A true Redemption

Chapters

Unfair Judgement
Tears and questions
Interuptions 1/4: First inspection
Interuptions 2/4:Race against the moon
Interuptions 3/4: A show of force
Interruptions 4/4:The "Royal treatment"(Part one)

Unfair Judgement

Luna strode through the streets of Canterlot, Browsing any interesting shops that she might find. She had finally had a chance to take leave from her royal duties to just relax, but all was not well, the citizens of Canterlot could be heard mumbling to themselves as Luna passed them, Each wearing a nasty look on their face if she attempted eye contact. It had come to be expected, she knew it would take time for her to gain the trust of all of Equestria. By this time no less then three shops had randomly closed for the day, two others outright refused service saying that she was "Frightening all the customers" no matter how empty the shop may be. She sighed, it was not like her to take such things so personally but it was hard to ignore overhearing "There is that demon again, Perhaps we should go indoors". Still she kept her head up, she was aware that the people of Canterlot are inherently judgmental.

The princess of the moon wandered into Pony Joes Donut shop,on of the very few places that let her in without hesitation. Luna approached pony Joe at the front counter and took a seat looking around idly,enjoying the simple layout of the small donut shop.

"We would like a blueberry-jelly filled donut please" Luna said pointing to a blue frosted donut that even had small amounts of the jelly leaking out. Pony Joe gave her a smile sliding her a plate of three donuts.

"They're on the house today Princess, You look a little troubled, anything you wanna talk about?" Said the nice hearted shop owner. He had seen her a few times and today he could tell that she was bugged about something.

"We...would rather not discuss it...But we thank you for asking...'Tis a long week so far, it is good to be asked how we are." Luna finished taking a bite of the donut, looking about at the not-so-busy shop. Although this was possibly her favorite place in Canterlot, she simply wished a few of the other shopkeepers would at least be courteous enough to let her browse.

Looking down Luna noticed she was already halfway through her second donut, she blushed slightly having zoned out for a few moments. She finished her Donut, starting on her third with a weak smile. There was so much fun to be ad if the citizens would only give her a chance. She took her final bite of the donut, slid the plate forward and left 5 bits saying "We thank you very much Joe, We found them to be as delicious as always." leaving before he could object to the tip.

Thinking over anything she might need she walked into a jewelry store, the Owner of which glared at er as if she had been struck with the plague. Shrinking under the glare a bit she browsed the wares spotting a particularly nice Topaz encrusted horn ornament. Before she could get in line somepony jumped in front of her to ask about the same piece.

"That there is 500 Bits." the clerk said with a small grin, the pony in line quickly reconsidered and stepped out of Lunas way looking a bit intimidated. Luna pointed at the "Hornament" asking to confirm the price she just heard.

Giving Luna a look that would kill a cockatrice the shopkeeper said "For you that would be 1500 Bits" the tone in the shopkeepers voice was almost a challenge. However Luna had only brought about 1000 Bits with her as she had not expected to buy anything so nice.

"We are very sure thou told the one in line before us that the price was 500." Luna did not want to sound argumentative but given the situation she could forgive herself for taking an angry tone. The jewelry would be a perfect gift for Celestia.

"1500 final, either pay up or get out of my shop princess " The shopkeeper finished with obvious venom in her voice. Luna being taken slightly aback could think of nothing else to do but walk back to the palace, disappointed.

Hanging her head low and sniffling lightly she made her way back to the royal grounds, Trying to keep her eyes from watering, which proved a hard task indeed. She avoided all eye contact, all she wanted was to lock herself away. She was a princess who was quite rudely sent away from a rather well respected shop. Princesses weren't to be treated like that, even common thieves have been shown more respect. Did her subjects think of her as less than a common thief?

Luna had spent the rest of the day in her room, crying quietly to herself. She had ordered all her guards to meaningless tasks to keep them away. This was the first time in quite awhile she had ever felt this terrible about herself. Breaking into another fit of sobbing she spoke to herself "w-why...Are our subjects s-so cruel...Are we not a good princess since we have returned?" her sobbing was quiet but the pain in her words was magnified in her mind.

*Knock Knock*

Luna ignored the knock to her door, simply sniffling as the sobs subsided.

*Knock Knock Knock*

Again Refusing to Acknowledge it she buried her face into her pillow.

"Sister? Luna? Are you well? You have not left your room since you returned from town." Came Celestias Voice.

A short sigh from Luna, Perhaps she should tell her elder sister what transpired... Or how she felt like she had been treated as trash since her return? Or even that she wished there was a way to gain respect? Now was as good of a time as any to Talk about it she supposed.

"C-come in Sister." was all luna could choke back as she fought back the last wave of sobs...

Author note: This is my Very first Luna fic, Please rate,comment and track...I truly hope I can do her character justice :)

Tears and questions

Luna looked up as Celestia entered, her eyes still watering as she watched her drawn nearer.

"A-are we a failure as a princess, Celestia? Are we bad to our subjects? We cannot bare it any longer."Luna said, fighting back her tears to keep her words coherent. Celestias eyes widened taken aback by her younger sisters questions.

"Of course not dear sister, You have taken over your royal duties, and have been nothing but kind to the citizens of Equestria. What could have put these thoughts in your head sister?" Celestia said, truly worried as she had never seen Luna so emotional.

"W-w-we were...told to leave several shops today s-so we would n-not scare away customers...a-another shopkeeper demanded that We pay triple the bits for a Horn ornament We were going to buy..." came Lunas voice, still shaky as she wiped her eyes on a dark blue pillow before continuing "We don't know what to do, we are unloved by all our Citizens. Must we put up with this hate for eternity?" She finished looking up at Celestia with sad eyes.

Celestia thought to herself, She knew Luna was sorry for what happened a thousand years ago,and that her banishment had made her lonely. It infuriated her to hear how the citizens mistreated her. picking her words carefully Celestia spoke up saying "My dear sister, You must not dwell on how a few citizens feel, they are simply adjusting, just as you are." Celestia sat next to luna on her bed and nudged her saying "Try not to let it get to you. Just think of something you can do that will show equestria the real you."Smiling down on her younger sister she gave her another nudge.

Luna blinked away a few more tears before saying "We just want the love they show you...or...even tolerance...b-but..." before she could get another word out she broke out sobbing again and spoke in between sobs "w-we ask t-that thou...leave u-us alone...'Tis too painful to discuss..." she buried her face back into her pillow, Hiding her face from Celestia, as if to hide herself from equestria,from all the hate.

Celestia gave an understanding nod and stepped over to the door saying "Given your state, I am going to let you have a rest from raising the moon tonight...try to cheer up dear sister...Perhaps you will meet more sociable ponies at the gala, it is only a few months away." she finished and stepped out, not able to bare the sound of her sisters crying any longer. Perhaps crying is what she needs to do, just to let it out. closing the door quietly She turned to a guard saying "If she needs anything please be right there for her, Luna has had a hard time today." she spoke in almost a whisper but the guard gave a nod.

After a few more minutes, Luna finally managed to calm herself down. She was starting to feel lonely, a few stuffed animals from her childhood was simply not enough. The sun had not set, there were still a few more hours of daylight.

"It is only a few more months away..." Luna murmured to herself, thinking over the words.

She hopped off her bed saying again to herself "It's only a few more months away" Luna went quickly to the bathroom to wash her face, saying the same words in her head over and over. She quickly ran out of her room in search of Celestia.
She was not in the throne room however,nor her own, or even the dinning room. Luna took a glance out the window to the courtyard where the guards ponies usually trained, Celestia was there watching them. well, it was now or never, luna bolted through the halls before reaching the door to the courtyard. Taking a deep breath she stepped through, to see Celestia Idly watching them.

"Sister? We have a question to ask thou..." Luna said trying to keep her voice steady. she sat down next to her sister quickly and breathed deeply again.

"What is it Luna? you never have to be afraid to ask me anything."Celestia said with a gentle smile.

now or never...now or never...Now.Luna exhaled gently before speaking, saying "We ask that thou let us Plan the Grand Galloping Gala this year so we..." she started but Celestia interrupted.

"No, I am very sorry sister but the gala is already completely planned out."Celestia Did not mean to be rude, but it was simply a fact, re-planning it would cause too much stress on both of them.

Luna lowered her head quietly. Unsure now of what to say.

"However Luna, I am aware that you are well suited to planning such an event an had planned on asking earlier but you were too upset, During the winter Solstice you may throw your own Ball,dance,feast or whatever you wish. You would just have to start planning it now, and if it is popular enough, we shall hold one every year to Honor you" Celestia smile as she seen her sisters face go quickly from depressed to ecstatic.

"We cannot thank you enough sister! we Assure thou that it shall be successful!"Luna leaned in to hug Celestia overjoyed now. Almost all eyes were on Luna now, she hadn't quite yelled it, but it was loud enough to draw the attention of everypony in the direct vicinity. Blushing Luna trotted off to her room, as she had planning to do.

A few of the Guards kept their gaze on luna as she left, All blushing and looking around Innocently when Celestia Cleared her Throat with a short grin.

"If you all enjoy the view so much I suggest asking her to be your date to the Gala" She said widening her smirk, her suggestion had brought a blush to all of them.

Luna lay in her bed minutes later,nuzzling against her tear stained pillow, millions of Ideas flew through her head for what she could do. and before she could complete any of her thoughts she felt her eyelids growing heavy, and fell asleep.

Interuptions 1/4: First inspection

Luna could not help but giggle to herself, she had so many Ideas running through her head and barely half took up two pages. She continued her writing for a minute then came a knock at the door.

*Knock*

"Princess luna, there is a message for you!" Came the voice of a guard pony.

Stepping over to open the door she smiled at the young guard taking from him an envelope with with a green seal saying to him before retreating back to her desk "We thank you very much, You are dismissed." her voice was light and cheerful as she dismissed him. She looked again at the seal as it seemed familiar, she opened the envelope to take a look at the letter inside.

Princess Luna

This letter is to remind you that today you and your sister have an appointment

For a dress fitting At Glenna Gleams Gowns this afternoon at 4:30, We would would

very much appreciate it if both your majesty and Princess Celestia were to arrive in

a punctual manner. Keep in mind since these dresses will be for the Grand Galloping

Gala that it is important we get the fitting done as soon as possible. We thank you for

choosing Glenna Gleams to do your fitting and we hope to see you soon.

Best regards,

Glenna Gleam

Luna set the letter down a little upset, she had so much she had wanted to get on paper and had completely forgotten the dress fitting. Sighing slightly she jotted down a few more of her ideas, it was only around 10 so she had plenty of time, but she had many other things she had to attend to. Putting her smile back in place she trotted into her restroom to take a relaxing shower. Adjusting the water to the perfect temperature she climbed in, embracing the heated water as it coursed over her mane,neck,and flank.

It wasn't every day the Princess actually had time to enjoy her shower, and seeing as nopony else was around she started to sing cheerfully. Gently washing her coat and mane she continued, It was a song she had thought of long ago,of course she was the only one that knew it, and its lyrics were quite simple, still she preferred to keep the song to herself, it was a small piece of her that reminded her of when the kingdom was young. Rinsing her mane and applying her conditioner she came to the end of the song, humming gently as she mulled over her daily schedule.

After drying off with the help of her magic,she trotted back out to her room feeling clean and fresh. gently levitating her crown on she left, bound for the training field as this month it was her turn to run Inspections. Although usually the inspection is a quick look over, she thought today she would surprise the guards a bit. Stepping out into the courtyard that leads to the training field she smiled, letting the fresh air fill her lungs.

When she reached the training field to see the armor clad stallions divided into groups, Unicorns, Pegasi, and earth ponies. Walking over to the drill Sergeant , who clearly was lost in the orders he was giving she cleared her throat.

"Yeah, yeah in a minute..." Came his voice.

Clearing her throat again she gave his armor a light prod, some of the guards eyed her as they realized the drill Sergeant was basically ignoring her.

"I said in a minute!"Came his voice again as he turned around, quickly realizing his mistake.

"O-oh P-princess Luna...H-here for inspections I presume?" His voice was shaky for another moment before he gained his composure.

"Yes sir, we would appreciate if you would divide the troops into small groups,we have a separate tests for Unicorns, Pegasi, And earth ponies" Luna said, giggling a bit in her head to his reaction.

"You heard the lady! Unicorns Over to the left field! Pegasi to the middle and earth Ponies to the right, Go Go Go!" said the Drill Sergeant his voicing booming outward.

Looking over each group she started with the unicorns, who evidently were practicing archery as a quiver was on each of their saddles. Smiling she began to speak.

"Today we have prepared a special test, and it would seem you Unicorns have all you need " She said indicating one of the quivers filled with arrows. Levitating some small stones,one for each unicorn, she sent them high into the air.

"Each of you have but one shot, We have enchanted the stone so that any arrows that might hit will stick in place. We wish you the best of luck" Said Luna, Projecting her voice outward. Without any further delay the arrows were drawn and they took aim, Luna gave a nod to indicate they may fire at will. All of them fired, sending a hail of arrows towards the stones, all but one,who took an extra minute before firing the Only shot that actually hit a stone. Luna gave the one successful archer a nod.

"See here! Only one among you actually hit a target"Turning to the successful Unicorn Luna asked "We ask that you tell us your name and rank sir" She gave him a small smile waiting for his answer.

Standing at attention he said "Private Gale Peirce Ma'am!"

Smiling gently Luna said "At ease, You are dismissed for the day sir, good job." now turning to the rest of the unicorns she said in her same kind voice

"We urge all of you to practice hard, Good day." She gave them all a nod, seeing that The Unicorn she just dismissed was still shooting at a straw target.

"We must not have been clear, we dismiss you from training until tomorrow." She was curious as to why he was still there.

He unstrung his bow and forced a smile "If you insist princess" and trotted off, avoiding the gave of the drill Sergeant who was confused.

Luna looked over to the next group, the pegasi and sighed contently to herself "What a day this will be"

Authors note: This is the first of 4 "Interruptions" Chapters,so...Be patient XD

Interuptions 2/4:Race against the moon

Luna looked over to the next group, A mass of Pegasi in a somewhat lighter version of the normal guard armor, obviously designed for speed, which gave her a brilliant idea. Calling upon her magic she formed 100 wisps of clouds which she sent around the castle, each one forming a small ring. Smiling she turned to address the battalion of young stallions.

"We have decided that the best way to test you would be a race"She said, pausing for effect with a grin, "Against your comrades and I. If any among you are able to best us in a race around the palace, Then you will be relieved from training until tomorrow, Are we clear?" she finished, already seeing the perked wings of several among them, she stepped over to join their ranks, flaring her wings with a wider grin

"Drill Sergeant? we shall commence the race on thous count." Came her voice, calmer then her expression as she readied herself.

"Wha...Alright then!Are you all Ready?" Came his booming voice, continuing before there was any response.

"ONE!" he shouted, all of them, Luna included focused on the first wispy ring.

"TWO!" he boomed louder, each pegasi flaring their wings as Luna did.

The drill Sergeant smirked, giving a small delay "THREE, OFF YOU GO!" before he could finish there was a loud "Woosh" above him as they all took off.

Luna had captured the first ring, and the second, and the third, and yet another. She was neck and neck with a Lavender coated stallion. Smirking the lavender pegasi pulled forward, leaving Luna just behind his tail. He could not believe it, he a simple guard had...WOOSH! She ruched past him, capturing 5 more rings before he could catch up to her. Only a few others had managed to get close, about five others,all of which were about 10 yards behind their lavender comrade.

Luna started to feel a steady ache in her wings, it had been long since she had ever employed such speed, the lavender pegasi was gaining quickly, now pulling up next to her, and past her. He had managed to capture 10 rings before she could force herself forward. Whats this? she thought to herself, forcing past him yet again We are the moon! her muscles howled at her as the last 6 rings came into view. Pulling up again the lavender pegasi passed her capturing the next two, then two to her, Just a bit faster she thought,she captured the next ring, last one, just a little... WOOSH! The lavender pegasi rushed past her,capturing the final ring for the win. How could he?,she thought...But slowing down she glided to the ground along with all the others, wings sore, lungs aching as she looked up at the victor.

He was nothing remarkable, he had a smaller build then most of the others, but his wings were strong, as if he flew with boulders daily. Standing at attention as she approached he saluted her.

"At ease...Tell us...What is thous name and rank?" she kept her voice steady, betraying her exhaustion.

"Uh...Um." He started, clearly shocked he won, "M-my name Is Dusk, Ma'am, Dusk StarGlow. Entry level Recruit!" He hastened up at the end trying to control his nerves.

"Hmmm. Thou is only at entry level? Well, We congratulate you Dusk, As you have done what no other could, You have emerged victorious from a race with The moon princess, we hope that you enjoy your newfound free time." She finished smiling having finally caught her breath.

"Now just hold on a minute! You can't let this maggot have the day off! This is day one for him!" Came the booming voice of the Drill sergeant.

Turning with a glare to him Luna Boomed with her own voice "This Stallion here beat every one of his comrades, And I in a race, and you DARE raise thy voice to us? WE are the princess of the moon, WE can give what orders we wish WHEN we wish them!" The force of her voice caused his hooves to dig into the ground, he stood still not speaking.

Luna turned to Dusk with a small smile "You are dismissed recruit." her voice was as soft as a cloud compared to the scolding she gave the Drill sergeant .

Saluting and smiling nervously, the pegasi dismounted toward the barracks. Leaving luna to turn towards the next group, ignoring the stunned Drill sergeant.

Authors note: Sorry it took awhile, updating as soon as possible, enjoy, and be happy, I shall be proof reading my chapters these next few weeks and editing what I can.

Interuptions 3/4: A show of force

Turning finally to the earth ponies she smiled, one last test and she will be off to other duties. She thought to herself, A decent test for earth ponies would likely be one of strength, she knew the training field must have something to test that...

"Drill sergeant? is there anything we could use to test how hard these stallions can hit something?" she said to the still frozen in fright drill sergeant.

"Hu? wha? oh um...Ahem, yes I-I will go get it ma'am!" he said snapping out of it as Luna trotted over to the earth ponies. rushing off the the barracks he disappeared.

Looking to the group of stallions in front of her she spoke up "We ask that all of you remove your armor for the test" She said, noting the confused looks she added "So that it does not hinder any results that is." she watched as they removed their armor, all at relatively the same speed. There were however, a few that did not seem too eager, shy even. Tapping her hoof patiently she looked back over to the barracks. Just as she turned she seen the drill sergeant hauling a post with a bullseye and a scale of sorts on it.

"H-here it is...this baby is the best reader we have...just...hit and read..." Came the drill sergeants exhausted words.

Looking back over to the troops she smiled "Form a line, each of you get one strike and nothing more so make it count, we will dismiss whoever has the strongest strike" She smiled as they obeyed, at least somepony would listen to her.

It did not take long for each of them to go, their mark was measured and listed next to their name she thought it was one of the easier tests she gave. Reviewing the list she was shocked to see one number that was double the highest of the others, seeing this she called out.

"Private 3rd class, Silver Gleam, Please step forward!"Came her voice, still rather shocked at the high reading.

Quietly stepping towards her came a silver coated, blue maned stallion, he had a slightly smaller build then some of the others but remarkable tone to his muscles.

"Private 3rd class, Silver Gleam at your service m'lady" Came his voice,steady, but somewhat reluctantly.

"You have shown remarkable strength Mr.Gleam...infact your reading was double that of the highest. We congratulate thou and hope you enjoy your day off."She said turning to the drill sergeant who was grinding his teeth.

"They can't get better if they are relieved from training Princess" Came his obviously annoyed voice

"Well the three I relieved showed beyond remarkable ability and seeing as I am the princess, they are required to obey our orders over thous." she said, walking away leaving them all to their training with a sigh. Then something clicked in the back of her mind and she said aloud "Mr. Silver Gleam, Come here if you will." her voice was curious.

Stepping over to her he started to salute before she could wave him off "We have...a strange question if thou does not mind..." she didn't know exactly how to say it. He simply smiled saying "I will answer to the best of my ability."

Looking at him she began to speak "W-would thou happen to be related to Glenna Gleam?"Came her voice, staying at average tone.

Nodding the stallion smiled "Yes, I am her son. I know there is not much resemblance but that is because I take after my father." he said, seemingly happy to relay the information. Luna nodded giving another short smile "Thank you, dismissed" She said briskly walking towards the palace. Now that she had some free time she could go back to her event planning, even if it was only a small amount of time she had to make it count.

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An hour later Luna had finally gotten all her ideas down on parchment. Now if she could just get to the actual planning.

*Knock*

Oh not again she thought, laying her quill down.

"Come in" she said unenthusiastically.

The door opened to the smiling face of Celestia, who spoke up as she entered "How are you dear sister?" she said seeing the annoyed look on her face.

Sighing Luna began to speak "The fitting, the inspection, We are holding court later...We wish there was more time to plan everything..." she sounded depressed as she spoke.

"Well there is some time before we must go for the fitting, would you like to go to the spa with me?" Came Celestias infectiously joyous voice.

Luna thought for a moment but nodded "We guess it would help us think better if we relax" She said forcing a smile.

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Author note: This next chapter I will take a stab at comic relief...wish me luck

Interruptions 4/4:The "Royal treatment"(Part one)

Luna and Celestia Made their way to the Canterlot spa, one of the best in Equestria, Celestia hoping Luna can manage to relax. as they strode through the bustling city Celestia was greeted with bowing and praise while Luna was met with awkward stares. Celestia noticed this and took a mental note to address Luna later about it, perhaps she had not been exaggerating how other ponies felt about her after all.

The spa in Canterlot is called the Gilded Cloud, and only the most skilled hooves can hope to be employed, as It comes into view Luna sees Celestia smile rather large as she says "Sister this will be JUST what we need, who knows,maybe your masseur will be a cutie"Celestia finished with a wink, causing Luna to blush.

"Would it matter if He was? thought we were here to relax?"Luna said, forcing a small smirk.

"Not entirely no, But you have yet to ask any stallions to the Gala, being princess does not mean you cannot have a date" Celestia said giving Luna a Nudge.

"Perhaps we should discuss that topic later..." Said Luna, completely red under her coat.

As they entered the spa they were greeted warmly at the counter by a red mare with a fiery orange mane, gold eyes, and whose words flowed like a gentle breeze in the summer.

"Welcome to the Gilded Cloud Princesses, I am Honey Verse, How may we serve you today?" She said smiling, Celestia stepped forward and spoke before Luna could, saying "Good Day Honey Verse, I will take the gold service package and Luna shall have the Platinum, sorry for not arranging an appointment ahead of time, we have each been busy." Celestia inclined her head in a small bow, hoping she wouldn't have to pull the "we are royalty be nice to us" card.

"No problem at all, So gold for you and Platinum for Princess Luna? Please let me or any of the other workers know if you need anything." Honey Verse said, handing each of them a small slip of paper each with a stamp indicating their service package on it. Before they started walking Celestia said to the receptionist "Actually if you could be sure to send in some particularly handsome masseurs, that would be absolutely lovely" She finished glancing over at Luna,who blushed profusely.

Smirking, Honey Verse simply said "Right, eye-candy for the massages, no problem" She tossed in a wink, it seemed that Celestia came here often enough that the mare need not worry about excessive formalities.

Stepping into a large room two stallions each offered to take any belongings they had. Celestia removed her crown and other adornments with a smile, causing Luna to gasp saying "But your crown?!".

"Oh yes sister, while here I prefer that wretched thing to be out of sight" Celestia said giving her hair a playful whip back, something that would not be very easy if the crown were still on.

"Well,we suppose it would make it easier to relax..."Luna said, doing the same as Celestia, and following her to a room with several large mud baths.

Luna watched as some mares wrapped Celestias mane up in a gold towel, and allowed the same to be done to herself. Celestia was the first to sink into the mud, giving a short sigh of relaxation, Luna did the same, surprised at how good the warm mud felt. Shifting slightly Luna closed her eyes, rolling her many thoughts around in her head. Here she was, without her crown, with her sister, in the most luxurious spa in all on Canterlot, and actually able to relax.

"What is on your mind Luna? you have been Quieter then normal." Came Celestias voice in a casual tone.

Luna thought a moment before responding "Well...we are just thinking of the...event we shall be hosting...and the Gala..." She paused "And our subjects..." Another pause, "And well...everything sister...Too much to think about lately, But we are fine..." She finished sighing as she relaxed more

Celestia simply chuckled saying "Maybe todays spa visit was just what you needed. Speaking of the Gala..."Celestia began the second part curiously "Have any stallions propositioned you to be their date?" She finished and could not help but smile as she did.

"B-but sister...We are the hosts, surely it would not be...proper for either of us to have a date...would it?" Luna said, stumbling over her words as if they were the roots of a tree in a dark forest.

"I see no reason why not...I have been asked before, but my refusal had less to do with social expectations and more to do with his rather flustered wife..."Celestia said, giggling a bit at the last part as she said it.

Luna was in complete shock "His wife? Surely you cannot be telling the truth..."

"Oh its the truth, of course that was quite awhile ago...but still the truth" Celestia said thinking back. "But that aside, answer my question...have you been asked?" she said, it seemed there was no avoiding the subject.

"Well...No...We have not...not that anypony would ask me...I'm just nightmare moon the jealous sister of the 'one true ruler'"She said sighing and slinking down into the mud more.

Celestia smirked saying "With a flank to KILL for"

To say Luna was taken aback would be an absolutely disgusting understatement, looking back at Celestia Luna said "W-wait...what now? Our...Our flank?" She could barely form the words in her head, let alone say them.

"Yes, your flank, I happened to catch quite a few of the guards eying it the other day "Celestia said giggling rather uncharacteristically.

Luna said no more as she blushed deeper, happy her fur was dark enough to hide it. She simply blocked out Celestia until she could compose herself.

Just then a mare in a golden vest walked over to escort them to the Showers so they can rinse off for the sauna. Luna managed to glance at a mounted clock seeing in was 1:00 pm... sighing again she followed the escort hoping to clear her mind of the impending dress fitting.

Author note:So...I kinda took forever to update...my bad...XD...I broke this chapter into segments so you can all get lovely little chunks of the story...because I hit terrible writers block after this part (Sad face). and all my spelling and grammar errors will be dealt with...just..be patient