That Awkward Moment
The awkward moment when the author gives away the plot twist in the prologue
Load Full StoryNext ChapterA rainbow maned pegasus and a black alicorn with a white mane raced around Cloudale track, the alicorn driving its wings into clouds to increase its cornering and staying ahead of the pegasus. As they rounded the last corner the pegasus surge forward and won the race in record time, point four seconds for the 8 kilometre track. Turning to alicorn, the pegasus saw three ponies, an unicorn, a pegasus and an earth pony, all with black coats and white manes. The pegasus took flight and vanished, the earth pony kicked a hole in the clouds and jumped through.
“We had a deal.” yelled the rainbow maned pegasus.
The unicorn took a collar off, calmly answer, “You killed the pony you had a deal with.” and teleported. There was a rush of air towards the place the unicorn had been.
The rainbow maned pegasus looked at her stomach and said, “Maybe I should have told him about you.”
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