JD and Devin's Adventures In Equestria

by Lloyd Shamrock

Rating: mature
Tags: Spike, Random, Adventure, Human, Main 6, Original Character, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Comedy, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Other, Romance
Length: 6967

Two teenagers get sucked into their favorite TV show, but they begin their crazy adventures all the way back to Season 1.

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It was just a normal night for two teenage bronies named JD and Devin, except their parents kept telling their son that My Little Pony wasn't real, and decided to rub salt in the wound by calling it gay. JD wished that the world MLP was real, despite what his parents said. A flash of light came out of nowhere, and JD saw the world he longed for. Devin tried to stop him, but ended up getting sucked in with him. Now the two are trapped in their favorite TV show, but here's the catch, they'll have to start all the way from the beginning of the first season. JD will also bump into an OC that will help him in his journey. Can these two survive their new life in Equestria and find a way home? Or will they stay there for all eternity?

References to video games and/or other shows will be made, so don't start hating because of that small detail.

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Hasbro

Published 2014-07-23 22:20:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-07-23 22:20:05 UTC

Prologue: A Bad Night Leads To Great Adventures

JD was having a rough night, his parents were really getting on his case.

"Guys, c'mon!" JD complained.

"JD, you have to understand that cartoons aren't real!" his mom told him straight-up.

"Especially, not that gay, frilly, girly, show you watch!" his stepdad said, mocking him.

"I'm not gay!" JD yelled.

"No, JD, he didn't say that, he said the show was gay." his mom explained.

"Which he's insinuating that I'm gay!" JD yelled.

"Can we stop with the screaming, J-D?" his stepdad asked, still mocking him.

"I'M NOT SCREAMING!" JD screamed. His stepfather wasn't going to put up with this anymore.

"Bye-bye!" he mocked.

"But-"

"Bye-bye!"

"DAD!-"

"Bye-bye!"

"ARRRGHHHHH!" JD finally had enough of his stepfather’s taunting.

JD stormed into his bedroom and slammed the door.

SLAM!

His mom had a talk with their stepdad after he left, "You need to stop this." his mom complained.

"It's not my fault that he likes to watch faggot shit!" He retorted.

"Honey!" mom shouted. The conversation, and I use the term loosely, kept going on and on...

JD was just laying in bed, in his black and dark blue pajamas pissed off about what He said, he's surprised that his younger brother, Devin didn't wake up when he slammed the door, he was already fast asleep before JD's (so called) conversation with his parents.

"I can't believe that dick!" JD whispered to himself, "He's such a freaking homophobe!"

JD tried to remember all of the episodes of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, how everyone was so happy, unlike JD was tonight.

"I just wish... that MLP was real... that way, everything would be REALLY fun!" JD whispered.

He began to fall asleep, but was awoken by a dim light that was growing brighter.

"Now what ...the hell...?" JD began to ask.

He saw the now bright light and looked inside it, he saw the land wished he could be in, the land he thought was a Utopia...

He saw Equestria.

JD reached into the light to see if it was an illusion, but found himself being sucked into it like a vortex.

Devin, in his green and black pajamas began to wake up, knowing that it's still in the middle of the night, "JD, I'm tryin' ta sleep..." he mumbled.

He got up from his bottom bunk and climbed to the top bunk to get JD to go to sleep, then he saw JD getting sucked into some kind of portal.

"Oh my God, JD!" Devin shouted, losing his drowsiness instantly.

He grabbed JD's legs, trying to pull him out, but unfortunately, he got caught in the suction. They were whisked away from their world, when their mom came in to raise holy hell.

"I'm trying to sleep, you guys keep waking me up, and I'm sick of-" she stopped when she turned on the light. She saw that her two children aren't in bed. "Honey!! Get up, our kids are missing!!!"

To Be Continued...

Author's Note

There will be more to come!

Update: Repaired chapter and dialogue

Friendship is Magic Part 1 (Introducing The Freeman Brothers!)

JD and Devin were hurdling through the portal, knowing not where their going (except JD).

"Before we die, Devin, I just wanna tell you... I broke your DSi!"

"YOU WHAT!" Devin exclaimed.

"It was the open-close thing, I was just trying to fix it!" JD tried to explain.

"I'M GONNA FRIGGIN' KILL YOU, MAN!" Devin threatened.

"That's one reference so far!" JD declared, proudly.

Devin then whacked him in the head and said, "SHUT UP!!"

JD saw the exit to the portal, "Hey bro, look!"

JD then heard a voice echo in his head, Are you ready to accept this power?

"Who are you?!" JD demanded. the voice disappeared and the two fell through the exit of the portal.

"Ugggghhhh..." JD groaned, "Wow, we're on the ground already? I thought we'd fall from the sky. Devin?"

JD looked around for his brother, then he noticed that he was missing. JD was automatically on alert, he got up and ran around the area looking for him.

"DEVIN! DEVIN! DAMN IT, DEVIN! BRO! BRRROOOOOOO!"

JD then found his brother, "Thank you." Devin said to a bookkeeper.

"Come back anytime!" said the bookkeeper.

JD grabbed Devin by his shirt and screamed, "ARE YOU CRAZY?!"

"Sorry about that, JD, I bought a book at this bookstore, maybe it can tell us a little bit about this world we're in."

JD snatched the book out of his hand, "GIMME THAT!" and he began to read,

Once Upon A Time,

In the magical land of Equestria, there were two regal sisters who ruled together, and created harmony for all the land. To do this the eldest used her unicorn powers to raise the sun at dawn, the younger brought out the moon to begin the night. Thus the two sisters maintain balance for their kingdom and their subjects. all the different types of ponies, but as time went on the younger sister become resentful. The ponies played in the day her elder sister brought forth, but shunned and slept through her beautiful night. One fateful day, the younger unicorn refused to lower the moon to make way for the dawn, the elder sister tried to reason with her, but the bitterness in the young one's heart had transformed her into a wicked mare of darkness, Nightmare Moon. She vowed that she would shroud the land in eternal night. Reluctantly the elder sister harnessed the most powerful magic known to Ponyville, the elements of harmony. Using the magic of the elements of harmony, she defeated her younger sister and banished her permanently in the moon. The elder sister took on responsibility for both sun and moon, and harmony has been maintain in Equestria for generations since.

"Wow. This book is the most wonderful, marvelous... PIECE OF CRAP!!" JD said as he threw it into a lake.

"JD!... I... It... Come on!" Devin complained.

Fanfic Season 1 Main Theme

"And that, my brother, is a good intro!" JD declared.

"I gotta admit, it was pretty catchy." Devin complemented.

"All right, let's get to work." JD stated.

"Let's do it!" Devin declared.

My name is JD Freeman, I'm 20 years old, and my dream is to become a famous hero, just like Link, the Hero of Time. And the guy next to me is my brother, Devin. There's so many stories I want to tell you all in our adventures, but unfortunately, we don't have time for it.

"Oh, c'mon!" Devin complained.

The two brothers were walking towards this weird town when suddenly we saw a purple pony with a horn sticking out of its forehead.

"Oh my god, it's Miley Cyrus!" JD declared.

"Get real, man! It's a mutant horse." Devin said.

"Actually, you two, that there is a unicorn." an unknown voice said.

"Who said that?" Devin asked.

"It's me, Devin." a blue aura radiated from JD and popped up next to him. It showed itself as JD's other personality, Blue JD.

"Holy crap, my personality came out! Is my brain broken?" JD asked.

"No no no, JD, I'm a remnant of your other personalities." Blue JD answered.

"Wait, if you're here, then... Oh no." Devin said.

CONK!!

"Surprise, bitch! Bet you thought you seen the last of me." said the voice who hit him from behind, it was another one of JD's personalities, Red JD.

"It had to be you, Red." Devin deadpanned.

"I never leave home without my Arondight!" Red JD declared.

"Wait, we just made a reference to Four Swords Misadventures and Sonic and the Black Knight." Devin stated.

Red JD just clicked his tongue and pointed at Devin with his hand in the shape of a gun.

"This is gonna be a long day." Devin said.

"Guys, look! Up in the tree!" another one of JD's personalities, Purple JD, said.

Devin ignored him for a second and thought, Oh goodie, Purple's here too, I just LOVE a good metaphorical bitch slap to the face.

Then the tree starts to shake. Three things fall from the tree, a small red creature, a white and green half of a crystal, and a pink diamond-shaped gem.

"Hmm..." Blue JD picked up the gem and examined it.

"A cute little doggie! Can we keep it?" Purple JD asked.

The original JD picked up the weird crystal, "Wait a minute... I've seen this before!"

JD remembered one of his most favorite video games of all time, "Oh. My. Farore. This crystal is-"

The red creature snatched the crystal out of his hand and ran off. Then JD remembered the red creature's name, "Bad Komainu! Bad boy! Give that back!" JD ordered, "GRAB THAT KOMAINU!" And then they all chased it throughout Canterlot. The chase lasted day after day, year after year-

"The video in the link only lasted 57 seconds." Purple JD explained to the narrator.

I don't know how Purple did that...

JD, Devin and the other JDs slowed to a stop and started panting.

"That little guy is fast!" the original JD said.

"Excuse me... but, does this belong to you?" a mysterious male voice said, holding Komainu.

"Oh, thank you, sir, we've been looking all ooooooo..." JD trailed off when he saw who was talking to him.

There stood a pony with a horn, a sickly dark yellow coat, an orange and green spiky mane and tail, red eyes, golden bracelets with green pearl-shaped gems in them, and the weirdest thing about him, he had robotic wings.

"Names and occupations. Now." the strange pony commanded.

"JD Freeman. My dream is to be a great hero!"

"Devin Freeman. I'm a musician and apparently, my brother's keeper."

"Red JD. The toughest guy in the group!"

"Blue JD. The most intelligent in the group."

"Purple JD. The King of Party Central!"

"Hmm..." the strange pony examined the five. "Okay. You're legit."

"What's your name? And why do you need our occupations?" the original JD asked.

"Occupations are relevant to gathering information of any kind." the strange pony half-answered, "And to answer your other question, my name is Khaotik Villos."

"So Villos, what brings you around this area?" the original JD said.

"If you must know, I was just taking a stroll when this creature showed up with a crystal in its mouth." Villos said.

"Do you have the crystal?" Blue JD said.

"Why yes, I do have the crystal, I didn't know it was yours." Villos answered.

Villos handed the crystal to the original JD.

"You must be humans, am I correct?" Villos asked.

"How do you know we're humans?" Blue JD asked.

"Sorry, just asking, anyway I should probably get back to work." Villos said briefly.

"Bye!" Purple JD said smiling.

"I look forward to seeing you again JD." Villos said as walks away.

The four JDs and Devin with their new-found Komainu in tow continued through the strange city.

"Hey bro look, it's that purple unicorn, what's that thing with her?" Devin said questioned.

"That would be a dragon." Blue JD said, "As I remember correctly Dragons are-"

"Shhhh! I'm trying to hear what they're talking about!" Devin said.

"Isn't eavesdropping wrong?" the original JD asked.

"Yeah, but I can't make out what they're saying, so technically, it's not eavesdropping." Blue JD said.

"Let me try... Hmm..." Red JD read their mouths and found something of dire importance.

"Got it!" Red JD said.

"Well, what'd they say?" Blue JD asked.

"It's simple, they wanna give blowjobs to each other." Red JD explained.

"You're sure that's what they said?" Blue JD asked.

"Now I know you never trust me, but that's what they're talking about." Red JD stated.

"Well it sounds like the fate of Equestria is in danger!" Blue JD said.

"GUYS!" JD yelled.

"WHAT?!" Red and Blue JD yelled.

"They went in that tower to panic for 10 seconds because they found Komainu while you guys were ranting on about the fate of Equestria and all that nonsense." JD explained.

"Unless..." Purple JD began, "What if that purple unicorn gets a letter from a princess in this world and she has to make some friends but was also assigned to find the 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos' to help her learn the power of Spectrobes and teach them to live in this world so Green-sensei here can have multiple girlfriends and know that true love will conquer all!" Purple JD gasped for air really loud and asked, "Right?"

"How do you know about that?" JD asked, confused.

"Just a hunch." Purple JD said with a squee.

"So, what? We're going call JD, 'Green', now?" Devin asked.

"Yeah! It'll be just like that Four Swords Misadventures that Green likes to watch!" Purple JD said.

"Uh, um... So, uh, Green, what about that crystal you were about to explain?" Blue JD asked.

"The crystal-what-now?" JD asked back.

"The one Villos gave to you, the whole part of the story." Blue JD said.

"Oh yeah, now I remember, that crystal we have is actually the Cosmolink." JD Explained.

"WHAT!? Why the fuck didn't tell us about the damn Cosmolink in the first place?!" Red JD asked, angrily.

"Because Komainu grabbed it and we had to go in a chase scene." JD stated.

"Which lasted 57 seconds." Purple JD stated.

"You know what, screw this." Devin said.

Devin climbed up some vines from the side of theivory tower to hear what the purple unicorn was saying and got better results.

"My dearest teacher, my continuing studies of pony magic have led me to discover that we are on the precipice of disaster!" The purple unicorn stated.

"Hold on. Preci... preci..." The baby dragon tried to write down.

"Threshold." The purple unicorn said.

"Threh..." The baby dragon couldn't understand what the purple unicorn meant.

"Uh, brink? Ugh, that something really bad is about to happen! For you see, the mythical Mare in the Moon is in fact Nightmare Moon, and she's about to return to Equestria, and bring with her eternal night! Something must be done to make sure this terrible prophecy does not come true. But there's one thing I don't get, something called, the 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos', are somehow related to the Mare of the Moon, but how? And why? I await your quick response. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle." The purple unicorn said.

"Twilight Sparkle. Got it! The baby dragon finished writing the note.

"Great! Send it." Twilight declared.

"Now?" The baby dragon asked.

"Of course!" Twilight told the baby dragon.

"Hey bro, what did we miss?" JD asked.

"Bro, the Cosmolink we found with Komainu must mean something about..." Devin told JD the scenario that Twilight has told her baby dragon.

"So, the Cosmolink, Komainu, and the pink diamond we found must be related to the 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos'. I think Twilight must be on to something." Blue JD suggested.

"But what does it mean?" Devin asked.

"Given some circumstances, I highly doubt we are involved with this 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos', but if what you overheard is true, then maybe what I've read may not be total bullshit after all." Blue JD said.

"What do you mean?" Devin asked.

"I'll tell you another time." Blue JD concluded.

"So what now?" Devin asked.

"Simple, we go find the Elements of Harmony and prove we're heroes!" JD, or "Green", suggested.

"And exactly how are we going to find them?" Blue JD asked.

"With this baby." Green JD held the pink diamond in front of Red, Blue, Purple JD and Devin.

"Guys, what's-her-name got a letter." Purple JD said while pointing to Twilight.

"What!" JD, Devin, Red, and Blue JD yelled.

"My dearest, most faithful student Twilight. You know that I value your diligence and that I trust you completely." The baby dragon read the letter.

"Diligence?" Purple JD asked confused.

"What the hell's diligence?" Red asked.

"Oh, diligence is knowledge to do something in a certain situation." Devin explained.

"Will you three morons be quiet!? We're trying to eavesdrop!" Green JD told Devin, Red, and Purple JD.

"I thought you said it was wrong." Devin said with a smug grin.

JD balled up his fist and conked Devin on the head, "Ow! Dick."

"...But you simply must stop reading those dusty old books." The baby dragon read through the letter.

"WHAT?!" Blue JD yelled through the window.

At that moment, Blue JD's loud voice startled the group and made them lose their grip on the vines.

"Uh-oh, no, no, no, noooooooo!" Green JD yelled as he, Red JD, Purple JD, and Devin grabbed Blue JD as they fell and crashed into the bushes.

"What was that?" Twilight asked.

"Must've been a couple birds fighting." The baby dragon suggested.

"Oh Spike, I-"

"Miss Sparkle, the Princess has requested a chariot for you and asked us escort you to Ponyville." a unicorn guard said, interrupting Twilight.

Unbeknownst to them, just outside were a bunch of guys in pain, eating bush right now.

"Ow!" JD yelled in pain as the others were spitting out leaves.

"Hey, check it out, a chariot! But not just any chariot boys, behold, The Lightning Chariot!" JD declared to the group, gesturing to Twilight's chariot.

"Well that escalated quickly, a Kid Icarus Uprising reference, never saw that coming." Devin commented.

"All we need now is Phos and Lux and we're ready to go!" JD declared with gusto.

"Okay bro, let me point out 3 things on how that makes absolutely no sense," Devin began, "Point 1: The Lightning Chariot is part of a video game. Point 2: Unicorns don't fly in this world, unlike Phos and Lux. And Point 3: Even if you make Points 1 & 2 somehow plausible, why, oh god, WHY would ANYBODY just leave The Lightning Chariot just lying around?!"

"Well I-" Green JD's sentence was interrupted by Purple JD.

"Guys, trouble!" Purple JD yelled while pointing to two unicorns and the baby dragon.

There stood a white unicorn wearing gold-colored armor, and to his side was the purple unicorn named Twilight and her baby dragon.

"Shit! they're coming this way! Red, what are you doing?!" Devin asked.

"Hey, duty calls and this is too much excitement for me." Red JD told Devin as he started peeing on the chariot.

"Are you crazy?! Bro, say something to Red!" Devin told Green JD.

"Well it would paint the chariot a new shade of yellow, after all." JD suggested.

"Think of it as redecorating!" Red JD told Devin.

"Seriously? You guys disgust me, I'm out of here!" Devin said as he hides back in the bushes.

"Take your ti-" Red JD sentence was interrupted by Blue JD.

"I got a idea, hold on for just a minute." Blue JD told JD.

Blue JD drew out 2 ax-shaped swords and stabbed the bottom part of the chariot.

"C'mon, we gotta go!" Green JD yelled at Red JD.

"Almost done... Ahhh... Much better." Red JD said while he was finished pissing on the seats.

"Are you done now?" Green JD asked.

"Yeah, I feel so much better." Red JD told JD.

"Good now... Oh shit! Hide! Bro, where are you?" JD asked.

"I was right under the chariot while Red was doing..." Devin trailed off, then had a deadpan expression on his face, "You know what, I don't even care anymore." Devin

The depressing mood fills the air around the two unicorns and baby dragon.

"Hey, Devin, listen." JD whispered to Devin.

"Goodbye, B.B.B.F.F." Twilight said, sadly.

"Goodbye, Twily." the armored unicorn said in the same tone.

After seeing two individuals say their goodbyes, JD remembered a saddening memory.

~~~~~~

"I love you Gramma, one day, I'm going to be a archeologist."

"I'm sure you will, sweetie."

"JD, Gramma passed away, but she will always be in our hearts. We all love her and we still do."

~~~~~~

"When I saw that moment, it made think how much I miss her." JD thought to himself.

Suddenly the chariot started to fly out that crazy castle-town place, on the road to great adventures. what will our her-

"WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR A CLIFFHANGER!!" Red JD shouted.

"What was that?" Twilight asked.

The guards looked around for a moment and just shrugged.

"Hey Purple, ten bucks says you live if you fall." Devin gambled.

"You're on!" Purple JD declared.

Purple JD let go of the chariot and began to plummet.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Purple JD's yell faded as he crashed into the meadow.

Everything became silent.
...

......

.........

"YOU OWE ME 10 BUCKS!" Purple JD yelled to Devin from the ground.

"Shit." Devin cursed.

"Hey, why is my seat all wet?" Twilight asked.

Red JD stifled a laugh, much to Devin's annoyance, "Oh, fuck off!" Devin whispered before he punched Red's face.

"Oww!" Red whispered his whine.

"My dear Twilight, there is more to a young pony's life than studying, so I'm sending you to supervise the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration in this year's location: Ponyville. And, I have an even more essential task for you to complete: make some friends!" The baby dragon declared.

"Oh one more thing, find two bipedals by the names of JD Freeman and Devin Freeman protect these two chosen for destiny." The baby dragon read the last part of the letter.

"JD and Devin Freeman, never heard of those two." Twilight shrugged.

"Hey, Blue, what do you know about the 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos'?" Devin just happened to ask.

Blue JD closed his eyes in contemplation, "The 'Six Chosen by The Cosmos' are six Spectrobe Masters who protected the land of Equestria long ago, long ago before Rallen and Jeena found them. They had passed long ago and no one had seen a Spectrobe since, so here, they were brushed off as a myth. And now, six new beings must be chosen to become Spectrobe Masters so Equestria may be protected once again."

"Whoa, Blue, how'd you figure all that out?" Devin asked.

Blue JD pulled out a phone and said, "It's all right here in this Wikipedia article."

"Wait, how'd you get J- Green's cell phone?" Devin asked in confusion.

"Funny thing, the portal sucked up his phone as it did with us." Blue JD explains.

Green JD, shrugging off his confusion, said, "Well if it's on the internet, then it must be true."

This story is in the process of editing

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The nice town of ponyville home of the earth ponies, unicorns, and pegasi.

"Such a nice town." Green JD complemented. "I've seen this in movies before in any minute some crazy person is going to attack us from behind."

"Whoa, a human!" A mysterious voice said as he was amazed.

Behind them was a green unicorn with a brown and blonde mane.

"Guys, watch out I think he may try to kill us." JD whispered to the group.

"I'm not going to kill you guys, I'm Lloyd Shamrock by the way, it's just so cool that I'm talking to humans in Ponyville." The green unicorn said.

"Sup, say what were you talking about-" JD was interrupted by Lloyd Shamrock.

"By the way, I need romantic advice so can you come with me?" Lloyd Shamrock begged JD's help.

Lloyd Shamrock took JD, Red JD, Blue JD, and Devin to a barn with a lot of Apple trees.

"Whoa, so many apples can we eat one?" JD asked.

"Sure, let me ask her." Lloyd Shamrock said as he went to the little yellow filly.

"So, what do you guys think?" JD asked Devin, Red JD, and Blue JD.

Komainu was eating grass.

"I gotta admit it's pretty amazing." Blue JD stated.

"I've seen better." Red JD deadpanned.

"It's good." Devin told JD.

"Man, I wish I brought my phone and my gear to take photos and play tons of mario and luigi, Kid Icarus Uprising, Pheonix Wright Ace Attorney, and Persona 4 Golden on my 3DS and my PS Vita." JD said as he was sad.

"You mean these?" Purple JD said as he held JD's gear.

"How did you grab those, and when did you get here?" Devin asked Purple JD.

"Turns out when you were sleeping, I've packed them just for Sensei." Purple JD said while he was smiling.

"Excellent, let's snap dis shit!" JD said while excited.

"Yay!" Purple JD said as he sang a song.

"Oh god, please tell me he's not going to rap." Devin deadpanned.

Oh.... I know you'll save the day cause one day We will play today and find that special girl sensei will looooooooooooovvvvvveeeeeee.

"No seriously, when did you get here so fast?" Devin asked Purple JD.

"When I was falling, I saw someone cute for green-sensei and we should go there she's probably there right now." Purple JD said.

"We'll go when we get something on the way." Blue JD told Purple JD.

"Ok!" Purple JD said while smiling.

"Sorry about that guys, apparently Apple Bloom told me Applejack greeting somepony and a dragon." Lloyd Shamrock shrugged.

"Wait did you say-" JD was interrupted by a loud southern voice.

"Soup's on, everypony!" The southern voice shouted.

"Soup?" JD asked Lloyd Shamrock.

Tons of southern ponies were running to the back of the barn.

"Run!" Devin told Blue JD.

"Run!" Blue JD told Lloyd Shamrock.

"Run!" Lloyd Shamrock told JD.

"Run!" JD told Purple JD.

"Purple!" Purple JD said while frightened.

JD, Lloyd Shamrock, Devin, Blue JD, and Purple JD jumped in the apple trees while Red JD shouted.

"OH WHAT THE FUUUUUCCCCCKKKK!" Red JD yelled as those ponies stomped all over him.

"So Purple, that cute girl you mentioned?" JD asked Purple JD.

"I can't believe you got pummeled by a ton of earth ponies." Lloyd Shamrock told Red JD.

"I can't believe this is our first time knowing what type of ponies there are." JD told Lloyd Shamrock.

"Here she is that cute giruuuuuuh!" Purple JD said while noticing that Khaotic Villos was in front of Purple.

"So what was going on about 'A cute girl'?" Villos asked.

"What are you doing here? We thought you were at Canterlot." JD asked

"I came to give you this." Villos said as he handed a file to JD.

"What is it?" JD asked.

"Rumors pass by when your out gathering intel, this is a case file for you, good luck." Villos said as he flew away.

"Whoa, that's the first time I've seen an Alicorn, but it looks different." Lloyd Shamrock said as he was puzzled.

"How can you tell?" JD asked Lloyd Shamrock.

"Never mind, it's nothing." Lloyd Shamrock shrugged it off.

"Well, where to?" Devin asked Lloyd Shamrock.

"Hmm.... Town hall?" Lloyd Shamrock suggested.

"Wow festive, hey miss do you need some help?" JD asked the marshmallow unicorn.

"Why yes, I could some......" The marshmallow unicorn paused as she saw JD, Devin, Lloyd Shamrock, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, and Komainu.

"Hey, how's it going?" Red JD asked the marshmallow unicorn.

The marshmallow unicorn screamed until she was silenced by a pair of lips.

"JD, what are you doing?" Devin asked JD.

"Shh..... Calm down just listen to my singing voice." JD sang a little song.

"Such a beautiful mare with grace, beauty, divine, style, and I have seen the wares at a quick store and none of them have a rare value just like you radiant
as a gem gleaming through the sunlight

"Why are you singing to that unicorn screaming at us?" Devin asked JD.

"Hm?" JD said as he was puzzled.

"Listen, this is gonna sound crazy we need your help, we're looking for a book that tells about the 'six chosen by the cosmos' is there one here in this town?" JD asked the marshmallow unicorn.

"There is one, that unicorn with strange wings told me to give it to JD and Devin Freeman, whoever those two are." the marshmallow unicorn stated as she pointed the book on a shelf.

"Well that's just it, we need that book to find out if Komainu and the Cosmolink are connected to me and Devin and are related to this." JD explained to the marshmallow unicorn.

"Wait, you and Devin?" The marshmallow unicorn said as she was puzzled.

"Oh sorry, forgot to introduce myself I'm JD Freeman and this is Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, and Devin Freeman." JD told the marshmallow unicorn.

"And together we're the Freeman Brothers!" JD and Devin declared.

........................

"What was that all about?" Lloyd Shamrock thought to himself.

"Hey miss-" JD was interrupted by the marshmallow unicorn.

"Rarity." The marshmallow unicorn declared.

"Ok, Rarity thanks for the help and sorry for kissing you by the way, I'm just.... You look like....... Forget it." JD said as he was blushing.

"It's alright darling, I could use some help after all." Rarity told JD while she pointed at the box of ribbons and decorations.

"I'm in!" JD, Red JD, Purple JD, and Lloyd Shamrock declared told Rarity.

JD set up the banners.

Red JD drew his Arondight and started swinging his sword to cut the boxes.

Purple JD sang a song while tying ribbons.

Lloyd Shamrock made sun and moon decorations.

Devin and Blue JD were watching the others finish up.

And just that, the town hall was complete.

"We did it gang, I think it's safe to say we done a good job." JD declared.

"You boys did a fabulous job helping me set up the place." Rarity told JD, Red JD, Purple JD, and Lloyd Shamrock.

"Thanks, if you need anything let me know ok?" JD told Rarity while blushing.

"Oh my, what's that?" Rarity asked JD.

"Uh bro, down there?" Devin told JD.

JD stared at Rarity's eyes.

"Aww..... Sensei has a boner for Rarity." Purple JD said while being gleeful.

"Oh great, JD's in love with Rarity." Blue JD deadpanned.

"Huh.... What? Oh, sorry about that." JD told Rarity hiding his boner and blushed face.

"Let's go guys." JD told Devin, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, and Lloyd Shamrock.

"Sensei, are you blushing, and do you have a boner for Rarity?" Purple JD said in sing-song tone.

"Shut up." JD growled.

"Birds chirping in tune." Blue JD thought to himself.

Komainu barks at the birds and chases after them.

"Komainu, stop!" JD yelled at Komainu.

The chase lasted until a unicorn and a baby dragon were walking the dirt road with a yellow Pegasus.

"Hey, I need your help, have you seen a cute little lion-dog go by here?" JD asked the yellow Pegasus.

"Hey Fluttershy, sorry this is JD Free-." Lloyd Shamrock was interrupted by Red JD.

"Guys, we caught Komainu, man, oh man, the little fucker was on the prowl eating those birds." Red JD shrugged.

"Yeah, we need to get that thing on a leash. JD told Red JD.

"Hey, is this the new library you two are living in?" Lloyd Shamrock asked Twilight.

"Hey guys, look." Lloyd Shamrock went in the Golden Oaks Library.

"Dark and scary." Lloyd Shamrock said.

"Excuse me." Twilight asked JD.

"What's up?" JD asked Twilight.

"Are you JD Freeman?" Twilight asked JD.

"Yes." JD told Twilight.

"Wait, Princess Celestia told me to find JD and Devin Freeman are these two the chosen for destiny she mentioned in the letter?" Twilight thought to herself.

"Hey, JD!" Lloyd Shamrock yelled at JD.

"We'll talk more when we get in the library." Twilight told JD.

"Ok." JD agreed.

"Good night, Spike." Fluttershy told the baby dragon.

Purple JD was next to Fluttershy.

"Before you ask, Komainu and the little dragon are tired, night." Purple JD said as he closed the door on Fluttershy.

"Huh. Rude much?" The baby dragon asked Twilight.

"Tell me about it." JD shrugged.

"Sorry, Spike, but I have to convince the Princess that Nightmare Moon is coming, and we're running out of time! I just need to be alone so I can study without a bunch of crazy ponies trying to make friends all the time. Now, where's the light?" Twilight asked the baby dragon.

"Don't worry I found it." Devin said as he clicked the light switch. "Hang on, what's wrong with this thing?" Devin said as he kept flickering the light switch.

"Devin, that's not a light switch, that is my penis." Red JD stated.

"Dah! What the fuck, Red?!" Devin asked Red JD.

"Sorry, couldn't help myself, bitch!" Red JD said.

"Hey Red, how come yours click?" Lloyd Shamrock asked Red JD.

"Wait, yours doesn't?" Red JD asked Lloyd Shamrock.

"It does not." Lloyd Shamrock deadpanned.

"Ok, enough about clicky dick, Twilight and this baby dragon-" JD was interrupted by the baby dragon.

"Spike." The baby dragon corrected.

"SPIKE, are not aware of how we got here and what's at stake, as long nopony sees us we'll be alright." JD explained.

The lights were turned on.

"SURPRISE!!!" All the earth ponies, unicorns, pegasi shouted with glee at Twilight, JD, Devin, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, Lloyd Shamrock, and the baby dragon.

A party noise blower blared out of nowhere.

Twilight groans.

"Oh shit." JD said through gritted teeth.

"Surprise!" A pink pony shouted to Twilight.

Somepony blows another party noise blower.

"Hi, I'm Pinkie Pie, and I threw this party just for you! Were you surprised? Were ya? Were ya? Huh huh huh?" The pink pony asked Twilight.

"Very surprised. Libraries are supposed to be quiet." Twilight deadpanned.

"Quick, while she's distracted, back away slowly." JD told Lloyd Shamrock.

JD, Lloyd, Devin, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD and Komainu took a few steps back when they bumped into something.

"What in tarnation!?" A southern voice yelled.

"Applejack!" Lloyd Shamrock said while he saw a orange earth pony with a cowboy hat on her.

"Lloyd?" The orange-southern pony said, "What in Celestia are you doing here?"

"Just showing JD, his 3 looks-alikes and Devin around in Ponyville." Lloyd Shamrock said as he showed her JD, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, and Devin.

"If you guys need me I'll be getting a drink." JD told the others as he went to go get a glass of punch.

JD poured himself a glass of punch and sipped some.

"Ah.... Man, this world is gonna be great." JD said to himself.

Komainu was next to JD.

Suddenly, JD heard the sound of a kettle whistling.

"Hey, who's cooking steak?" JD asked around.

"Twilight, you okay?" JD asked Twilight.

"I don't about steak, but her mouth is on fire." Blue JD told JD.

Then, the sound of a train whistle was blowing.

Twilight's mouth was on fire thanks to the hot sauce Spike and JD found.

"Aww, she's so happy she's crying!" Pinkie said.

Twilight ran fast to the stairs.

"Hot sauce. Ooh..." Spike noticed the hot sauce while JD grabbed it.

"Sweet! Just what I need!" JD held the hot sauce in his hand.

"JD, isn't that the hot sauce Twilight used?" Spike asked JD.

"Yeah so?" JD told Spike.

"Hi!" Pinkie surprised JD and Spike.

"Crap, that was fast!" JD saw Pinkie Pie.

"Sensei!" Purple JD yelled to JD.

"Purple." JD said as he saw Purple JD.

Purple JD saw Pinkie Pie.

"Hi." Purple JD said in a deep blush.

"I'm Pinkie Pie, what's your name?" Pinkie asked Purple JD.

"Purple JD." Purple JD said.

"Ok, have fun, lover boy." JD left Purple JD and Pinkie Pie alone.

"Hey, Fluttershy, right?" JD asked Fluttershy.

"Yes?" Fluttershy said while frightened.

"My name is JD Freeman, I'm a human and this little guy is Komainu, he is a Spectrobe but he is a lion-dog." JD told Fluttershy.

"What's a Spectrobe?" Fluttershy asked JD.

"Well a Spectrobe is a type of creature you use in battles, and for excavations." JD explained Fluttershy.

"They dig stuff?" Fluttershy asked JD.

"No, they find stuff and show me where to dig." JD explained.

There are 3 types of Spectrobes: Child, Adult, and Evolved." JD told Fluttershy.

"I think There are 3 or 5 elements: Corona, Aurora, Flash, Earth, Sky, Plant, Water, Fire." JD tried to think how many elements there are.

"Bro. That's 8 elements." Devin deadpanned.

"Thank you for telling me about those Spectrobes." Fluttershy told JD.

"Say, do wanna um.... go to the Summer Sun Celebration and see my birds sing, I mean If you want to." Fluttershy asked JD.

"Sure." JD whispered in Fluttershy's ear.

"I'll see you there." Fluttershy told JD.

"All right." JD said while he was blushing.

"I saw that." Blue JD deadpanned.

"What, she's cute so?" JD asked Blue JD.

"Listen, falling in love is one thing, but with two ponies, JD but I think-" Blue JD was interrupted by JD.

"Don't you even mention his name, you know that." JD told Blue JD while in anger.

"I'm just saying." Blue JD stated.

"This must be very important, they called everyone here." JD explained to Lloyd Shamrock.

Suddenly, a fanfare played.

"Wow, so very quiet." JD deadpanned.

"Fillies and gentlecolts, as mayor of Ponyville, it is my great pleasure to announce the beginning of the Summer Sun Celebration!"

All the ponies cheered.

"Ahh!" JD yelled in pain.

"JD, are you alright?" Lloyd Shamrock asked JD.

"My head, what's going on?" JD said in pain.

JD looked at the sky the dark craters of the moon are gone.

"In just a few moments, our town will witness the magic of the sunrise, and celebrate this, the longest day of the year! And now, it is my great honor to introduce to you the ruler of our land, the very pony who gives us the sun and the moon each and every day, the good, the wise, the bringer of harmony to all of Equestria..." The mayor of Ponyville stated.

"Ready?" Fluttershy told the birds.

"...Princess Celestia!" The mayor of Ponyville declared.

"Huh?" Rarity noticed that Princess Celestia wasn't here.

The ponies chattered quietly and nervously in the background.

"This is bad." Blue JD said while shocked.

Komainu barked.

"What's up Komainu?" JD asked Komainu.

A voice echoed in JD's head.

JD, head to the Everfree forest, the time has come for you to become a Spectrobe master.

That same voice. "Who are you?" JD asked the voice.

My name is Khuberos I'm a remnant of the Elements of Harmony, if your ready, check your wrist.

"Wha...?" JD said as he was shocked.

The green-white crystal was turned into a blue gauntlet.

We'll meet again, this time I'm sure of it.

"Ugh... What happened?" JD asked Lloyd Shamrock.

"Bro, are you okay?" Devin asked JD.

"You were out for 2 minutes." Lloyd Shamrock told JD.

"Remain calm, everypony, there must be a reasonable explanation!" The Mayor of Ponyville tried to calm down the citizens of Ponyville.

"Ooh, ooh, I love guessing games! Is she hiding?" Pinkie looked around.

"She's gone!" Rarity told everypony.

Everyone gasped.

"What!" JD yelled outloud.

Everypony saw JD, Devin, Lloyd Shamrock, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, and Komainu.

"Who are they?" the other ponies asked the green unicorn.

"Don't know, but the one with a tail on the back of his head is cute." The green unicorn saw JD.

"Ooh, she's good." Pinkie said.

"I know right? SENSEI LOOK!" Purple JD saw blue smoke.

Pinkie yelped.

The blue smoke turned into a dark blue unicorn with wings and a cresent moon marking on her chest.

All the ponies in the room gasped.

"Oh no... Nightmare Moon!" Twilight said as she was shocked.

Spike fainted.

"Oh he dead." Red JD joked and deadpanned at the same time.

"Oh, my beloved subjects. It's been so long since I've seen your precious, little sun-loving faces." The dark blue unicorn with wings said as she saw everypony frighten.

"Hey!" JD yelled to the dark blue unicorn with wings.

"And who is this?" The dark blue unicorn with wings stated.

"I've eavesdrop on Twilight's conversation with Spike, you're the mare in the moon, Nightmare Moon!" JD told the prophecy to everypony.

"You what!?" Twilight yelled at JD.

"Well well well, a human who remembers me. Then you also know why I'm here." Nightmare Moon asked JD.

"You're here to-" JD was interupted by a familiar voice.

"To shroud the world in eternal night." The familiar voice explained to everypony.

"Khaotic Villos, what are you doing here?" JD asked Khaotic Villos.

"Don't you get it, this is what I wanted all this time." Villos told JD as he flew with his mechanical wings.

"Fillies and Gentlecolts I have a important announcement for all of you." Villos explained to everypony and Nightmare Moon.

"What I have here is a power nopony possesses, behold!" Villos declared.

The black-orange crystal turned into a red-purple-yellow gauntlet.

"A Cosmolink?! wait are you a-" JD was interupted by Khaotic Villos.

"Nightmare Moon let us show these insolent fools the real power of an endless night." Khaotic Villos offered.

"JD, Devin, Red JD, Blue JD, Purple JD, remember this, these ponies will pay for my pain I've suffered!" Khaotic Villos yelled at JD, Devin, Red JD, Blue JD and Purple JD.

Nightmare Moon and Khaotic Villos laughed evilly.

"Holy shit!" Red JD was shocked.

"Whelp we're boned." Devin Deadpanned.

"Thank you, Captain Obvious." Blue JD told Devin.

To be continued...

"God damn these fucking cliffhanger endings!" Red JD curses.

End Credits Music

[Next time: Friendship is Magic Part 2 (The Spectrobe Master Awakens)]

Author's Note

In case you don't know how to pronounce Khaotik Villos' name, here it is:

Cay-ah-tick Vill-loss.

More to come soon! :)

(This is my first fanfic, so let me know in the comments if I need to improve on anything.)