Chapter 1: Through the Portal

Twilight wakes to find her element missing, and hurriedly looks for the culprit. She sees the firey maned pony bounding towards Canterlot. She teleports to the castle and finds the mare, jumping into a mirror?

"Twilight hurry, retrieve the element!", Celestia says, quickly shoving her through.

On the other side...

"What did I do?", says a quivering firey maned mare, who had some sort of mettalic bindings on all of her limbs. She was surrounded by large creatures wearing black cloth with noisey devices attached to their heads. One of them saw Twilight and motioned for the others to look. Four of them moved towards Twilight and attached some of the uncomfortable bindings to her limbs.

"Smash the gate, and take them back to base.", Twilight heard through their head pieces.

Then she heard a crash and saw the gate smashed on the ground, and the other mare on the ground unconscious. Then there was a sudden pain in the back of her head, and everything went dark.

Author's Note

First chapter, I hope you like it because I'm actually goinig to try on this one.
Btw I'm writing this from my phone.