Chrysalis' Love Hotel

by Razalon The Lizardman

Look Dashing

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It had been a long trip, and I had spent about fifty bits just to take the Friendship Express this far out before having to travel on hoof the rest of the way. Eventually I reached the border between the Badlands and Equestria, and from there I traveled East to my destination. It was an artificially-made cave in the side of a medium-sized rocky hill sitting right on the border. I could make out a faint green glow from inside.

That’s definitely the place, I thought.

Clutching my bag tighter in my mouth, I picked up the pace of my trot toward the cave. The green glow became clearer the closer I approached, and once I’d reached the cave’s mouth I finally learned where the glow was coming from. Looking inside I could see the cave’s walls were covered in a dark green substance that reminded me of holed-cheese or spiderwebs. I remembered that this was how Princess Celestia and the Elements of Harmony described the material used to cocoon ponies as looking.

At the thought of the Elements, I was overcome by tremendous sorrow over one in particular. Looking downcast for a moment, I set down and unzipped my bag before reaching my mouth in to retrieve something. As I would need said something very soon, I wasn’t wasting any time stopping to retrieve it now.

After a few moments of searching through various miscellaneous stuff (some of it too shameful to identify) I pulled out a photo of my longtime colthood crush.

Rainbow Dash.

The solo picture of Equestria’s #1 flyer had her in a pose that perfectly framed her sleek, well-toned, cyan-coated body against the blue sky background. The expression on her face attested to the brashness that she was known for, sometimes in a good way and sometimes in a not-so-good way. Personally, it never bothered me as I was always more interested in her appearance; specifically, her namesake rainbow mane and tail.

To me, Rainbow Dash exemplified the two traits I consider crucial for attractive mares: beauty and strength. Rainbows are inherently beautiful and only soulless monsters would say otherwise, and having both a mane and tail with said coloration had the cyan pegasus fulfilling the first requirement in my book. Also, by simple virtue of the fact that Rainbow Dash was an Elemental Bearer, could perform Sonic Rainbooms at will, and kicked a dragon in the face proved she had plenty of strength. The spiritual kind, that is, which is what I value most in a mare.

I felt a tear roll down my cheek as I looked upon my crush’s picture. I knew now that I’d never have her, now that she had another’s love. It had taken a while to come to terms with that fact, but it still pained me to think that the mare I’d loved for so long wouldn’t return that love, much less be my bride and wife.

With a heavy sigh, I clutched my bag in my mouth again along with the photo and began trotting further into the cave. The green substance that coated the walls seemed to get thicker the deeper in I went, which resulted in an increasingly brighter glow. After making a couple of turns I eventually reached what looked to be a waiting room of some sort. There were chitin-wrapped chairs carved from black carapace propped up against one side of the room and a large coffee table made of the same material set in the room’s center. An eye-level desk with an ordinary bell atop it was set on the opposite side, in front of a curtained doorway made of what appeared to be a thinner variant of the green glowing material back in the cave. A few other doors just like it lined the wall immediately next to the entrance I’d just arrived in.

Not knowing what else to do, I strode forward to the desk. Setting both my bag and the photo down next to me, I reached a hoof up to ring the bell once. I waited anxiously for what seemed like hours, but was really only a few moments before the curtain behind the desk opened to reveal Queen Chrysalis herself, a neutral expression on her face as she looked straight at me while coming up behind the desk.

“I take it you’re here for our services?” she inquired, her tone even and not at all indicative of whatever feelings she might’ve had for my presence.

“Y-yes Q-q-queen Chrysalis,” I stammered, sweat building on my brow as I stood in the presence of Equestria’s number one most wanted enemy. “M-my na-name is-”

“Up bup bup,” Chrysalis cut me off. I immediately ceased talking, not wanting to upset her. “Both your name and the name of whomever you lost your crush to aren’t important.” Her expression lifted into a soft smile, one that looked positively alien on her face but comforting nevertheless, to which I felt my nervousness from being in her presence dissipate. “Now, do you have the required photo of your taken beloved?”

I nodded and reached down to grab the photo in my mouth before showing it to her. Immediately, her face changed from a soft smile to a deadpan scowl, most likely in response to seeing exactly who it featured.

“I see, one of the Elements of Harmony.” Her horn flared to life and she levitated the photo out of my grasp and over to her. “Be right back.” She retreated back through the curtained doorway, reappearing a few minutes later with the photo which she returned to me.

“You’re lucky,” she said with a sly smile, “we just happened to have both an empty room and someling experienced with impersonating Miss Dash.” She pointed a hoof to the far right door of the row. “If you’ll wait in there, dear, your lover will be with you shortly.”

Nodding, I stuffed the photo back into my bag and approached the door. Stepping through the curtain, I found myself in a room hardly different from the rest of the cave. It was covered in the same green glowing substance as before, though it was dimmed down considerably compared to outside, possibly for heightened romance. Along the far side of the room from the door was a simple wooden bed with several fluffy white pillows.

I briefly wondered where Queen Chrysalis managed to procure such luxuries before shrugging and trotting over to the bed. After setting my bag down by the foot of the bed I climbed up onto it and laid my head down on one of the pillows. With nothing better to do, I let myself get lost in thought; specifically, about what I was going to do.

Wow, I’m really doing this. I’m actually going to get laid with Rainbow Dash, or at least, the next best thing, I suppose. Oh, why didn’t I announce my love for her before it was too late? I could’ve done it whenever I wanted, especially through the mail- no, better yet, I could’ve set up an entire fireworks display with the message “YOU ARE AWESOME, RAINBOW DASH. THAT’S WHY I LOVE YOU.” Yeah, that would’ve been the perfect love letter for her. Actually, it’s probably the only kind she wouldn’t gag at the sight of. Yeah, she’s too awesome for that mushy written stuff.

But . . . what if she didn’t reciprocate my feelings? What if she thought I was too lame to get hitched with? No, no, I’m not lame; I’m every bit as awesome as she is. At least, that’s what mom always said. What if she was just humoring me? No, she wouldn’t just say what I wanted to hear . . . would she?

The sound of a throat clearing snapped me from my mental crisis of self-confidence and I turned to the door, only for my jaw to drop in shock. There in the doorway, a saucy grin spread across her muzzle, was the rainbow-maned mare I loved with all my heart, whom I wanted to do it with on more occasions than could be counted and would finally get to do so at long last.

Or at least a close facsimile of her. Either way, I felt my face heat up and my shaft expand as my lover slowly approached the bed while seductively swaying her flanks back and forth. My eyes instinctually scanned every inch of the mare’s body, checking for imperfections in the changeling’s disguise.

There were none. Same rainbow mane. Same cyan coat. Same rainbow lightning Cutie Mark. Same sexy legs. Same shapely flanks. Yes, for all intents and purposes, I was staring at Rainbow Dash in the flesh right then and there.

“Well, aren’t you a curious one?” the disguised changeling intoned, having reached the bed. Her face was little more than a scant few inches from my own, and the bedroom eyes she was giving me made me tremble in both excitement and nervousness.

“Kinda cute, also,” she purred.

I suddenly became very aware of how close our lips were to each other; the disguised changeling was inching her face closer to my own. The feeling of adrenaline I now felt coursing through my veins was unlike all the times I’d fantasized about this moment in the past. It felt a hundred times better, more genuine even, despite the fact that this wasn’t really Rainbow Dash.

In spite of that fact, I still found myself hesitant to close the distance between our lips. I don’t know if it was because I was scared I’d break the moment by being stupid or if I was too self-aware of whom was really in front of me. Whatever the reason, I failed to connect the kiss, and the changeling frowned at me.

“Is something the matter?” she asked, sounding genuinely concerned.

“No, no, nothing’s wrong.” I slumped my shoulders with a sigh. “I guess I’m not quite ready to go that far yet.”

Rainbow stared blankly at me for a few moments before re-adorning her bedroom eyes. “You know what I think?” she asked.

“What?” I replied, sounding pathetically depressed.

Before I knew what was happening, she had me pinned down upon the bed by my fore legs, staring into my eyes with a predator’s gaze that sent excited shivers down my spine.

“I think you need a little push to go that far,” she replied in a tone that was both sultry and threatening.

I felt slivers of sweat pour from my head and my cheeks grow hot enough to fry an egg. “W-w-well,” I stuttered, feeling vulnerable in more ways than one in my current position, “m-m-maybe a little help w-w-would be ni-AH!”

I only had a second to scream before Rainbow’s face swooped down to meet my own. She pressed her lips against mine and closed her eyes, giving me a deep, passionate kiss that I failed to return at first, being too shocked by its suddenness.

Eventually, however, I closed my eyes as well and mustered up the courage to return the kiss in kind. Our tongues danced in each other’s mouths back and forth for what probably amounted to a few minutes before Rainbow broke her lips away. She panted with exertion, as did I a bit more lightly, letting the passionate flame in my bloodstream subside temporarily.

“You’re *gasp* a great *gasp* kisser,” Rainbow complimented between breaths. “Could’ve *gasp* fooled me *gasp* that you’re a *gasp* virgin.”

“Thanks, I guess,” I sheepishly replied, though after the kiss I felt my confidence rise a little bit.

Rainbow smiled, taking a moment for her breathing to normalize before speaking again. “Alright, let’s kick this up a notch.” She backed up a bit off of me and stared intently at my fully erect member for a moment before dipping her head down to it.

I felt my entire body tense up as she began closing her mouth around my shaft, which she must’ve sensed somehow because she immediately stopped and gave me the most prominent deadpan expression possible to conceive.

“Are you honestly that afraid?” she asked exasperatedly.

I shrunk back under her gaze, shying my eyes away from hers. “I’m not afraid,” I insisted. “Just nervously excited, is all.”

“Then just relax, dude,” she smirked, “and enjoy oral sexual bliss like you’ve never imagined.”

I watched as she resumed lowering her head down to my shaft, then opened her mouth wide so it engulfed my whole member, and finally closed her lips around it. A pang of pleasure coursed through my body as she wrapped her tongue around the head of my dick and began coating it with her saliva. My breathing increased in intensity as my body went from as stiff as a board to totally relaxed and I smiled in content as I let the gorgeous mare before me give me my first blowjob. It didn’t matter that she wasn’t the real Rainbow Dash anymore; her expert ministrations were enough of a distraction from that fact.

I was mildly surprised when she ceased blowing me before I could shoot my load, but I chalked it up to her just not wanting me to let my love juices go to waste. After taking a moment to wipe some saliva from her lips, she re-adorned her sultry smile and reached a hoof out to pull me up.

“Well, that was fun,” she remarked, and then splayed herself down onto the bed and turned around with her hind legs spread apart. She smiled seductively at me and gestured toward her marehood. “Now it’s your turn; eat me out reeeal good.”

I went wide-eyed in shock for a moment; I was also pretty sure my cheeks turned a sheepish shade of red at that time. “I beg your pardon?” I asked just barely loud enough for her to clearly hear me.

“You heard me,” she said, rolling her eyes in annoyance. “Put your tongue against my vagina and lick it like ice cream!”

My blush had to have deepened right then. I struggled to form a coherent response as my virgin mind worked overtime to process all the new sensations it was experiencing.

“Okay, sure,” I finally replied, so very weakly.

With quivering lips, I dipped my head down to Rainbow Dash’s marehood. I felt my entire body, but especially my more intimate regions, light ablaze with the power of a thousand suns as I inched my face closer to the slit of my dreams. I was so anxious to take it for myself, and yet at the same time I was afraid I’d royally screw up and leave my lover dissatisfied with my performance. It was enough to make me hesitate for a brief second, but I mustered every last reserve I had of courage and stuck my tongue out toward my prize, giving it a tentative lick. It tasted quite dry.

Rainbow Dash immediately let out a moan of pleasure. “Oooh, yeah,” she said, sighing in content, “keep at it, tiger.”

I stuck out my tongue again and gave her pussy another taste. It still tasted dry, but I knew it was my job to fix that. Rainbow Dash moaned in pleasure again and begged for more. I complied easily enough and began more eagerly sliding my tongue across and around her marehood, making sure to coat every square inch of it in my saliva. As I worked, her pussy continuously spilled its juices out which would collect on my tongue before dropping to the bedsheets. I didn’t bother swallowing it since I’d never been one for the more kinky aspects of sex. I was still going to fuck Rainbow Dash like there was no tomorrow, of course, but such was enough to satisfy me.

All while I worked, the cyan mare would continuously moan in pleasure while occasionally bucking her hind legs out in reflex. There were a few instances of this where she came close to hitting my shoulders, and while I knew Rainbow Dash wasn’t known for her hind leg strength, I was still positive she would’ve done severe damage to me had her bucks managed to connect with me. Nevertheless, I continued with my task undeterred, in stark contrast to my hesitant self previously. I suppose some of Rainbow’s resolve and eagerness was rubbing off on me.

Once I believed her marehood was wet well and good enough I ceased licking and brought my head up to meet her bedroom eyes which bore through me like two sharp, seductive spears.

“I think you know what comes next,” she purred, turning to lay down on her stomach.

I stared down at the marehood I always wanted to claim. Had my past self from about two weeks ago been told he’d get to fuck Rainbow Dash in the near future, he would’ve hung his head and walked sadly away, so sure that the mare of his dreams was now an impossible dream to obtain.

That dream was now a reality, and as I shook with nervous excitement while clutching the cyan mare around her barrel for support, I realized that I was such a foolish foal back then.

“C’mon, get on with it already!” Rainbow Dash practically shouted.

I needed no further prompting. My dick was fully stretched and itching to take the pussy presented in front of it. After taking a moment to fully harden my resolve and position my sexstick just right, I carefully inched forward and pressed it against Rainbow’s clit, which caused the rainbow mare to let out a soft moan of pleasure as her body quivered in response.

“That’s it,” she gasped, “keep going.”

I complied, pushing my dick in ever so gently so as to not risk causing her discomfort. I soon found out, however, that my lover’s vagina was much too tight for this to work, so I added more force to my entry. Slowly but surely, my train inched its way into Rainbow’s tunnel, and the further in it went the more intense and guttural her moans of pleasure became.

She wasn’t the only one feeling insane pleasure. The soft, tight walls of Rainbow’s vagina rubbed against my advancing dick sending waves of pleasure up and through to my brain, to which I could feel all my previous tenseness melt away in light of the new, wonderful feeling of satisfaction.

When I couldn’t advance any farther, I let Rainbow’s vagina adjust to my dick, all while relishing the experience of finally being inside the mare of my affection. Once I was sure all was set, I began slowly thrusting in and out of my desired pussy.

“That’s *gasp* it you *gasp* wonderful stud,” Rainbow said between exhausted breaths as I pistoned in and out of her. “Make me *gasp* yours *gasp*, all yours!”

I had every desire of doing so, and I increased the pacing of my thrusts to show my eagerness. Each thrust was accompanied by a grunt from me and a guttural moan of primal pleasure from Rainbow. Euphoric sensations shot through my body to my brain, clouding my mind with feelings of lust that completely outshone every one of my previous masturbation sessions with Rainbow’s picture. To experience the real deal was above and beyond anything I could’ve ever imagined, and as I felt my seed rising through my cock I knew, right then and there, that I could die a happy stallion.

“Yes yes YES!” Rainbow screeched. “GIVE IT TO ME!”

With one final thrust her vaginal walls clamped down on my stallionhood, which proceeded to shoot its load into her. Rainbow gripped the pillow in her mouth and bit down hard to muffle her screams. I let my dick empty its load before collapsing on top of her, to which her body flattened against the bed.

We both lay there, me on top of Rainbow, panting in exhaustion as the effects of our climax settled down. Though my energy was spent, I forced myself to roll off of Rainbow and onto the bed next to her. I glanced over to see her staring back at me with a warm smile.

“That was awesome,” she said. “You were awesome.”

“Really?” I asked, my voice coming out in a hushed whisper from my de-energized state. “As awesome as you?”

“For sure,” she affirmed with a nod.

Never in my life was I happier than at that moment.

Rainbow’s eyes glowed green. “Now for your bill . . .”

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