

The Immortal Warrior
If the Universe had a Consciousness, it would have dark and twisted humor. The immortal warrior is transported from dead world to Equis by magical anomaly, where he is hired as soldier by Alicorn king. This is the story of his life in this new world.
A warrior, cursed with immortality watches the wastelands of his dead world. It died years ago when the old gods refused to step down from seat of power and decided that if they couldn't control the world,no one would. The stars fell from the skies,destroying all life on this once beautiful world, leaving the immortal warrior to watch over the husk of dead planet.
Now, this warrior is transported to another world by anomaly of magical origins, to the world where races of mythology exist that is in brink of war. The group of sentient ponies discover him when they search the cause of this anomaly and decide to bring him to King and Queen, Who offer him a deal.
Become a soldier of Equis or be treated as enemy of the pony kind. Fair deal right?
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