. I eventually fell into a chronic sleep. When I woke I saw the mare in the moon. “Luna” I whispered. I got up fully healed I climbed up the vines out of the crater.
When I got to the top I realized I was a tall strong stallion.

I looked up at the moon and noticed the mare in the moon… Disappeared. I gasped “Mom? Dad? I ran to my old shack. It was molded and covered on vines. I ran to the backyard. Luna and my old toys were there.

I picked one up and looked at the little carriage. “The Gala!” I yelled I realized I never took her to it. I went to the graveyard to look and see if my parents graves were there. They were… I fell onto them. Wrapping my hooves over my head. I cried there.

I thought of luna. Crying harder with every memory. I heard the screams of ponies from the city hall. I ran to the city hall.

I passed a purple unicorn. and when I was inside sure enough there she was. Nightmare Moon. She looked at me and turned into some kind of cloud thingy and she flew off following some ponies that were chasing after the purple unicorn. Everyone looked at me. I slowly backed out. “He is a male alicorn! He must have done something get him!” a pony in the crowd shouts. “Oh dear god” I yell and run away from the mob that is chasing me I run past a mirror and I notice a horn. But the rest of me is a total wreck. I look at my wings I am an alicorn. I attempt to teleport but make myself screwed. Because I teleported into the crowd that was chasing me. “Ahhh!!” I scream and suddenly stop, making them all run forward to far and then they turn around and chase me again. I trip one of the ponies on accident. I run back to help.

“owie” the pony says. “It’s ok” i say coming up slowly. I’m much taller than everypony else maybe as tall as nightmare moon. I come up and light my horn I heal the pony and she says thank you.

I hear the evil laugh of nightmare moon and the screams of six ponies in the forest. “Oh no”

To Be Continued...

Reunited At Last

Author's Note

SO sorry for the really short chapter I just thought I had to get out a chapter and this is all I had so enjoy what I have so far.

Reunited At Last

Awoken
Chapter: Reunited At Last

I hear the evil laugh of nightmare moon and the screams of six ponies in the forest. “Oh no”

I plunge into the forest branches smacking me in every direction. I suddenly fall and the shearing pain runs up my leg. I limped past the forest and looked up and saw a firework show. “No no no no!” I say and run as fast as I can with a broken leg.

I get to the castle after going through the everfree and all I see is a crumbled, broken old castle. With vines crawling up the side. Everything is quiet but then a flash of light shines through the windows. Following is the evil laugh of Nightmare Moon.

“Luna! Listen to me!” I scream loudly.

“Mwahahaha” Is all I hear in response then I hear. “What..--- Noooooo!----- Ahhhh!!!” I run in at full speed. I quickly hide behind the corner when I see Celestia. “Join me sister” She says to luna. “She’s back!” I mutter to myself.

Luna gets up and they all walk out of the castle. But one of the eight ponies spots me. She’s a blue pegasus with a rainbow mane. Her voice cracks when she talks. “Hey! Who are you!?” Everypony turns around and looks at me. Luna smiles and jumps on me. “Shadow!!” She yells and lands on me.

We both laugh but everypony else is silent. “He is a male alicorn how what?” The purple unicorn says the one I saw before. “hey you mind if you guys can name yourselves honestly I only know two name here!” I say and me and Luna giggle. Still everypony stays silent.

But is soon broken by a pink earth pony. “I’m Pinkie Pie and thats Rarity” She gestures to the white unicorn. “Thats Rainbow Dash and Twilight” She gestures to the blue pegasus and purple unicorn. “And of course we can’t forget Applejack and Fluttershy!” She points to the last remaining two.

“Well great to know everypony” “What’s your name?” Pinkie asks. “Oh I’m Manor, Shadow Manor.” I say trying to act like James trott. “Nice to meet you Shadow!” Pinkie says smiling. “Wait last I saw you, you were just a pegasus!” Luna and Celestia say in sync. Celestia’s mane is different it used to be plain pink now it’s a mix of blue,green and pink.

“Yeah so…” “so!” Luna shouts at me. “how did you get the horn Manor” Celestia asks me. “I don’t know” I reply. Celestia narrows her eyes on me.
I teleport from under Luna, I think I’m getting better at it.

I really want to do something with everypony staring at me. “Uh does anypony wanna go back to Ponyville?” “Yeah let’s go!” Pinkie shouts and zooms out the door. “Pinkie come back here!” Twilight yells and runs after Pinkie pie.

Monster

Awoken
Chapter 3: Monster

I really want to do something with everypony staring at me.

“Uh does anypony wanna go back to Ponyville?”

“Yeah let’s go!” Pinkie shouts and zooms out the door.

“Pinkie come back here!” Twilight yells and runs after Pinkie pie.

_=_=_=_=_=_=Perspective Change Luna=_=_=_=_=_=_
We all decide to run after Pinkie. I follow shadow outside only to find everypony suddenly disappeared.

“What’s going on!?” Shadow yelled.

“Where is my sister!?” I yell. We walk forward slowly taking each step. Shadow Falls to the ground clenching his skull.

“What happened!?” I yell running to him. He moans and passes out.

“MANOR!” I yell. I pour water on him but nothing happens. He has been through alot today I tell myself. Trying to calm me down. I pace and pick him up with my magic. I run to Ponyville. Finally some ponies! I run up to Nurse Nancy.

“He needs help!” I yell and put him on the table. She works on him and pushes me out the door. I hear multiply ewws and hmms then I hear choking and a splash. I run in.

“What’s wrong?!” I yell

“Nothing he just had um…” She hesitates. I hear manor moan and he gets up.

“Can I talk to you for a second?” She gestures to me and I follow her out the door.

“He is turning… Evil one might say… His heart it is starting to turn black soon it will overcome him and nothing will be left of him. He will be like Sombra, good to bad.”

“Is there anything I can do?”

“I’m afraid not”.

I fell to the ground sobbing, she bends down and rubs my back. I only cry harder.

“I estimate it will be in about a week to ten days”. She says “So attempt to make the moment last but he will get meaner and meaner, Also with great pains but know this that he will always love you.”

I look up at her, the streaks of tears mark my face. I hear a crash and windows breaking inside the room. The nurse and me run inside. All I see is the color of Celestia’s magic and I get mad. I fly out of the huge hole in the wall and chase after her the wind whistling in my ear as I fly. I charge up flying faster than Rainbow Dash ever will.

“Sister bring him back NOW!!” I demanded. No response I acted meaner and shot a bullet up to her. I only see her magic fall but I can’t see her anywhere.

“COME FACE ME SISTER!!” I yelled loud and clear. Still nothing so I flew down to where I saw her magic fall I found manor. His skin looked like it was turning black. He was asleep no sound came from his sealed lips.

Suddenly he said.

“If I seemed dangerous, would you be scared?” His lips said. “I have the feeling just because everything I touch isn’t dark enough”

“Everyone is scared of you except me. So don’t even think.” I said to him smiling. His lips smile back.

“I’ve turned into a monster” He whispers. One tear falls from his face. And his smile fades.

“I love you bu--” A purple horn peaked through his chest.
“Twilight! You have deceived me!” She pokes her head around. But then changes into a changeling and steals off with Shadow. I’m hit in the flank with a dart and pass out, last thing I see is the blood of Shadow trailing off…

Red Eyes...

Author's Note

SO sorry for no notice when I suddenly disappeared but don't worry I might not post for a little bit more but yeah... Hope you enjoy.

Red Eyes...

Awoken
Chapter 4: Red Eyes…

I’m hit in the flank with a dart and pass out, last thing I see is the blood of Shadow trailing off…

*blink* *blink*

I wake up with ringing in my ear. All I see around me is darkness. I get up and the ground is cold.

*click* *clak*

Is all I hear as I walk along. I hear breathing and light my horn. I stare angrily in the black from where the breathing came from. I walk slowly towards the sound. The light fading from my back and expanding in my front. The breathing gets louder and louder the more I walk towards, still the sound of hooves banging against the ground is near. I can finally see the figure’s leg as my light expands on it.

Suddenly the leg swipes away and I hear the screech of my name. A little light opening peeks through a door and I see the figure slide through the door being dragged by another silhouette. I charge at the door suddenly flying and zoom through the door at last second. The door slams.

“Ah dear Luna.” Somepony says.

I blink trying to get used to the blinding light. I descend and land on the ground, this time it’s warm and not cold it feels of carpet. The light fades and I get used to it.

“Who are you?!” I yell.

“Your long lost love!” He shoots a devious smile at me and tilts his head slightly. He’s a grey alicorn with bat wings. Legs that fade into a lighter grey. With blood red eyes and a sharp tooth that hangs from his mouth when it’s closed. His hair is a mix of dark grey and light grey. His mane is slicked back with little points on the way down. His tail curls at the end with little points too.
“Ma-manor?” I stutter. Just managing to get it through my teeth.

“Finally you get it. You may be thinking ‘How?’ well I don’t know either so... time is not to kill” He says with his devious smile.

“But you are to kill!” He yells turning away from me and at a passed out body that he had dragged in earlier. He walks slowly towards it. He then pushes a little tray over exposing sharp tools.

I gasp.

‘how long was I out?’ I thought to myself.

He picks a tool up and makes a cut on the pony’s lower back. The blood slowly pours out. I stare in terror.

“STOP!!!” I yell.

He yields. That's when I know that some of his original self is still in there. But it does not last long he turns and yells shut up then continues with the cut. Suddenly he falls to the ground clenching his skull like he did before. He moans in pain. I go to the passed out body and just as I’m about to grab the body a sudden screech of pain takes place it was not the body for it was passed out but it was from Manor.

The scream was so loud it vibrated the cart. His head starts to bleed. I abandon the body and run to Manor.

“Manor!!” I scream.

_=_=_=_=_=_Perspective Change Shadow Manor_=_=_=_=_=_

I attempt to fight whatever is overtaking me. My body falls to the floor and I see the blood over my eyes. I scream in pain and same with the demon in me. It creates a scream so loud it makes the cart shake. I open my eyes I have control finally but only for a few moments, I can sense it.

“Luna?” I weakly say. “I-I’m sorry…” My eyes widen. “Run… Run NOW!!” I yell at her.
“Take the body with you and go now!”

“No I’m not leaving you!” She replies.

“GO NOW!!” I scream at her.

A tear falls from her face. She takes the body and flies out the door. I scream loudly and the pain is unbearable. But for her… that's a totally different story. I lose my control over my body and all I can see is what I’m doing. The demon shakes my head and flies out the door and charges at full speed towards Luna. The demon quickly catches up and hooks on to her. The demon turns suddenly using all of his or her strength. Making her change direction and slamming her into the ground. I close my spirit’s eyes and when I open them…

I’m in a dark room, it’s cold and small. I blink trying to wake up if I was dreaming. Sadly I was not.

“LUNA!!!” I scream loudly.

I buck the walls and one caves in I fly out at full speed and realize it WAS a demon. The demon turns around and stares right at me with Red Eyes...