A Dark Secret

by Headphone Guy

Rating: teen
Tags: Original Character, Gore, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Dark, Alternate Universe, Rainbow Dash, Other, Romance
Length: 4177

Blue Spirit was just a normal everyday teenage pony until he followed his best friend that so happens to be a Vampony!

Blue Spirit is just a common everyday unicorn teenage pony, he doesn't have alot of friends, all he has is his best friend, Soul Chaser. To make thing worse, Soul doesn't even talk to him anymore! Everybody that he cares for leaves him.. What will he do?

One night he goes out on a stroll one night to find his Best Friend Soul walking towards the park... Why is she out this late?...........

This is going to be a POV of Spirit
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First Vampony Fimfiction and people might hate but I promise that I will try to make this a really good story and I will try to update constantly since I Hate stories that are not completed or that their on hiatus or never updated but promised for an Update...... I WILL Finish this story

Suggestions and Comments are welcomed! Good or bad!

Published 2014-04-20 19:00:03 UTC
Last updated 2015-07-24 04:27:00 UTC

I Hate Mondays

I Hate Mondays

Chapter 1 - I Hate Mondays

BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP

"Ugh" I said as I smacked the side of my bed trying to find the alarm. Once I found it, I smacked the alarm so much that it broke but, it turned off.

"Wake Up!" my mother said as she came barging in.

"Five more minutes" I groaned.

"Your going to be late for school you know that?" She said while looking at my broken alarm clock. "That's the second one this MONTH!" She flared "Now get up this instant!" Then she trotted out of my room, slamming the door.

"Ughhhh, I hate Mondays", I uncovered myself from my thin bed sheets and I head towards the bathroom to wash up. I turn on the water. I let the water run down my hoof until the water become warm. I stepped into the shower and let the warmness of the water run through my fur and muscles. "Ah, the water feels so good," I groaned to myself then realized how loud I said that. The steaming hot water relaxed my whole body and made me cheer up. After I finished my hot shower, I dried myself. As I walked down the stairs, I adjusted my blue bands. I came to a kitchen smelling pancakes. Dame, Mom makes good smelling pancakes.

"You got about ten minutes to eat your breakfast or your going to be late, AGAIN!" yelled my mom." I made pancakes". She was cleaning dishes from the breakfast that she made.

I sat down at the table and started eating my pancakes. After decimating about ten pancakes, I opened my door to see Manehattan up and about. I closed the door and walked towards school. After about a fifteen minute trot, I got there and passed the gates.

I looked around the campus and saw the other students including Soul Chaser by her self in the shadows. Soul Chaser is my best friend. I've known her since we were fillies. She is one of the most prettiest earth pony mares in school that I know of. I still questioned why she hanged out with me...

" Why is she hanging in the shadows?" I thought to myself. "She loves sunshine and is into sports and all that gibberish".

I walk towards her. As am walking I noticed that her peach fur is very pale, like she never seen the sun pale, more pale than her normal peach color, like if the color was drained from her. I was concerned.

"Hey Soul Chaser". She didn't reply, didn't even look at me. "Are you ok?" I asked. "Your very pale, are you sick?". Same reaction, no reply. " Um, are you mad at me?". I was now started to really get worried.

"No" She said coldly.

"Oh that's good" I said in relief. "May I ask what is wrong with you?"

She doesn't move, but then she smiles, like out of a stupid question.

"Nothing is wrong with me" she said with delight.

Soul Chaser has never acted this way , since I've known her. Maybe she finally is changing or just doesn't want me to hang out with her since am basically a loner. She's my only friend. .

"In fact .... I feel FANTASTIC!" She said as she slowly raised her head to look at me.

What happened next threw my entire Monday off. She looked directly into my green eyes and my whole body froze, like a trance and as I stared into her bright pink eyes I saw them flash crimson red for a moment. Fear spread through out my body. What made it worse was when she smiled, long-razer sharp fangs were protruding out of her mouth. Was I imaging things?

"Ok then, see you after school." I said enthusiastic as I broke eye contact and quickly walked to my class.

After about seven hours of school work, the school bell rang and I took off towards my home. I opened the door and quickly went up the stairs to my room to do my homework but I feel asleep in the process of doing it. When I woke up I saw that it was dark outside. My mind recalled what happened today.

"What in the world was up with Soul Chaser today? First, she had fangs, why would she have her vampony costume on if Nightmare Night is two weeks away, it's a bit early to start dressing up. Maybe that wasn't a costume, but then that would defy me as insane as am very delusional as of the moment."

What Blue Spirit didn't noticed as he was thinking to himself was that a mare was watching him through the window with hungry demonic crimson eyes.....

"I really need to buy a new alarm clock" I thought to myself looking at the wreckage that was a alarm clock. "Still, what happened today and what I saw didn't seem fake to me, I wonder if I have pictures of vamponies in my library" I said getting up. I went to my book collection to see if I have anything that can help me find out what is wrong with Soul Chaser. I started looking for the books but I realize that I don't have any. "I got to get more books!" I said.

"Hmmmm, I wonder if the library has any books on this topic, I'll go tomorrow" but then I heard something bang my window. I turn my head to see the same eyes from today. Then it was gone. I ran to my window and opened it to find darkness and the night sky.

"What in the world" I said..... I need to see a therapist. I think am insane now. I closed the window and went to my bed. The second I got into my bed I fell asleep not knowing what the next days are going to bring.

Author's Note

Comments and Questions are Welcomed!

Don't know when Chapter 2 will be up but it will be up soon!

The Day That Changed My Life

Chapter 2 - The Day That Changed My Life

"YES! Its Saturday! I yelled as I got up from my bed. Its been a week since I saw Soul Chaser, I haven't seen her because am frightened of what she might have become. This whole week I was in the public library trying to find more information about what happened on monday. Turns out, am not insane. The books have pictures that reference to what I saw. The Fangs, the eyes, the lost of color. It scares me that Soul Chaser may not be there anymore, replaced by a beast within her. Still, I may be just jumping into conclusions about her being a creature of the night.

"I really got to ask her if she is really a vampony. WAIT! Why would she even respond to me? Even if she is a vampony, she will probably just kill me, am nothing compared to her." I said

"Who are you talking to Blue Spirit?" my mother said

Crap! I really got to stop talking to myself.

"NO ONE MOM!" I screamed from my room

"Then if your not talking to anypony then that makes you crazy!" she said

"Well your not the first that said that to me mom" I thought to myself.

I got up from my bed and started thinking to myself..

"So what should I make of this fine saturday morning?" I asked myself

"I know, i'll read more about vamponies" I said enthusiastically.

I grab one of the new books that I haven't read and jumped into my cold bed. All that I recall was reading something about what it feels like to be bitten by a vampony but I feel asleep. When I woke it it was dark.

"Damn it! My whole day, whizzed passed me" I said throwing my hoofs in the air. I was frustrated. Then the window banged for the second time of the day.

"Arg, you know am getting real tired of your crap" I said as I opening the window. "Whoever is hitting my window needs to sto.." I cut myself short when I poked my head out the window to see Soul Chaser standing in the shadows on the side of the house.

"Soul why are you hitting my window?" I asked

She doesn't say anything, she just stands there.

Then all of a sudden she grins and jumps off the roof and lands perfectly and begins to walk down the path that leads to the park.
I stared in awe and shock of what just happened.

"She...she jumped two stories and landed perfectly.... why is she going to the park?" I asked myself

"Should I follow her?..................... Screw IT!" I said running downstairs. I open the door and quickly trotted the path to the park.

"Its really dark out, where did she go?". I stopped trotting once I got to the park, I found out that Soul was not there, that I was alone.

"Great" I said.

Then I heard deep primal growling behind me. Fear spread through out my whole body.Their couldn't be timberwolves in Manehattan right? I never heard of one ever in the city.

"Don't look back, Don't look back" I thought to myself.

Then the growling stopped.

"Blue Spirit" said the voice behind me. It sounded feminine and really like Soul Chaser... Could it be?!

"Is.... is that Soul Chaser?" I turn around instantly regretting it.

Soul Chaser was fifteen feet away from me and thirty feet away I saw a dead bunny with it's own blood around it making a circle. I turned back to Soul Chaser to see that she was looking directly looking at me with the same glowing crimson eyes. Blood was dripping from her mouth and fangs..... Oh crud..

"Uh hi Soul" I said terrified.

Soul Chaser just kept staring at me with hungry eyes. She never blinked. Then she went into a predatory stand and growled.

"Spirit....RUN!" she said through her teeth grinning.

That was all it took for me to start running for my life. I spun around and ran where ever safety is. I ran and ran until I was out of the park. I look behind me and didn't see Soul Chaser chasing me but I sill ran. I knew that she was the hunter and I was the prey. I did not want to die tonight. I wondered what time it was because the streets were empty. I was getting tired, I was sweating and scared. I heard music coming from a club and my first thoughts were ponies. I ran straight for the club but I was pushed into an alley so hard that my whole body went flying to the brick wall. I picked myself up coughing from the impact. I looked up to see Soul Chaser infront blocking my only way out. I couldn't use a teleportation spell because my head was spinning. I was pinned.... CRAP!

Soul Chaser started to move towards me slowing, starting at my with lust and hunger. She licked her lips, saliva dripping from her razor sharp fangs.

"Soul, you don't have to do this" I plead

She stopped and looked at me.

"I know your in there Soul, this is not who you are, this is not the Soul that I grew up with!" I yelled terrified

She smiled.

"Oh Blue Spirit, can't you see that am the same mare, can't you see that am the same pony that you grew up with, I've only changed a little.." She said with pride

"By becoming a VAMPONY!" I yelled

She just laughed. Then she suddenly appeared right in front of me and we were face to face. Then she pinned me against the wall

"The only difference from this mare and the mare that you used to know is that this mare is stronger, powerful, and immortal, not a weak, pathetic, ordinary mortal pony" she said.

My mind was about to break down, my best friend, the mare that I grew up with, is lost, changed into a monster that is about to kill me, why do I feel like crying?

"You know Blue Spirit, I haven't had a single drop of pony blood since becoming a vampony" she said.

She muzzled my neck. She is so cold. She stopped and moved towards my ear. I felt her cold breath soothing my fur..

"And, am dying to see what pony blood taste like" she said in a low, deep tone.

Soul Chaser resumed to rubbing my neck.

"Why do you have to do this to me? Out all the ponies that you could of chosen from, why me?" I asked.

She stopped muzzling my neck and looking into my eyes.

"Because ever since I became a vampony, I've been craving for your blood, and your blood only. Since your my best friend I thought you would let me" She said as she continued to muzzle my neck.

"I also crave your blood because I can smell it, I can tell its pure virgin blood." she said grinning. I felt her sniffing my neck. She took deep breaths, drowning herself in my scent.

"So Blue Spirit, still a virgin eh" she said with a chuckle muffled by my fur.

My face turned bright red.

I felt helpless and embarrassed. I was going to die by the hands of my best friend, I felt betrayed but I also felt another feeling...

"Soul Chaser, please don't do this" I begged

"Nothing is going to change about what is going to happen Spirit" She said coldly. She began to lick my neck sending shivers down my spine. Not sure if this is ok but it was kind of hot, Soul licking my neck. Wait she's tasting me.. OH CRUD.

"Sou-" ...

I didn't even get to say another word.

I cringed as I felt pain as she bit. Her fangs slowly going deep into my neck. I heard her moan in pleasure as my blood seeped out of my vein and I felt her begin to suck.

I felt my whole body go numb and I stumbled to the floor. Then I felt her bite down even harder. I felt my blood draining from my whole body. I was becoming weak. I was going to die. I looked up at the moon and the stars. They reminded me of when I would stare at the stars with my mom. She would sing my favorite song.

"Twinkle....twinkle... li-ttle star, how I wonder what you are. Up above the world...so h-igh, like a diamond in the s-sky..." I sang silently to myself.

I began to cry silently to myself as I let my best friend finish me off. Remember the feeling of betrayal, not only that I felt that, I also felt Love. I started to love Soul Chaser one year ago when she stopped these three mare when they were beating me up. Yea, that's how weak I was and still am. Once I fell in love, I tried to hide it and I did a pretty good job.

What I still can't seem to understand that why she chose me to become her first meal, yea am her best friend, but why?

I felt really dizzy and weak. I felt Soul Chaser's fangs slowly retract from my neck. I felt her beginning to lick my neck where blood still oozed from my punctured bite marks. I couldn't move, couldn't speak. I know I lost alot of blood. After Soul Chaser finished licking my neck clean of my blood she stood up.

"AHHHHH! That was sooooo Delicious, better than the bunny's blood, better than any food I've ever tasted" she said as my blood dripped from her mouth. She licked her lips....

"I wondered what I tasted like" I thought to myself, probably like chicken or fatness since I eat alot of junkfood.

Well I hope that I at least served a purpose in this world, feeding my best friend. I was losing consciousness. I raised my hoof slowly to the sky, trying to get the stars. My eye's felt heavy.

When I raised my hoof Soul Chaser seemed to have noticed me snapped out of her predatory trance. She looked down at me and realize what she had done. What she has done to her best friend.

"BLUE SPIRIT!" She screamed as she knelt. " I am so sorry! Please forgive me! I don't know what happened!" She said as tears started to build up.

"Please don't die" She pleaded

I moved my hoof to her face.

"Soul, please don't cry" I whispered.

Then I felt my hoof fall from her face

Then there was darkness.......

Author's Note

And here's Chapter 2!

Hope that this chapter was better than the first one!

When this goes up i'll be writing Chapter 3!

Like I said, I will try to update as much as possible!

The Next Day

Chapter 3

I was running in the forest. I kept looking back to find those wretched crimson eyes staring down into my soul. Fear ranged throughout my entire body. My legs, my arms, my body, everything aches with pain! My body is going to give out. I look behind me to find that the eyes are gone, hope rose within me until I turned around to find those exact eyes in front of me, blocking my path. I stopped instantly and fell face forward to the soft soil which tasted much like dirt. I cough and spat it out of my mouth. I look up to find that those eyes belonged to a pony. A pale looking mare in fact. The darkness covered her face and cutie mark. She took a step towards me. My body trembled before her presents. She was coming. Panic filled my mind and body. I turned to flee but a hoof held me down. I looked back to see that the mare was smiling. Perfect white teeth except ... she had fangs! Oh Celestia help me!!!

I struggled to get out of her grasp. She was too strong! She knelt on the ground. Her hoof moved me head upwards, my neck exposed to the cool air. I looked into those demonic slit eyes only to find hunger in within them. The mares fangs glistened with saliva in the moonlight. She licked her lips. The mare leaned down and started nuzzling my soft fur. I felt my face heat up, blushing madly. Never had I have a pony, especially are mare except my mother, nuzzle me. I felt something wet lick my neck. A shiver ran down my body. A mare with those darn crimson eyes, fangs, and now, shes licking me? Oh.

She was not licking me, she was TASTING ME! I squirmed as much as I can, closing my eyes, wishing it would stop...er...kinda...maybe If she wasn't going to DRINK ME DRY then maybe I would like her to continue. I felt the tongue leave my neck. I opened one eye to find the vampiric mare directing looking at me. She smiled and leaned back down to my neck. I felt her cold breath on my fur. Then, I felt unimaginable pain. I tried to stay awake but the darkness consumed me...as I heard a whisper.

"Blue..."

I woke up instantly gasping for fresh air. Getting straight up, I looked around in my surroundings. I felt my heart beat a thousands times, wanting to come out of my chest. My fur drenched in sweat. I looked down to find that I was covered with soft red silk covers. The bed sheet was of a midnight black color. I look to find that the rest of the room was either red or black. Hmm weird. This is not my room nor my mothers. So, who's room is this!?

The door jolted open with a creek. I pulled the sheets back over my body as I faced the creaking door, only to see Soul Chaser.

"S-s-s-soul...w-what am I d-doing in your room?"

I couldn't help but studder my words. My nightmare felt so real. She looked at me with concern. At least am not at a strangers home. I got to think positive. She walked over to the bed, her gaze said a million words. Did something happen? Crap.... I know... I didn't take out the trash huh. Horseapples... Mom is going to KILL me. I rubbed my neck with my hoof

" Did I er... do something bad Soul?"

My eyes stared straight into hers. Her beautiful pink eye had me memorized. WAIT!? Beautiful? How did I never notice. Her fur a lovely shade of peach.

"Blue, do.... you remember anything from last night? Anything at all?" She asked rubbing her leg with her hoof

Oh sweet mother of cupcakes... we had sex, AND I DON'T EVEN REMEMBER!? WHY??? I heard her giggle

"And no, we didn't have sex"

Whoa... she read mah mind!

"I um...don't actually remember anything" I grinned. Maybe am not suppose to know what happened. Maybe I do but meh.

"Soul, why am I in your bed. Did I pass out walking home or something?" I continued to stare at her. Her eyes widened at the question.

"You um...um were walking in the park and you slipped and hit your head against the pole" she said sheepishly

"Whoa, I did? Does that explain my headache and neck pain?" I rubbed my pained neck with my hoof smoothly. She was acting nervously, I wonder why.

"Well, thanks for taking care of me now-" I got up from the bed and onto the floor.
"i'll be going now" I said with a small fake smile. I quickly got out of the room, moving around I finally found the exit. Pushing the door open, I found more forrest... Waaa? Where are we? I heard the sound of clopping coming towards me. I turned around to face Soul.

"Your at my new house Blue" She said simply.

New House? What?

"You moved?" I asked

"Just recently like last week" She continued to stare into my eyes

"Well uh, wheres the town?"

Are we in the everfree forrest? If we are then this is a nice forrest.

"We are not in the everfree forrest Blue, were in a location no pony can find us"

What is she talking about? I had a bad feeling about this.

"W-why Soul?" Why am I studdering?!

"Because.... we cant let ponies find us" She grinned, showing me her perfect white teeth.

"Why not?" I asked afraid of the answer

"Because... your nightmare is real" She grinned as she suddenly vanished only to be behind me. I yelped, jumping back

"WHAT THE HELL!?"

She continued to grin

"Now Blue... were going to play a...game" She crouched down into a postion similar to the vampony in my dreams

"How about... Cat and Mouse?"

What I saw stopped my heart. Her fangs slowly slid out as her eyes changed into the deep glowing, crimson red eyes. Soul is a vampony! Wait...does it mean my dream is not a dream? Do I let my dream be a dream? Is anything impossible?

"Y-your...!" I whimpered as she snared at me.

"S-s-soul... my nightmare wasn't a dream...was it?" She shook her head slowly side to side... so I did get bitten by a vampony, and am going to be lunch in the next hour

"Run" She growled

"OH HELL NO!" I did the fastest one-eighty in my life. I ran back upstairs and into her dark room. Slamming the door, I slid under the frame of the bed.

"Crap crap crap crap crap, am dead.. SOOOO dead!"

I heard nothing but silence. So Silent I heard my own heart beat. Shivers went down my spine as I stared at the door, waiting for Soul to bash the door in. What happened next i'll never forget"

"Boo..."

Author's Note

Sorry I took sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long to update the story. I had alot going in life and no, no one died, except the writer in me.. I had a bit of a writers block. Alot of people wanted the story to be updated which surprised me alot. I figured that I just wrote a simple story, peopled hatted it and put me down and I was going to be like F*** that, RAGE! I am and still going to finish this story.

Now, I don't have a proofreader so If there's mistakes well Don't be a Fimfiction Grammer Nazi and tell me what in the hell I am doing wrong. clearly you GRAMMER NAZI's take the spelling more into consideration that the story itself!

Ok, Chapter 4 will be out but I do not know when! Thanks everyone that commented to continue!

Shia's speech motivated me... if you catch the reference in the chapter

"JUST DO IT!"

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The Pizza is a LIE!