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Give me back my mommy!

by MichelleTwistaloo
How does Ruby feel when the big ponies of foal protective services take away her mommy, Berry Punch? This is the story of her feelings, in first person.

In the beginning everything was perfect, or rather...well, she would say, Berry wasn't the best of moms, but they still got along pretty well, but then the foal protective services, went and took away her mom, oh no! What does Ruby (or Pinchy) feel about it? That, is in this fic, the exploration of her feelings.

First story in English, and I really need your support, I'm sure I made dozens of little mistakes, and I'd like to increase quality, help much appreciated. Thanks

Teen
Complete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Sad
 
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1179 words: Estimated 6 minutes to read

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1 2014-03-28 10:37:26 UTC
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