Foxfire's Tail (Re-Written)

“Oh, how do we go about this?” The demon asked, looking rather confused.

“P-please…” The hapless, floating mare pleaded as her back legs were spread wide.

“Spare me the horseshit and cut to the chase already.” The demon hissed, eyes narrowing low.

“W-what horseshit?” The mare asked, still squirming in her bonds.

The demon huffed through her nostrils. “Why did I even bother when I knew it wasn’t going to go anywhere?” She asked, bearing her fangs.

The mare, finally catching onto the fact that her bonds were unbreakable, cringed at the sight of the deadly daggers in the fiend’s mouth.

The creature raised her head as high as she could without rearing up on her hind hooves.

Pain.

So much pain.

So much pain registered into the poor mare’s mind as the teeth came crashing and clamping down on her soft, vulnerable, and exposed cunt. A sickening crunch soon hit her ears after that, and all she could do was scream like a banshee from the impact.

The demon clamped down harder in response, amplifying the already-painful experience her victim was receiving.

The mare bucked one leg as best as she could, it didn’t move much at all. The pain got much worse now, and it felt like a hot iron was coiled around her soft spot.

The fiend let go, allowing blood to spew out of the new wounds and create a splatter of crimson on her face and neck.

“Oh, great stars above! You taste worse than you smell!” The demon hissed, backing away a good bit and spitting out the foul taste in her mouth.

The mare felt her back legs lazily fall to the cloudcrete as the magic around them vanished. She tried moving them, but they wouldn’t respond like she had hoped they would.

The fiend was still pre-occupied with getting that awful sensation off of her tongue. As a result, she grabbed a nearby bucket of water and chugged it down in two minutes flat.

The mare began flapping her wings, hoping she could get away from the monstrosity fast enough--

Sadly, she was noticed and the magic still encasing her upper frame proceeded to break her wings in about fifteen different angles before tearing that off.

The mare screamed in pain, as her wings her completely crushed under the power of the magic that gripped them.

The demon laughed, “You seriously think that I wasn’t going to notice your little escape attempt?”

The fiery fiend slowly walked over to her weakened prey, who was whimpering in pain as she slowly writhed in agony. She stopped a few inches, kneeling down and examining what she had done to her victim. She had done quite the damage, but there was only two puncture wounds.

The demon thought, knowing that she had caused her enough pain, from the way she was screaming. She chuckled and bent down to lick up the blood, but she didn’t know how this mare would’ve reacted. “Besides, she tasted gross. I wonder what else she’s done?”

But she didn’t think about her next move as her tongue slowly traced over the throbbing vagina of the mare. She squealed in pain as the demon’s tongue slowly moved over the two wounds. A thought came to her mind, and she struggled with the choice. Should she do something that completely goes against herself, or should she just make the mare suffer more? “Why is this so difficult to figure out? Where the hell did this thought even come from?” Her horn glowed the dark blue color again. It seemed as if there was a second conscious that seemed to take over without her realization. She fought against this new thought and opened her mouth to bite down once more, but she somehow had it closed all on its own. “Oh come on! Is this my self conscious doing all of this to screw me over?”

Her magic then emanated around her tongue and something new happened, her form began to revert back to her original self, the exoskeleton began to grow fur, her holes began to close up and her irises came back and her sclera faded it’s white color. Her carapace disappeared and her whole body went back to normal. Her tongue too, reverted its shape and became one that wasn’t so elongated.

“Okay self conscious.” Sounding calmer than ever before, “You win. I’ll be nice for once and try and repay what I did to this...mare”

The tongue’s saliva then emanated the same color as her horn and the pegasus felt something soothing. The wounds on her marehood began to close up and the blood began to disappear from her vagina as the demon had reverted back to normal, licking up the rest of it.

She then wrapped the pegasus’s wings in her magic and the process soon began to mend the injuries to the mare. She felt different. The mare had wondered what this feeling was that replaced her anger, but it felt well right.

The pegasus began to feel a new feeling, not one of pain, but of a sensitive and in a sense, pleasurable feeling. She too was confused by this mare’s turn in attitude. From one moment, she was crunching down on her vagina and now she was licking it. She began to whimper, not in pain, but in bliss.

The alicorn moved her tongue across the pegasus’s marehood slowly. She still felt weird about this whole new transition from making her writhe in pain, to making her moan quietly in peaceful pleasure. “You know self...I think you’re still nuts for making me stop. But I do have to admit, this feels so much better...for some reason.”

The alicorns tongue moved from the pegasus’s outer lips, to her now sensitive inner lips and labia. The pegasus gasped and bucked her hips softly. Her energy was wasted after the struggle and she was only able to move so much. As the alicorn began to wonder how she should do the rest of her marehood, a new set of emotions began to take over her mind. “Why do I feel so...calm?”

This brought some questions that she wanted to know, but something in her mind told her that this was what a ‘lady’ like her should be. “Hell...I’ve been worse than this, I even ripped a guy’s dong off. How am I supposed to act lady-like?”

The voice just told her that she’s important, and has a very special role. Her tongue then moved inside the pegasus’s marehood and this made her gasp again. “So...this is how we girls get pleasured huh? I may have not done this before, but I’m pretty sure that I would probably act like her.”

She then moved her tongue up and down slowly, letting the mare recover from her ordeal. Her tongue explored and licked the insides of her vagina, emitting another gasp and more quiet moans.

The alicorn stopped and saw a small little bump on the pegasus’s marehood, her warm breath seemed to moisten it and beads of, well, whatever it was came slowly trickling down. “Heheh, maybe I should’ve asked her to dinner first.” Another question came to mind, “I didn’t even get this mare’s name. How am I supposed to really please her if she doesn’t even know my name...speaking of names, why was I never named at all?”

The alicorn moved up until her eyes met the pegasus’s. She had a beautiful aqua colored set of eyes. “I…”

“Guess this is as good as anyway to start a conversation off.”

“I...never did catch your name.”

The pegasus shook a little. This was clearly the most surprising moment she had witnessed. This alicorn went from a blood rage, to crushing her vagina and wings, and now she was licking her marehood. She hesitated, “I…my name...is, Rainstorm.”

The alicorn hadn’t noticed how quiet her voice sounded, yet it sounded elegant and crisp. It made her realize how, well she couldn’t help but admit how beautiful she sounded. “And I did this to her? Well...she kind of did deserve it. But I...well, again, I can’t even believe I’m saying this, but I feel like a real dick right now.”

She then realized that she left her hanging without letting her know her own name--and that she needed to name herself right about now. She had to make one up off the top of her head. She glanced around at her cutie mark, and then recalled that she had some sort of control over flames. “It’s nice to meet you Rain. My name is Foxfire, or Foxy for short.”

Again, Rain was completely taken by surprise on how much this alicorn changed in mere moments. The alicorn then added, “I’m...well I’m sorry for what I did, but my true apology will come in a moment.” This made Rain’s expression a confused one, that was until Foxy moved her mouth back to pegasus’s vagina.

She began to softly lick the button that she saw on Rain’s marehood. She gasped and moaned sharply. It was at this point in time, when she began to fully regret what she did to the poor filly so long ago. But at the moment, she was switching thoughts at a hundred miles an hour. The feeling increased after Foxy enclosed her mouth around the button, suckling and licking at the same time.

Bliss was all Rain could truly feel at this moment. She felt that Foxy was leading her over some high cliff, and lifting her quickly up. But she felt that if she were to fall, that the alicorn would catch her. “Why does...this feel like...we’ve never seen each other for months?”

Her next thought was interrupted as she felt her legs shake, as the feeling of her orgasm reached her. She screamed quietly, but Foxy’s name was being formed on her lips, until she actually said, “Fox...fire!”

Foxy was surprised by this. “She...said my name? After everything I did to her…?”

Rainstorm’s cheeks blushed as her liquids leaked out onto the cloudcrete and into Foxy’s mouth. At first the alicorn was disgusted, but this time Rain’s juices tasted different, almost sweet, yet bitter, and she could almost taste the flavor of, unsurprisingly, rain. “Huh, I wonder what I tasted before? She certainly didn’t taste like this.”

Rainstorm shuddered as her body was racked in spasms, slowly shaking as the blissful feeling took over. Her breath was labored, but it quickly began to quiet down, and she still felt numb. She looked at Foxfire, who stared back.

Rain couldn’t help but tear up afterwards, whimpering in sadness. Foxy saw this and wondered what she did wrong. “Rainstorm...are you okay?”

“Seriously, when did I start caring about others’ feelings?”

“I...I just remember what you said about the filly, and I...I regret ever doing that.” Rainstorm murmured quietly.

Something then took over Foxy’s feelings and she moved closer to Rain. “Hey...we all make mistakes.”

“Okay...why do I sound like Celestia right now? What the fuck even happened?”

“Yeah...but-”

“Hey, you just saw me kill all of your guards and...I do admit to killing a few others, but they deserved it.”

“Wh...why?”

“Well...let’s just say that they weren’t the friendliest of ponies.”

“Not to mention the fact that they were complete assholes.”

“Just...don’t ever let me catch you doing something like that again...okay?”

Rainstorm sniffed and looked over to Foxy, “Y...yeah.”

The alicorn then got up and began to walk away, but not before Rain grabbed her left hoof as she was getting up. “W...what about you?”

Foxfire then realized that she did feel something down in her, well, private region. “W...what about me?”

“You...never did let me help you. I thought that...well-”

“Wait, you’re asking if I want you to…” She hadn’t really guessed that Rainstorm would even offer to help her after all the things she did.

Rain walked over to Foxy, albeit awkwardly. She sat down next to her and said, “I...I know that what I did was inexcusable. And I thank you for what you’ve done...but has anyone ever repaid the favor for you?”

The alicorn stared at the ground, beginning to see at least why Rainstorm wanted to help her. “Well...no ones ever really been this nice to me before. I’m actually surprised that Rain is even doing this for me even after everything that happened.”

Foxfire looked over to Rain, who seemed to be smiling. Not the evil smiling way mind you but, friendly and caring sort of way. “Why couldn’t I have ever met somepony like this back at the village? Maybe I wouldn’t have done what I did then.”

“I...I’m a bit nervous Rain.” Foxy admitted. “Well duh! This is like your first time ever getting with somepony like this.”

“Don’t be worried Foxy. After what you did for me, I’ll go slow for you too.”

Rain then gently helped Foxy to the ground, setting her on her back. The alicorn began to blush as she realized what was about to happen. “Like I said, we should’ve gotten dinner first.”

When Rain began to look down Foxy’s body, she saw that her belly was big and her nipples were engorged. “Is she...pregnant?”

“Foxfire...are you pregnant?” Rain asked, trying not to sound mean or anything.

The alicorn looked down and noticed the bulge. “Hold the phone, how the hell did I get pregnant?”

“I...I don’t ever remember being with anypony else.” Foxy began to panic a little, her voice and breath coming in quick gasps.

“You mean you’ve never had sex?”

“Yeah. I don’t remember being with anypony.”

“Well if you didn’t then who…” She cut off as she recalled a certain event that she witnessed. She remembered one of the guards coming out of the jail cell she was in, but she didn’t really think of it as anything until now. “Gale Wind! That idiot! What the hell was he thinking?”

She hoped that he was still alive so he could explain himself, that was when she and Foxy heard coughing from within the building. There, stumbling out of the broken cloud door was a white pegasus stallion whose wings were broken. He walked like he was completely drunk or something.

“You! I thought you were dead!” Foxfire cried, pointing at him with her hoof. She was completely baffled at the sight.

Gale began to chuckle, looking at the expression of the monster. “Oh...you really thought I was dead? I should feel so happy.” He was wobbling around, and the shocked mares saw a bottle like object tucked into one of his broken wings.

“Well, that about explains why I left ya alone. Ya played possum on me!” Foxfire yelled again, getting onto her hooves and standing correctly.

“Gale! You have a lot of explaining to do!” Rainstorm yelled, angry at what this moron did. She trotted up to him and pushed him down with her hoof.

The drunkard laughed. “Oh please, Rainstorm, what’s there to discuss about.” He then noticed the alicorn was behind her, back to normal. “So...have you become friends with this monster?” He added in a bitter tone.

“Yes...yes I have.” Rain defiantly replied.

“Oh why should I care. This whole place is in ruins. You can do whatever the hell you want.”

Foxy began to slowly walk up forward. “Oh hello there alicorn. Have we finally calmed down?”

“Gale, how dare you.” Rain spit, eyes narrowing low.

He looked at her for a moment and then back to the alicorn. He then realized what she was talking about. He then laughed hysterically. “Oh, is that what you're mad about? What I did to her? It’s funny that you actually care about what I did to her.”

“What you did not only offends her, but every single mare including me would find what you did to be shameful and disgraceful.”

“I’m a part of the guard, I can-”

“How dare you call yourself a part of the Guard after what you did!” She hissed with such hatred.

Foxfire wondered what Gale had done to her. Then she was reminded of her stomach and realization hit her like a freight train. “You...did what?!” Foxfire yelled.

“Hope you enjoyed the ride sweetheart, you weren’t even awake then.” Gale crudely remarked.

“You...did that to me, while I was...asleep!?” The anger began to rise back up in Foxy as she stared at this fiend. Without warning she summoned her magic and shot a spiral of blue flames upwards below him. He was then kicked back to the ground violently as she teleported above him.

He shakily looked up, until it was too late as Foxy came flying back down and smashing into his chest. Blood flew out of his mouth as he gasped. But he didn’t feel much, for the alcohol had removed any pain he’d felt. “You know...I wonder what the kids will look like?” He sarcastically added.

She grabbed his chest armor and brought his face closer to hers. “You know what I’d think about them, they don’t deserve to live for what you did to me!”

She quickly jumped off and prepared her next attack. But as she began to cast her magic, Rainstorm slowly walked up to them. Gale looked up to her, “W-what are you doing...just standing there? Are you going to help...me or what?”

Rain looked to him, and then to Foxfire. Fox was looking at her in confusion. “Who are you going to choose Rain?” She worried, and pleaded with her eyes.

Rain stared at her for a moment, and then looked back to Gale. “As your commanding officer Rain…I order you to kill her.”

She looked down for a moment, then she slid her armor of her right foreleg. The same weapon Foxy saw before on Gale, was on her leg as well. She then looked to Foxy and flew straight up into the air. She floated in place for a moment, staring down at the two ponies. Then, falling down she flew at top speed, right towards Foxfire.

Foxy prepared herself as Rain came closer, but to her surprise as well, Rainstorm looked over to Gale and changed course, flying straight at him.

He stared in shock and fear as she came ever closer. “Oh...you son of a b-”

Gale didn’t finish his sentence as Rainstorm drove the dagger like weapon into his throat violently. He struggled for a moment, before his body ceased to move. “This is what you deserve for your actions.” She whispered as life escaped him.

She then heard Foxy’s hoofsteps. Rain turned around to see a expression of confusion on her. Rain turned towards her and walked a little closer. “Why did you choose to kill him? Wasn’t he your commanding officer?” Foxy asked.

“I just basically told him I quit through that action.” She then inched closer and whispered, “Besides, I found a new friend.” Her lips then met Foxfire’s, who blushed immediately from the action. She wanted to pull away, but thought against it and stayed in that position.

Rain pulled away and smiled sweetly, “I’m...sorry, for what you’re going through.”

Foxfire looked down, a tear ran down her eye. “It’s been awhile since I cried. This sure feels different.”

Rain moved her right hoof and wiped the tear away. “Are still up on my offer to help you?”

The alicorn looked back to her and a smile slowly crept from her lips. “I...I, don’t know for sure.” But her body betrayed her otherwise, as a familiar sensation began to creep through her body.

Rain quietly giggled. “It seems that someone else agrees.”

Foxfire blushed again, but before she could respond, Rain began to slowly put her on the ground, her wings extending out as she was being laid on her back. “I’m still wondering how I even got from being a complete psychopath to this.”

She then remembered that some of her hair was causing a nuisance, so with magic she cut off a large piece of it and then sent it somewhere else with her magic. Her nipples were more visible this time and her marehood as well.

Rain just simply giggled and began to peck her with kisses, all the way from her cheek to one of her nipples. Foxy flinched as she felt the wet feeling as Rain enclosed her mouth around one of them. “I’m wondering how a mare can have so many of these things. Well then again, she isn’t exactly normal.”

Foxfire began to silently moan in ecstasy as Rain began to suckle the nipple. It tasted of warm milk as Rain guessed so easily, but with a hint of something else, that she couldn’t distinguish. She let go of it and flicked it softly with another lick which made Foxy moan.

Rainstorm moved her face over the warm feeling emanating from the alicorn. As moved closer to it, her warm breath made Foxfire quiver in anticipation. She then moved her mouth closer and began to slowly lick up and down, sending a gasp and shudder through the alicorn as she weakly writhed in bliss. “Is this...how she felt? I...think I’m going to...really enjoy...this.”

Rainstorm then moved her tongue further in, reaching her sensitive inner lips and labia. Making the alicorn gasp and moan softly. She hadn’t felt anything like this before, and she wished it would last forever. The pegasus then moved her tongue inside Foxfire and she moaned a bit more sharply.

Rain began to move her head back and forth slowly, making Foxy buck, trying to get her deeper within her. The pegasus obliged and moved her tongue farther in, making Foxfire quiver in bliss.

Rain brought her tongue out and looked at her vagina. She noticed the same button that she felt Foxy lick, and decided that she should repay her the same feeling. She gave a tentative lick, making the alicorn gasp and moan out. Rain smiled and began to lick it softly, and before long, she wrapped her enclosed her mouth around it as well. Making the alicorn buck slowly and moan out. “Okay...nevermind, this is how she felt when I did this to her...man does this feel good or-”

Her thought was stopped as she felt a pressure be released, she screamed quietly like Rain , but at the same time, she voiced out, “Rainstorm!”

Rain smiled sweetly at the mention of her name, as Foxfire began to shudder as the spasms went through her body. She looked at the pegasus, and smiled ever so sweetly. “T...thank you Rain. I...really enjoyed it.”

Both mares then heard whispers coming from the building and turned towards the sound. They heard muted laughter and whistling from it shortly after. “Hey, Rainstorm. I didn’t know you knew how to score mares?”

“Wait, did they see the whole thing?” Foxy asked, blinking a few times.

“Apparently, they did.” Rainstorm replied blandly, wings spreading a bit.

“Hey, nice show you put on for us. Think you two could do that again?” The owners of the noises began to laugh harder.

“Well whoever’s laughing, you better show yourselves now, or else I’m going to burn the whole building down!”

“Oh give it a break Foxy, you don’t want to waste time with those morons.” Rain sighed, shaking her head sadly.

Foxy felt a great pain in her stomach, and she clutched the pegasus in her hooves as her horn began glowing once more.

Both ponies were enveloped in blue flames, and before all went white for the mares, Foxy could’ve sworn she heard the owners of the laughter say “Let us see the kids sometime, you worthless whore!”