Deep Reality

by Deluge
A tale revolving around Fluttershy and a wish that threatens her and everything she knows.

This story revolves around Fluttershy and a journey into her soon to be twisted, dark mind. Being a quiet, laid back pony, no one would ever suspect somepony like Fluttershy to be a target for anything. Much less a wishing well possessed by evil spirits.


Can Flutter gather her remaining sanity together and make an effort toward solving the mysterious happenings around Ponyville and ending these terrible experiences before she loses everything?

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Please keep in mind that I am not an experienced writer, I am doing this for the fun of it and to put some thoughts I've been having lately into a readable format. I appreciate constructive criticism. That said, if you want to be rude about it, please keep your comments to yourself.

The story is and will remain incomplete until I get around to finishing it. It is tagged how it is because trust and believe, this story will take a turn for the perverted after the first chapter. I'm not one that believes in rushing the creative mind, so updates may not come as quickly as some would like. Then again, this may not even be read, who knows! I hope to have a full-fledged storyline completed soon. But you can see the premise here from the description.

Some of my earlier readers may have noticed the premise for the story has changed a bit, that's because I'm mostly coming up with this as I come up with ideas that fit for a readable, interesting story. tl;dr, I'm winging it.

Hope you enjoy reading and come back frequently! That is.. if you don't mind..of course..

Incomplete
Dark
Alternate Universe
Gore
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Sex
Tragedy
 
RFP

4285 words: Estimated 21 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Chapter One: Prelude 2012-04-05 12:50:03 UTC
    2510
  2. Chapter Two: An Unsteady Tone 2012-03-31 11:23:07 UTC
    1775