Naughty Apple

by mintybreeze

Rating: everyone
Tags: Dark, Tragedy, Random
Length: 702

Apple bloom discovers a magic apple near evergreen forest

that causes her to become the naughty apple.

apple jack does everything to figure out what caused apple bloom to become this naughty.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-05 19:46:08 UTC

the bucking sisters

  Apple bloom sat their watching apple jack buck apples. the grass swaying around her she was so involved in apple jack.

she wondered  what her life would be if she had gotten an apple bucking cutie mark.  There would be crowds of

ponies from every where. watching me buck apples like crazy it would   be amazing. in fact i would be amazing she didn't realize

She was  talking to herself. apple jack paused " apple bloom did you say something" apple jack said in a low country

Accent.

" No i am  fine just keep doing what your doing " the young filly smiled at apple jack. she felt so good about today, today     is  defiantly the day i will finally get my cutie mark! apple jack went back to bucking apples, apple bloom watched

her carefully observing every move she made. She mentally took notes on apple jacks every move.

Apple jack dashed to every tree and bucked it so hard. hard enough to knock the apples down into the wooden basket.   it doesn't take apple jack long to harvest because she is the fastest bucking pony in equestria, after a while half of the apples                   were gone.   she stopped breathlessly in-front of apple bloom. apple bloom clapped her hooves together "wow sis that was amazin" she   squealed with excitement.

Apple jack blushed with sweat dripping down her forehead.

***

"Wanna give it a go" apple jack said breathlessly. "WOULD I? I WOULD LOVE TO!" she said determinedly.

apple jack took a drink of apple cider and gulped it down " man that's some good cider".

apple bloom looked up to apple jack she wanted to prove to apple jack that she is fully capable of bucking down a few apples       maybe the rest of the apple field.

"alright ready to try it" she asked apple bloom. apple bloom nodded. okay watch and learn .

apple jack lifted her hind legs and barly tapped the apple tree and all of the apples fell down gracefully into the basket.

" easy as apple pie" she laughed.

apple bloom went to the tree next to apple jack it was a slender tree. seemed easy enough for apple bloom .

"Alright now give it a big kick" shouted apple jack.

apple bloom breathed out and gave a big Ugh sound she tapped the tree slightly. the apples still remained as she turned around "dang it!" she said sadly.

Thats okay she nusseled the little fillys nose gently " you don't normally get it the first time" the young filly looked up at her with tears streaming down her face.

"apple bloom" she soothed the filly.

i am going to show you that i can do it! she squeaked at apple jack! today is the day  i am going to get my cutie mark. she unwind-ed from apple jacks hug. she scuffed her hooves on the ground. and grunted angrily.

apple jack watched the angry filly terrified of her hurting herself. she scrapped her feet back and forth ready to run .

she ran with all force , forcing her body towards the tree with determination. "apple bloom your going to hurt your self this isnt a great idea" apple jack shouted .

it was too late the filly ran straight towards the tree with full force but this time she had caused her self a terrible injury.

her head busted against the tree , apple jack ran to apple bloom she saw her body lay flat on the ground.

apple bloom can you hear me , apple bloom was unconscious.

she saw her once and blacked out.

apple jack felt scared she dashed her to granny smith " HELP ! SOME PONY HELP!" she screeched apple bloom laid on apple jacks back unconscious she didn't hear any thing.

she ran as fast as she could through every tree in apple acres. apple bloom saw the trees but it was blurry and passed out again.

"apple bloom stay with me everything will be all right " apple jack said tearfully.

apple jack was half way there to the barn granny smith herd her yell and ran out the door . she saw apple jack in the distance.