The Lunar Republic's most Wanted Spy.

by daneonpony

Rating: teen
Tags: Tragedy, Princess Celestia, Spitfire, Gore, Slice of Life, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Sad, Princess Luna, Original Character
Length: 2063

Neon is one of the first Spy's used in the Solar Empire Lunar Republic war and he seems to have a crush on a certain fiery maned Pegasus...

Neon Equestrias first ever Spy, might be the Lunar Republics only hope to win the civil war against the Solar Empire! Follow Neon on his bloody mission's to take down Solar Empire's Senate leaders and military generals, and maybe achieve his own mission to win the heart of a certain mare!

Published 2014-04-22 21:50:04 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-06 16:29:42 UTC

Story Pilot

6.00.A.M.
Nock Nock Nock! “Uh.”
“Come out NOW! We know your in their Neon don’t make this harder then it needs to be you got 5 seconds!”
“Or what!”
“We break the door down and restrain you till the Princess’s arrive!”
“Buck you!” Neon screamed at the top of his lungs wile he was putting all his survival gear into his saddle bags.
“1,…2,…3,…4,…5! We’re coming in!” The Royal guard yelled as he turned around and buck the door open, then all the guards galloped in as fast as they could.
“Where the BUCK is he!” Shining Armor yelled smashing his hoof as hard as he could on the marble counter, as a result an ear splitting smash was heard as shards of marble flew all over the place bouncing off walls and soldiers.
“Um Sir.” A royal soldier said as quiet as a mouse probably even quieter.
“What?!” Shining Armor yelled at the soldier even though the soldier didn’t do anything to make Armor yell at him.
“Th..th.theres a note for you.” After the soldier said that he flinched as if was about to be struck as hard as the marble counter did.
“Let me see it!” Armor yelled, the soldier then gave the note to Armor, then ran out the door as fast as he could as if Shining Armor was going to beat him to a pulp.
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Four months earlier.
“Sky you hear me my bucking cover is blown I have guards all over me I need back up!” Neon screamed as he was running away with a busted leg and a broken wing holding in his tears of pain so he can see where he was going.
“Calm down Neon I have some agents on their way.” Sky said it as if nothing was even happening. Neon screamed as his leg twisted in the most disturbing way he had ever seen, as a result he let out a stream of tears making his vision blurry then rammed his head into a wall rendering his vision useless then he blacked out. “Neon…Neon…Neon!” Spitfire yelled until the black Pegasus woke up.
“What!” Neon yelled then quickly lifted his head only to smash into Spitfires. “OW!” They both yelled in unison.
“What were you thinking bird for brain.” Spitfire said while she was rubbing her head as hard as she could while Neon just couldn’t stop laughing, then Spitfire struck him in the gut as hard as she could making a single tear fall down Neon’s cheek.
“Where are we?” Asked Neon.
“Lunar Republic mountain base dumbie!”
“Ok,Ok,Ok.” You didn’t have to yell I still have a head ach. Neon said in a quite voice earning a giggle from Spitfire.
“Hey spits you know what would help my head ach?” Neon asked.
“No what would help your head ach?” Spitfire replied in a harsh tone of voice.
“A nice long look of that beautiful flank of yours” Neon said in the best foal voice he could muster up.
“In your dreams lover boy.” Spitfire said flicking her tail into Neon’s face then walked out of the room with a blush.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Present Time.
“Heheheh.” Neon giggled while flying away in a moderate speed.
“All righty then what direction I’m I heading” Neon then preceded to pull out his compass to look at what direction he was heading then he put it back in his saddle bag then took out a necklace locket and opened it to see a beautiful orange mare with amber eyes and a mane that looked like a raging fire. “Ah Spitfire I wonder what you’ve been doing for the past week…” Neon thought as he flew faster.
“Now I know all you readers are thinking so what its been a week but think about it this way that you haven’t seen someone you love so much like your mom or dad, Wie Ihre Mama oder Papa, Как ваш мамы или папы, Come il vostro mamma o papa. Those are your mom or dad in German, Russian, and Italian.”
“I’m so tiered, I think I’ll just use the thermals till I get back to the other safe house.” Neon said to himself.
“There we are just a klick away.” Neon said to himself. “Dam it I got to stop talking to my self.” Neon said to him self. “Crap I did it again!” As Neon was getting closer to the safe house and noticed that the lights were on. “Hmm, that’s weird there shouldn’t be anyone there.” Neon thought to himself. “Let’s see how this works out shall we?”
“God dam it I did again!”
Neon flew over and landed on the ground as soft as he could without making a loud thump he then preceded to tip hoof (Tip toe?) across the deck till he reached a window and peeked in only to see three Lunar Guards sitting around the table playing poker.
“Hmm, just to make sure there actually Lunar Guards.”
“Cold!” Neon screamed.
“Night!” One of the guards yelled.
Neon walked in the safe house and looked around then noticed a fourth guard writing looked at the three guards then walked over to the fourth guard and looked over his shoulder and looked at the scroll and saw the Solar Empire symbol then turned around just as a hoof was about strike the back of my head and somehow managed to dodge it and throw a right hook and smash the guards jaw instantly knocking him out then bucked the guard who was writing in the back of the knocking him out then looked at the two other guards.
“Let’s do this.” Neon screamed as he rushed a guard then opened his wings lifted off the ground and turned his head and opened his saddle bag and pulled out a combat knife then rushed the guard from behind and slashed one of the guards neck instantly squirting blood into Neon’s face making him close his eyes and shake his head to try to get the blood off his face just as he opened his eyes a hoof smashed into his eye socket then into his gut then into his jaw making the combat knife fall out of Neon’s mouth then turned and went for the combat knife but before he could grab it Neon landed on the guards back and then snapped the guards neck making the guard and him fall to the ground Neon then got up and grabbed the combat knife and then waked over to one of the guards and rolled him over kneeled down and with a quick swing of his neck slit the guards throat open making a warm squirt of blood hit Neon face Neon then did then same to the other guards, then walked over to a bed and lied down said a prayer and quickly fell asleep.

Author's Note

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Part One Episode One Edited

"Ugh" Was all that Neon could manage to say when he woke to smell of dead bodies"Ugh this has to be the worst smell i have evr smelled okay i should get going." Neon said to him self as he got out of bed and almost tripped over a dead pony. "Okay time to go." Neon said as he walked out of the the safe house or what was supposed to be a safe house. As Neon kicked off the ground he took one last look of the not so safe house.

Mean wile in Canterlot.

"Shining Armour i suppose that your search was successful, was it?"

"No Princess Celestia he got away against all odds."

"Shining Armour i'm getting tiered of your failures this is the seventh time so far."

"I'm sorry Princess Celestia."

"You have one last chance other wise i have no other choice but to strip you of your title of Commander of the Royal Guards, got it?

"Yes Princess Celestia."

"Good now leave me i have important things to do got it?"

"Yes Princess Celestia."

Mean wile Neon is on his way to a safe house in Pony Vile.

"Okay almost their." Neon said to himself as he was just passing the Everfree Forest, but quickly landed and galloped to the nearest bush and reached into his saddle bag and took out his Binoculars and put them to his face and looked threw them and looked around pony vile and say posters of Celestia with the word OBEY under her face.

"Shit." Was the only thing that came to mind when he took the binoculars off his face and looked up and saw a Solar Empire flag hanging off the mares office building.

"What to do what to do?" Neon kept saying to him self.

"HALT!" A Solar Empire soldier yelled at Neon making him almost jump out of his skin.

"Ha you think you can take me down i took down 20 of the Solar Empires top soldiers!"

Right after Neon said that 10 more guards appeared behind him one them tried to rush him but Neon was to fast and kicked off the ground landing on one the soldiers back and snapped his neck and jumped off before he hit the ground with him he then tried to do the same with another but wasn't lucky because before he could kick off one of the soldier pierced his side with his horn and knocked Neon to the ground.

"Son of bitch!" Neon yelled as he put his right hoof over the puncture wound that was gushing blood all over the ground. Neon was then covered in another ponies shadow and looked up as the soldier was about to strike him with his sword but before he could he got hit with a blue bolt of magic. "AH!" The soldier yelled right before he hit the ground and died. Then another bolt of magic hit one of the other soldiers this time it was a green bolt of magic then a bunch of bolts flew past him in all difernt colors ranging from blue to purple and yellow, red, green, cyan, orange and violet. Then bolts of magic started flying from the other side until it became a full on war zone with deferent colored bolts flying in all defernt directions with screeming and cursing. "Ah!" Neon screamed as he was inveloped in a blue orb that was reflecting bolts of magic just then a Unicorn jumped over Neon and slid across the ground then turned around and crouched down next to Neon. "Where is the wound?" She asked Neon.

"Right here he said." and took his hoof off of his wound.

"Ow, okay stay still and stay calm this is only going to hurt a little okay." Neon answord with a nod. The Unicorns horn started to glow and Neon began to scream in pain as the magic sealed his wound.

"You okay dear?" The nurse asked Neon replied with a nod.

"Alright lets get going the nurse said." in a rushing tone.

"Okay Neon said as he got up with out any pain." "I will never understand magic" Neon said to himself as he started galloping threw colorful and deadly magic bolts. Soon after the town was a complete battlefield dead ponies all over the ground and still nopony cared everypony was in full head on head war using anything they had that can do damage, and i helped for hours i fought my coat covered in blood and still nopony would stop even though hundreds of ponies lay dead on the ground i had a few close calls but no damage, my knife tip bent from the constant penatration of armor but nothing i couldn't fix. The battle went on and on not a single break, just constant death and destruction houses destroyed from the constant bolts of magic. Neon ran from soldier to soldier stabbing and slashing, slicing and jabbing. He was covered in blood, he didn't know if it was his or somepony else's but he didn't care, all he cared about was killing the bastards who killed these ponies who only wanted freedom and peace.

Author's Note

This chapter is under once again UNDER CONSTRUCTION sorry for the INCONVENIENCE every pony! : )