Rhythm and Thorfax

by Crack Shot

Rating: mature
Tags: Romance
Length: 1412

A first date between a mare and a stallion.

This is an explicit fanfic, if you have issues with explicitness, turn away.

Rhythm is a unicorn pony who has many quirks.

Thorfax is a unicorn pony, that is rather calm and laid back.

In this story, these two have their first date. Things get a little romantic, and they decide to "have a little fun." To avoid spoiling anything, they both enjoy this fresh experience.

I am writing this to ship 2 OCs on a roleplay network. This is NOT to be taken seriously.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-17 23:40:08 UTC

The Hugging, Nipping, and Sitting part.

Rhythm, a self-centered music mare, as she would say, was relatively happy with her life. Having just left the Golden Apple cafe, and met a wonderful stallion named Thorfax, she had many a task to do. She told him that she would visit later, and she had plans. She needed to buy a few toys for her to use. The prospect of love was new to her, as she had never truly loved anypony in the past. She often dreamed about it, but something in her personality seemed to push other ponies away. She always tried to help, but she still wasn't accepted into society.

Thorfax, a laid back stallion, had his own plans. He had just met a most wonderful mare, and needed to prepare for her visit. He had a date afterall! His home was a mess, many dishes and random wrappers for food strewn about everywhere. He set to cleaning up the house, scrunching his nose as he cleaned the rancid dishes. He would have to shower later. He cleaned each room based on importance: The Bedroom, The Kitchen and Dining Room, The Living Room, the Bathroom, and the Workout Room in that order. He knew he would have to be careful with the mare, he had never dated before.

About 3 hours later, Rhythm arrived at Thorfax's home. She was levitating a small wooden box next to her, and smiling. She knocked, and was answered with a rather soaked Thorfax.

"Hello Thory! Its me, the music pony Rhythm!" She nearly yelled. "Why are you all wet?"

"Well, I just got out of the shower... I almost forgot! Would you like to come inside?" He replied, a little excited being with the mare.

"Yes, thank you." Rhythm entered the house, and looked around the room. To her surprise, it was clean. "Nice home you got here, its all clean. I always thought stallions kept their homes messy."

"I try my best. What would you like for dinner? I have hay fries, sunflower sandwiches, and I think theres a little left over pasta somewhere."

"Hay fries sound nice. This your first time on a date? Its my first time too."

"Yeah... I always got nervous around mares."

"Same with me and stallions. Maybe tonight we can get to know each other."

"Sounds like a plan. I had better go get started on the hay fries." Thor said as he walked to the kitchen, Rhythm following him.

"Huh? I didn't know stallions could cook?"

"Well, when you have had alot of time alone, you pick up a thing or two."

Rhythm sat down at the table, levitating the box under said table. That would be their little fun time later.

After around 15 minutes, Thorfax walked into the dining room, levitating a rather ample amount of golden-brown hay fries.

"Mmm... those look good Thory! If they taste as good as you look, I might not have room for desert!" Rhythm stated, in a matter of fact tone.

"I try. I hope you do have room for desert, I was gonna make fried ice cream."

"How do you fry ice cream?"

"Burn it."

"Oh, well, what are we waiting for? Lets dig in!"

The two lovers began to eat the hay fries, occasionally starting minor conversation. Within 10 minutes, they had eaten all of the fries, both looking rather stuffed.

"Thory, do we really need desert? I feel like I could explode if I ate another bite..."

"Same here Rhythm... I guess we can skip the desert."

"Well, what do you wanna do now?"

"We can relax on the bed? I know I don't have many chairs, but the bed should be big enough for the two of us."

"That sounds... relaxing."

Rhythm sat at the table, grabbing her wooden box, while Thorfax took the empty stone to the kitchen. 'This is what mares are like? I like it.' he thought.

A couple of minutes later, they both were in the bed, laying down next to each other, snuggling. Rhythm nibbling on Thor's ear,  they looked like a happy couple.

"You know Thory... your a nice stallion. I haven't ever... you know, done it before... maybe you wanna...?" Rhythm asked, a slight blush on her face.

"I would be my pleasure... I haven't done it myself ever either, so this would be a learning experience for both of us." He replied, a blush appearing on his face as well.

"Well, I like you. I'm gonna let you have me, this one night though." Rhythm said, looking down at Thor's throbbing stallionhood. She wanted it, and she knew it. "I heard your supposed to do something like this..." she whispered, climbing ontop of him, nuzzling his stallionhood with her muzzle, licking it. It tasted rather funky to her, but to Thorfax, her licking it was pure bliss. Only then did her notice her moist marehood in front of him. He took a shot in the dark and licked it, eliciting a squeal from Rhythm. She began to wrap her lips around Thor's stallionhood, sucking on it as if it was a popsicle, and would shudder a little bit every time Thor would lick her. It was heaven for both of them.

'This... is... amazing...' Thor thought, burying his muzzle into the moist hole. He thought it tasted kinda funny, but whenever he would like her, she would suck just a little harder, making pleasure shoot up his body.

'This... is... beautiful...' Rhythm thought, taking in Thor's stallionhood up to the median ring. 'Its soo big...' she thought, feeling it twitch in her mouth. She stopped sucking it, letting it go with a slight *pop*. She rose up, and sat directly on Thor's face without warning. It felt like pure bliss, almost all of Thor's muzzle buried between her haunches.

Thor didn't react much, licking a little harder when she sat on his face. 'Is this what sex is like... what have I missed out on?' he thought, tasting a rustic taste mixed in with Rhythms juices. He just took her virginity, he realized. He decided that he would just go with the flow, the mares juices caking his muzzle.

Rhythm got off the stallion, a feeling rising inside her. She glanced down at his neglected stallionhood. She put two and two together, and instead of sitting down on his face, she sat down directly ontop of his throbbing stallionhood. It went deep inside her, leaving a slight amount of precum in its wake. She felt as of she had never been sad ever, and realized it felt better when she moved it. She began to work her way up and down his throbbing stallionhood, the feeling arising inside her once again. She moaned in pleasure

Thorfax was shocked at this development, one moment he had been buried in pussy, and now his stallionhood felt as if it was going to burst with pleasure. He let Rhythm do what she was doing, a very erotic feeling rising inside him. He did not know what it was, but he thought that he had to use the restroom. He couldn't just get up like this though, and let Rhythm do what she was doing, trying to hold it.

Rhythm screamed in delight, her marehood clenching around Thorfax's penis, marecum spilling out all over it. She felt like heaven, and as if she could pass out. She reached her hoof down, and tasted some of her own juices. She liked the taste, and hopped off Thorfax's penis, and began sucking on it again.

Thorfax was trying his best, but couldn't hold it back. The mare was so nice, and made him feel so good. He cummed right into her mouth as soon as she began to suck, letting load after load into and around her mouth, sighing as he did. This elicited a slight gasp from Rhythm, who tries her best to drink it all. She failed rather embarrassingly, most of his semen ending up on her face and nose than in her mouth. She sighed in pleasure one last time, before passing out of exhaustion and pleasure. Thorfax did the same.

For years to come, they would advance their romantic relations, Rhythm and Thorfax eventually married, and had 3 cute foals. They made Thursday night their sexy night, as a memory as the first time they both did it. They were happy to the end of their days.