Sensitive Apples

by Taco Pony

Rating: everyone
Tags: Tragedy, Adventure, Sad
Length: 632

Tired of Apple Jack constantly checking up on her, Apple Bloom runs away from Sweet Apple Acres.. Equestria to be exact

Apple Bloom is sick of Apple Jack, so she runs away from home. All goes well for her… AT FIRST. Apple Jack gets really worried.
This is the first story in the series: 'The Life And Death Of An Apple'

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-28 16:19:46 UTC

Jack The Checker

Seven O'clock in the morning. Apple Bloom was laying in bed, sleeping like a log. Bursting through the door, Apple Jack shouted,

"Apple Bloom! Time to get up have your breakfast, brush your teeth and go to school."

"Give me another hour or so, it's only seven, I don't have to be at school until half nine," Apple Bloom complained.

"No, I need to make sure y'all do it correctly, I don't want y'all looking al scruffy for school."

Apple Jack left the room, leaving Apple Bloom to sleep. Half an hour later, Apple Bloom is still laying in bed, Apple Jack, who is fuming, exploded through the door.

"Apple Bloom! What in Celestia's name do y'all think y'all doing? I warned you to get up half an hour ago!" she bellowed.

"Alright, I'll get up! Jeez!"

The second after she got up, the annoying mare, Apple Jack made her breakfast, and watched her brush her teeth. Telling her step - by - step, how to do it.

"Brush up, down and side - to - side for two minutes."

This was the same everyday for a whole month. Apple Jack was driving her so mad, she chose to secretly go to the park for an hour every day. The first time she done this, Apple Jack started screaming at her.

"Where in Celestia's name do you think you've been" she shouted, "I've been worried sick about you!"

"It's fine sis, I've been trying to make new friends, so I joined an after school club."

"Okay, y'all best be heading off to bed now, you've got school in the morning." Apple jack explained.

Apple Bloom went to bed, Apple Jack checked on her every five minutes, (as usual of course). In the morning, Apple Jack done the usual routine of screaming at Apple Bloom. Then, when Apple Bloom went to school, Apple Jack was making sure she had everything she needed. Later in the day, at about 3:30pm, Apple Jack said to Granny Smith:

"Alright Granny, I'm off to see how Apple Bloom's doing at school. Isn't it cute, she's making some new friends."

Apple Jack started skipping along happily to Apple Bloom's school, you could hear her hooves going 'clip, clop' When she finally made it to the school, she asked the receptionist:

"Which room is Apple Bloom in? I need to see how's she's doing"

The receptionist replied, "uh... according to this, Apple Bloom left when school ended."

Apple Jack's smile suddenly dropped dramatically as her body filled with rage, for the young filly, who was always so honest, had betrayed her. Apple Jack, stormed her way home, as she walked you could no longer hear the friendly 'clip, clop' of her hooves. This was because it had turned into a heavy pounding sound. When she got back, Apple Bloom was in her room. Apple Jack burst through her door and screamed so hard she nearly had a heart attack. She shouted:

"Apple Bloom! You're grounded for life!"

"What for sis?"

"What for? What for? WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHAT FOR? You lied to me! I went to your school to check on you, and guess what, YOU WEREN'T THERE!" Apple Jack was so angry you could see a vain sticking out of her neck.

"OK, you wanna know the truth? I went to the park to get away from you, I'm sick to death of you constantly checking up on me!"

Apple Bloom ran past Apple Jack and went outside. She then sat down in the apple field and started to cry a little bit. When she had calmed herself down, she took out her phone and called the other Cutie Mark Crusaders.

"Girls," she said, " Meeting at the Club house tomorrow after school...."