Shooting Stars part 1

by CometBurst

Rating: everyone
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 1032

The story of my OC's falling in love

Comet and Elisile were the couple that had the " Love at first sight" type of relationship. This is the journey of how they fell in love.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-18 23:00:20 UTC

The field

The door to Elislie's house flung open as the two ponies kissing heavily  stumbled into the house. They knew what was coming next and Comet knew that it was going to be great. Then she woke up. The whole thing in Elisile's house was a dream. And a rather um messy dream realized as she looked down at herself in the bed. She quickly sprang up and fell out off bed waking the pony next to her. Elislie. The whole thing hadn't been a dream. Well she did have that dream only it was what happened months before at his house. She was at her house in her bed with the star covers winkled and scattered around.

       " What's wrong Comet. Are you ok."

       " Yea but i had i weird dream it was nothing."

  He returned to his sleep. They had been dating for 7 Months now and Elisile had just moved in with Comet a few days ago. Elislie was planning something big tomorrow and he wanted it to be really special. He knew that Comet was pregnant. He had found the test. He was elated when he discovered that he was going to be a dad.

  The morning after just before the sun rose, Elislie Took Comet to the field where they had first kissed, and had bucked like a couple of wild animals. Right when the sun rose Elislie kissed Comet then said

         " Comet when i first saw you i fell in love with you. You are the prettiest mare i have ever saw. Will you make me the happiest stallion in the world and marry me."

          Comet felt tears start streaming down her face. She started to jump like a filly after getting their cutie mark.

             " YES ELISILE YES I LOVE YOU !" she yelled as she hugged the yellow pegasus. Just then Silver and Clarity ran out and started jumping up and down just like comet did. After that comet and her friends galloped home like little fillies ahead of Elislie, chatting about the wedding that would happen. Just then a green stallion tackled Elislie. After letting Elisile up the green stallion, who was Elislie's best friend Gale, Said

" you did it bro.I'm proud of you."

" well" Elislie said with a sigh, "i would have been a fool not too."

Comet and her friend started to walk. Clarity spoke up and said

" Well as one of your PFFs i should get the honor of a girly hug."

" oh oh me too." said Sliver jumping up and down again.

"oh come here." said comet as she embrased the two ponies and started to lightly sob of happiness as she said to her friends in a whisper " i'm pregnant."

That day

It was a normal day in Ponyville. Comet was practicing her spell for Princess Celestia when her friend silver swirl entered.

" Comet what are you doing inside on such a fabulous day?"

" What do you want Silver."

" Well I wanted to know if you could come to the park with me." she said almost pouting.

" Oh whatever let's just go to the damn park"

" Well you don't have to be so pushy are you ok"

" Yes lets just go !"

       What silver didn't know was that comet had became very lonely and longed for that very special some pony. She had only dated once before in magic kindergarden. his name was shadow flash. He was a shy foal who had a crush one comet for some time. They dated for only 8 months before comet and her parents Galaxy and Cosmo star moved to ponyville.

   When they arrived silver swirl went off to flirt with some stallions who were playing hoofball in a big open area. Comet sat down and opened a book about the genetics of ponies and how to understand then. Suddenly she heard a voice say

         " So i see your attempting to learn about the genetics of ponies" said a yellow stallion with a yellow and green mane.

    " And what do you mean by attempting. " Comet said back sharply to the stallion.

" Well the world of pony genetics" he started as he lay next to comet, " are a complicated subject."

   " and how would you know" said comet. she was starting to get annoyed by the stallion.

    " Well i work at the local hospital in the area where all the test are ran to see if it's a filly or a colt what breed etc."

    " Oh" said comet feeling a little mad at herself for being so prissy. She really though that this stallion was cute.

    " So" he said breaking the awkwardness. Comet had realized she had been staring at him, " would you like to maybe go to Sugar Cube Corner."

   This caught her off guard so she replayed with a simple " k"

     When they arrived Comet noticed 3 fillies running out of the kitchen as mrs. cake yelled at them. They ran out of the shop yelling " Cutie Mark Crusader cupcake makers"

Comet laughed as her and the cute stallion named Elisile trotted up to the counter.

" Hi there" a pinkie pony said as she popped up from the counter " what can i get ya" she said with a giant smile on her face.

" I'll have a daisy sandwich" said Elisle.

" And I'll have the same" Comet said.

         After the pink pony gave them their food they trotted out of the store.

     " Hurry" said elisile as he galloped of.

      comet teleported near him and started to gallop beside him. When they stopped they were in an open field with a beautiful view of Princess Luna's beautiful night.There they chatted and laughed all night. Suddenly a shooting star flashed through the sky.

   " Make a wish elisile said smiling at Comet.

     Then comet kissed elisile. his eyes widened with shock but then closed as he kissed her back.

   " It just came true" comet said to him