New Loyalties

by xblade

Rating: mature
Tags: Dark
Length: 3105

Rainbow Dash has lost her loyalty. She goes to a friend for help and chaos ensues.

Rainbow Dash has been told she not the loyalist pony that she once was. Distressed by this news, Dash seeks help from Fluttershy. However, fate can be cruel at times when it is least expected.

Warning!Contains: Rape/Submissive, Mind control, Mind break,No OC's However it does contain OOC's

Published 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
Last updated 2014-05-03 15:50:02 UTC

Chapter 1

"What the..." Applejack said, astonished as she looked out at her dark fields and up at the even darker grey skies.

But the weather chart said sunny skies all week! the orange earth pony thought as she tried to look for a familiar blue speck working in the clouds. It didn't take her too long to find it and yell upward, "Rainbow Dash!"

The pegasus heard her name being called and zipped down to her farmer friend. "Hey AJ, I'm guessing this is about the clouds?"

"Hay yes its about these darn clouds!" Applejack said through gritted teeth. "You promised me that tha weather would be sunny fer 'bout two weeks! I can't train AB, or even work like this!" She waved towards the sky to emphasize her point.

Rainbow Dash kept a stern look about her as she said, "I know, AJ. I know. Look, don't you think I know this sucks too? I know how much rain Sweet Apple Acre's has been getting..."

"Mah trees are damn near water-logged!" shouted Applejack.

"Again, I know," Rainbow dash said, starting to get annoyed, "but I can't do anything about it. Orders from up top says we gotta have another storm." She turned and was ready to fly off and help the weather team until she was again interupted by her friend.

"Hey! Don't you be goin' now! Can't you pull a string or two and get them clear up... at least a good bit o' the Acre's?" Rainbow turned around and saw that AJ had a pleading look in her eyes now.

Rainbow Dash turned around to see an Applejack who seem to be pleading, from her eyes to her soul, with Rainbow Dash. The pegasus put her hoof over her eyes and sighed. When she breathed back in through her nose, she could smell hard apple cider emanating from Applejack. Oh no. I don’t wanna deal with this… Rainbow knew how her friend could get when she had even a bit of the drink in her. Well, time to walk on some eggshells.

“Listen, AJ... I wish I could help. I called in all of my favors recently. Some for my job, some for personal reasons.” She looked into Applejack’s eyes. “I’m sorry. My hooves are tied.”

Applejack huffed. “Bullshit.”

Dash recoiled a bit from shock. “What?”

“Bull. Shit!” the orange farmer repeated, much louder than last time. “My farm needs tha sun! If’n it rains again, I’m sure to lose a good chunk ‘o th’ farm!” She looked her friend in the eyes, more anger than anything residing in them. “You’re gonna move them clouds. Now.”

Rainbow Dash could believe how mad her friend was getting, taking into effect the crop and the booze on her breath. She wanted to help so bad… but she couldn’t, as far as her job was concerned. The ponies at the top said there needed to be heavy rain today. If Dash interefered with much of it, her boss would definitely fire her. That bitch needs to lighten up a bit, Dash thought. With a fight incoming, Dash tried one last shot of diplomacy. “Applejack, if I mess with this storm, like I’ve done for you before, I’m sure to get fired! I want you to understand that I want to-”

“No ya don’t.”

“W-What?”

“No, ya don’t wanna help me! If ya did, you’d be doin it right now.” Applejack said, now turning furious, and putting her face in Rainbow’s. “If you were mah friend, I’d be lookin’ at clear skies by now!” Dash was about to interject, but was cut off but her friend. “Heh, to think you were given the Element of Loyalty. What a joke.”

That was it. That was all it took to light the pagasus’ blood ablaze. “Hey,” Rainbow dash screamed, “what gives you the fucking right to say that shit?!”

The farmer chuckled and asked, slowly, “How have ya been loyal lately?”

Rainbow’s brain came to a halt. If she was honest with herself, she couldn’t think of any times recently. There was the time when… no, I bolted when Discord showed up that time. M-Maybe there was… not that either…

Applejack could see her friend’s mouth working, her legs scratching and gripping her head. “Quite yer blubberin’, Dash. Ya know, just as well as I do that you’ve done plum nothin’ loyal fer a while now.”

“At least I’m loyal when it matters!” Rainbow burst.

Applejack’s smug smile flattened and Rainbow could swear she saw flames behind those emerald eyes. Then she started screaming. “When it matters? You’re loyal when it matters?! It matters right now! Mah farm’s gonna drown cause ya don’t have enough loyalty in ya ta get ridda these clouds and save mah farm! How dare you even call yerself loyalty you stupid flying cunt!”

Rainbow… couldn’t function. Her friend… if she still was a friend, had just been so cruel to her. So vile. She didn’t know how to handle it. So, her brain decided take the first out it could. Her body turned towards Fluttershy’s cottage, tears brimming in her eyes, and extended her wings. “Fine… then get rid of the clouds yourself, hick, cause I’m not doing it for you. Fuck, maybe your farm drowning will teach you a lesson.”

With that said, Rainbow flew off towards Fluttershy’s cottage, leaving behind her ex-friend to find some comfort in the one pony who would definitely think she was still worthy of her element.

Chapter 2

As the day went on, the dark, thick clouds devoured the skies for many miles to around, soon cutting off near all the light from Celestia’s sun. A blue pegasus was flying towards a cottage that almost been seen from her distance.

Wings working at a furious pace, Rainbow continued flying through the harsh conditions of the storm that started to take effect shortly after she left Sweet Apple Acres. High winds pushed her back, but it wouldn’t not stop her.

This was Rainbow Dash, who was not afraid of some harsh weather, no matter her emotional status. A lighting bolt cracks down from a cloud. Rainbow, in a split second, dodges the incoming bolt and tries to regain her momentum and control. Rainbow tilted her wings in a way that she could spiral safely towards the ground, deciding that the weather was too risky to be stupid.

"Wow… I was a real asshole to AJ..." she trailed off as she approached the ground, landing with minor interference. “I… I’m not loyal, am I?” With that said, Rainbow Dash replayed her last few months, and the fight with her… friend. The more she thought about it, the more her statement held true.

"Well, at least this day couldn't get much worse." Right after she said that, the weather took a turn for the worse. As if the universe was mocking her, the winds picked up and it began to rain, every drop beating her down. However,  she felt she deserved to be beaten down by something. As it continued to rain, Rainbow didn’t bother to cover her head and continued walking, accepting her cosmic punishment.

After trudging through the rain a while longer, it seemingly growing stronger every step, she got to Fluttershy's house. She knocked on the door, and waited. When nopony answered, she knocked again.

Still no answer.

"Fluttershy! Please, open the door!” Rainbow screamed, practically bucking her friend’s door down. “I need your help!"

The door opened, a shadow that looked like a freak mutation of nature to Dash casting over her. That could only mean one thing. Discord. Ugh, I don’t want to deal with him right now. Rainbow Dash could usually deal with him long enough to visit her childhood friend, but today her patience was thin with just about anypony. He was walking on eggshells.

"Hello there, Rainbow dash! What brings you here on this beautiful sunny day?" he said, sarcastically smirking in his voice as much as he was on his face.

"Discord, I came here to see Fluttershy. Is she home?" Rainbow replied slowly, moving past him, choosing to ignore his sarcasm.

The Draconequus put on an  overly-hurt expression. "What? Am I not good enough for you, oh Element of Loyalty?"

Rainbow Dash winced, then looked at Discord, soaked eyes ablaze. "No, you’re not,” she replied through gritted teeth, “I just want to talk to Fluttershy."

"Aren't we friends, though? You know Dash, you can talk to me too."Discord replied. “I’m like…” he turned his head into a rather large tome, and flipped open to a section that held his face, “an open book!” A lock spawned on the covers. “Once you’re done, I’ll lock up our talk and throw away the key.”

Rainbow Dash scrunched her face up in disgust."Like I’d actually talk to you about it. Besides, even if I wanted your help, I doubt you could help me." Rainbow replied, her voice growing more quiet and pained with every word.

"Ugh! That hurt my feelings." Discord said while his face turned around to the opposite side of his body, along with his paw and claw. He stood there for a moment before he to take notice of a lack of snarky, or even angry, response.

"I'm sorry."Rainbow replied.

“W-what?” Discord turned himself around, dumbstruck, to see a strangely sincere Rainbow Dash. "Uh, fine, apology accepted,” he said as quick as possible, “but I'm actually serious now, I’m considered a friend by Fluttershy, so I consider myself a friend to you, and I want to help you." Discord said sternly, sounding as serious as possible.

"Well…” She weighed her options, and figured that if Fluttershy were here, or awake, she would have shown herself by now. “... ugh, fine." Rainbow relented.

Discord smirked then turned around.

"Fine, under one condition." Discord said as he put his index claw in front of her face.

Rainbow squinted. "Yeah, what is it?" Rainbow asked slowly, instantly growing some suspicions.

"You have to do whatever I say." Discord said simply.

Rainbow snorted."No fucking way."she strained.

"Fine, then I guess you'll have to deal with that loyalty problem yourself."Discord replied.

The blue pegasus froze. "H-How did you-”

"Oh, please, Rainbow Dash. A blind pony could have seen you cringe earlier when I mentioned your element." Discord answered.

"Oh..." Rainbow said, trying to remember that specific moment.

"So is it a deal?" Discord asked, reaching out his claw.

She shook her head and reached out with obvious apprehension. "Fine, but no funny stuff." She announced.

"What? I’d never!” His grip on Dash’s hoof tightened, and his tone grew darker. “To think that I trusted you and you throw it back in my face. What kind of friend are you?!” Rainbow was about to say something when Discord loudly said, “A disloyal one! We are really going to need to fix you if you ever want your friends to think that your loyal another to be there friend." Discord said as he snapped his paw, teleporting the two to a dark room.

Rainbow could barely see a thing. The most she could make out was the hard, cold ground under herself, along with some scattered boxes.

"Where the heck are we?" Rainbow asked.

"Fluttershy’s basement.” Discord replied in a low tone while turning on a single lantern. “Shows what you know about your friends."

"And what's that suppose to mean, bub?" Rainbow asked sharply.

The draconequus’ voice returned to his normal tone and said, "Calm down Dashie, and take a load off." Discord replied as he sat on white sofa that floated under him.

Rainbow ignored the obvious question of ‘Where’d the sofa come from?’ and asked one that burned her even more. "Dashie?!”

"What? You don't like it?” he asked casually. “I think it's an adorable pet name."

The pegasus’ face scrunched up and her body recoiled a bit, thoroughly disgusted at Discord. "What in the hay? What’s with this ‘pet name’ shit?!"

He appeared behind Rainbow, touching and massaging her wings. "You're so tense Dashie."

"Stop that! And stop calling me Dashie!" Rainbow yelled.

"I thought we had a deal? Or are not loyal enough to be trusted a deal." Discord retorted, slime oozing through his voice. “I say, its strange how somepony who wants to prove their loyalty wouldn't hold up their end of the bargain.”

That stung Rainbow. Hard. She realized that if she wanted to feel loyal again and earn her friend’s trust back, she was going to have to listen to Discord.

"Ugh, Fine, I'm... Dashie. Just be careful on the wings... they’re sensitive."Rainbow replied softly, clearly not comfortable with doing what Discord wanted.

"Fantastic! Oh, by the way it's master." Discord replied.

Rainbow hesitated. “Do I have to?" Rainbow whined.

"Well," Discord said, wrapping around Rainbow Dash like a snake, “you could continue with your path you walk now, and soon bear an element I would bestow…” He morphed into a snake-like being, his breath pouring over her ear with the last of his words, and his very last dripping with strange venom, “disloyalty!”

A chill traveled up and down her spine at that concept. After a moment of thought, she came .“Fine.” Rainbow sighed in defeat.

"Ok, now that we have that respect issue out of the way, it's time I teach you how to represent your precious Element of Loyalty again." Discord said.

"Finally! So, how-”

Discord glared at Rainbow, daring her to say another word.

"...Sorry master." Dashie relented, remembering that part of the deal.

"It’s alright, Dashie.” Discord said, slowly, his voice growing raspy. “Well then, lets begin." Discord said as he got closer to his new mare.

"O-okay master." Dashie replied, clearly uneasy at having to say that, as well as uneasy at hearing Discord’s voice.

"Now, Dashie, the first step is to clear your mind." Discord stated as he popped up chair for himself and then sat it while crossing his legs.

"I'll try, master." she replied.

"Now close your eyes and picture a happy memory." Discord said as he floated out of his chair, and next to Rainbow.

She kept her eyes close and imagined she was with all her friends, having a picnic. She was telling some silent joke, with laughter being the only thing she could hear. As she smiled, discord stabbed at the top of her head with his claw.

"Feel better Dashie?"Discord asked, dark intention clear in his voice.

"Yes master."Rainbow said without emotion.

"Good.Very good." he chuckled out, his usual joy returning. “Now, open your eyes.”

He contemplated what to do with her now. Finally he floated behind her and asked. "Dashie, you have lots of stress built up don't you?"

"Of course I do master." Rainbow replied with a blank expression on her face.

"Well then, I'm going to have to relieve all your stress." Discord replied with a smirk that could rival the even the Grinch.

"Do what you want to do with me, Master."Rainbow replied.

"Well, if you're ok with it. Then who am I to not honor your request." Discord replied as he took Rainbow from behind and placed her right in front off his semi-erect cock."Of course, Master."Rainbow replied while marveling at it.

"Well then suck on it." Discord replied.

"Yes master." She said while she began to lick his semi-hard shaft.

"Oh yeah..Good Dashie."Discord replied as he patted her head.

She continued to lick up and down his shaft, now full erect.

"Go on Dashie suck on it. Make your master pleased."Discord replied.

And with that, Rainbow began sucking on the tip. She kept going deeper and deeper down his shaft. Bobbing up and down.

She pulled off and replied."It's so big master."

"Go on Dashie. I'm so close to cumming in that cute little mouth of yours." Discord replied.

"Do you want it?"Discord asked.

"Yes master, give it to me, I need it." She replied, after that she went back down on that hard member. She kept going on until finally she bottomed out.

"YES! Dashie, I'm going to cum and you have to swallow all of it."Discord demanded.

She mumbled."Yesh mastur."As she continued bobble that cock in her mouth.

He came right in her mouth and all that hot semen melted into her mouth. It had a salty  taste. But of course she drank it all.

"Very good, Dashie."Discord praised.

She then finished swallowing and then with a pop, slid the cock out of her mouth. "Thank you master."She replied.

"Now, it's time for some chaos."Discord said.

Rainbow didn't respond immediately, but, when she did she answered with."What are we doing now master?"she asked cursorily.

With a stern look he answered."I'm going to wreak some havoc on your pussy."

Rainbow gave him a target. Discords member stiffened with idea of Rainbow get wrecked.

"Does this position suit you master?" Dashie asked as she presented herself to him.

"Perfect." Discord replied as he locked onto target.

With one thrust, he injected himself into Rainbow. Rainbow could only moan. The pleasure was heaven breaking. She was at discord's complete mercy.

"Harder master." She begged.

"Have you been a good little Dashie?" Discord asked.

All she could do was moan at the the tremendous force and girth that was penetrating her. But still she wanted to make her master happy. "Yes master." Rainbow replied.

"Well, Ok then." He replied and with that attacked her pussy with harder thrusts.

"Thank you master-r-r." Rainbow moaned as her pussy became assaulted by Discord's big cock.

"Ask and you shall receive." He replied.

After a few minutes of pounding. Discord’s fun came to an end. Well mostly Rainbow's end.

"Ready for the big finish Dashie?"Discord asked.

"Cum in me master." Rainbow begged.

He hilted her and he bottomed out. "Think you can have my seeds? Not without answering my riddle." Discord replied

"Yes master, anything to feel your seeds." Rainbow begged.

"Very well then. Sense makes sense when sense makes no sense." Discord replied.

"Ugh.." Rainbow was speechless.

"I guess you don't want my cum." Discord replied.

"No." Rainbow moaned and begged.

"Well then, answer my riddle." Discord replied.

She thought it over. After a good while it finally it came to her. "Is it, when somepony tries to explain something to you like a teacher? And you say you get what they are saying but, not really. But the stuff the teacher said was true, in other words made sense." She replied.

Discord mouth went agape in disappointment."Well it seems you figured out my riddle. Now here's your prize." Discord replied as he pumped hot semen into Rainbow's pussy.

"Thank you master." Rainbow moaned.