First off the name of the dude who is teaching the mane 5 a lesson is SHI (death).second this has no clop except for maybe a kiss .third if you have any suggestions please leave a comment.fouth the reason I say mane 5 is because pinkie is the reason why he is doing this.fifth dont dislike this all because its dark and stuff.
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"Okay next question.why didn't you two kill chrysalis?" I asked curiously.
Shining armor looked back at me with a smile smirk "that's simple my friend. She was only trying to feed her hive. She thought she was doing the right thing so we let her go."
I looked at him in disbelief. If I was in his position I would have thrown her in a dungeon for all the trouble she had cause. While in thought shining spoke again "so if you don't mind me asking what was it like back on your planet?"
I thought for a moment."well to sum it up it was boring really. People go to work,get paid,then sit in front of a TV. Gues that's why discord brought me here."
