No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

by Vital Heart

Chapter 1: How it came to be

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Chapter 1: How it came to be

By: Phantom Mask

10000 years ago in the land of Equestria. A fearsome war had sprung out between good and evil, Harmonies Army VS Tierk’s Army. Harmonies Army was the Ponies, the Minotaur’s, and the Griffons. Tierk’s Army consisted of Demons, Windigoes, Mountain Trolls, and Changelings. Tierk’s Armies were stronger and more intimating than Harmonies, while Harmonies Armies were more into strategies and knowledge of their enemies. On the last day of the war Harmonies Army was losing and Teirk was flourishing.

They had been fighting for days on end, without rest or backup. “You can’t win Teirk” said Solaris, the King of the Ponies “Oh, but I will Solaris.” Said Tierk raising his sword only to be parried again “Your armies are retreating and mine is ready to give chase,” He continued “ but first, you must die in front of what’s left of your army.” He said while raising his blade to do a finishing blow on the weakened king.

But before he could, a bright flash shown throughout the sky. Crashing into the center of Teirks army, send roasted limbs and bodies everywhere. “What was that, Solaris, a new weapon?” questioned Tierk, clearly angry about what had just happened. Absolute silence covered the battlefield, only to be broken by a type of monster nether army had seen before had seen before.

This monster was easily 9 feet tall, was bipedal, and was wearing a type of armor that not only looked intimating but was also extremely durable.

Believe it or not, this creature used to be human, though very shy, was one of the most feared kid in his school. And one of Tierks generals just orderd his men to kill the creature. What happened next was not only freighting, but astonishing as well.

With one swing of its blade, it had sent easily one hundred soldiers flying. And that was just the beginning. It got up ready to take on more of the army. And it did not have to wait in the slightest. There was a mass slaughter of thousands of soldiers, with only scratches to prove it. That caused Tierk to worry a little. And that’s saying something.


(Creatures POV)

I was freaking out, why was there a FREAKING ARMY in front of me and where am I? Okay let start over, my name Nichole Anderson, but most people just call me Nick, and not TWO minutes ago I was at Comic-con with one of my friends.

(FLASH BACK)

“How much for the sword.” Nick shyly asked the merchant “For you, 150.” Said said the merchant “Deal” Nick handed the money over and took the blade. The blade was easily 4 feet long and would fight his costume nicely. Nick turned and went to go and meet up with his companions, Josh and Mike. When he found them, they were both flirting with female MLP cos-players, and before anyone asks NO I do not have anything against Bronies, unless they annoy the living crap out of me with the show. “Hey Josh, who are they?” Nick asked nervously “Oh Nick, didn’t see you there.” Josh said generally surprised “This Megan and this Krystal.” Josh introduced. Just then a loud noise came nearby. An army of fat bronies were dog piling on two Naruto cos-players, a steam punk cosplayer fell through a black hole in the earth, a Dark Souls cos-player vanished into thin air. A Magic cos-player fell into a portal, and some Kingdom of Hearts cos-players vanished into thin air. Then my sword started to glow, and then a white was all I could see.

(END OF FLASH BACK)

Now here I stand in front of this ugly creature with a sword in one hand and a… pony in the other? Okay seriously a pony. For some reason when I had looked it in the eye, I knew it was sapient and it was the good one. So I decided then and there that I will protect the pony kind from this evil thing. So I raised my sword to battle.


(3rd person)

Tierk looked as if he burst into laughing at any moment. This creature just swung his blade, effectively cutting of his head. It grew back quickly to the dismay of the creature. Teirk was a immortal and was immensely powerful. The creature began to plan his way to beat the demon before him. Then it hit him, he began to drag his blade along the ground throughout the fight until the last symbol was finished.

It was finished, The Diagram of Imprisonment, and it worked too, glowing a crimson red “What is this?” Said Tierk fearful. Sensing the power behind the symbols “What have you done!?” He screamed before being transformed into the tree of harmony. The war was one. Only two Generals of Tierks Army are alive, and without an army to fight with what could they do now. But with great lost, such as Solaris’s savior being turned to stone. On that day was a great grief formed.

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