Rainbow cried. She cried and cried again while soarin just came to every need. The retired wonderbolt knew what his wife needed but not wanted. " dashie you will see them again someday", soarin said trying to comfort his heartbroken lover. They were watching the news that morning about 7 huge murders. She knew when she went to check it out. Celestia,Luna,Twilght and the other elements of harmony were dead. She wept all day. She told soarin as soon as she got home and they laid down in the bed while he got up to get her favorite movie and breakfast. She was so upset her best friends murdered.She now rose the sun and the moon . Later Soarin heard a quiet knock at the door. She then went to go tell whoever that no one can come over. But that is before he saw a orange filly with a darkish rose mane with purple eyes. " please Mr. soarin sir may i see my sister', said the filly. He knew who she was it was scootaloo she was her flower filly at his wedding.
It looked as if she was crying. Not wanting to upset her he showed her to his wife. Rainbow lay quietly still sniffling and more tears running down her cheeks. She heard the door crack open. When she looked at the entry way she saw Soarin and scootaloo. Rainbow gave her first smile all day. But something was wrong. She saw scootaloo crying too and told her to come up to the bed and they all talk about it.
At about lunch time they all went out of the room all crying. Turns out sweetie bell and applebloom were killed as well.
Her parents did not even care. They were always having it and making out never paying attention or caring about there daughter. Scootaloo then went back home while dashie went to get some pizza. Soarin stayed home alone worried as hell she would die to.
Rainbow later got home but not blubbering but a serious grin on her face. Without being able to ask rainbow picked up the phone and called FPS (foal protection services). She told them everything scootaloo"s parents did and she was willing to take custody.
As scootaloo came in the doorway of her room she just ran to the bed in hopes of taking a nap. But just as she was drowsy she heard a knocking on the door. Not hoping it was her parents she quickly washed her face and opened the door. "Well hello there miss scootaloo i am from the foal protection agency", a big buff stallion said. She just stood there in shock wondering why he was there. "Dash must have called you she is my sister". He nodded and went to get her parents. "miss you and your husband are under arrest for foal neglect and lack of caring for her", The stallion said. Drunk her parents just started making out and .................getting into it. He split them apart and brought them to jail. All the while Scootaloo went to rainbow dash new castle. The train was a buzz live with chatting and laughing. Scootaloo just sat there alone waiting to go hug and thank her sister of what she did.
As Rainbow and soarin stepped out to the balcony they saw scootaloo racing towards the castle. Rainbow and soarin grinned and they both flew down to greet the filly. "Oh rainbow dash thank you thank you thank you!", Scootaloo said racing toward her sister and Her husband. Rainbow dash opened her self ready for the embrace that awaited her. Scootaloo just hugged them both tightly while dash stroked her back. "Scootaloo she is not your sister anymore we are your new parents", Soarin said giving her a warm and gentle smile". Feeling the tight embrace she sat there feeling loved and cared for. Rainbow dash and Soarin new they made all the bad and sadness in there hearts a lot more brighter. So on the streets on canterlot the new royal family sit there crying and hugging. The world just got a little more bright.
my first story (Dont have to read)
Thank you all so much for reading my story. I got my inspiration from some soarin dash fanfics and some scootaloo no family or bad home life fanfics. I really hope i did good and i want to please all bronies and non bronies. On an unrelated note if you want to see more of my writing i am going to try to get a book published. Back on subject this is my first story ever and if you don't like it do not be hater. But even if you hate on me i say hatters gonna hate! anyway i plan to do more quick stories up to 5 chapters for now on.
I would like you all to give suggestions about things i could write about. The only thing is it can not be top inappropriate or bloody. I am fine with every thing else. I do want to please ok i promise not to be a hater but if i comment i give reviews with an A for good B for ok C for needs progress D for has a small amount of potential and F for i do not like. I will also note that it would be my opinion and if others like i will not question. Again thank you for reading my story and just give me a comment and a like. I also have Instagram it is called ilovegod737 ok so bye!
