Cheese takes Manehattan

by Lizziepad

Rating: everyone
Tags: Cheese Sandwich, Rarity, Coco Pommel, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Romance
Length: 1027

Cheesy senses cause Cheese Sandwich to head to Manehattan.

Cheesy senses cause Cheese Sandwich to head to Manehattan, where he meets a friend and makes a new one.
But there's something special about this new friend.
Cheese seems to like her.

Alternate title: A Fanfic About an Unpopular ship

Published 2014-04-06 06:30:05 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-06 06:30:05 UTC

Rarity and her friend

Author's Note

Sure do hope this turns out well.
And for people to be able to see, here's a quick sketch I did of Cheese Sandwich's Manehattan look: http://lizziepotatopad.deviantart.com/art/Manehattan-Cheese-445397953

Rarity and her friend

Cheese Sandwich trotted along the streets of Manehattan
He looked up at a tall building, a puzzled look on his face.
“Am I in the right place?”
he took his business hat off and pulled out a list of cities in Equestria.
“let’s see… Ah, Manehattan!”
He tossed the hat back on his head and trotted along.
Cheese had dressed for the city, he wore his signature yellow shirt, but this time with a tie.
He also had his hair brushed back and wore a sort-of top hat.
He reached a sweets shop on a corner.
“Surely I can have a snack before checking in!”
He said as he trotted into the shop and waited in line.
He trotted in place as he looked around the shop and spotted a white mare with a purple mane drinking coffee..
He smiled as he realized he had met that mare.
“Hey, Rarity!”
Rarity was startled and spit out her drink all over another mare sitting across from her.
Cheese realized his mistake and pulled Boneless 2 out of his hat and placed it on the floor where he was standing.
“Keep my place in line, Boneless 2!”
He said staring at the rubber chicken before trotting over to help Rarity.
When he got over there rarity had already tried to clean up the other mare.
“I’m so sorry darling!”
“Oh, it’s quite fine, Rarity.”
The other mare smiled as she Rarity desperately tried to clean her off.
“No, I’m sorry,”
Cheese finally said.
“I shouldn’t have scared Rarity like that.”
Cheese hung his head in shame as the other mare looked up at him.
“Oh, it’s quite fine Mister…?”
“Cheese Sandwich!”
Cheese said as his head perked up and he smiled.
“Well, it’s nice to meet you Cheese,”
She gave a wave of her hoof to let Rarity know that she was no longer drenched in coffee.
“I’m Coco Pommel.”
She stuck out a hoof to Cheese.
“Nice to meet you miss Coco!”
Cheese met her hoof and shook violently.
Coco Pommel herself was shaking.
Cheese finally stopped and looked over at Rarity.
“So Rar, what are you up to in the fair city of Manehattan?”
“Well, Cheese, I’m here on a business trip! And Coco Pommel is my assistant.”
She took a sip of what was left of her coffee and looked back up at the brown stallion.
“And, what are you up to here in Manehattan, Cheese?”
Cheese put a hoof on his chest and had a look that seemed like he had just been crowned king.
“My Cheesy senses we’re tingling!”
“Cheesy senses?”
Coco Pommel repeated with a giggle.
“Why, yes!”
Cheese said as he suddenly remembered his place in line.
“Oh, uh, I’ll be right back!”
Cheese zoomed to the front of the line where Boneless 2 had been kicked.
“Hey! I’ll take a chocolate doughnut covered in sprinkles!”
The cheery stallion at the desk nodded and trotted into the kitchen.
A more grumpy stallion walked out right after him, mumbling to himself.
“You can go take a seat, sir.”
He said as he reached the desk.
“Sure thing sir!”
Cheese said cheerfully as he hopped back to the two mares.
Boneless 2 on his back.
“Hiya girls! Mind if I sit?”
Coco Pommel scooted over and made a hoof motion letting Cheese know he could sit there.
Cheese hoped right next to Coco, pushing her against the wall for a half second.
Rarity sipped her coffee once more and then looked at Cheese.
“So Cheese, what have you been up to?”
“Oh, you know, parties!”
“Oh really? That’s surprising…”
Rarity said sarcastically.
"It is?"
Cheese said as he was met with a eyeroll from Rarity.
“You throw parties?”
Coco Pommel said enthusiasm in her voice.
“Yes! All the time!”
“Well, did you know my birthday’s next week?”
Rarity spat out her coffee once more.
“I-It is?”
Rarity said right before she realized the two ponies she had been talking to were now soaked.
“Sweet Celestia! Again?”
She used some napkins to wipe the ponies off.
“No biggie, Rar!”
Cheese said, a huge grin on his face.
“It isn’t your fault Rarity.”
Coco said as she took the napkins from Rarity’s magic and started wiping Cheese Sandwich.
“And to answer your question, yes, my birthday is next week. and Cheese do you think you could pla-”
She was interrupted as the stallion next to her burst out laughing.
It was at least a minute until Cheese caught his breath and was able to talk.
“I’m sorry, Coco. That’s my ticklish spot.”
Cheese said, his face was almost entirely red.

Coco thought this was the most adorable thing in the world.

It was only when the owner of the shop told them it was closing time when they decided to leave.
So there they stood, three ponies, acting like they were drunk.
“Well, I oughta get to my hotel.”
Cheese said as Coco Pommel’s smile fell.
“It was nice seeing you Rarity. And meeting you Coco.”
He stuck out a hoof at Coco, and instead of being met with one, he was given a hug.
“This was fun Cheese!”
Coco unlatched herself to see Cheese Sandwich was, once again, blushing.
“So, what hotel are you staying at, maybe I can visit?”
Cheese didn’t reply.
“Cheese, darling?”
Rarity spoke for Coco Pommel.
“Oh, yeah. Sorry. I’m staying at the Horseshoe Hotel, just down the street!”
“Great!”
Coco smiled.
“Well, we must be going, I hope to see you later Cheese!”
Rarity said as her a Coco Pommel walked off.
“Bye!!”
Cheese waited until they were out of sight and then took off running.
He reached the hotel, got checked in, and quickly dashed up to his room.
He went inside and shut the door, his back up against it.
He slowly sunk down to the ground, his back still to the door
“Why did she have to be so cute…”