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My Little Portal-Break: Portal-Broken

by shieldgenerator7
Shield Generator returns to Ponyville to check up on a certain space-time rift, not knowing that Twilight is still in the middle of teaching Heartbreak, who demands that Shield take her back to her former world.

This is a fanfiction of a fanfiction.

I'm kind of currently writing the story that would make Shield's presence make more sense, but I throw in enough hints so it's not necessary. This is more of a response story to My Little Heartbreak: Heart Broken by Jet_Black1980: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/18761/my-little-heartbreak-heartbroken. So if you read that, and maybe about 11 chapters into the sequel, this story should make more sense.

Then again, this story is so messed up. Neither Heartbreak nor Shield's actions are portrayed correctly. Basicly, this is NOT how it would have happened AT ALL. In fact, the way it would have happened would be so boring and uninteresting that it's mostly not even worth a rewrite. But, I already put all the work into writing it before I realized that it's all wrong. But besides the mischaracterization, there's not much else wrong with it, except for a tense shift every now and then. So, I hope it's still enjoyable to read despite that.

This story is about how Shield's biannual check up on Equestria's space-time rifts turns into an epic adventure involving Heartbreak, Twilight, and Shield.

This is NOT a Portal-MLP:FiM crossover fic. If you read the story you'll understand the title.

Everyone
Complete
Alternate Universe
Human
Sad
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
 
PTOR

14091 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Arrival 2014-04-13 14:55:43 UTC
    3070
  2. Chapter 2: The Picnic 2014-04-13 14:55:57 UTC
    1886
  3. Chapter 3: The Connection 2014-04-13 14:56:05 UTC
    3161
  4. Chapter 4: Meeting Her 2014-04-13 14:56:10 UTC
    3752
  5. Chapter 5: Departure 2014-04-13 14:56:16 UTC
    2222