magical filly shooting star magica

by Sugarcube66

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Slice of Life
Length: 2961

basically madoka magica but with changes might have a sequel that is rebellion.

shooting star and her best friend raindrop meet kyubey a weird rabbit-cat like creature that will grant them one wish in order to be a magical filly but they will have to fight nightmares. after being saved by glitter ribbon they are told they have a choice but glitter tells them not to rush it as what they wish for should be for their own need. but mysterious filly, time turner hopes to not have star become a magical filly for unknown reasons.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-01 20:10:04 UTC

i met her in a dream or something

A young alicorn flapped her wings to gain speed while running through a black and white checked place, her long pink hair was hung up in twos pigtails by red ribbons, her white coat and shooting star cutie mark seem to glow when she ended light. her deep pinkish-red eyes shone in the light too. She finds a door and opens it to see a sight of destruction and a weird floating pony on a gear. the pony has a mouth but no nose or eyes and appears to be laughing. The alicorn gasped at the sign but one of her eyes caught sight a almost black unicorn filly jumping around on moving houses chucked by the weird pony. The unicorn filly's purplish-black hair waved behind her with a black headband keeping it fixed to her head. The alicorn couldn't see what the color of the unicorn's eyes were as they were covered by her hair and were more focused on the weird pony.

''This is horrible!'' Gasped the little alicorn, she heard a voice after what she said and looked to her right to see a weird white creature with cat ears that seemed to have rabbit ears with pink ends and halos around them, coming out of them. The creatures red eyes glowed in the darkness.

''it can't be stopped''

''But she...she's hurt'' Said the alicorn filly as she watched the unicorn get thrown back at huge tree like thing. The unicorn groaned slightly in pain and spotted sight of the alicorn while yelling something unreadable.

''This destructing can't be stopped unless Shooting star you can stop this'' Star looked at the creature and asked.

''How?'' The unicorn was still at it trying to beat the weird pony. She was eventually knocked down as she was forced to watch what happened next.

''All you have to do is make a contract with me'' Star nodded and put her hoof to her chest, the unicorn screamed something unreadable again as she fell down as she saw a bright pink light wrap the creature and Star.

Star woke up groggily and sat up, her wings nicely folded up on her back.

''That was a strange dream'' She uttered as she fell onto her blanket. She got out of bed and flow downstairs to where outside an alicorn with sparky golden hair and a red coat was tending to some tomatoes. Star smiled and looked at him.

''Morning papa. is mama up?'' Sparks looked back at his daughter with his one red eye and one golden and smiled.

''spark sun is waking her up go help him okay?'' He said.

''k!'' She said as she flow off, her father smiled. In a different room, a small red alicorn with sparky golden hair and golden eyes was pounding at his mother with his little red hooves yelling.

''Mama Mama!'' Star batted the door open with one of her wings with a stern look on her face, her horn glowed a nice shade of golden  and the window opened, she then literally used her magic to pull her blanket off her mom yelling.

''Rise and shine!'' Celestia screamed then looked confused as her son said in happiness.

''Mama woke up''

Star and Celestia now were in the bathroom, both brushing their teeth. Star was also wearing her school uniform with her hair still down.

''So hows your world been?'' Asked Celestia.

''Shimmer ballet has her cutie mark and got a love letter yesterday'' Celestia nodded and said.

''Colts who can't say it to your face ain't worth it. Hows Cheerilee doing?''

''Well she got a boyfriend. She gushing about him in homeroom'' Giggled the little alicorn.

''That's good there at their 3 month anniversary right?'' Star nodded and began washing her face.

''There at a critical point of their relationship'' Celestia stated while putting on some make up with her magic. Star moved backwards with her eyes closed and asked.

''They are?'' Her hoof reached out for the towel but couldn't reach it so her mother moved it towards her.

''Yeah if it not the real thing, it'll break at this point but if their going good at the moment i'll say they make it for another year'' Celestia finished putting her makeup on and with her magic closed the lid and looked at herself before saying.

''Prefect'' Meanwhile floating in front of Shooting star was a yellow ribbon and a red ribbon.

''Which ribbon?'' Her mother pointed to the red one.

''Eh but isn't it too flashy'' Moaned Star before she started putting them on. Celestia shook her head and said.

''At least be a bit flashy'' A few seconds later Star was standing in front of her mom her was smiling.

''prefect! now your secret admirers will get wobbly in the knees'' Star blushed a tiny blush and said.

''I don't have secret admirers'' Celestia turned around and said.

''Think like you do. That's the secret to every pretty fillies's perfection'' Star looked at her reflection in the mirror and smiled.

Spark was attacking a tomato on his plate as he sat in his baby chair. The tomato flow off his plate only to be caught by his mothers magic.

''Whoa here eat it up okay'' Celestia said as she floated the tomato back on spark's plate.

''Okay!'' Said the tiny colt as he continued to eat. Sparks smiled and said.

''More tea?'' Celestia shook her head and said.

''Better not'' She kissed her son's cheek and then her husband's lips then high hoofed her daughter. She then moved to the door and said.

''Okay im off'' With that she left to go rule the kingdom back over in equestria.

''You better go or you'll be late too Star'' said sparks to his oldest. This shocked Star and she said.

''Oh right'' She bit into her toast and ran out yelling.

''Im off'' She heard yells of bye or bye-bye as she ran down the street to meet her best friends.A natural blue pony with dark blue hair and eyes and raindrops for a cutie mark was standing with a yellow pony with green hair and green eyes with a cutie mark of ballet shoes. Star spotted them and said yelling.

''Morning Raindrops, Shimmer ballet'' Raindrops the blue one grinned and said.

''Your late princess Shooting star we were meant to have a dance'' Raindrops said that in a tomboyish way. Star grinned awkwardly as she began walking with her friends. Then Raindrops noticed Star's ribbons.

''Oh you changed your ribbons. they're cute'' This made the little alicorn filly blush as she said.

''Their not too flashy right?'' Shimmer smiled and said.

''I think they look lovely'' They continued along the mud path to school, walking in Shimmers case and flying in Stars and Raindrops case. Star began telling them about what her mom told her and Raindrops said.

''Aw i wish i had a mother like yours Star! I mean she the queen and she a very pretty'' She did a loop-de-loop flapping her wings. Star smiled as her wings stayed just gently flapping to keep her off the ground as her oddly pink hooves hovered just above the ground. her white body and wings stayed in position so she didn't stop flying. Meanwhile with Shimmer, she signed her horn glittering gently as she turned.

''Sometimes i wish i was more like queen Celestia. I mean all i can do is ballet and i really can't think to decline the love letter or accept'' Star's wings stop flapping and making a beating noise as she landed on the ground.

''Sometimes i wish i would get a love letter'' She said as she moved a hoof to hold her left cheek, just below her pinkish red eyes that were a lot more pink then red. Raindrops grinned and said.

''Oh Star wants to be more like shimmer ballet here. Is that way you changed you ribbon'' Star wings shot out as she tried to stop the teasing.

''No...mama made...me'' This just made Raindrops grin more.

''So you got your mother to tell your the secret to every pretty fillies's perfection. Well i ain't gonna let that happen you hear! Your mine Shooting star and your gonna be my wife!'' Raindrops began tickling Star with her wings as she poor filly tried to more out of it. Shimmer blushed slightly and made a cough sound using her yellow hoof to get their attention as the bell went meaning class was starting.

Mrs cheerilee began talking nonsense about breaking up with her boyfriend.

''Welcome class. I got a important announcement. Fillies don't go marrying boys who don't like eating sunny side down eggs and colts don't grown up to be fusty about the way your egg is boiled'' Said the earth pony as she broke a ruler. The class watched annoyingly as in the background a small blackish-gray unicorn filly that resembled the one from Star's dream walked by the classroom.

''And now i like to introduce a new student. Come in miss turner'' The unicorn filly walked in and now you could see that her eye color was a nice dark violet.

''Okay Miss turner introduce yourself to the class'' Miss turner as she was called right now had a emotionless face as she said.

''My name is Time turner. Its a pleasure to meet you all'' Plus on Time's flank was a hourglass cutie mark which could mean anything. Meanwhile with Star she was thinking she looks a lot like the filly from my dream. Than Time seemed to glance at Star which made the poor filly nervous.

Some foals were hanging around Time while Star, Raindrops and Shimmer watched. Raindrops looked at Star and said.

''Ya sure you don't know here as she was glaring it seemed anyway at you during class'' All star could do was stutter.

''Um...'' Than suddenly Time said.

''I feel ill so im going to the nurses office'' One of the foals asked.

''I take you?'' Time shook her head as she started walking slowly towards Star.

''No i will ask the nurses aid to take me'' This made Star do a very very quiet gulp as she unicorn moved closer.

''Princess Shooting star are you the nurses aid for this class?'' Star made quiet sounds before nodding.

''Take me to the nurses office'' Said a seriously unemotional voice. They were now out in the corridor as others fillies glanced in their direction. Star began stuttering trying to say something.

''Um..i...how did you know i was the nurses aid for the class..'' Said the small alicorn filly as Time seemed to walked her to the nurses office instead of Star leading her.

''Mrs cheerilee told me'' Said Time in an unemotional voice. Star nodded and said.

''Oh...the nurses office is this way...'' But she was cut off by Time who walked the right way saying.

''This way right?'' Star began trying to talk again after nodding.

''You...seemed to know your way there....is it...possible that you were...here before. Wait that not possible you only just transfer in. Right Miss turner'' Time replied with.

''Call me Time'' Star's eyes widen slightly as she said.

''Um...okay...Time, that's a strange name....no i don't mean that in a bad way. I mean its a nice name for a Filly with a hourglass cutie mark. Time meanwhile was gritting her teeth, she turned and stared straight at Star.

''Shooting star do you consider you family and friends special to you?'' Star was confused and said.

''Well of course i do..i mean who wanted. I love my family and my friends'' Time moved her head slightly and said.

''Then you wouldn't do something that would change you otherwise you'll lose it all!'' Said Time in a warning tone before walking into the nurses office to leave a very confused Star out in the corridor.

As the day drew on, Time showed loads of ability is studies and sports like doing the high jump breaking a school record for all the schools in equestria and the former record had been set by a pegasus pony not a unicorn. Later at the cafe.

''She said what?!'' Yelled Rain after Star told her about what Time told her. ''And just went i think she a beautiful smart athletic filly. Is this moe?! Please tell me its not!'' She put her hooves next to her wings and moved her face onto the table.

''So you don't understand either'' Shimmer looked at Star and said.

''Are you certain you haven't met Miss turner Miss star'' Star looked down and said.

''Well the sensible answer is yes'' Rain looked up and said.

''Then you met her in a insensible way?'' Star nodded and said.

''Don't laugh when i tell you. I kinda met her in my dream or something...'' Said the filly alicorn. Her friends began laughing. Star blushed.

''That is hilarious'' Said a still laughing Rain. Star glared at her and said.

''It's not funny'' Shimmer then said.

''Miss star i would say you met Miss turner before but you might not remember it but you sub consciousness remembers and thats way it brought her up in your dream'' This confused Star as Shimmer checked the time and said.

''I gotta go'' Rain looked at her and said.

''What you got ballet'' Shimmer nodded and packed up while Rain whispered to Star.

''Hey can we go to the music store and get a song'' Star grinned and said.

''Something for violin music?'' Rain grinned and said.

''maybe'' The two fillies waved bye to Shimmer as they headed out to the music store. Rain found a song while Star listen to the opening song before hearing something.

''Help me Star!'' She took the headphones off and listens carefully.

''Help me..'' She followed the voice in her head which confused Raindrops. Star walked to a more quiet place saying.

''Who are you?'' She had a hoof on one of her ears as the voice crying for help got louder. She contiued to walk and eventually a weird white filly with rabbit ears coming out of her normal ears fell down from the celling. It looked her her with its red eyes as the golden halos just above the pink bits on its long white ears became lop-sided also its seemed to be a colt. She ran up to it and sat down taking hold of it.

''Is this you'' The creature continued to stare at her saying.

''Help...'' it looked very badly beaten up. At that moment Time showed up with a blackish-gray outfit on with a purple jewel gem that the filly wore even without the outfit, it was diamond shaped and attached to her hoof. On the over hoof was a shield.

''Shooting star let go of the creature'' Star stared at Time and said.

''No your hurting him and his not a creature hes a pony a colt!'' Time step closer.

''I said let go of it!'' At that moment a gust of foam came their way.

''Rain!'' Star got up using her magic to move the small colt onto her back. As she pasted Rain, Rain used her wings to chuck the fire extinguisher she was holding at Time. With that they darted off. Behind Time a weird place and butterflies appeared.

''Darn. Why now of all times?'' She jumped off. Rain and Star were running with the strange colt on Stars back.

''What is on your back? It doesn't look like a normal filly or colt? Is it hurt?'' All star could answer was.

''I don't know but we have to help him'' The place around them began changing and they became frighten.

''Where are we?!'' Yelled Rain. Strange fluffy fillies appeared with mustaches and butterfly wings.

''What are those...'' Said a scared alicorn filly. As the strange things came closer a bright yellow light erupted from the ground as a probably 10 years old filly and a 6 year old filly came closer from behind. The 10 year old was a light yellow with golden twin tailed haired with a golden ribbon for a cutie mark also was a unicorn. The smaller one had a pink coat, white hair and the strangest eyes ever, the outer rim was red and the inter rim was golden. She also was a unicorn and had cheese for her cutie mark.

''looks like we arrived in time'' Said the older one. She walked closer to Star and rain.

''Ah your a ponyville elementary like me. what year? 3 grade?'' The smaller one then yelled seeing some more monsters.

''Glitter ribbon no time to wait'' She grabbed a weird trumpet like thing. Glitter then said.

''I will introduce myself and her but first..'' She grabbed a weird yellow flower shaped gem and a costume appear on her, she began fighting the monsters while introducing herself.

''My name is Glitter ribbon, 10 years old and in the fourth grade at ponyville elementary'' She began using guns and that to blast the monsters. The smaller one then introduce herself while trying to attack the monsters using all sorts.

''And my name is Cheesy sweet 6 years old and in the first grade''

.Glitter was now healing the weird creature which got up afterwards and looked straight at Glitter.

''Thank you Glitter'' Glitter shook her head and said.

''I didn't save you they did''

''Thank you! My name is kyubey and its a pleasure to meet you Shooting star Raindrops'' This shocked Raindrops and Star.

''How do you know our names'' Said Rain.

''Because i want you to make a contract with me and become magical fillies''