Loyalty of the Damned

by BronyInvestigator

Rating: mature
Tags: Human, Anthro, Romance, Comedy, Adventure
Length: 4452

A young artist finds himself in the Badlands of Equestia. But when the queen looses her subjects, he is her last ally. For he is Treue Der Verdammten.

Treue Der Verdammten finds himself in the Badlands of Equestia. Upon meeting it's queen he discovers one of life's greatest pleasures. However, the good times don't last long as the kingdom is over thrown! A war between time and space is about to unfold in this tale of sex and legends as Treue swears his loyalty to the fallen queen.

(NOT a clop fic, but there is some VERY graphic sex scenes through this story thanks to Distorted_Flame)

(Will update the cover image as the story goes on.)

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-03-29 03:20:04 UTC

Zuhörerschaft (Audience)

Chapter 1:Zuhörerschaft (Audience)

“Awaken, cretin!” The guard shouted as he purposefully kicked in in my wound. “Her majesty has granted you an audience.”

“Is that so?” I chuckled, covering the pain as best I could. “I hope you have cue cards, I didn’t get a chance to rehearse”. The guard showed no interest in my humor, but appeared to actually of been disgusted by it. As such was proven with another thrust to my gut which sent me to my knees.

“Do not take this so lightly, beast. You should feel honored that the queen was allowed you such a privilege, and so quickly at that.” His voice was rough and, like his taste in my humor, showed disgust. “ And to a monster, on top of that.” Cretin…beast…monster? I’m getting the feeling these guys didn’t like me.  I let out a groan, stretching myself to make it the cause while the I was really recovering from my injury. “Come” The guard ordered as he turned.

“Oy oy oy!” I shouted in protest. “Give me a minute.” The guard turned back, his insect-like eyes glaring at me as I brushed myself off. “If I’m going to meet the queen I can’t just waltz right in looking like this.” My current attire had be torn and battered from my journey. I was ripped of my favorite jacket since it was so durable. I could tell asking for it back would only give the guard another reason to knock me on the floor. I looked over and saw my hat on the warden’s desk and asked for it back.

I could tell the guard just wanted to use that as another excuse to knock me down. I know this because that is exactly what he did. With another swift jab to my gut I was once again on my knees, since I hadn’t recovered from the last strike, this one had more of a punch to it to the point where I vomited a bit as my hat was thrown to the ground in front of me…on top of said vomit. Seeing how things were going, I wasn’t all that surprised. Brushing the vomit off and tucking it safely onto of my filth-covered hair, the guard wasted not a second shackling me as he guided me throughout the dungeon. The sound of my chains echoed through the halls as not a sound was made to challenge it.

“Wait here” The guard ordered as we finally approached a pair of very, very large, heavy doors. I gave the guard a salute, as if I was working with him rather then being his prisoner and and having the ever loving shit beaten out of me for the past week.

The guard opened the door with ease as it closed behind him, slamming loudly as it echoed throughout the entire structure. The wait wasn’t too long. Within a  minute or two the door creaked back open and the guard, as usual, knocked me as roughly as he could inside before slamming the door.

“Was that really necessary?” I coughed as I kneeled on the ground, holding back any urge to vomit.

“So, you are the creature my guards have reported to me about?” A voice asked me.

“Creature, huh?” I chuckled as my coughing fit died down and I could breath normally. “Well, at least somebody here has so~o~o~o~o~oh my”I was caught off guard at the being in front of me. Unlike the guard or any of those creatures who had insect-like forms, the queen was different. She had more of a human shape. And my god what a shape it was. Her skin was a solid, ink black, but here hair and eyes were various shades of luminous greens with a few tints of yellows at the end. Despite crouching, I could tell she was a good few feet taller then I was. And much, much bigger in other was as well. “Day-um” was what came out of my mouth as I could tell this women(?) had one hell of an ass.

It took me a while to figure out that she was wearing a dress that matched her skin perfectly, and was tightened to the point that I figured it would rip in two by her inhuman bust if she so much as breathed too deeply. Despite her sexual apparel, I had a feeling she didn’t invite me here just to get a little kinky as the next thing that smashed in my face was a good amount of steel flattened into a sharp blade.

“Tell me, what are you looking for?” The queen ordered.

“Well, the thing is: I was in the sudden mood for a puppy so I have been looking EVERywhere for someplace that raises Scotties.” I lied in a feverish attempted to lighten the mood. “they are just so freaking adorable with there little legs and those huge mustaches. You know, I wonder if they-“ I was cut off by the queens anger as she impaled her foot into my already-abused gut, blowing me back and forcing me against the door. Hitting it with enough force to actually damage the hinges. My coughing fit returned and this time, I had no luck suppressing the urge to vomit. Unlike last time, I coughed up everything I’ve had since breakfast a week ago. The queen wasted no time picking me up and fully pinning me against the wall.

“Do not test me, cretin!” She shouted as she held her sword up against my throat. “One does not simply walk into the Bad Lands!” I chuckled to myself, quieting it as much as possible as she made that reference. Judging by what happened, she probably wouldn’t understand my laughter and would of just slit my throat had I not stifled it. I allowed the meme reference to slide as I swallowed my chuckles to go unheard. However, something else arose in my head that allowed a new chuckle to rise, one I didn’t even both to cover. “ What is it you find so humorous, creature?!” She demanded to know, pushing the blade ever closer to the point blood slowly dribbled.

“I’m sorry.” I replied, my voice a bit shaky from forcing my head so far up. “But I can’t really answer any of your questions until I at least know who it is I am speaking to.”

“Are you saying you don’t know who I am!?” The queen asked in a voice that shook the everything in the hall to the point where I thought the next thing I would hear would of been the falling of glass.

“No freak’n clue” I chuckled again.

“Don’t you dare lie to me, creature!”

“I can never lie” I replied as I lowered my head, the retraction of skin pushed up against the sharpness of the blade and drew slightly more blood as I slide the back of my bandaged right hand down her face. “Especially not to a creature with such beautiful eyes.”

My action appeared to amuse the queen. “Have you become so afraid you have stooped to a petty excuse of seduction?”

“I believe that is called ‘flirting’, but if you want” I chuckled as I cupped her chin and slightly pulled her in. “I could kick it up a notch.” My eye had narrowed as I suddenly felt dazed during that reply. I simply stared into the queens’ beautiful, luminous eyes as she stared back into mine. The warm of our breath flew back and forth, and to say her scent was enticing would be such an understatement. It fell more towards hypnotic as my daze grew and grew. My eye began to narrow more and more until it shut completely as we started to move closer to one another. Inches vanished as our lips were simply centimeters away from one other.

That’s when I saw it. That damn figure, the chains, the blood. My eye in his grasp as the trance was broken. Out of panic I had shoved the queen back, throwing her to the floor as sweat coated my being. My chest constricted at what I had seen. I gasped for breath as I lead back against the door, using it as a prop to gently slide to the ground. The bandage around my eye ached and pounded as I gripped it with my arm that had suffered a similar fate.

The queen, obviously angry with my sudden action, was quick to raise and draw her blade once more. Grabbing me by the throat she pinned to the door as she readied her blade. She cursed me for what I had just done and asked if i had any last words. She froze as I looked up, my vision was blurred and shaded with tints of red as I looked at my bandaged hand which was now dyed the same hue. My eyes filled with a mixture of tears and blood as I looked up at the queen and held onto the arm that she used to pin me to the door.

“Help me” Was all I could muster before my vision faded to red and then finally to black. My body grew cold as I collapsed. Somebody…anybody…please, help me…save me from what I had seen. Save me from the chained beast I have forever feared.

The creature collapsed in my grip, bloody tears fell from its face as he had pleaded for my aid. I don’t know why, but the creature’s cry was so unnatural. But then again this wasn’t exactly a natural creature to begin with. First it talks down to me with such obvious lies, then it tries to seduce me and then it pleads for my help? I released my grip as the creature fell to the ground, motionless as its once bloody tears faded into clear ones…or at least only one of them did.

Around its right eye was bandaged, stained red as blood continued to leak. I knew nothing of this creature but one thing: for a second, when our lips met ever so gently, I could taste it. It was but a light taste, but nothing in my entire life has ever measured up to it. I shook my head profusely, why did it matter? This creature was a threat to my minions. Or at least I believe it is.

My guards carried the creature to my chambers, for which I ordered them not to disturb as I closed the gates behind me. The creature had been placed gently upon my bed as he rested. I sat next to it, waiting for it to awake. I kept telling myself it was to make sure it didn’t try to escape. But my mind kept flashing back; that taste, of which still lingered slightly on my lips, was something beyond explanation. It was driving me mad. I had to get the taste out and ordered my guard to bring me something to drink.

As I sipped, I continued to examine the creature. Its breathing had settled down and it looked at peace. I jumped as it suddenly start to shift around the bed, believing it to finally of awoken only to be answered by a loud snoring. My head fell in disappointment as i grazed over its body. Although it was slender in weight, it definitely had slight muscular tone as its’ tight shirt showed an outline of its chest. Its’ arm’s, although one being bandaged, had been toned slightly themselves. I continued to examine the creature, but began to grow annoyed at referring to it as ‘it’ and decided to settle it once and for all. Crawling onto the bed I sat on it’s legs and carefully began to undo its’ belt. Suddenly, something rather hard bulged out from its crotch.

“Well, at least I know your a male.” I sighed to myself, as I glanced down on the bulge, slightly resting my hand on top of it. I slowly traced the direct as I slide my hand down it’s….his leg. Further…and further…and furth-by the gates of Tartaraus how big was he!?! As my hand went down, I couldn’t help but imagine the size of it, in my head actually expanding as I was now down to his kneed when I felt something…something cold?

Throwing off his pants I was rather…disappointed to find what I had been feeling wasn’t all of him, but rather a strange, silver object that had be strapped to his thigh. It must of shifted when he was spreading himself out. Although, I guess it wasn’t entirely false. Even with his odd undergarment I could see something rather large bulging from its crotch.

Something began to grow inside of me. A warmth, spreading throughout my body. Every…last…inch of it. The taste from before was back, and now I knew: I was craving it. I needed the full course. He began to twitch again, may haps he was starting to undergo a nightmare of some sort? I leaned in closer, but nearly jumped as his hand reached out, latching onto my right breast. Upon a few squeezes I couldn’t help by moan with lust. I had no control over my body for what I did next.

I began to regain consciousness, although i don’t know how long I was wondering. I looked back, only to see that same damn creature still the same distance away from me: which is always too close.

“How long are you going to haunt me!” I shouted at it, yet he gave no reply. “You took my arm, and my eye and turned me into….that thing! Why!?”

He didn’t reply, but rather finally began to walk forward, slowly. I suddenly froze, images of what happened prior darting back to me. I tried to run, but despite my efforts I was stuck in the same spot as before, as the sound of clashing chains grew closer and closer. Finally, I felt a grip on my shoulder, causing ice to run through my veins. What would I lose this time? My other eye? My Leg? I wasn’t freaking Edward Elric! I had to know, why had he taken them from me? Not just my limbs, but my humanity.

As I turned to face him, I readied myself. If I got the first strike I may at least be able to throw him off. I spun myself, preparing to grab him by the throat…but ending up grabbing something…soft.

There was nobody in front of me, yet I could still feel something, something warm. The chained man, now close enough to where I could feel his breath on my neck made me freeze.

“I am what you refuse.” Was all he said, his voice low and raspy as I felt something dart into my mouth.

My eye slowly opened to a sight I never thought I’d see…I was being kissed. Her rather alien tongue rolled inside my mouth, conquering it with ease. It slid, making sure to lick up every last spot inside. After a few minutes, her eyes slowly opened as she notice I was awake. Slowly pulling back, allowing a sting of saliva to trickle down her chin as she delicately wiped her lips. Her luminous eyes captured my attention once again gently twinkling in the torch light.

“My, my who is your little friend” She giggled her voice suggestive as I gasped. Her lithe hand teased my harden member as I shivered with anticipation. I feel my back arch as she gently drops to her knees her chest bare as she gives me a sultry wink. Her tongue cruelly teases me, lightly suckling as I shook my body lust filled as I desire for her to follow through with her teasing. Pulling away, she pushed her chest out lightly rubbing against me as I groan my head pounding as my body screams for her.

“Oh does my pet want a reward? Well maybe if he begs I will consider it!” She purrs sending me a toothy grin.

“p,please” I gasp her hands squeezing her cleavage as my member is wrapped in her warm fur. Leaning up her breath tickles my chin as I feel my body shiver.

“What was that? You will need to speak up” she coo’s the pressure around my member lessening as I give a cry of despair

“Please” I croaked trying to move as she quickly pinned me with her hands.

“Louder” she hissed returning to her previous position.

“PLEASE” I cried, a wicked smile appearing on her muzzle as she smirked in triumph

“Very well then” she giggled. Her lips gently kissed my arousal smirking in triumph as I lay powerless. Gently bobbing I felt her alien tongue being put to full use as she her breasts moved in synch with her head. My hands clenched the bed sheets tightly as the warmth of her mouth and breasts put me in ecstasy. My hands roughly grabbed the back of her head a surprised muffled yelp escaping from her as I forced her forward bucking my hips as she gagged.

Her eyes widened as I frantically jerk forward pressure building as I in one final act pushed fully in crying in relief as she gagged. Sweat trickled down my forehead as the pissed creature growled at me lunging forward as she violently bit my ear grinning as I yelped in pain and surprise.

Growling my hand smartly smacked against her rear, squeezing as she lightly moaned. Chirruping she gave me a sultry smile as she pusher herself up straddling me as her hands came to rest on my shoulder.

“How naughty of you disobeying your queen” she growled flashing her teeth threateningly as I felt a sliver of fear run though me at her display. Shaking it off I gave her a mischievous wink as my hands caressed her rear. Moaning I moved forward playfully nipping and nibbling at her neck as she shuddered her wings fluttering as she leaned into my touch. Her tail lightly brushed against me as I gasped at her tactics.

Grunting I pushed forward the surprised creature yelping as I pinned her taking in her vulnerable form as she shyly looked away. I allowed my lips to explore her body kissing and tasting her as she bit her hand trying to halt the small squeaks and moans that escaped from her aroused form.

“I could have you beheaded for thi- ahhh” she stopped cut off as my lips wrapping around one of her breasts as she shuddered. I allowed my tongue to tease the needy, lustful creature. Her cries of delight only spurring me on as I lined myself with her, her eyes meeting mine as she gave a weak nod. I lightly rubbed against her sex her hands tried to  greedily lure me in as I teasingly denied her always pulling away at the last second as she would desperately try to grab for me.

“Stop… please” she whispered her face red as I gave a mocking bowed my head.

“If the lady insists” I chuckled, the tables having rapidly turned as I now held power over her. With a gently prod I slowly slipped inside of her, gasping as her hands grabbed my back pulling me towards her. I grunted as I felt the sharp sting of her nails digging into my vulnerable flesh as she hissed in pleasure slamming her lips against mine as her tongue tearing past my teeth eager to re-explore my mouth.

The two of us moved in perfect synch meeting each other half way as the meaty slap sent renewed waves of pleasure though my body. The being gave muffled whimpers as I felt her teeth clench cutting into my tongue as I winced. I felt the familiar warmth as I came near to my peak the creature bellow me screaming in pleasure as she finished quickly followed by me as the two of us collapsed panting heavily as she gave me a small kiss on the nose.

“Not… bad” she panted her checks flushed as I gave her a small grin.

“You didn’t do too bad yourself” I laughed sluggishly moving as I gently flipped the surprised creature over. Flashing the confused women a quick smile I lined myself up with her rear as she struggled beneath me.

“What are you doi- AHH” she cried as I made pushed forward pain encasing me as she clenched. Grabbing her breasts I aggressively bit down on her neck keeping her pinned as her pained groans slowly changed to that of pleasure.

Her rear jiggled with every thrust causing me to groan as I pull backwards bringing the larger being into my lap as she bounces gaining momentum as I burry my face into the nape of her neck.

I don’t last as long as last time as I feel myself explode my body shivering as the being above me gives a strangled cry. Panting I shakily pull myself free lying down as the being lies next to me.

The two of us lied there; naked, exhausted, and extremely satisfied. The creature wrapped around me, her arms pulling me closer as she cooed, not in the same lustful way as before, but in a much more relaxed way. I wrapped my arms around her and completed the embrace. The warmth of her body, the scent she had on her, it put me at ease. For a while, the sound of clashing chains was voided in my head. Minutes past, and, like always, reality reared it’s ugly head.

“Wait a minute…what the hell did I just do?!” I thought to myself in a quick panic. I felt myself being pulled closer, looking down to find the creature had burrowed its head into my chest. Although I didn’t feel any tears, I could tell she was as confused as me. This frankly relaxed me a bit. Whatever she was, she wasn’t human, but at least I now knew that she was human enough. I pulled her closer, my hand gently stroking her silky hair to comfort her. “So, do you have a name?” I finally asked.

There was a silent, which every second of it made my stomach drop. My usual thoughts of pessimism began to flood my mind as always. Finally, after letting out a shaky exhale to calm herself, she answered.

“Chrysalis.” She replied. “Queen Chrysalis, of the Bad Land Changelings.”

“Chrysalis, huh?” I replied. “Such a beautiful name.”

“And what of you, creature?”

I paused for a moment, pondering on how I should answer. She knew not of my race, despite our similarities. I chose not to over think it as to not cause her majesty any anxiety.

“Treue”. I finally answered.” Treue Der Verdammten, of the American Humans.”

“American Humans?” Chrysalis asked. “I have never heard of them.”

“In a sense, I guess you could say I’m a bit of a foreigner.” I laughed, having already taken the possibility into consideration. After spending a week in the dungeon, I had starting thinking of every possibility of what was happening, no matter how impossible they may of been.  Yet, despite all of that time I had spent, nothing came even close to what happened next.

The heavy doors swung opened as guards of what I believed to be fellow Changelings stormed in, surrounding the Chrysalis and myself with there spears locked onto us. Within seconds we were surrounded

“Guards! What is the meaning of this!?” Chrysalis demanded as she held up the sheet to cover herself as she stood. The guards moved in no way, frozen with there spears still locked on. “Answer me guards!” She roared again, but to no avail.

Beneath my bandaged sight, a horrific image had flashed in and out within half a seconds time. The sight triggered something in my body as I jumped out of the bed and tackled Chrysalis to the floor, the blade of one of the guards spears now stabbed only the air in which had filled the spot where Chrysalis once stood. A sly chuckle filled the air as a few of the guards stood aside to allow the owner to enter.

“I’m afraid these aren’t you guards any more.” Laughed the owner as she entered. Her body, like Chrysalis’s, was large, but shaped perfectly. Yet she was very different. The aura she was giving off was the most unnatural thing I have ever felt as the area around her actually appeared to have been being pulled in. I don’t know how, but I knew what she was. Unlike Chrysalis, who’s body had a beautiful shine to it, this abomination casts no shadow. There was no hues, no tints, no shading in anyway. It was as if color avoided her. No, it was more like not even light could reach her. Whatever she was, her mere presents had frozen both Chrysalis and myself in fear. I slowly reached across form me and picked up my once discarded hat, never once taking my eyes off the freak as I slowly slide it across my body before placing it gently on my head.

I stood, despite how weak my legs were from what had happened and what was happening now.

“So” I finally replied, trying to stabilize my voice as much as possible in her lack of ‘presents’. “To whom do we owe this honor to?”I chuckled.

She simply chuckled as she approached me. As she grew closer I could feel the chill worsening. Not only was I mentally frozen with fear but as such came within inches of me she quietly whispered to me.

“I have no use for you, human.” She chuckled as she lightly tapped my chest, I was left breathless…literally. The air that I had held in for so long from fear was suddenly sucked out. I grabbed my throat and fell to my knees as I gasped for breath. My veins began to swell as my body tried hard to keep pumping my blood. My vision began to blur as I felt my lungs expand. It wasn’t long until my body finally gave out. My gasps turned to gags as my eyes started to bulge out as my skin contracted from the force. I reached over to Chrysalis, my hand shaking heavily and without a chance to stabilize. Finally, my lungs gave out. The loud echo of them rupturing deafened my ears, yet didn’t appear to phase anybody else. I drooled uncontrollably as my sight finally left me. I don’t want to die. I don’t want to leave her alone…with that thing. That was my last thought before my vision faded to nothing by white.