I've read over a bit of this, and realized that it's bad, it's ok but I'm gonna move onto other works that use what I've learned since I began this work.
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It's not like unusual travellers have never passed through Ponyville, Diamond Dogs, Griffon, and even Princesses are not unusual sights. Usually there is some trouble, and the resident Princess and her friends muddle through and manage to make new friends.

So while it's not strange to see a new mare passing through town, when she manages to avoid a Pinkie party the Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to figure her out.

But will their curiosity cause trouble when it reminds somepony of memory's best left forgotten?

First story on Fimfiction, I know it's not perfect and would like advice if anyone can give it.
Changed name from Broken Hearts and Hidden Secrets, because the name doesn't work anymore.