(Mini Series) Jack's Adventures: Book 1 (UNFINISHED)

by DeadlyMCraft

Rating: teen
Tags: Sad, Romance, Adventure, Human, Dark, Alternate Universe
Length: 2937

A young boy named Jack finds himself traveling to another world instead of going to school. Becoming a pony is not so simple, and adapting to a new lifestyle is even harder.

A young boy named Jack, around 14, goes to a school in Hemet. As he is going there, he somehow realizes he is walking on four legs, and, as he looks up, the world around him changes. Everything is different from his ghetto lifestyle, meeting the nice ponies. Little does he know, he will make a big difference in the Land Of Equestria.

NOTE: This is my first FanFic, so don't expect anything special. I just do this to pass the time, whether anybody likes it or not, I don't care. I do it for fun. But, I still like to see positive comments and likes. And if you do dislike, please tell why. In a message, preferably.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-12 22:00:05 UTC

Chapter 1: The Change

As far as Jack was concerned, this was a normal day.  Though, Monday’s are not his favorite days, they are normal. He would do his daily routine of waking up, eating breakfast, taking a shower, going to school, coming back, and repeating that process until he slouched into bed, and then wake up the next morning, doing the same thing. It seemed like he was run from strings descending from heaven, moving his limbs for him. Where we start, Jack is getting out of bed, getting ready for school.

"*Yawn*, what day is it..." Jack mumbled to himself.

He had very dark brown hair, which made it sorta dark red. He was a, what the people in his neighborhood called him A White Boy. But, Jack didn't mind being called that. He doesn't get annoyed to easy.

"Oh yeah... Monday... shit..." he said as he looks at his clock. He must leave for school at 7:05 since he walks. It was 6:50...

"SHIT!"

Jack suddenly hops out of bed, crabs clothes, and rushes into the shower. He takes a warm shower as fast as he can. He slips into his closed as fast as 14 year-old human possible. He does his hair, and dries it.

"Oh my gosh.. I'm gonna be late!"

He grabs his MP3 player and headphones. See, he doesn't use ear-buds because he says it has WAYYY to low of quality. He grabs his jacket and his backpack and rushes out the door.

"Bye, Mom!"

"Wait, Jack!"

"Yeah, mom?"

"I love you."

"I love you too mom." He ran down the drive-way and started to walk to school.

Jack sang as he walked down the street listening to Eminem's- Stay Wide Awake. He likes that song a lot because it could relate to his life. He always said Eminem was his voice. He kept walking forward... singing that song.

"Princess Celestia!" A royal guard ran into the room.

"Something is happening! One of those... ripples... are showing up again!"

"Where does it lead now?"

"I don't know! From what I saw it's like the same dimension with the human twilight saw! But, it's different!"

"Okay, point me in the right direction of it."

Every time a ripple has opened up, something has always come through. Most of the time, it's just weird junk from aliens, or something. Completely useless.

"Rrr...." Princess Celestia moaned as she used her new spell that moves these ripples.

*POOF* "It's in the palace, where we can study it, this one has been open for much longer than others."

Jack finally reached the school. Still looking down, listening to his music on high so he couldn't hear practically anything. He kept walking. He closed his eyes and shook his like one of those rock stars. He opened his eyes still looking down, and...

"What... What happened to my hands! And, who are you people!?"

There stood Twilight Sparkle, Apple Jack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie. Celestia slightly in front of them all.

"Are.. are you okay?" Twilight asked.

"Where- where am I! What am I!"

"You're in Equestria, you're a pony."  Celestia responded.

"No, I should be a human in Hemet."

"Hemet, never heard of that place, darlin, did you hit you're head?" Apple Jack asked. Jack thought for a moment, he suddenly realized... he was in Ponyville. He has been a brony for quite some time now. His heart swelled with joy, then with sadness. Why? He would never see home probably ever again.

"Listen, I'm a human. I came from Earth."

*Earth... why does that sound so familiar...* Twilight thought.

"You don't look like a... human or whatever that is!" Rainbow Dash shouted out in disbelief of what I had said. Fluttershy finally stepped out from the back,

"Listen, maybe you're just not feeling well, you should get some rest. Maybe if you rest you can remember something about yourself." Jack knew she was wrong about him having a history here, but, no sense in fighting it, he should just go.

"A-Alright.. maybe you're right..." Though he knew Fluttershy wasn't.

He woke up this morning feeling much more sighted on what the problem at hand was. There was only 3 things he needed to do. 1. Convince them he's human. 2. Find out how to get home from Celestia (since he thinks she was the one who brought him here) and 3. Get home, and say he had an accident, and hurt himself. What he got hurt on, he could not figure out. He then pondered, he didn't even know how to get step 1 done! He jumped out of bed.

"Oh.. calm yourself, you're head must be pounding from all that stuff going on yesterday. Coming out of no where in just a flash of light."

She was right, his head was pounding.

"Yeah, I still don't understand why I am here. I'm pretty sure I am human." *No.. I know for a fact I am...* Jack thought.

"Well, I made you some soup so you won't starve."

"Thanks."

"My name is Fluttershy, by the way."

"Thanks, Fluttershy" Jack rephrased.

Maybe life here for a while won't be so bad. Jack continued to eat as Fluttershy played with Angel, her bunny.

It's been a while, and Jack is still staying at Fluttershy's house. He had no way to thank her for all the good she's been doing for him. Feeding him, getting him drinks, and keeping him sane. But, all this time, Jack could not wrap his head around why he is here...

Chapter 3: The Tests... (Switching to First Person Writing)

If I had a dime for every time that question rose up about "is this real" I would have enough money to buy a fucking mansion. But, unfortunately, you can't get money for ideas. I still wonder that if this is a dream, must I wake up? Nothing like this is cientificly possible, at least in my reasoning. I finally caved in, I need to see the smartest person I know... Twilight.

I arrived at twilight's library. It wasn't that hard to find, since everypony knew where it is, it wasn't hard to get directions. So, there it was. Twilight Sparkle's library, the princess's.. wait.. She had recently turned into a princess, so, would she still be here? Or in the palace? I never really got to watch much of Season 4.... I saw the Equestria Girls movie. Whatever. I knocked on the door. Kock Knock Knock. And to my surprise, she walked out to greet me.

"Hi there..." she paused for a moment trying to realize the person she thought I was.

"It's... you... the one who came from the portal!"

"That's actually why I am here... I need you to explain to me why these are happening. Then, I guess I have to explain something to you..."

"Sure... Well to be honest nobody has a real straight answer... we believe it is caused by this mirror that lead me to a another dimension..." She looked around.

"Come inside." She gestured me inside the house.

"You cannot tell anybody about this? Got it!" I nodded.

"Well, this dimension led me to a world full of... humans... I think they were called..." She then realized why the word "human" in our earlier conversation stuck out to her.

"That's.. what you said you were, right?"

"Well, not the same humans as you see. But yeah, similar." She stared at me confused.

"But, where I come from... this is all fake. You are all a T.V. show. And I don't know If I'm dreaming or not!"

"Well I know you're not dreaming... and I think I may know the answer to you're problem. You see, these portals that have been happening go to different dimensions. Including T.V. shows. In a T.V. show, characters are created, and I guess in this case, thought I don't believe we are a cartoon because I've been living in Equestria since I was a filly, if the show was airing, you could get here."

It then all came to me, the drawers drew their filly selves, adult selves, and every episode following after another for 4 seasons, INCLUDING a movie! If all that then a full life time would be nothing to me, but everything to them! Thought, we don't have a scientific explanation, I know this isn't a dream! It couldn't be!

"Hey.. Jack I think it was?"

"Yeah."

"I really want to prove you are human. How about we run some tests?"

*Oh, boy...*

I suddenly felt my blood being extracted into a needle, the  into a bottle.

"Hey! What the hell, woman!"

"Just calm down..." She put my blood inside of this little capsule thing, then it spat out this paper. She rushed the paper to another machine. Then that put out a rock. She put the rock into another machine. A paper came out.

"Oh.. my... gosh!"

"What?"

"Jack, not only are you human, but, you're traits... you're strength, endurance, brains, speed, EVERYTHING! They've been amplified by 2x's a mans!"

"What!"

"When you came through the portal it must have merged you're new pony traits with you're human traits! Jack, you're practically invincible!"

"Seriously! Awesome!!!"

"But, why 2x's a man strength?"

"Maybe the portal's fluxuating and time-bending features created a strength amplifier ability so when I would go through I would have a man strength in both world, but the portal ALSO merged these two and created my new discovered abilities." Woah... did I really just say that?

"Jack, you're a genius!"

"I never was before!"

"Remember 2x's the brains?"

"Oh yeah..."

"This is incredible!"

Wow, who knew science could be so helpful... I thanked Twilight Sparkle and headed home. I couldn't wait to tell Fluttershy about this... and my three best friends the Cuite Mark Crusaders. But, those were the only people I knew... maybe school is in order...

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Next morning I woke up, bright and sunny day. I knew today was going to be great, because I could finally go to school! I was going to meet so many new friends! Or at least, I thought. I never really thought about how my blank flank would affect my abilities to make friends. Though, I didn't think about it, and kept walking to school.

To school was a short walk. I walked into class, it was about 8:05. I found an empty seat. I sat down and looked around. Nobody sat next to me.

"Ok, class, I'm Ms. Cherilee, and the only reason I say this is because I see we have a new student in the class!"

Everybody looked strait at me.

"So, tell us you're name!"

"I'm Jack.." I said quietly. I did not want to make a huge, bold, loud, and weird first impression by sounding so loud, so I kept quiet, gently said my name, and looked down.

"Well, class, go ahead and start you're---

She was stopped by the pound of an open door.

"We're here!" Said Scootaloo

I didn't know the Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, and Applebloom went here. They sat down in the three seats next to me. There are 4 seats each row of the 8 rows of the class. Each seat was filled up, except for the 2 to the left of me, and 1 to the right of me. Sweetie Belle took the one to the right of me, Scootaloo sat the farthest, and Applebloom also right next to me.

"Late as usual, huh?"

"Sorry Ms. Cherilee" they all said simultaneously.

Chapter 2: Is This... Real?

It's time Jack had a serious conversation with Fluttershy. Ever since he was invited into her house, he has never left. He has never been outside. So, he knocks on Fluttershy's room door, and asks her if he could talk to her,

"Sure, Jack. We can talk about anything!" She let out a happy grin.

"Well, Fluttershy, ever since I got here, you've never let me outside. I feel left out. I want to meet some other ponies, fillies, maybe even attend school. If I truly do live here, then, please, let me outside. Let me experience the world I forgot." Jack said trying to sound as sweet as possible.

He knew if he could get Fluttershy to tear up, and cave in, there was no way she could say no. It's hard enough for her to say no as it is, why not add a little pressure? He knew he didn't belong here, and he never lived here, but he was sick of sitting on the couch doing nothing.

*Sniff* "You know, Jack, you're right. I have been fencing you in." She said as tears started falling down her cheek.

"School sound like a good idea."

"Thanks, Fluttershy. You've been a great friend to me."

"Won't you be back?" She said as she sniffed and wiped the tears from her face.

"Of course! I just want to explore a bit."

"Okay, but be back by 6:30, okay?"

"Yes ma'am."

Now, normally Jack doesn't really USE manners, but, he did this time to sound sincere to the person who was trying to simulate a mother figure for him. Jack tried to avoid the question of his parents, since he didn't have a straight answer to that type of question. Also, his dad died back on earth, so it was only him and his mom. That made it even more difficult...

Jack rushed out the door, taking a long, deep breath of the fresh air surrounding him.

*Fresh air, it's been so long since I've inhaled fresh air. Not even in Hemet air was this fresh!*

Thought's were racing through Jack's mind like: What to do first? What type of food is here? Do they have McDonalds? How many friends can I make? Until he noticed a barn, next to that barn was a forest-type area. This wiped out all thoughts, because, if there was one thing Jack LOVED to do, it was adventure in the woods. Jack was always an outdoor person. So, instinct takes over and leaves out all the important "Who lived there? Would I get in trouble?" type of questions. But, no! No time for that! He didn't just ran he SPRINTED froward to the apple trees.

He finally arrived at the barn. He investigated the scene a bit more, making sure nobody was watching. He then ran into the woods. He walked for a bit more, only to be stopped by a small tree-house like structure. More like a club house.

"Woah... what is this?" Curiosity got the best of Jack, and he walked in uninvited.

"Hello? Anybody here?"

No answer.

Crash!

"AH! WHO ARE YOU!?"

"Who are you!?"

Three totally different faces stare down at him. One looked like that other pony, Applejack he had seen earlier when he first came here. The other looked some-what liked Rarity, and the last one... unrecognizable. The one that looked like Rarity was sitting on Jack's stomach, keeping him from getting up.

"Well? What's you're name?" The white one said.

"J-Jack..."

They all gasped.

"So.. you're the magic one?" The white one said.

"Sweetie belle, you know magic is ridiculous, It's all this stupid science stuff."

Jack's memories of the show come back to him, and remembers that these three are the Cutie Mark Crusaders...

"I think he's a spy! Look at all the black he's got on him! His eyes, his coat..."

"Scootaloo, he ain't no spy. He's just a bit older than us."

"Yeah, I'm 14!"

Jack knew he had to get out from under Sweetie belle, but, couldn't. He then had an idea, he moved his back hoofs like they were bent, and kicked himself out from under Sweetie belle's constraint.

"Look," Scootaloo said, "he's a blank flank!"

Jack had forgotten all about cutie marks and their importance.

*Great, another problem.* Jack thought to himself knowing of all the bullying that he would get.

"He ain't got no cutie mark!"

"You're right!"

"Yeah.. I don't think I'm good at anything.. really..."

"Everybody has to be good at something!" Applebloom said with a bright smile.

"Yeah, even if you just don't know it, that's what destiny is! You just have to see what is in store for you in the future!" Sweetie Belle said. She had a certain nervous shake about her...

About 2 hours of conversing, and becoming good friends with the three fillies, Jack decides to ask the question he has always wanted to ask.

"Hey, can I join you're group here? I would like to see my talent. I want to find out my destiny! And what a better way to do that then with friends?"

They all said in perfect harmony "Of course!"

"We are always looking for new recruits!" Sweetie Belle said.

That was it, Jack made his first friends. It is 2:00 P.M. now, so Jack has LOTS of time before he has to get back to Fluttershy's cottage. He was just trotting along, but then he realized something... this is a cartoon... the show is a cartoon, how can this be happening if it is just a cartoon!? And that weird portal thing that causes a ripple in time and space, how could THAT be real? He couldn't believe he hadn't thought of this sooner! Which made him to think...

"Am I dreaming...? IS this all fake? IS this just a joke my mind is playing on me to escape the monotony of a dull city I hate so much! But... if this is a dream... I don't think I want to wake up..."