Shift

by Arcing Thunder
My first story ever written. It is about a Changeling who ends up in Ponyville. Read the Large Description.

This is my first story, on this website or any, about my OC, (Name in Progress). He is a Changeling, escaped from Chrysalis' reign, brought up in a rural, poverty stricken village, but I won't spoil too much. I am posting this early, due to the need for criticism before I write a ton. While I do not have a name for the main character, which is a large issue, I would really appreciate any ideas, tips or criticism.

Teen
Incomplete
Comedy
Romance
Dark
 

1891 words: Estimated 9 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Escape. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1277
  2. Explainations 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    614