Reid Neutral

by NeutralJS

Rating: teen
Tags: Main 6, Original Character, Spike, Adventure, Random, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Alternate Universe, Human
Length: 7996

A guy name Rick Natalie was a guy who been hit by a star.What never believe someone been hit by a star.

My name is Rick Natalie
Age 19 and clock owner store
this story has few of my human life for a few chapter and the rest is ....... pony life and oooh.......... sorry sound like pinkie break fourth wall.This is the work of my crazy journey but not want you to know about spoiler future.Just read my life stories of human pony before this pinkie pie persona get to me so much and it not fusion.
(It between end of the season 1 and before the begin of season 2 of My Little pony:Friendship Is Magic)
(Art made by me and a few art application I using to make picture)(Will add more character of My little Pony in the stories that going to be use in this stories)

Published 2014-06-06 16:00:01 UTC
Last updated 2014-06-06 16:00:01 UTC

The life of Rick Natalie

7:30A.M

I wake up as usual i do and big yawn.I think why the heck i dream about a young boy who was writing about me? It feel creepy like someone watch you or read your life....blah sometime we also watch someone else or somepony.Oh yeah,i am a brony and luckily a brony social life with your friend but don't tell everybody seriously there maybe a hater on your friend.OK,let just proceed with my usual life.

I got out my bed and clean the mess bed i made and look behind me.There is a table closet with all my clothes and on top on it,there is a clock radio,My watch and a picture of my family there is three figure on the picture.The middle was me,The left was my father,The right was my mother.That bad past with my family and one most saddened memory.Ok then let just get moving instead of my family.I look at my watch and I feel excited because my birthday is tomorrow"Yipee!" close my mouth bef~

"Quiet there you hooligan"The angry Mitch as always.I have to stop shouting and control my emotion.Luckily this is not a apartment or not he come here hit me in the face.I relief and open the door to the living room and bath shower with my humming voice.After the bath,I go to my room back wear my clothes now imagine what I wear and how I look.I have a blue eye and dark short hair that how i look and now I am wearing a black jacket with a gray T-shirt and blue jean pant with a black calendar watch on my wrist.Oh forgot my black hat.For some reason it on my bed,when did I put my hat on the bed and the most weirder is a ribbon on my black hat.Oh well must be my memory lost because of the dream.Curse you dream but not much.

Before I continue my life,i think i show you my house map:

Oh yeah I had a clock store that sold clock and watch.Don't think i cost too much price on stuff.so let continue our story

I go to K(Kitchen room) and open the fridge door and found out that my food is ran out,I think celebrate with not food will not make a good party so I need to buy groceries and go near the door entrance of stair and wear my black shoe.I head down the stair and now at inside CR(Clockstore) and now more weird coming like when i buy a large mirror for the shop or maybe my memory loss again.Curse me again.I go outside
the clock shop and make sure the sign say close or not everyone come in and say where the heck is the owner or something else.

I met my few neighbor (luckily not Mitch) and help a old woman crossing the street.I honest i really am helping the lady crossing the street.I almost at the groceries store before i go inside the store,some schoolkid were mad because they want a toy but do not have enough money to buy that toy and what did is buy the toy and give the toy to the kid.There say thank and run happily while I go back to the groceries and buy I needed for my survival and the future.When i make way back to home,I stumble across the park and heard a crying voice.I headed for the sound of crying voice and found out a young boy who siting on the bench.I sit beside him and ask why are you crying then he talk back saying that he pet bird dying.I told he a story about that I have lost something too.He saying did you miss he? I respondED back saying yes I miss he but he always say don't cry forever or not you cannot protect someone else if you keep crying.The boy was stop tearing and I tell a funny story that every kid love it.He stop crying and started laugh.He say thank you for some story Mr.Rick and go with a laughter voice.I feel happiness at the same time I already walk back to home.

After I at home,I put my food at the fridge.I go outside the store and flip the sign to open.I first go into SR(Storeroom) to check what is missing and already have it.Luckily,nothing is missing and it now 9:30 A.M.Wow it been two hour i been an~
My stomach is rumble so i have to eat before the customer arrive.

~After The work later~

The customer were 10-13 only and I go outside to flip the sign to closed.After that,I head to ER(Empty room)it was called like that because it only has art table with drawing paper,A computer and 2 bookshelf.I sit to the art drawing table and imagine to draw a a world that look nature and after that I go back to the kitchen and eat dinner.After my tummy are full,I go back to my room and take off my shoe,jacket and the watch onto the white closet table and say to myself"A weird day and good deed I have today." I go to my bed and lay on the bed and sleep to get a dream even i thought I hate loss memory but the good new i can't wait for my birthday.

Author's Note

Hello everypony.
This is life Rick Natalie and this is not my life.
The large mirror that Rick say are truth,When did he buy the mirror?
The mirror will show the answer in the future.
I will do this each chapter in everyweek(Saturday or Sunday)
So this it and please my find wrong grammar and correct it.

The Begin Of Reid Neutral

~7:30A.M again~

As usual I do wake up,clean the bed,shower and wear my usual cloth with the weird ribbon on my black hat.As I go into the kitchen and I remember from my memory while I was opening the fridge door

~Flaskback of year ago~

I go into the starbuck for my first time and I order my first hot hazelnut chocolate from the black guy.He turn around and look shock like he saw a ghost were here and there he say "Natalie!"Wait what ? He know my father name!

"Oh!sorry I thought you were my friend"he added more.

"It okay"I don't blame him at all because my father and I look the same only different he was dark brown eye and I am blue eye.Back to the point, how did he know my father name"Could I ask some question?"

"Sure,what you to ask about?"

"How you do know my father name?"I ask with a polite tone.

"He and I were~"He stop his sentence and ask a question that begin to make me thinking"Wait,Are you the son of Natalie"

"YYeah Why?"Is he my father friend?

"Your father told me about you if case I meet you but he never told your name only saying you just look like him"serious dad,you just say you look like me.Then I remember that we talking over the counter while somebody was waiting to order a drink or food and somebody will think like this"Are these two having a problem or something?"I have to response fast.

"Could we talk somewhere else like at the table there"I show he the table there is two empty seat near the glass wall.

"Oh!Yeah sure"The black guy agree with me and shout his boss that he going to take a break so we could talk more.Where he go out from his counter stand and he was wearing a black T-shirt with blue jean pant and a green apron with saying Starbuck and where I saw he wrist he had a big scar like a aligator bite him so that mean he is maybe my father's friend because he look like a soldier in military.He face were pretty good for a black guy and he eyes color were green with a bold head.

We sit at the table near the glass wall and having a chat.The black guy started to talk first"My name is Kuze and what your?"

"My name is Rick Natalie,Mr.Kuze"

"Rick huh?A pleasure to meet you Rick"

"It pleasure to meet you too Mr.Kuze"

"So what you doing here at this cafe?"

"I here because I heard this Starbuck cafe were so good that it was so delicious that many people come here"

"Thank for the the nice compliment for this cafe,kid and oh!Yeah you say how did I know your father?"

"Yeah I want to know how did you know my father?"

"Well your father and I were classmate at school,after 30 year,when I enter the military and I meet your father once again and we were so happy that we meet again."Oh so he was my father's classmate but why he never told me about his friend must be he thinking it no important."I respect your father so much"

"Why you his respect his so much?"I question again.

"Because he was the most person we could ever trust him and he sacrifice his life to save the village who going to been hit crash by a explosive train that were off tracked with just a jeep and alone while the team were down by a flash grenade."He saying with a little tear on his face.Must be very sad on that day and I can just imagine in last year,what happening to my father.

~Rick imagination world from last year~

The flash grenade were hit the the team"argh"Everyone was down except Natalie who taken the jeep because he was talking cover before the flash grenade go off.Natalie drive the jeep alone to the explosive tank train that were moving faster to a village on the off track road.Natalie open his locket and he saw he family while saying"Sorry son that I could not go home" and he crash the tank and the tank explosion were so big that it stop the train from moving and just burn to ash.

~Back to the real world flashback~

"And there is someone there shouting to Natalie something that could I not hear what that guy saying"Aguy was shouting to my father?"He was kneel down and crying.Then,he stand up and leaves the place like it never happen."

"Who was that guy?"I curious who is he?

"I don't remember he name but he was wearing a black jacket and black hat with white something.He back jacket showing a picture from space about something there was altogether"A mystery man with a a picture from all space together?"and I could not what he face look like"

"Thank for the information Mr.Kuze"I stand up and going to outside."Wait!!"Kuze say it while I holding the door handle.

"You forgot something"What did I fo~oh my drink but I think I not thirsty yet and I replied him"It okay I not thirsty yet"he then ask me when my birthday and I quickly response the answer for some reason and why he want birthday date.

"Well because when you come here again,I could treat you at this cafe"

"Thank you Mr.Kuze"

"Your welcome Rick"as I opening the door to the outside world again with happy smile face.

~In the real world on present time~

Yup,I still remember what Mr.Kuze say to me ,he going to treat me at Starbuck when my birthday start and another thing who is the mystery guy.I still know who that guy is and what he relationship with my father at that place.Oh well you could not go there without a clue or a lead.

I stop and leave the fridge door close.I open the kitchen door and enter my room to take my black shoe.I head down stair and still see the big mirror on my store.I go outside my shop at look my sign that still say close and lock with the ke~~~~~~WHAT!!I forgot to lock the door yesterday but it alright because luckily nothing was stolen or breaking it.Wait I just remember again from a few minute ago because my word trigger my memory and it bored wihout a pazz or something like this:

TRIGGER MEMORY!!

~From a few minutes ago~

Before I heading down stair,I on the television to check the new for what will happen to this town.I on the switch and channel to the new.From the television new,there is a blond hair woman with green eyes and red business suit cloth only showing the top body only with face.She was saying"there is two criminal were out from the prison" It showing a two picture man.One with weird beard design and one tomahawk hair."For civilian on this town,if you see this two man.please be careful and report as fast as you can"I off the switch and had to close the shop or not the criminal come into my store like eating a pie and this town that woman was saying is my town and that a problem.

~Back to the real world present time~

I like my pazz or something like objection who was using by a lawyer called Pheonix Wright and that is a game that so many people like puzzle game.After I lock the door,I go walk along with the street and go to the Starbuck.When I say star it feel like catching word for me but never less onward to the short journey ahead.

~Halfway to Starbuck

As I walking to along the street,I heard a loud voice saying"Help!!" It obviously I had to help that woman before she rob or injuries and I ran as fast as I could.

As I arrive at the alley and I see two familiar guy that is the two criminal because one man was a tomahawk hair and another is weird beard .Aside from that there is old wan who wearing a aurora color robe and a purse hanging around her wrist while looking around look afraid.

"Give us your purse old hag"Bearded guy said

"Please don't take my purse away"The sad old woman replied

"We gonna kill if you don't give your purse,you old bitch"Okay I had it enough if enough when they say a b-bomb and kill some innocent old woman

"HEY"I shouted furiously

They turn around and saw in front of them.The bearded guy said"Hey look a tough guy show to become a big fucking loser hero is coming out"I hate it where he said like that but had to response fast and polite.

"Please leave the old woman alone and run away or else something to you two"I warned them with a polite tone

"Now the tough guy become a coward and told us to run away ohhh so brave.I know let kill he for fucking sake, brother"The tomahawk guy while holding a knife in his hand and his brother I presume so because the tomahawk guy say brother and also he brother agree saying"Yeah let kill him and the old woman for fuck sake"Huh a two idiot does not who am I.I warned them already but them ignored and tries to kill me.Oh well I have to use C.Q.C and everyone you already what is it if not C.Q.C mean close quarters combat and I know it from Metal Gear Solid stuff but this is true life and I was taught by my father before he enter the military when I was ten year old.It unbelievable for me to do that at my young age but I trained for 9 year and it paid off effectively.I was learned that at young age because my father was the same at his young age that my grandfather taught he how to do C.Q.C as well.I curious how my grandfather or where did he learn it because I never met him at all.Ok when the bearded guy run ahead and went to punch my face using his right fist but before that I dodge his fist and grab him right arm using my left hand and punch this guy in his face using my other hand.After that I carry him body up to the sky and throw him at the ground like Snake do to he enemy.

Ok one down and last one to go.When the another guy was so furious because he brother been hit and he run to me showing his right hand that holding a knife to stab me on my body and I do the same as like the last time, I dodge his knife and hold his right arm using my left hand but that moment all were slowing down and the view were darker than the alley and then a something like a light yellow just passed through,I believe? but it did not disturb me at all and I resume by hitting his body using my right fist two time and carry his body using my two and once again throw he at the ground.

The first word I say after the fight with the these two is"Weird" but that no important right now and I immediately ask the old lady "Are you okay miss~"

"Rose, my name is Rose and thank you for saving me sonny and my purse "

"It Rick, miss Rose and everybody would do the same thing in this situation" While I was checking and relieve for they no dead but unconscious.

"Here you go Mr.Rick for saving my life"Miss Rose was giving the money to me but I refuse it"You must make me repay to you somehow"

"I know"she added more"I could read your fortune as your reward"I never have reading my fortune so I agree with for my reward and showing my hand her.

"You do not have to show me your Mr.Rick.I can just make fortune by looking at your body"Miss Rose hapiily said"Oh okay and I gonna call cop for these two criminal"she nodded and I turn around and looking at the criminal while picking up my phone to call the cop.

While I was calling the cop,I barely heard and it was saying "Thank for saving me knight of celestial"I look around and the old woman behind was gone.Pretty weird for today.

~After the cop arrive at the alleyway~

The cops arrive and take two men criminal to the jail.They said thank for capture these two criminal and I replied back saying your welcome and I ask the cop a question before them going to jailed like is there a old woman who wearing a robe with color but sadly they don't know anybody like that.And I am suddenly remember to go somewhere else and saying goodbye to the cop and run along the street to Starbuck.Another weird day that miss Rose just disappear and saying about me like a knight and it was younger than her voice.Another mystery huh?

~Arrive at the Starbuck~

I open the door and breath heavily cause the running from the halfway to here it tiring.Mr.Kuze began to ask me why was I look so tiring while giving me a hot hazelnut chocolate,my favourite drink.He wearing the same cloth the day that we met.We go the same table near the glass wall.We began to chat about what happen to me.

I told him everything happen at the alley and C.Q.C event but not the star and the word she was saying to me.After that he was so shocked on his face because it was ridiculous and it impressing to he.Then he talk about the old lady"the woman just gone by your sight"

"Yeah she just disappear when I was looking behind my back"

"Is she a witch?"

"Witch doesn't exist in this universe"

"Why you saying this universe?"

"Because she maybe at other universe who come here at our universe by simply we don't have but they do"

"Ohhhhh"

"You did not read about multiverse theory, don't you Mr.Kuze"

"Yeah,kid i maybe don't know about the multiverse"

"One,I am not kid anymore I am 19 by this year and two,you must know ABOUT THE MULTIVERSE because my father must told won you at the military right?"

""Not your father never told me about the multiverse kid?" he smiled on his face while saying it.That my cues to do while my drink is half finish and I stand up from the table and say the pazz or like this:

"THE TRUE"

"Whoa!Kid ,please don't shout at the cafe and shock me"Kuze feel so shock and then relieved when I say sorry and sit and as I make the way explanation about his lied!

"I will tell you why the heck did I shout because I can see your lie through your face emotion and two,I have the evidence that is my father told me that he will tell everyone about the universe fact all of them but mostly multiverse theory" with confidence me to my liar guy.

"If that case,what is your father lied to you when you a child"That is a lie and when did I say when my father when I was a young kid at all but he did know this? must be my father told him.

"My father will never lied to because we made pinkie promise"Oh shoot what the heck did I say it on to him.

" Oh,a swear promise okay then"I relief when just he thought another promise and he not a bronies or the hater.I feel safe already
that Kuze does not about MLP:FIM or he will say wow you a gay man or oh my goodness you like watching a little girl show feel worst when I thinking about it but moving on.

"And I never tell you when I be told from"Gotcha

"You got me kid"What give up already ?That is so little testimony or simply a fact.

"Wh~"

"You just like your father,all way find out to the true"Thank for a compliment?

"It like I meet your father at the military,the same atmosphere and the same presence"he added more.

"Thank Mr.Kuze for the compliment I guess?"I feel shock on both side like wow just..... wow .It like a anime or cartoon or anything same like this one like a music by my ear and the music is a little romance but we are no gay.

"It kuze only and I have one last question for you?"A question sure.

"Sure M~Kuze,what is it?"what he want know about me?

"Why your hat have a white ribbon?"Now I remember,quick make another excuse or he going to question till midnight and I have friend coming to my house today!

"Well......um....I buy it!of course I must be buy a ribbon from yesterday" Feeling hot I just swallowed the hot water I just remember.

"Yesterday huh?"kuze say it with curious look"Yes,I buy*cough*from*yesterday*cough"That heat water make me hard to talk straight to him so I have to do what must to do.Go home or cover blown wait I not a spy but still have to go home or it will end my life!

"Could I*cough*go home*cough*I think I am sick"I fake him to believe I am sick while the cup is empty.

"Do you want I drive to your home"Kuze ask me to go but I have to declined or not the life of me is dead of embarrassing."Sorry I*cough*cannot so*cough*goodbye,Kuze"while I stand up from the table and walk to the entrance of the glass door.

"Ok,goodbye k~Rick"Well at least he say my name instead of kid and I outside again and waving hand to him and have to run to my home.

~After Rick go to his house,drink the water and after work~

Feel relieved and it now 7:00.P.M, wow time sure flies and it front of my store was a three guy caring a box.I immediately recognize that it was my three friends.The left who holding was the left side of the box was my friend school,Mink and he now a university student for engineering.He wearing a red cloth with a same color pant.He hair it like crazy hair style american that it brown and the color eyes it the same like his hair.The right side who also holding box by the right side was my childhood friend,Tim and he is british guy and I not going to tell the stories about how we met when we were a young.He eye color,is black and his hair was a proper gentleman light brown hair.he wearing a blue cloth and blue pant, figure because it his flag country color.Now for last figure is my country friend,Gin Seng Yan and he is chinese people.He and I met by very long time ago and that mean not going another story about him,He was a black eye and little long black hair.He wearing a green cloth and green pant with the spectacle that color black.Wait, one is wearing a red cloth,the other wearing a blue cloth and the last one wearing a green cloth.Today wearing primary cloth but still I was their friend so I have to loyal to them till the end of my life.

I quickly ran to the front door and open the door for my friend to get inside then started to giggle"dude why you having a ribbon on your hat?"Gin said it."This is not comedy show"with my angry face "we know,we already know"they unison together"And we have your birthday cake"with unison again with perfect time."It not yet my birthday guy untill 10:40.P.M.

We headed up stair while holding the box carefully and put down the cake box onto the table living room.After that,I going near the window inside the living room.Now the another weird thing is coming like is the star bigger than the other?Nah must be I feel tired already from all these upcoming event.I ask them want drink they one while they putting disc of My Little Pony:Season 2.I enter the kitchen and open the fridge door and took out the water they want with one can of milo because milo is my favourite drink.I put out three cup of glass and put three box juice that is grape juice,orange juice and mango juice.I enter back to the living room and put the three cup with a tray on the table and they say thank for the drink.I replied back with saying"your welcome"

I go to the balcony place just to get fresh air and breathe easily.As I am look around the outside of my house and saw the space only.I thought it weird that old woman called Rose just disappear from the sight,a big mirror came out of from nowhere and why I have ribbon on my hat.As I watching my black watch then my father gives me a long time ago.

TRIGGER MEMORY!!
~From the age of ten of Rick Natalie~

"Dad!dad you home early today hooray"Rick was hugging his dad.

"Of course my boy,I have to give you a present because today is your birthday"Natalie carry his son to the a different but the same building that Rick live while carry a small black box.

After Natalie put his son down and showing him a black box."Ohhhhhh what is it daddy?"

"Open it to find out"Natalie and Rick open it with a little unsmile grin oh his face"it a watch calendar"he was thinking about something cooler inside the small black box but it was not.

"It not a normal calendar watch,son"his father smile at him"Huh?"Rick scratch his head what it mean it no ondinary watch.

"Just wait for 3...2....1" as one was finish the clock produce sound like this:
Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday to Rick Natalie,
Happy birthday to you

"How was it son?"His father asked"It only make the sound when your birthday come with precise time only"

"It was awesome dad!!"Rick smile happily jumping around and hug his father.

"I knew you would like it son"They happily smile and playing around like there is no tomorrow.

~Back to the present time ~

As look the watch showing 10:38.P.M. wow time really do fly when unnoticed.I see my friend were go down stair ?And they not wearing shoe at all.Where they going and what that sound?

As I look around me and the star were bigger than the other and it headed to me!!!

Rick P.O.V(Point Of View):

The star were bigger than the other star!!And my few say word is"What the~"and the last were not arrive when the star hit me.One blinked eye I saw the the light of yellow and another blinked showing a white picture almost that I see a pony shape but I blink again and now I saw a white cartoon cloud on the sky.Wait What??!!

Author's Note

It seem that our friend here is now at the other world and he will meet a few new character.
"Like me"a squeaky voice male say
wait you couldn't come right now!!
???=I could
B=Guy, I gonna stop him before he spoiler anything so goodbye reader.Come back here you little annoying guy.

*sorry about the delay it school problem time but will continue the story it will be delay so much*

Meeting Twilight Sparkle And Her Friend With A Unbelievable Power

~Equestria? And it seem morning?~

Okay one is morning and two, why all around me is cartoon familiar place?'Because this is Equestria'A squeaky voice said to me.Have I go crazy or I have trigger a subconscious mind that people say from the internet that the secret subconscious will activate where see the crazy thing but I don't care about those fact so just annoy it.

'Argh this what I get for my opening.'Just annoy it.'This is unacceptable for me!'Still annoy the squeaky voice.'This is just chapter 3 and this is how I been treating 'a squeaky voice'!!!!!!!!!!!!!Itsuppose to be a loud voice but it mind voice that why it cannot be loud and I still annoy the subconscious voice.'I am going to say one word!!!!!!! That it will make me talking to the author at his mind or something else!!!!''Like that it could happen and I still annoy it.

PAUSE!!

The world was stop and the voice were never heard and untill wait!!!!!The world just pause?!!!!!!

"Yes you idiot author!!!"A still squeaky voice say.

"Wait you the guy that-"The author say was been cut by the squeaky voice.

"Don't type me as the squeaky voice!!!!!!!"

"Ok,ok what you want and please don't shout "

"Okie-dokie-loki"He immediately happy.

'"Why you have the same personality as pinkie pie? but a voice of crazy tiny guy"

"Well that why I am Craren"

"Craren?"

"Yup it Pinkie Pie personality but with Rick voice"

The author going to giggles but cut again by sque- Craren.

"Ok that it for the pause-"

"Hold it!!!"

"Wrong type"

"Oh sorry for the wrong type"

HOLD IT!!

Craren giggles because I made one stupid wrong type move"Okay what is it?"

"Before we go unpause,that you forgot that Rick will annoy you and going to make this disaster again."

"Never thought, sooo how I gonna talk or this disaster again"

"Let me think what we gonna do about this one"

"Me toooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The author and Craren think and think untill the author left Craren alone to think a long long long long time.

~One day later and the world still froze~

Craren got a idea finally"I got it!!"

"Finally you got that idea"Author say it because he already knew by just one minutes or less

"What you already know but didn't told me.Why?"

"One,I need a break an-"

"You already have a long big break already"

"Let me finish first.Second,you have think or someone will think you a idiot"

"Oh,sorry about that and would you please let me told the reader about the idea"

"Sure,that why I want you to be smart even though your brain is a size of a egg"

"Yeah" He ignore the type of small word and the author feel relief that Craren did not see the type of small word

"Okay first of all,we gonna remove my existent that not talking Rick too much because he will annoy me at all cost and two,I gonna talk when inside author notes or the pause when I say it"

"So we chat when some character is too much random and talk about the next chapter and book?"

"Yup"

"Well it this stop the incident about that again, I agreed"

"Yeah and now, we gonna resume story."

HOLD IT!!

"What is it now?"

"When I see the text it make me thinking that we never proper introduced our self like I only call the author and why you call Craren just because you have a similar Pinkie Pie persona"

"You right author that let us introduce our self to everpony"

"and everybody"

"Well let begin now, hello again this is the author by the username called NeutralJS"

"Well why you use NeutralJS?"

"Because when you see the last name of tittle above and that will be more sense of that name coming out more"

"Okay for that explanation but what for JS mean"

"JS mean Journal Story because this is a story"

"So since I read another fiction from Fimfiction that some use short big name and I think you will do also like them do for the usename"

"Yup, and it will form JSN meaning Journal Story Neutral and let me told everypony that I change the username for two time like this: Blaisere -> NeutralDC -> NeutralJS.
with the avatar just for one time:A grey unicorn with fake wing to a light blue unicorn with a red and blue mane."

"Wow that why you use NeutralJS as your username"

"Yup that why I use this username and not using the author for the rest of the other chapter and it now your turn, why your name is Craren"

"Well my name is Craren because I am a secret subconscious who hidden with Rick and have two personality that like Pinkie Pie personality that is normal Pinkie Pie and crazy Pinkamena Diane Pie"

"That is a good reason Craren but let avoid the crazy Pinkamena Diane Pie part"

"Okie doki lokie and now,let continue the story"

And the world move again

Wow,it feel so long but just one second and my mind feel one again and I guess my subconscious is gone just appear to chat who I Don't that guy is? And what they talking about but never mind that.

I look around me and still seeing the cartoon world again but impossible just one star hit me and transport me to this world instead of dead.Speaking of dead I should check myself what is change.

"Hello?"Good it my voice and still have my manhood and now I should check my body.I look around my body and it seem I change species from human to pony and the great new is I am a unicorn that mean I could use magic and it would be awesome in the future.The only changed is my hair or should I say my mane color is now,white and black while my body coat is grey.same like my cloth inside.

Rick pony look:

Still have my black hat with the white ribbon and with my black long jacket but no pant that because no pony never wear pants and still got my black calendar watch.My eye turned from blue eye to yellow or a star color(How did I could see my eye color changed... oh wait that is a mirror).And I look my flank under the black jacket for what my cutie mark is.It was one green pencil and on the edge of the pencil is a gas color of emerald with a few sparkle and with three colorful of three symbol:

I thought my cutiemark is suppose to about art more or combat but why it show me that my cutiemark is a three symbol with a pencil?
I have a feeling that this cutiemark will be more know in the future.

As I look around and I notice that I at the front of the door tree and I immediately recognize that this three is Twilight"s house/library.Well here we go into Twi-*splat*I just hit my face to the door thank to my behind leg or my hind leg.I fell down to the ground and the door is open."Are you okay men?"a familiar voice that is Spike."I okay at least"

"So what happen to you?"Spike said

"I forgot how to trot"I said trot because for walking in two leg called walk and for the four leg walking called trot

"Yeah,it a joke right?"

"I serious forgot how to trot and you saying I joking and I think my whole life as well I forgot."I show my serious face so that I do not lie about my pony life because I never have a pony life.

"Spike,who is outside the door"Another familiar voice that I presume is Twilight Sparkle the main character of the main six of harmony.

"Uh,Twilight do you know this guy"Spike said while opening the door and show me a lavender unicorn was reading a book and close to see me.

"No,I don't know who he is from the Canterlot or Ponyville.Why?"Twilight said

"He just said that he forget about his life and don't how to trot"Spike said

"That must be a trick because if he did come here,how does he know where we live Spike?"

"I just wake up from this spot and found your house in front of me"I said it without putting a smiling face.

"Twilight Sparkle,I know this is weird and you don't trust a stranger but you have to help me to regain my memory."I said it with a lie but why I feel th-wait did I just I say her name.I think I did told her name at front of her!!

"It not that I don't trust you bu-wait how you know my name?"ah oh I just say it.

"Universe told me"wow I just said it like there the truth

"What you talking about"Twilight said it with curious look.

"I don't how I know your name and another thing that universe told me that this small dragon is Spike"

"Ok,No-"I cut her line before she said anymore"Check my memory if you don't believe me"still serious face."But I-""Check my memory"

Twilight sigh and say"Fine,I check your memory"got her trust but a problem when she her word"But if there is your memory,you will immediately told me the truth.""Sure to make you believe me that I'm not lying"or I am.

She put the book down to the floor and then walk in front of me and the next thing,her horn was fill with purple light and after a few second,the horn light go out and some voice say it"So how it go Twilight?"

"I don't understand"ah she did find my human memory"How your memory were not there?"What my memory not there but I still remember who I am like my name is Rick Natalie and I a clock owner store and how to use CQC and she just said that my memory were not there.Must be that my human memory keep it like a secret lock that only me know it and not everybody or everypony else.

"You were speaking the truth"Twilight continue and gasp"What?"I reply to her because she was gasp that must be terrible thing happening."I need you to out your magic right now""Because?""Because you may be lost your magic and I don't want to believe that"

"Sure"I pulled by Twilight magic into the her library/house."Ok do it"Twilight said while I sit like pony sit"Do what exactly?"Playing or I am a amnesia pony to Twilight.

"Well,every unicorn know how to check their magic is still inside the body is to make a ball of magic like this"she show it by closing her eye and then a purple ball light came out from her horn"Ok,now you try it""How?"she facehoofed herself and mumble herself like"Okay Twilight,you can do this.It just an amnesia stallion pony and just show he how to use magic "

She continue herself say"Okay first of all close your eyes,then think easy about creating a ball of light not make with hoof but create from out of nowhere,understand?"

"I understand that is close your eyes,think easy instead of hard and make ball of light from out of nowhere correct?""Correct and now proceed to create the ball"Twilight said.Think huh not gonna it will replace by imagine because think easy is just like imagine so why everyone or anypony has to think just a word that you only have to drawn in your mind.

I do what I have to do that is first,stand up like a pony stand then I turn around from Twilight and close my eye and imagine a ball of light maybe simple.Hey I feel some weird feel on my horn like the magic is already released.I open my eye and turn around to see Twilight.Instead of normal face or normal emotion,her mouth jaw open and Spike also he mouth jaw open too while point his one finger claw from behind me.I turn around to see what happen,the door happen to been okay and little inches up is a hole not a small hole but a big hole,a really big hole like a boulder smash through the house but one thing is that there isn't a boulder here so that only mean one thing my magic.

Third P.O.V
At the front of Sugarcube Corner
Before the star ray coming out
"Hello Dashie what are you doing here today?"A pink pony coat with fluffy mane said to her friend blue pony coat with a rainbow mane.

"Hey Pinkie,I just come here to get my awesome flavor cupcake of course."Rainbow Dash said while hovering above Sugarcube Corner.

"Oh,how silly of me forgot your favourite cupcake"Pinkie Pie said while entering the Sugar Corner but then her body to shaking that only mean one thing' pinkie sense'.

"Ah oh,Pinkie what is it happening.It is a big disaster coming or something fall down on me."Rainbow hiding under the bench because pinkie sense told something from the future that will happen in the present.

"Silly Dashie,it not something happen to you"Pinkie smile and Dash said"Then who?"Dash coming out from the bench carefully.

"It Twilight"

"Let me gues ... it is book fall down to her"

"Nope"

"Spike fire burn Twilight Tail"

"Nu-uh"

"Then what is?"Rainbow hovering at sky again.

"A big star ray coming from Twilight's house."Pinkie head to the direction to the Golden Oak Library.

Dash laugh when Pinkie say that a big star ray coming from Twilight's house"Really Pinkie a big star thing going to come out from Twilight's house.Really Pinkie?"

"Eeyup"Pinkie Pie follow Big Mac eeyup word.

"One Pinkie,them is not way that a big star ray just coming out from Twilight's house and two,where the star is coming-"Rainbow stop when a big star ray coming from Twilight's house"- from."Then Rainbow race to the Golden Oak Library.

At the market of Ponyville
Before the star ray accident coming and the same time at Sugarcube Corner

"Howdy there Rarity and Fluttershy"A pony with orange coat and blond hair with a cowboy hat talking in cowboy accent"What can ah do to serve for you today?"

"Hello Applejack my dear.I come here for your delicious apple and Fluttershy here want apple too."A british accent from a pony mare with a curly mane purple and a white coat said.

"OK that will 4 bi-":Applejackstop and her jaw open when she saw a big star ray just came from out of nowhere.

"Oh my goodness"A low voice from a shy pony mare with a yellow coat and pink mane also shock and putting her hoof at her mouth.

"What is it........It so beautiful!!....I mean that big light must come from Twilight's house"Rarity said it while showing her hoof to direction of Golden Oak Library.

"Let go girls."Applejack said it and the other two nodded and go to the Golden Oak Library but before that Applejack remember something so she go back to her stand table and put saying close so that everypony don't steal her apple stuff.

First P.O.V(Rick)
At Golden Oak Library
After the star ray accident

"Wow,I din't know I could do that"My magic is like what am I?A alicorn wait not...not........I don't know what is it that stronger than alicorn magic.

"You couldn't"Twilight said with a unbelievable face AND continue"No a unicorn has a big magic like a alicorn not better than that.I don't know how big your magic is.Spike write-"

HOLD IT!!

"Gah"Spike scream and fall the paper and quill to the floor leaving a blank on the paper cause from my voice."What is it?"Twilight say it."I just going to tell Princess Celestia about you Mr."

"Don't call me Mr"I never like called Mr because it sound like a old age and my age just 19 year old.

"Then what your name?"Twilight sIgh and.......... wait......my name?I couldn't say my human name so howwwwwwwww ....wait I know my big secret name that is a pony name.

"Reid Neutral"Yup just copy my name of RN to Rick Natalie to Reid Neutral.

"Oh your nam-..wait you ju-"Twilight said and I cut in"I only remember my name only that all nothing else Twilight"What is this I feel
"Before you ask more question twilight,the star sense told me that is five of your will coming and wait for a second ...ahah the star sense told me that the first is Pink pony coat and fluffy mane called Pinkie Pie.Then a rainbow mane with blue coat who name is Rainbow Dash.After that one orange coat with a blond hair that is Applejack.and the other two that first is Rarity and the last one pony is Fluttershy"Wow,I just said like I can see the future.

"Wow,are you maybe Pinkie Pie family?!"The little dragon ask me that I maybe Pinkie Pie family but it have to be not.

"Noo-"I been cut it by Twilight"Spike don't say there and Mr.N-oh sorry my bad still got that habbit"and Twilight still continue"And there is not way your star sense can maybe right"I have that another feeling that I begin grin little and showing my hoof to the door"What?"

And then I feel like going to counting"Hold it for 3.......2........1........"Maybe my star sense have future prediction maybe were there or not"There it nothing that Re-"Pinkie Pie who enter the door and bounce everywhere while saying"Hi Twilight"Then Rainbow Dash just come in through the hole and shock"What happen here"And somepony else just came and that is Applejack"Holly tarnation what happen here Twilight?"After her,Rarity who just happen to be commented around the everywhere "Oh my Celestia!This is a mess here darling."And lastly the one pony none than anything else is Fluttershy"Are you okay Twilight?"wow it like a whisper to me and I only barely heard what she say.

"Wwhat"And Twilight starting to turn around and .... oh not good"Pinkie Pie sofa!!!"

"On it"Pinkie Pie put the sofa in front of Twilight from out of nowhere and then Twilight passed out on the sofa that belong to Rarity.Well it seem my weird feel and presence make Twilight passed out and she must been going to ask question when she wake up.Every question.

Author's Note

JSN:Finally finish

Craren:You took so long to so long even the holiday already started!!!!!

JSN:I sorry and I must be lazy everyday.Could you forgive me Craren

Craren:I forgive you but you have to make pinkie promise.

JSN:About what?

Craren:That you will pinkie promise about you will finish this story before you age 16.Now do it.

JSN:Ok.Cross my heart,I hope to fly and stick a cupcake in my eye.

Craren:Good you pinkie promise then let continue about the story next chapter

JSN:It about here Reid will have to answer every question Twilight ask and he will me Luna the alicorn of the moon at the dream

Craren:That it?

JSN:Yup and that will be more story on the next chapter and that it everypony good night.

Craren:And have a sweet dream or good morning.
(Well that one weird speeedy text)