A Comet in Twilight

by HiddenPeace

Rating: mature
Tags: Slice of Life, Romance
Length: 4016

Comet tail and Twilight sparkle find thier love for one another growing stronger.

Twilight and Her significant other Comet tail, find them selves on a ordinary date until they feel a little more attracted to each other than usual, and their feelings take them to the next level.

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-04-21 23:50:02 UTC

A Comet in Twilight

A Comet in Twilight

It was a warm evening in Ponyville, with a chilly breeze coming east out of the distant mountains. Everypony was out enjoying the last light of day, fillies playing in the park, last minute shoppers, stallions out to dinner with their mares. A beautiful orange and pink sky cast over Ponyville, and down on a certain yellow and purple couple. Comet Tail and Twilight Sparkle, who unlike the other couples in Ponyville, weren't into fancy dinners and such. Instead the couple spent their time stargazing, sharing a book, walking the countryside, and in this case having a swim in their favorite swimming hole. The pair of unicorns have been dating for about 2 months, the love they feel for each other is intensely strong and growing. Before they both met they felt lonely due to the low popularity of their hobbies, they each had good friends, but not one they could relate to and nor one of the opposite sex.  Their lives have taken a turn for the better and the best is yet to come.

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"Stop it Comet!" Twilight giggled

He was splashing water at her playfully.

"Where's the fun in that!" said comet winking at her.

"its on now!" said twilight as she splashed him back.

there water fight lasted a few minutes before they found themselves a little tired.

Comet looked at the beautiful mare before him in the water, feeling his heart melt looking into her eyes. He embraced her in a passionate kiss.

After a minute or so they broke the kiss and Twilight spoke

"I love you Comet"

"I love you to Twi"

Moments later Comet tail looked up to see the colourful evening sky slipping away into the wonders of night.

"Its getting late, we better get back to the library" said Comet.

Twilight nodded in agreement then spoke "I cant wait to read chapter 12 of harry trotter"

"Me either !" said Comet with a grin.

The pair made their way to the edge of the swimming hole, where their towels were hung on a low tree branch.

Comet climbed out and turned to lend Twilight a hoof getting out.

She loved the way he took care of her, she blushed slightly and took Comets hoof in hers.

Comet was a fit pony, with toned muscles and a broad chest that drove twilight crazy.

he was a little on the short side for a Stallion but he remained a good 3 inches taller than Twilight.

He had a dull yellowish coat complimented by a messy royal blue mane and tail,

and a fairly deep voice. Toped off with gentle yet firm light blue eyes

Twilight found him irresistibly cute.

As for Comet, he loved everything about Twilight, her beautiful purple eyes, her soft voice, her sleek curved body and the pink highlight in her mane. Comet didn't know why but that highlight drove him wild

Comet found her remarkably beautiful.

The moment they were both out of the water, the chilly mountain breeze hit them hard, sending shivers through their body's.

They had adjusted to the water and weren't aware of the recent temperature drop. Them being wet didn't help.

"Here Twi", said Comet as he grabbed her towel from the branch and wrapped it around her with care.

"Thanks", said Twilight with a loving smile.

He smiled back and threw on his towel as well.

The two set out on the now starlit dirt trail back to Ponyville.

They walked admiring the many bright constellations above.

Twilight and Comet were shoulder to shoulder sharing each others warmth.

She leaned into him feeling his body heat wash over her in waves that came with each beat of his heart.

They were about halfway home when Comet noticed Twilight still shivering and now sniffling.

Without warning Comet Tail removed his warm towel from himself and placed it on Twilight.

She stopped and looked at him in surprise.

With concern in her voice she said, "what about you?"

"ill be fine", Said Comet in a reassuring tone.

Twilight would of tried to turn down the gesture but knew what a stubborn gentlecolt  Comet was.

Instead, she reached up and kissed him tenderly on the lips.

The cold wind struck the wet pony, Comet was freezing but didn't feel like it, seeing Twi happy made him warm all over.

The couple continued their walk to the library.

Before long they reached the door of the library, Twilight being the book lover she is also called the giant tree library her home.

Comet opened and held the door for her.

As they stepped indoors the warmth swelled around them. Twilight was cold still with both towels, So the warmth was intoxicating to Comet as he was cold to the bone.

"Spike?" called Twilight, it was then she remembered he had gone off to help rarity dig for gems and wouldn't be back till tomorrow around lunchtime. He offered to do the work for free so how could Rarity say no?

Twilight realised how cold Comet had been and felt sorry for him.

"Warm up and relax I'll get us some hot drinks" said Twilight as she walked to the kitchen.

Comet was enjoying the feeling of his body temperature rising back to normal.

He couldn't help but stare at the mares backside as it swayed with her walking. He blushed to himself, he's been through the basics of being with a mare but he has never had sex before.

The same went for Twilight, she was a virgin.

Comet thought to him self there and then , will we be the ones to take each others virginity?

Comets thoughts were interrupted by Twilight entering the room.

She brought with her 2 mugs and levitated them onto a small table in the middle of the library

"Here you go Comet, I made your favorite! vanilla and blueberry tea".

Comet couldn't help but smile from ear to ear at the thought his favorite drink with his favorite pony.

He made his way to the table and sat down next to Twilight

"Thanks Twi" said Comet before he indulged in the hot drink.

Twilight rested her head on his shoulder, nuzzling him on the neck and kissing him every now and then.

When they finished their drinks Twilight got up and levitated the harry trotter book off the shelf

She brought it over to the table and sat down again.

"Lets read chapter 12" said Twilight excitedly.

"Sounds good to me" said Comet smiling.

But right before they opened the book Twilight jumped up and said "Iv got an idea!"

Comet look at her curiously and asked "What is it Twi?"

"Well since spikes not here we should go up to my room and read."

They usually read at the same table they are at now to avoid waking the sleeping baby dragon.

"We could read together in my bed and snuggle" said twilight in a tempting voice, followed by a wink.

Comets eyes widened a little at her suggestion.

He was a little shocked by her words, but he loved hearing them.

Comet winked back and said, "Lead the way Twi"

Twilight lead Comet up the stairs to her room, he set the harry trotter book he was levitating gently down on her night stand.

"Here we are" said Twilight

Comet felt a little nervous as he had never been in the same bed as a mare before. Even though reading was their intention.

Twilight climbed under her blue blanket adorned with moons and stars and motioned for Comet to join her.

He trotted over and climbed in.

Comet couldn't help but notice how soft her bed was, it felt like a cloud,   he knew what a cloud felt like thanks to twilights cloud walking spell.

Once they were settled in close to each other Twilight levitated the book from the stand over until it was right in front of them.

"Ready?" asked Twi in a perky voice

Comet nodded with a grin.

They took turns reading a page aloud to one another, Twilight read first.

Every time it was the others turn to read they would listen and admire their companion.

While Twilight read, Comet would watch her chest rise and fall as she breathed softly while her quiet voice soothed his soul.

Meanwhile when Comet read, Twilight would place her head on his chest and listen to his strong heart beat as he held her close, she felt safe and worry free.

They reached the last page of chapter 12, and it was Comets turn to read.

As Comet read Twilight suddenly felt a powerful attraction for him she never felt before, she found her self fighting the urge to kiss him. Additionally her body felt warm and tingly all over.

Comet finished the last page and set it back on the night stand, usually now they would review and discuss what they just read.

But Twilight had another idea.

Comet turned to look at Twilight "Well wha--" was all he had time to say before her lips met his.

This took Comet by surprise, but he soon adjusted his lips to coddle hers

She was kissing him more intensely than usual, and Comet was loving it.

Twilight rolled on top of Comet with her legs on ether side of him.

They began to moan with their mouths closed as they kissed

They could taste the flavor of vanilla blueberry in each others mouths from the tea they recently drank. This only added to the pleasure.

The room was filled with passionate wet smacking sounds from their lips and quiet moans.

Comet could smell strawberries and cream perfume from her mane. He recognised the cent because he had bought the perfume for her 3 weeks ago as a gift on hearts and hooves day.  It cost him almost all of his  bits to purchase but it was all worth it when he saw how happy she was. And now he was enjoying the scent for him self. -what goes around comes around-

Twilight broke the kiss and looked deep into Comets eyes, he then looked deep into hers.

Suddenly Twilight spoke."I want to go all the way with you Comet"

She spoke in a serious yet lusty tone.

Comet felt his mouth drop open from shock as his mind ran wild.

Comet wanted the same thing Twilight wanted and she could see it in his eyes

As he regained his focus he stammered " a-are-yo-you-sure t-Twi?

"Yes Comet, I love you with all my heart.

"I love you to Twilight" Comet said with a loving smile across his face

Both felt a tear of joy rolling down their cheek as they closed their eyes and kissed harder than before.

Twilight had done her research on sex, and she had gotten a few ideas of how to go at it the first time.

Comet on the other hand was going by instinct and what some of his older fiends told him to do when the time came.

They both knew their partner was a virgin, they found this made proceeding more comfortable as they could learn love and enjoy together at a steady pace.

After several long minutes of kissing Twilight decided to take a step forward

Their kissing became softer when Twilight took hold of Comets hoof and guided it between her hind legs. Comet could feel intense heat radiating from this area only adding to the heat of the room.

At this point Comet was starting to explore her body, and he could feel his heart beat faster as blood rushed to his stallion hood.

Twilight guided him to her vaginal opening, leaving his hoof only a inch away from her damp lips.

Comet knew what he had to do now, slowly his hoof made contact with her most sensitive areas and he began to rub in a circular motion

This instantly made Twilight Gasp loudly, startling Comet

He pulled his hoof away and broke the kiss

"I-im s-sorry, a-are you ok?, did I hurt you?" concern growing in his voice with each frantic question.

Twilight put her hoof to his mouth silencing him.

"Its ok Comet, that just means your making me feel good...really good." said Twilight in a seductive tone.

A sense of relief washed over Comet Tail.

They resumed their kiss while Comet returned between her legs, this time not hesitating when Twilight gasped on contact. As their body's ground against eachother she adjusted to the feeling of comets hoof and her moaning became that of pleasure and appreciation.

Comet wanted to please her from the bottom of his heart, he was selflessly giving full focus to Twilight.

She noticed his kindness and decided to repay the favor.

Twilight lifted her hot body off comet sending cold air rushing to the places where there skin once touched. the sudden cold stimulated twilight further, and for Comet it have his stallion hood the freedom in craved.

Twilight sat up for a moment looking at the cute muscular stallion she loved and said...

"Now its my turn to please you" in a sexy voice that melted Comet

Twilight pushed Comet tail flat on his back

she then kissed him on the lips briefly

before moving down to his powerful chest, where she kissed again

Then to his firm abbs for a third kiss

and finally for the forth kiss, Twilights lips met the tip of Comets cock.

The feeling of Twilight placing a wet kiss on his head set him off more than anything he ever experienced

She stared in awe as she for the first time laid eyes on his fully erect member

It was a solid  7 inches or more, the base was the same colour as his coat but it faded into pink half way up his shaft. It was thick and decorated with veins, she could see it pulsing and only imagined how it would feel inside of her.

Twilight began stroking Comets cock slowly as it tightened up

"Do you like that?" Asked Twilight.

A small grunt escaped Comets mouth followed by a quiet "Y-yeah"

Twilight was happy to hear this as she had never done it before.

Comets stallion hood look rather inviting to Twilight

She stopped rubbing, and started to lick.

She licked the underside of his cock, base to tip, each time hearing Comet moan.

They both had started  masturbating in their early teens about 3 years before they meet so the feelings weren't unknown, instead they were greatly enhanced, and brought to hole new levels of pleasure

Twilight then took his hard member into her mouth.

The sudden warmth enveloping his cock sent rivets of pleasure up his spine

She rolled her tongue over his tip and traced it around his veins.

Comet was moaning loudly now as each roll of Twi's tongue sent waves of pleasure through his body.

With a great deal of will power Comet sat up.

This caused Twilight to stop and slide his slick cock from her mouth.

She looked at him, worry in her eyes.

"Did-did I do something wrong?" she asked sheepishly.

Comet still breathing heavy from his recent stimulation quickly replied

"No t-that was amazing Twi! its just if u kept that up much longer I would have... you know..."

Twilight and Comet both blushed a deep red before looking back to each other and diving into a wet kiss

Their body's ground together in harmony once again, As Comet felt up Twilight.

Comet had decided to poke and prod at her marehood some more. Her pussy lips were glistening before long.

Twilight began to yell out as Comet felt her hot clear liquids seep onto his hooves.

In feral instinct Comet picked up Twilights petite body in his strong forelegs and lied her on her back on the bed.

Comet leaned over Twi's body, their faces only inches apart.

He then spoke "Are you ready?" in a caring, sexy tone.

Twilight nodded as she looked intensely into her lovers eyes and he stared back.

"let me know if you want me to stop", said Comet in a more serious voice.

"Ok" Twilight said softly as she smiled up at him.

Comet lowered his member until he felt his tip resting on Twilights opening, the contact sent shiver through both their body's causing a jump on their breathing.

Comet and Twilight shared one more kiss before closing their eyes

Comet's head slipped past her glistening tight lips. And a little further into her caverns.

He looked to see Twilight with her mouth parted and her eyes tightly shut.

Comet whispered into her ear " you ok Twi?"

she let out a small whimper, then pushed against his cock making it clear she wanted him to continue.

With love and passion over whelming their body's, Comet slid in further causing twilight to yell out a "ahhhhh!!!"  as he stretched her inner walls. Comet would stop briefly between every few slow thrusts to make sure Twilight was ok. She couldn't help but notice what a gentlecolt he was, even at times like this.

Comet loved the feeling of her warm slick walls massaging his sensitive cock.

He moaned and grunted with each thrust as pleasure waves weakened his legs

Twilight had adjusted to his length inside her and now found a rhythm.

She slid into him as he slid into her, this proved effective as the pair moaned out uncontrollably.

Up to this point Comet had been doing most of the work and as a result he was beginning to fatigue.

And they both grew anxious with their climax on the horizon.

Twilight slid off Comets throbbing rod and lay on her side.

Comet couldn't help but stare at her beautiful body, her curves, her prominent firm butt cheeks, and her pleading purple eyes.

He felt his penis rev up hard and Twilight stared at it. wanting it, craving it

"Lay down big guy" said Twilight in a lusty sensual voice.

Comet obeyed her wish and lay himself down in front of her.

She then climbed on him, a leg on each side like before.

Except this time she sat back on his rod and slid his entire length into her soaking wet pussy.

"Celestia Yes!" cried twilight as she practically speared herself on Comets meat.

Twilight placed her hooves on Comets powerful chest for balance, she could feel his heart beating like a drum.

Comet was exhausted from the rutting he gave her a few moments ago.

Twilight noticed this and thought to her self, he's so good to me, he deserves this.

"Let me do the work Comet, just lay back and enjoy" said Twilight.

Comet was only able to let out a grunt and appreciative groans due to the waves upon waves of tingles and streaks of sexual electricity

Passing through his body, his pulsing cock the focal point of it all.

Twilight lifted her rump off him until his flared tip was at her opening before sliding back down balls deep with a wet smack.

Comets thighs and twilights bed were soaked with Twilights juices.

The florescent smell of her sex filled the room only increasing the desire for one another.

Sweat formed on their body's as she increased the speed that she was bouncing on his cock.

Twilight loved the sensation of Comet filling her as she rode hard.

Comet was in heaven, he was to stimulated to move as his member was massaged by Twilights tunnel. His sensitive tip was hitting Twi's womb with each thrust.

Twilight felt it coming, Her body grew ever hotter, her clit was throbbing. She was very close to climax.

Comet felt his pleasure coming to a summit as he unconsciously pushed into her.

The groans and screams in the room grew steadily louder until Comet herd Twilight announce

"I'm Coming!!!"

And with that Comet felt Twilights caverns Close tightly around his cock as she released powerful bursts of steamy hot clear liquid that coated and massaged his cock.

The feeling of his cock buried in her warm pussy caused Comet to Climax. He stopped breathing as she slid up and down on him 3 more times.

The hot cum bubbled up in his balls below and his entire body swelled with pleasure Comet didn't know existed.

Then with a loud "Ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

He released his Hot sticky white load into Twi's love tunnel filling her up to the brim before dripping out the sides of her pussy.

Twilights body went numb and all she could feel was Comets Hot load mingling with her juices deep inside.

Comet collapsed completely flat on his back after the pleasure of the orgasm subsided.

Still feeling gentle tingles around his slowly softening member.

Twilight has been drained of all her energy and slid Comets cock out of her nether regions, dripping with his cream and her juices.

Twilight collapsed on top of Comet, and placed tender kisses on his cheek.

Their eyes met and they shared a passionate kiss for a few moments.

When they broke the kiss, a single strand of saliva was connecting them until it to was broke.

"I love you to the moon and back" Said Comet as he held her close and nuzzled her

"I love you to Comet" said Twilight, as she rest her head on his warm chest.

They cuddled, and Twilight fell asleep in Comets arms, listening to his heart beat.

Comet once again watched her chest rise and fall as she breathed, he fell asleep shortly after her.

Their love was stronger than ever as they slept.

Comet awoke in the morning with a yawn still feeling warm and fuzzy from last night , he looked out the window to see a early morning rainfall. Then over to see Twilight sleeping peacefully . He couldn't help but smile. He pulled the soft blanket over her and kissed her on the fore head before heading downstairs to the kitchen.

"I should make her breakfast in bed", said Comet quietly to himself.

Comet searched the kitchen for all the ingredients he needed to make Twilights favorite pancakes.

Comet was not known for his cooking, if it was food he would burn it no matter what.

He fried the pancake mix with care doing his best to make them yummy.

Once he was satisfied with the slightly burned pancakes he added twilights favorite part, chopped up strawberry's on top with a sprinkle of sugar.

Comet drizzled syrup onto the stack of pancakes and poured a small glass of milk.

Then finally he cut up a juicy apple into slices and placed them decoratively on the side of the small tray he decided to use to serve her.

Comet smiled proudly at the meal he made. It was edible and rather appetising looking.

(it was usually burnt beyond recognition)

After cleaning up the mess he made, he happily trotted up the stairs levitating the tray up with him.

When he reached the top of the stairs he saw that his hoof steps woke her.

"Morning cutie" said Twilight softly

"Morning Twi... I made you your favorite pancakes" ,said comet with a smile and a slight blush.

Comet levitated the tray over to her and she sat up leaning against her pillow.

Her eyes lit up at the sight of her favorite pancakes.

"Thanks Comet', and their not even burnt... badly", said twilight in a teasing playful manner.

"Told you I could cook!" said Comet grinning.

They shared a laugh as Comet went and climbed into bed next to her.

She kissed him on the cheek and began to enjoy her breakfast

Comet floated the harry trotter book over and said.

"Might as well get cozy, doesn't look like the rains gona let up anytime soon".

Comet opened the book to chapter 13 and began to read aloud to Twilight.

They cuddled and enjoyed the book while the rain fall taped away on the window, neither wanting to leave each others side.

THE END