last cry

by robotic pig

Rating: everyone
Tags: Sad
Length: 1021

this is my first fan fic so go easy on me

derpy lost her job and is taking it out on dinkey

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2012-03-27 02:38:38 UTC

first cry

it was a rainy day in ponyvill and derpy was sad she lost her job and she was crying dinky came in from  school  and heard a loud sound she know it was her mom she ran in to her moms room and saw her mom crying with her face in a pillow mom whats wrong derpy looked down at the little filly and just cryed more MOM! dinky yelled derpy looked down and yelled i lost my job dinky looked at her mom and said so what derpy cryed.   lets get a muffed dinky said jumping up and down derpy got up and said we cant dinky looked at her mom with a sad look why not dinkey cryed derpy I LOST MY  JOB DERPY YELLED we are poor now. dinky said but i want a muffin  derpy jumped off the bed and walked up to dinky with a mad look. derpy hit dinky with her hoof and dinkey was on the ground scared derpy grabed dinky and put her in bed. derpy was happy after hiting dinkey she went to bed ones she got up she would hit dinky more and more dinky was beeding and she started to cry.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       THE FIRST CRY THE END OF CHAPTER ONE!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               sorry if it was to short but its my first fan fic

last cry

derpy walked into dinkys room and closed the door dinky know it was over she was dead  derpy grabed dinky and huged her and hit her making her face bleed so much she was about to die she cryed derpy got a knife and sliced her neck and riped  her head off she heard a knock at the door it was rainbow dash and she know about what happened and ranbow had the cops with her she tried to kill the cops but it didt work they shot her hooves  she droped the knife and grabed the gun and shot the cops and rianbow dashshe killed all thepony who made fun of her and she cred that her sweat muffin was dead gone for ever THE END sorry this is so short but i just want to get it done with and  i  well make them longer but i did this at 12:54pm so yeah i might make a  next chapter just so i can up load this check out some of my other fan fics if i have any more by the time you read this i well make a fan fic like eavry day

not chapter

this is a fake chapter  because i need to submit this story i hope you love the story it is my first fan fic but i dont think it is that good and i have read bad fan fics but i think i did a bad job so i hope you like it  it is my first fan fic so i well do beter and it is a sad sad sad sad story sad sad sad sad   what is your fav fic my fav is cupcakes ts was bloody but i liked it well i hope i can uploud this and like i said i am going to make longe fics my next one well be maby 5 6 or7chapters so i hope you like this story and ones i make more please read them they well be long so yeah

2 cry

i am sorry if this story has alot of abuse  and this well be alot longer then the last one any way back to the story.  it was a cloudy day and derpy was just geting up and walked to dinkys room to hit her befor school but she was at allraghty at school  derpy  was going to be bored all day so she went to ask rainbow dash to come over rainbow dash was sleeping. derpy dashed in the sky and hit  the clouds with her hooves she band in to rainbow dashes cloud house and woke up rainbow dash rainbow dash yelled what the buck. derpy rainbow yelled derpy landed in rainbows house want to come over derpy said happly rainbow dash said ok and they jump down flying to the ground to derpys house they landed and went in side derpy looked at rainbow dash and said you have to leave before dinky gets hear rainbow noted in a grement  so what do you want to do rainbow said happly lets eat muffins derpy said rainbow said fine they ate muffins for a long time it was 3:00pm dinky would be here soon so she had to get rainbow dash out rainbow dash you have to go derpy yelled! rainbow said ok see you later derpy bye rainbow dash dinky got home a few mins after rainbow left dinky was hide frome her mom. she walk in all the rooms and no pony to be found dinky walked to her moms room and some thing it her right in the back of the head and fell on the floor derpy picked up dinky and punched her right in the eye  she was bleeding but she didnt cry derpy made her last hit and hit her in the mouth and slamed her on the ground dinky was about to cry derpy grabed her and hit her on the wall and fell on her bed she slamed the door she was bledding  she fell a sleep  the next day she  got up and coverd her blood and markes she went to shcool and saw the teacher the teacher didt see the blood or marks it was very hidden but she used make up to cover the markes and is was water day the day they all get water guns and shot at euch other and dinky had to play she jumped and shot scoots and scoots shot back it hit dinky and the make up washed off and the teacher saw the marks and blood went down from her eye the teacher call derpy and toled her what was going on derpy acted like she did nothing dinky was scared to go home but it was time she went home ran in her room and cryed. THE END OF CHAPTER 2