Shooting Stars part 1
That day
Load Full StoryNext ChapterIt was a normal day in Ponyville. Comet was practicing her spell for Princess Celestia when her friend silver swirl entered.
" Comet what are you doing inside on such a fabulous day?"
" What do you want Silver."
" Well I wanted to know if you could come to the park with me." she said almost pouting.
" Oh whatever let's just go to the damn park"
" Well you don't have to be so pushy are you ok"
" Yes lets just go !"
What silver didn't know was that comet had became very lonely and longed for that very special some pony. She had only dated once before in magic kindergarden. his name was shadow flash. He was a shy foal who had a crush one comet for some time. They dated for only 8 months before comet and her parents Galaxy and Cosmo star moved to ponyville.
When they arrived silver swirl went off to flirt with some stallions who were playing hoofball in a big open area. Comet sat down and opened a book about the genetics of ponies and how to understand then. Suddenly she heard a voice say
" So i see your attempting to learn about the genetics of ponies" said a yellow stallion with a yellow and green mane.
" And what do you mean by attempting. " Comet said back sharply to the stallion.
" Well the world of pony genetics" he started as he lay next to comet, " are a complicated subject."
" and how would you know" said comet. she was starting to get annoyed by the stallion.
" Well i work at the local hospital in the area where all the test are ran to see if it's a filly or a colt what breed etc."
" Oh" said comet feeling a little mad at herself for being so prissy. She really though that this stallion was cute.
" So" he said breaking the awkwardness. Comet had realized she had been staring at him, " would you like to maybe go to Sugar Cube Corner."
This caught her off guard so she replayed with a simple " k"
When they arrived Comet noticed 3 fillies running out of the kitchen as mrs. cake yelled at them. They ran out of the shop yelling " Cutie Mark Crusader cupcake makers"
Comet laughed as her and the cute stallion named Elisile trotted up to the counter.
" Hi there" a pinkie pony said as she popped up from the counter " what can i get ya" she said with a giant smile on her face.
" I'll have a daisy sandwich" said Elisle.
" And I'll have the same" Comet said.
After the pink pony gave them their food they trotted out of the store.
" Hurry" said elisile as he galloped of.
comet teleported near him and started to gallop beside him. When they stopped they were in an open field with a beautiful view of Princess Luna's beautiful night.There they chatted and laughed all night. Suddenly a shooting star flashed through the sky.
" Make a wish elisile said smiling at Comet.
Then comet kissed elisile. his eyes widened with shock but then closed as he kissed her back.
" It just came true" comet said to him
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