The Night will laugh forever, as will the Day!

by Jumpitydude

Rating: mature
Tags: Alternate Universe, Anthro, Romance, Dark
Length: 1266

Discord tickles Luna, and then some.

Alternative version of "The Night will laugh forever!"

Luna receives a message from a mysterious stallion to meet him at her old castle.

The meeting doesn't go as expected, and she suffers for it.

And boy does she suffer for it.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-25 21:30:04 UTC

First night

Luna trotted into the old castle. He said to be here, in the tallest tower, as soon as I can after sunset.

She looked around, trying to push the bad memories of this place out. She had to wonder why he chose this place over any other. Though she would later admit, she probably should have used more caution. Especially as she reached the top of the tower.

She glanced around the empty room, before turning to leave. Suddenly, she found her front hooves above and behind her head, and a gag in her mouth.

"Mmmff? Nnnngh!"

Her screams were well muffled as a laugh echoed around her.

I was tricked!

"Hello, Luna." Discord appeared from thin air before her, a wicked smile spread across his face. "I think you know very well what’s going on. I have just one question for you. Where are the Elements of Harmony?"

Luna was about to respond against him, but something clicked before she could. Or rather, couldn’t.

She was gagged.

Even if she wanted to scream it out at him, all that would come out were muffled noises. Slowly, the reality of the situation dawned on her; He didn’t want information, or the Elements.

He wanted her to suffer.

"You won’t tell me? Fine. I guess we have to do this the hard way." He snapped his finger, and a feather appeared in his claw, and a cuff appeared on Luna’s left hind hoof and tied itself to the ceiling. Her eyes went wide, as the feather approached her suddenly raised hoof, and his tail moved to the joint between her torso and left front leg.

She didn’t have a chance to struggle between when her hoof was lifted, leaving her balanced on just one hoof, and when he started the perilous torture.

She tried to pull away, but the ropes holding her were tight enough to prevent her from maneuvering enough to get any relief. All she could move was her head, which she lashed as much as she could.

"Nnnnggh! Nnnnnnnngh!"

Discord laughed at (with?) her. "Princess, I would have never imagined this would be so much fun! Mind telling me now, where the Elements of Harmony are?"

She let out another muffled scream, trying to tell him she would, but her message wouldn’t get through.

"You know…" His eyes narrowed with clear excitement. "The night is still young…" He moved his face inches from hers. "And I can make this more fun."

After pondering what he meant for a moment, Luna remembered when he first got hold of her and tortured her;

Celestia was right in front of her, and after she turned around and started towards them, she suddenly slowed to a speed that made a snail going up hill look like that comic character of recent times. (Filly-second? Yeah, that sounded right)

When she finally got halfway, she slowed to a crawl, before moving in reverse.

That’s when Discord explained what was happening. "We’re in a pocket dimension where time is at my beck and call. Forward. Backward. Fast. Slow. I get to do what I want with time in here. A second is an eternity."

It felt like she suffered for a million years before Celestia finally got to her.

"Oh, Luna." His voice brought her back to the present. "You should have spoken up by now."

I tried! Stop messing with me! At least stop pretending and let me laugh freely!

"Because now you have to deal with…" He snapped his fingers, and three objects appeared, all of which made Luna’s eyes widen. "… these."

The first was an object that looked to be a handle with self-moving hairs. She recalled that somepony called it an "electric brush."

The second was a collar that, in the past, had spread a magic ink that, wherever it spread, made her twice as sensitive. Something else she would like to forget.

The third was a can, no doubt filled with his most devious creation ever; a gas that forced anyone that inhaled it to relax their muscles, and made them push into any torture instead of pulling away by instinct.

Without halting the torture, he maneuvered the brush to her right side, the can in front of her face, and strapped the collar around her neck.

Her only thought as she breathed the gas was, Oh…

As Luna was fading back into consciousness, her mind tried to piece together what had happened.

"It wasn't very polite of you to pass out on me." She looked up to see a very upset looking Discord.

"Mmmph!" He hasn't taken the gag out yet?

"And since you're my toy now." He finally admitted, not that Luna was more comfortable with it. "I felt like I was allowed to take a few liberties with your body."

What does he mean? Luna tugged at her binds. The only thing keeping her from asking or, more notably, laughing, was the gag in her mouth. It didn't feel like he stopped tickling her at all.

That's when it clicked. There was something off about her body. She looked at the hoof that was raised in the air. It had been replaced, by... something.

"To pass the time in my prison, I decided to use a dimensional viewing spell, and spy in on other worlds. I came across a few that had this form, and it was my favorite thing to see." He ran his stub against her body, moving it up towards her chest. In case you're wondering, his claw and paw were busy tickling her. "Feet, arms, hands, the shape of their legs." He prodded the fat deposits on her chest, which resembled boobs, causing her to squirm and moan (as much as she could), to which he chuckled at. "The chest boobs. Even their bodies looked better than a pony's. At least, in my opinion. And they always seemed more soft and sensitive."

He lifted his other stub to her other boob (which wasn't supposed to be there on a pony, mind), and prodded both mercilessly. She squirmed and struggled, moaning as she tried to escape his torture. But no matter what she did, she seemed to be pushing into it and making it worse, rather than pulling away from him.

"I also removed a few unnecessary mental functions of yours, like that passing out, tensing up, and pulling away from torture. Though that does make that gas of mine somewhat useless against you."

That made Luna somewhat panicked. He was toying with her mind? What did he mess with? Her judgement? No, that seemed to be intact. She didn't mind losing the part of her mind that made her pass out (she needed it less than anyone she knows), but she wanted to pull away from torture and tense up. Those were rather important to her. She wanted- **WHY AM I SO HORNY‽‽‽‽‽* Is that something he did to me, too? Is there something in the tickling that's doing it to me? Is it my body?*

"My dear, I hope you don't mind me leaving for a few hours." Luna realized Discord had vanished. "I have a few things to take care of before I lure your sister here. Just don't forget that you're in my pocket dimension, so it may seem like things last a bit longer... A few years longer! A-Ha-Ha-Ha-ha..."

Luna's eyes went wide. He's going to lure Tia here? How? What could he possibly use? And what did he mean by... Wait. He's going to disrupt the elements then...

Shit!