Why am I a mare

by Abbilden

Rating: mature
Tags: Other, Romance, Sex, Slice of Life, Alternate Universe, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Length: 3738

a stallion turns into a mare

A stallion that goes by Fire bolt, decides to visit Twilight for help to get a mare. He wants to look just like his mare friend wants, but what she wants is far from what he expected, a mare. In his new body he try's to get her yet she doesn't want him still. But hay he does have a friend that can help him with getting what he wanted, right.

Rewrote

Published 2014-03-17 17:30:10 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-15 04:03:21 UTC

ch1: A idea

As Fire woke up he noticed that he felt different, like he was smaller and felt empty of a very importation thing that said who he was. He uncovered the covers and knew something was very wrong, there sat not his stuff, but the stuff of a mare. He jumped out of bed getting tangled in the cover and sheets. By time he got out, he was very tired, he had never been that tired before with that little of work. He climbed to his hooves and ran to the bathroom mirror. He looked at his mirror to not see himself but to see a Fire Bolt mare. The color of her mane, tail, and coat was all the exact same color as his and even the cutie mark was the same.

He fell on the floor twitching and repeating the words 'I'm a mare' over and over. He knew something was wrong by his dream last night, but this proved it very good, a little to good for Fire. He got back up and looked at the mare which he was now. He stared at her, to see if it was him, he moved to the left then to the right, in turn the mare did just the same thing. He this time got closer to the mirror, he was impressed by the body shape, it was as if his or her new body shape was meant to be perfect. He had never seen such a site, he almost forgot that she was a he at one point.

Fire Bolt almost fluttered her eyes when she remembered that she was a he. She wanted to panic but thought her new look, looked very good and she slowly calm down. she even started to day dream of very odd ponies, one's with stallionhood. she jolted from her day dream and her eyes opened as big as they could with a hint of fright. Fire had never dreamed of that before but she then remembered her dream from last night.

Dream 23:00

Fire Bolt entered the room to see a stallion, she knew him very well, it was a old friend of hers, Shocker. She has always dream of getting owned by Shocker. Shocker on the other hoof didn't really care what mare wanted to get owned, as long as they wanted to get owned, he was happy. Fire walked to the bed to climb on, as she did this Shocker moved over to make room on the bed. Fire ended up on the right side of the bed. She knew that he wanted to fuck her, but he knew the best time to act is when the mare was begging for it. Fire didn't know that, but soon she will be begging for it.

Fire sat next to Shocker and was waiting for the moment to make her move. She was always one to act before thinking but when it came to this she would always come up with a plan,1. start kissing, 2. suck his penis, 3. get in the best place to fuck, 4. let him rut her till he was tired or she couldn't hold it in more. Fire's plan wasn't the best but it was good enough for her. She never was good at making plans, but when it came to rutting she, well, she wasn't good with that either but most could deal with it. She knew she wasn't good at rutting, but she still wanted to get better.

Fire looked down where the gold prize was at to find a blanket hiding it. She wanted him so badly and the one thing that was stopping her was a evil cover that hid the treasure from her. She reached out to move the cover, only to be stopped by a hoof to her hoof.

"No,No, you must say the magic word," shocker smirked, since she will be begging if she doesn't get any soon.

"Please," Fire said with a big smile that would put most happy ponies to shame.

"For that," as he pointed to her smile," you get to look, but that's it, just look no touch."

He uncovered himself to revile his stuff, Fire bolt was wanting it more than anything in the world. Shockers stuff was not even close to being hard, but it would be when they start doing it. It was light pink at the tip and a light red at the bottom like his fore. The size of it was half the length of fires arm and was half as round. To Fire it was a gift from heaven and she would do anything for that big, round, delightful, gift.

She stared at it for a long time and wanted to touch it, so she started to reach out to it. Once again she was stopped by a hoof.

"No, you haven't said the magic words."

"Please will you rut me," she said with the same smile that she used before.

"I'll tell you what the magic words are but you have to say them. Say fuck in the phrase as well as something that's sexy, got it," Fire nodded to what he said and knew this was it, the time has finally came.

"Please fuck me, I'll be yours. I-I'll be a good little fil-filly, just please fuck me for the mare I am," she begged.

"Umm.. not bad for the first time," he looked at her and then said, "well what are you waiting for," he stated looking at her than at his stuff.

Fire reached out and touched his stuff. It was so warm and firm, but not firm at the same time. She knew she had to taste it, so she bent down and gently licked it. It twitched a little bit that made her want it even more.

*******

Morning

Then Fire bolt remembered Twilight using a spell on him to make him self into the stallion Abbilden liked, but he did not know she liked mares. He looked down were there should have been his stallionhood, but instead he found a marehood. He always wanted to know how it felt to be a mare, but not like this. Fire looked back in the mirror and kinda liked her new look, but she knew she wasn't a she, but a he.

Fire bolt ran to the door, but stopped, how was she going to go outside without being seen. She ran to all her windows, doors, and any thing that let ponies see in, she also locked all her doors. See was panting as she did those things, she didn't know mares had a lot less energy than stallion. She sat down and looked around, she could use this time to clean. Fire shook her head and knew this was not a time to be cleaning. She got up and walked to her mirror again. She couldn't believe she was a mare still.

She walked back into her room and sat on her bed. She right now just wanted to sleep and wake up to find it was only a dream. She grabbed the cover and slid it over herself, in hindsight it just slid just right, right onto her pussy causing a wave of pleasure go up her body. She moaned a little then covered her muzzle, not knowing she could make such a sound like that. She slowly moved the cover, but even the smallest movement cause pleasure to go up her. She moved the cover fast, which was a bad idea, it caused a lot of pleasure go though her body. She ended up gasping from the pleasure and ended up with her hoof on her pussy. Fire pulled her hoof off the thing in-between her hind-legs and gasp at the fact she did that by choice.

Fire put her hoof in-between her legs again and rubbed her pussy, the pleasure was like nothing she ever felt before. She started to rub slowly sending wave after wave of pleasure throughout her core. She started to rub faster and apply more pressure to her pussy. She started to moan, forgetting that she need to do something to get back to normal. She then started to rub her clit slowly sending waves of pleasure up her body causing her to moan louder.

Fire's mind is under some type of spell her pussy cast and caused her to rub faster. Her pussy was willing, was winking, and was begging for more than just a hoof. She dug deeper and started to rub her clit very fast. The pleasure she was making for herself was starting to cause her to gasp for breath in-between moans. She started to feel her body shake a little from the pleasurable waves being sent throughout her body.

Fire was starting to get close to her climax and wasn't even aware of what she was doing. She started to switch between her clit and the lips of her pussy. Soon her whole body started to spasm like she was trapped and was trying to escape from the bonds holding her.

Her pussy was now wet and was dripping her sweet, sweet liquid. She started moaning so much, that it was like she was starting to suffocate herself with moans. The last rub she did caused her pussy to open the dam holding her liquid back. Her liquid went every were and covered her hoof, and the bed sheet. Her climax finally came and she was shaking like a leaf in the wind.

When Fire came back to reality she looked at the bed and her hoof. She screamed at what was on her hoof, no other than her own liquid. She ran to the bathroom and jumped into the tub, turning on the cold and hot water at the same time. She grabbed her soap and started to scrub. By time she got done she had went though two bottles and three bar of soap.

She ran to her bed and yanked the cover and sheet off and threw them into the trash, replacing them with clean sheets and covers. She was shaking from the fact she just had a orgasm on her first day of being a mare. She never thought she would break so easily. Then a sound at the door brought her out of her thinking back to reality.

She took a deep breath and peeked out the window to see her friend. she didn't want to let him in but she knew he wouldn't leave until she opened the door. she walked to the door and slowly unlocked it and opened it. The stallion outside the door gasped at what was in front of him, no other than a mareified Fire Bolt.

Author's Note

Even with a Editor you hate the story if not more.

ch1: A Idea/ edited again

As Fire woke up he noticed that he felt different, for some reason he seemed to feel smaller and felt as though a very important part of him that defined who he was, was missing. He threw aside the covers and knew immediately that something was very wrong, as there between his legs sat not his stuff, but the stuff of a mare. He jumped out of bed getting hopelessly tangled in the covers and sheets. By time he got out, he was rather tired, which came as a surprise as he had never been that tired before with doing such a little amount of work. He climbed to his hooves and ran to the bathroom mirror. He looked at his mirror to see to his surprise not a reflection of himself but instead, when he looked in the mirror he saw a female version of himself. The color of her mane, tail, and coat was all the exact same shade as his and even the cutie mark was the same.

He fell to the floor twitching and repeating the words 'I'm a mare' over and over. He had a feeling that something would be wrong because of his dream last night, but this proved it rather too well for Fire. He got back up and looked at the mare which he now was. He stared at her, to see if it was him, he moved to the left then to the right, in turn the mare did just the same thing. He got a little closer to the mirror this time, he was impressed by the body shape, it was as if his or her new body shape was meant to be perfect. He had never seen such a beautiful sight, he almost forgot that she was a he at one point.

Fire Bolt started to flutter her eyes when she remembered that she was a he. She wanted to panic, but then she started to think that her new body looked rather pleasing, that revelation served to calm her down some. she even started to daydream of some very odd ponies, ponies with stallionhood to be precise. She jolted from her daydream and widened her eyes as much as she could with just a hint of fear. Fire had never dreamed of that before, but she then remembered her dream from last night.

Dream 23:00

Fire Bolt entered the room to see a stallion, she knew him very well, it was a old friend of hers, Shocker. She has always dreamed of Shocker owning her. Shocker on the other hoof didn't really care what mare wanted to get owned, as long as they wanted to get owned he was happy. Fire walked to the bed so she could climb on up, as she did this Shocker moved over to make room on the bed. Fire ended up on the right side of the bed with Shocker to her left. She knew that he wanted to fuck her, but he knew the best time to act is when the mare was begging for it. Fire didn't know that, but soon she will be begging for it.

Fire sat next to Shocker and was waiting for the moment to make her move. She was always one to act before thinking, but when it came to this she would always come up with a plan. First start kissing, second suck his penis, third get in the best place to fuck, and fourth let him rut her till he was tired or she couldn't stand any more. Fire's plan wasn't the best but it was good enough for her as she never was any good at making plans, but when it came to rutting well...she...well she wasn't good with that either but most could deal with it. She understood that she wasn't good at rutting, but she still wanted to get better and make it more enjoyable for both parties.

Fire looked down to where the gold prize was to find a blanket hiding it. She wanted him so badly and the one thing that was stopping her was a evil cover that hid the treasure from her. She reached out to move the cover, only to be stopped by a hoof to her hoof.

"No, No, you must say the magic words," Shocker said smirking, since she will be begging if she doesn't get any soon.

"Please," Fire said with a big smile that would put most party ponies to shame.

"For that," as he pointed to her smile," you get to look, but that's it, just look no touching."

He uncovered himself to reveal his stallionhood, Fire bolt was wanting it more than anything in the world. Shockers stuff was not even close to being hard, but it would be when they started doing it. It was light pink at the tip and a light red at the bottom like his forelegs. The size of it was half the length of Fire's arm and was half as wide. To Fire it was a gift from heaven, and she would do anything for that big, round, delightful gift.

She stared at it for a long time and wanted to touch it, so she started to reach out for it, once again she was stopped by a hoof.

"No, you haven't said the magic words yet."

"Please will you rut me," she said with the same smile that she used before.

"I'll tell you what the magic words are but you have to say them. Say fuck in a phrase as well as something that's sexy, got it?" Fire nodded to what he said and knew this was it, the time has finally came.

"Please fuck me, I'll be yours. I-I'll be a good little fil-filly, just please fuck me for the mare I am," she begged.

"Umm... not bad for the first time," he looked at her and then said, "well what are you waiting for?" he asked looking at her than at his stuff.

Fire reached out and touched his stallionhood, it was so warm and firm, but not firm at the same time. She knew she had to taste it, so she bent down and gently licked it. It twitched a little bit, that made her want it even more.

*******

Morning

Fire Bolt then proceeded to remember Twilight using a spell on him to make himself into the stallion Abbilden liked, but he had not known that Abbilden liked mares. He looked down where there should have been his stallionhood, but instead he found a marehood. He had always wanted to know what it felt like to be a mare, but not like this. Fire looked back in the mirror and kinda liked her new look, but she knew that she wasn't a she, but a he.

Fire bolt ran to the door, but then stopped, how was she going to go outside without being seen? She ran to all her windows, doors, and anything that could let ponies see in. She also proceeded to lock all her doors. She was panting from exhaustion as she did those simple things, she wasn't aware that mares had a lot less energy than stallions. She sat down and looked around, she could use this time to clean. Fire shook her head and knew that this was not a time to be cleaning. She got up and walked to her mirror again. She still couldn't believe she was a mare.

She walked back into her room and sat on her bed. She now just wanted to sleep and wake up to find it was only a dream. She grabbed the cover and slid it over herself, in hindsight that was a bad move on her part, the covers slid right over her pussy causing a wave of pleasure go throughout her body. She moaned a little then covered her muzzle, not aware that she could make a sound like that. She slowly moved the cover, but even the smallest movement cause pleasure to go through her. She then proceeded to move the cover fast, which was a bad idea, it caused a lot of pleasure go throughout her body setting her nerves ablaze with pleasure. She ended up gasping from the pleasure and ended up with her hoof on her pussy. Fire pulled her hoof off the thing in-between her hind-legs and let out a gasp at the fact she did that by choice.

Fire put her hoof in-between her legs again and rubbed her pussy, the pleasure was like nothing she had ever felt before. She started to rub slowly sending wave after wave of pleasure throughout her core. She started to rub faster and apply more and more pressure to her pussy. She started to moan, slowly forgetting that she need to do something to get back to normal. She then started to rub her clit slowly sending waves of pleasure up throughout her body causing her to moan louder.

Fire's mind was under some type of spell her pussy cast on her and caused her to rub faster and faster, her pussy was now throbbing with desire, and winking, and was begging for more than just a hoof. She dug deeper and started to rub her clit very fast. The pleasure she was making for herself was starting to cause her to gasp for breath in-between moans. She started to feel her body shake a little from the pleasurable waves being sent throughout her body.

Fire was starting to get close to her climax and wasn't even aware of what she was doing. She started to switch between her clit and the lips of her pussy. Soon her whole body started to spasm like she was trapped and was trying to escape from the bonds holding her.

Her pussy was now wet and was dripping her sweet, sweet juices. She started moaning so much, that it was like she was starting to suffocate herself with moans. The last rub she did caused her pussy to open the dam holding her juices back. Her juices went everywhere and covered her hoof, and the bed sheet. Her climax finally finished and she was shaking like a leaf on the wind.

When Fire came back to reality she looked at the bed and her hoof. She screamed at what was on her hoof, none other than her own juices. She ran to the bathroom and jumped into the tub, turning on the cold and hot water at the same time. She grabbed her soap and started to scrub. By time she got done she had went through two bottles and three bars of soap.

She ran to her bed and yanked the cover and sheet off and threw them into the trash, replacing them with clean sheets and covers. She was shaking from the fact she just had an orgasm on her first day of being a mare. She had never thought that she would break so easily. Then a sound at the door brought her out of her thoughts and back to reality.

She took a deep breath and peeked out the window to see her friend. she didn't want to let him in, but she knew he wouldn't leave until she opened the door. she walked to the door and slowly unlocked it and opened it. The stallion outside the door gasped at what was in front of him, no other than a mareified Fire Bolt.