Flames of Retribution

by Shadow Scar

Rating: mature
Tags: Sex, Anthro, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Original Character, Princess Cadance, Shining Armor
Length: 3354

a post-Fall of Equestria story featuring a few of my OCs

In the wake of the Caribou invasion, a vengeful entity is awakened, an ancient forgotten race of pony emerges to drive out the invaders, a mysterious and powerful mare appears. what will happen next? their will be blood and death before the end, harmony will be restored but at what cost?

Published 2014-03-26 07:30:03 UTC
Last updated 2014-08-01 14:26:04 UTC

Ignition

    It seemed like a normal day at the crystal empire, as normal as it had been since the Caribou invasion. Mares subjugated to the whims of the corrupted stallions and caribou males. The city was a shadow of it’s former brilliance, it’s inhabitants’ were worse so. The ground shook all around the city, it felt like an earth quake the ground cracked and broke open with geysers of lava.

The city guard and caribou soldiers quickly stopped whatever they were doing, mostly raping helpless mares or carrying on like every other day.  The lava seemed to have a mind of it’s own surrounding the city cutting off land access or evacuation. From above balls of flame rained from the sky. They too behaves strangely attacking the guard barracks and caribou soldiers. Guards and others scrambled to contain the flames while unicorn males attempted to part the lava to create an evacuation route.

     Without warning from the lava sprang armed figures in jet black armor wielding blades that seemed to be made of pure lava, they had bat-like wings, two long ivory horns protruded from each creature’s skull, their tails were long with plated scales running along the bottoms. They looked like ponies straight from hell itself dragon like eyes gazed upon their foes. All hell broke loose, the attackers were everywhere, they came from below the lava and rained down flames from above as well.

    In the throne room Shining armor tried to make sense of what was going on “What are they where are they coming from.” His field commanders had no idea. The head of the caribou was silent, this situation was bad even if they could get word out, and reinforcements would take far too long to get here. A sudden crash came from the ceiling as it broke apart. Something else came crashing in with the shards of crystal. A mare…a tall mare with a mane of flames, in her right hand a halberd of the same make as the invaders weapons, her body was black with odd red markings, she donned the same black armor as the other attackers, her’s though only covered the vital areas of her body leaving the rest exposed and free to move as needed. Her blood red eyes locked on the Caribou leader. “Where is the heart.” Her voice spoke with an air of command and a vicious tone.

  The stallions in the room took a few steps back, Shining armor found himself frozen in place…this mare…what was it about her that frightened him so? The Caribou were not as awe struck as the ponies they quickly encircled the mare “You have a lot of nerve cunt, the heart is ours, this land is ours and every mare slut in it is ou….” The caribou leader never got to finish his sentence before he was incinerated by a torrent of flames from the mare’s mouth the parts of his body that were not covered by armor were burned to a crisp.

“Where is the heart?!” she bellowed this time slamming her hoof into the ground creating a scorch mark on the floor. The other caribou faltered for a second before charging the mare swords drawn crying out promises of punishment or death.

The mare just sighed raising her blade taking the pole in both hands.

“Vermin.” The blade of the weapon was actually crystallized lava; the staff was made of obsidian. As the first caribou lunged the mare stepped to the side slashing at her attacker. The heat of the crystal cut right through his armor. His face twisted I both shock and pain as he fell to the ground clutching his side the wound had been instantly cauterized by the heat, his fur under the armor was now on fire.

Showing no emotion regarding the hellish shrieks coming from her first victim the mare turned to the remaining Caribou. “The Heart…where is it!?” She demanded yet again. They all rushed her at once this time. The mare was put on the defensive her hands working the pole of the weapon to block the vicious strikes from the caribou. They were starting to get the upper hand when the mare drew in a deep breath, seconds later another torrent of flames erupted from her mouth. One of the soldiers was smart enough to back off the two that were not were incinerated in their armor. The mare huffed and panted the fight starting to take its toll on her.

  “This is the last time I will ask…” the mare stepped forward attacking the Caribou “WHERE. IS. THE. HEART.” With each word she swung her weapon at the soldier backing him into the corner. Before he could answer the stallions attempted to jump the mare from behind only to be taken down by two other mares. One with an sword and shield, the other with a pair of daggers.

“The city is ours Queen Inferna.” The sword wielding mare spoke.

“Good, and the heart?” the dagger wielding mare presented the defiled crystal heart to the queen, who then gave a sour look to the caribou.

  It was over in an instant the caribou soldier was beheaded before her could speak. “This transgression cannot be forgiven.” She then looked to Shining armor who was still paralyzed by fear.  "Did you find the Princess?” Inferna questioned

   "Yes, she is…less then cooperative at present.” The dagger wielding mare spoke.

    "Bring her and him down to the court yard. It’s time to make the traitor undo his mistake.” Inferna walked off without another word. The city was soon flooded with these odd looking ponies. Most of the stallions and caribou had been taken alive, Inferna stood at the base of the Crystal palace with the heart in hand. She looked as her forces gathered all the cities inhabitants in one place. “Crystal empire, hear me!” her voice boomed like thunder. “This has gone on for far too long, you may think us invaders, true very true, but are we any worse than those that came before?” She looked to the Caribou who had been captured. “Now then the road to restoration begins here, DISCORD, show yourself.” No sooner had she spoke his name then the embodiment of chaos appeared, he looked badly beaten up and as he looked over the crowd of abuse mares, guilt seemed to grip his heart, he turned away mumbling something to himself.

   Inferna held the heart out “redemption begins here, discord.” He looked to the heart, corrupted and perverted much like equestria, this felt wrong while true he was the embodiment of chaos, this was not his kind of chaos. Discord snapped his fingers and before anypony knew the heart had been returned to its former glory its power restored to its true purpose. “Now, then, Solaria, come forward.” As Inferna spoke a young white alicorn with a two tone blue mane appeared at her side. “It’s time, time to heal the wounds of these mares.” With a nod the young mare closed her eyes and began a spell unlike any ever seen, it was not just her horn but her whole body that glowed she focused all her power. The first to feel the effects of the spell was Cadence, who’s horn slowly began growing back. The unicorn mares noticed the same happening to them. The pegasi mare’s wings were unbound as their feathers returned. While this was happening Inferna returned the heart to it’s rightful place. “Now…it begins…I’m coming for you Dainn.” With a clinched fist the mare watches as the lights erupt from the empire. One Caribou was released, and given a message….The Draconi were coming.

After Burn

  Solaria the young alicorn mare coughed blood as her spell was finished, she fell to her side needing two draconi soldiers to help hold her up. Cadence as well as shining armor looked confused, Inferna rushed to the side of thwe white mare as she continued to cough and convulse "She over did it...take her inside and keep a firm watch over her."  Inferna barked her orders and her soldiers obeyed moving the mare inside. Discord looked like he just wanted to vanish at that moment he turned his back "This is far from over Discord, but you've done enough for now, never forget...you double cross me and there will be no where to hide." Inferna seemed to be making that point VERY clear.

   After discord vanished Inferna looked to the captives. "Shadow scar!" the queen called for her trusted commander.

"Yes my lady?" the young Dracony mare rushed up as she was called she looked similar to the queen only her mane was black with red streaks, her weapon of choice was a short sword and a small crossbow. her armor reflected her rank with it's diamond trim.

"Have half the Caribou soldiers executed in front of the other half then cripple the rest and send them back to their king." Inferna ordered with hate in her voice.

Shadow Scar hesitated "G...grandmother.." she started.

Inferna's eyes fell on Scar "That is an order!" she barked.

Shadow Scar recoiled and nodded "y...yes my lady." Shadow scar did as she was told. giving the order out to the troops. Inferna moved away from the group to check on solaria; leaving Scar to deal with everything else. "unbind the black collared mares, get the red and purple collars up here by the heart it might be able to partially restore their minds. Also clear the lava fields and move the rest of the troops into the city to set up defenses the Caribou will likely strike back hard and fast." as the orders came they were obeyed without question.

  Cadence slowly found her fogged mind clearing as did many of the corrupted stallions now that the heart had been returned to it's former state the corruption was fading from their minds. it's effects however dwindled with range the further from the heart the lesser the effect. Shadow Scar moved with the sweep teams to find any other survivors that may be hiding.

   Inferna stood over Solaria the poor girl had passed out from the backlash of her spells. "I will hunt down every last one of these vermin and teach them the harsh lesson of what happens when you mess with Equestria, for every mare enslaved i will see ten of them burn." The queen was clearly blinded with rage. She moved to a window as the main force of the Dracony started arriving in the city. "we will burn away this injustice, and punish all whom stand in our way." The queen started laughing darkly "Then we will take this land under our wing...it's only natural they will still be weakened from both the war and what has been done to them."

Playing With Fire

As Cadence returned to her right mind…she was mortified at the things that had been happening….that she allowed to happen. Shining armor was even worse off than his wife, all that pain and suffering, this evil that now ruled their once prosperous home…he had aided it in its rise to power. “Cadence…please forgive me.” He muttered in a broken voice. Cadence had no reply, she loved shining with all her heart…still though the corruption had begun to fade the memories did not.

  “Some Princess I am…” she whimpered softly. Her mind fixated on her own betrayals. Shadow Scar was watching and listening to the two of them. She wondered if she should interject and say something. Better judgment won out in this situation, those two needed time to cope with the things they had seen and done. Shadow Scar moved about the city. She swept the block where the caribou had been living almost certain they had some kind of hidden escape route or hide out here somewhere. Her suspicions proved correct when she spotted a caribou male darting down an alley way, her instinct said this was a trap but she couldn’t let him get away. Running down the alley the Dracony mare kept her eyes open for ambushes as the Caribou darted from alley to alley with the armored mare close on his heels.

    “Halt!” she shouted as she chased him down what seemed like a dead end. The caribou male only smirked as she neared him. “You have nowhere to run surrender now.” She demanded pulling her sword from it’s sheath, the weapon was made of the same crystal that the other draconi’s weapons were. The bolts for her crossbow were tipped with that same deadly crystal. The Caribou did not falter. From above two more males jumped down catching the mare off guard she was swiftly disarmed. One of the assailants produced a muzzle fighting it over the mare’s mouth so she could not breath flames the second bound her wings with belts to ensure she would not fly away. The male she had been chasing moves up to her.

“Little cunt, not so tough now are you?” he taunted the bound mare. The other two continued to restrain Shadow Scar pulling her arms behind her back. After she was restrained to their liking they started removing her armor. They grinned seeing her breasts liberated from the heavy obsidian armor, the plate scales ran from the underside of her bottom jaw all the way down the front of her body to the underside of her tail, about three fourths of her breasts were covered in the surprisingly silky smooth scales. “Ok boys let’s move her to somewhere more…private.” The male assumingly the leader smirked as he opened a door to a nearby cellar. The two Caribou nodded grunting as they halled the struggling mare down into the dark underground. The leader collected her weapons and armor, Closing the cellar door as he follows his companions down this was going to be fun for them, maybe not so much for her.

Down in the Cellar the two Carubou had Shadow Scar bent over a table her tail held up by a cuff that was now chained to a black collar around her neck. “we’ll need to figure out how they do that little fire breathing trick.” One of them commented as he swatted scar’s rear harshly. The bound mare gave a yelp and a jump as she felt the strike on her flanks an odd mark a four pointed Silver Star resting so its points are diagonal, in the center a red diamond with a black four point star standing upright. The male’s cared little about that and more about what was between those flanks.

The leader approached first smirking as he moved up behind her. “We are going to have fun with you bitch. Never seen nor heard of your kind before.” As he spoke the caribou unzipped his pants moving up right behind her. “Normally I’d fuck that arrogant little mouth of yours first but guess I’ll have to get right to the main event.” He grabbed her main pulling her head back “This is going to be the most agonizing chapter of your life.” He rubbed his semi-hard shaft against her lips, she felt hot much like a mare in heat yet he could tell she was not. Shadow Scar thrashed and growled as she felt this, the young mare had never been touched there before. The caribou male only grinned and pushed her down harder on the table. “I love it when they squirm.” He prodded at her mind as his shaft grew hard and ready to violate the mare. Without warning or pause he rammed his length into her the Scar let out a muffled scream as she felt him forcing his way into her depths. His tip bounced off something at the first thrust. “Oh.ho.ho what have we got here a virgin?” he teased slapping her rear hard. The mare jumped and let out a weak yelp as she felt this, she whimpered meekly as he pulled back and rammed into her again breaking through. Shadow Scar screamed and sobbed as she felt him break through into her deepest and most sensitive area, The male did not stop he began pounding away at her slamming himself as deep as he could with each thrust.

  “Damn this bitch is hot...can’t imagine how she’d feel when she was in season.” He joked to his comrades who had disrobed themselves standing on either side of her stroking their members and waiting for their turn. Shadow Scar groaned as she was mercilessly taken by the caribou her body betraying her to the pleasures of the rough violation, her walls were soon soaking wet and clinching down on the male. “That’s it bitch just accept your place.” He whispered in her ear as he reached unfer her to grope her breasts, they were a decent size not too big not too small. They felt a little odd with those scales covering most of them but it wasn’t unpleasant. The leader couldn’t hold out very long this mare felt so unlike any other he had. He gave her a few more slaps to the rear followed by one final full force thrust before he unloaded his seed into her. Panting he pulled out and stepped aside letting one of his accomplices have his turn. The leader walked up to her face and rubbed his cock and balls on her face. The other male not wanting to have sloppy seconds decided to test out her other hole. As the mare felt his tip against her plothole she went pale whimpering and squirming weakly this was only going to get worse.

    The Caribou male wasted no time in pounding the poor dracony's tight hole, thrusting in hard, fast, and deep. The ring leader grabbed Shadow Scar by the horns motioning for the other male to come around to the front after some whispering they look to Scar and grin. The leader moves to remove the muzzle as the second of his acomplices puts his cock head at her lips. As the muzzle is removed Shadow Scar attempts to draw in a breath only to have a cock shoved roughly down her throat. The ring leader put a knife to the dracony mare's neck. "If you even think about biting I'll slit your worthless throat." He threatened. The mare could only sob as she was brutally rapped from both ends. The two Caribou had worked themselves up quite a bit watching their boss fuck this little slut, neither would last much longer especially with her thrashing and struggling, making all those pathetic slutty sounds. With a few more hard thrusts they unloaded into both her holes, tears formed in Shadow Scar's eyes as they pulled out their members still spurting cum her face and flanks. The ringleader smirked and pulled her up placing the muzzle back on her before she got any ideas. "Ha! See they are not so tough when you strap them down and teach them their place." He boasted. After unstrapping her from thr table a pair of shackels were clamped firmly on her legs, effectively hobbling the mare who was then forced to her knees. Shadow Scar was hurting not just physically, but mentally as well. She was afraid that this was to be her future.

     As the three contemplated what they were going to do to this mare next above on the streets search parties had already begun scouring the city. Inferna was less then pleased her granddaughter had not reported back with the rest of the squads. "Search every inch of this city! Find Shadow Scar!" She ordered. Cadence and Shining had finally snapped out of their depression, both realizing that they couldn't change the past but what they could do...Was try to make amends for their betrayels. Shining had been released from his bonds as has Cadence the two assisted Inferna by mapping out all known places the caribou might be hiding. Inferna then redirected her search teams. If Shadow Scar had been hurt in any way the ones responcable would have hell to pay.

Fanning the Flame

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Fires of War

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Embers in the Night

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Shattered Elements

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Love and Torment

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Battle for Equestria

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Extinguish

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