falling sky

by canadianbacon

First published

Applejacks mafia empire has taken years to build, but when a rogue street gang challenges her rule , things get messy.

This story is just an attempt at word making, i had one proofreader and he said it was utter crap. Leave feedback so that i can improve!

credit for artwork goes to: http://cyanaeolin.deviantart.com/ . closest thing to my vision i could find. learn to draw you say? phhh, ya right! Edit: This story has been abandoned, it's only up because I like reading all the "constructive" criticism