Alpha

by PinkMaleWolf
A mutant who was the prey of bullies long ago with a Dark Legend/Truth of his downfall, and a prisoner of the Rainbow Factory, who loses his wing as punishment for saving a mare, go on a quest of revenge. Their target? Celestia, Princess of Equestria

My first ever Fanfic, let alone first story I have created that wasn't a school assignment.

This story is a dystopian look on Equestria, with Celestia being the ruler, and somewhat of a dark alicorn, worse than Sombra, Discord, Nightmare Moon, and Tirek combined.

The story mainly revolves around a pegasi colt named Alpha, who, in the beginning of the story, is prisoner of the Rainbow Factory. He is punished for saving a mare from hurting herself with a welding torch by having his wing painfully removed by the same welding torch. Beta, a mysterious spirit from 900 years ago, bonds with Alpha, and accompanies him as he searches for the real reason why he was tortured instead of being put to death like any other pony would.

This story gives background on the Changelings, Celestia, Luna, Nightmare Moon, Sombra, and countless others, as well as making nummerous refrences to the Rainbow Factory.
This takes place before and after Seasons 1-4
The Romance happens after Chapter 16.

THIS STORY IS RATED MATURE BECAUSE IT HAS:
Grimdark, Explict and Detailed death scenes, Torture, Death, Betrayal, Depression, Revenge, Rage, Loss of Self Control, Government Overthowing, and Hatred.

Oh, and a quest to take out Celestia. Because she is anything but innocent.

On Hiatus
Tragedy
Gore
Dark
Sad
Romance
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Adventure
 
PNPOK

27783 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

35 Chapters:

  1. Prelude 2014-04-28 07:39:40 UTC
    370
  2. Chapter 1: Hell 2014-04-28 07:58:09 UTC
    1848
  3. Chapter 2: An Idea 2014-04-28 08:20:39 UTC
    1561
  4. Chapter 3: Beta 2014-04-28 08:32:57 UTC
    2442
  5. Chapter 4: One Last Step 2014-04-28 08:43:00 UTC
    1490
  6. Chapter 5: A new start 2014-04-29 05:00:03 UTC
    2094
  7. Chapter 6: A Message 2014-05-05 07:47:44 UTC
    2911
  8. Chapter 7: Alpha's Revenge 2014-05-20 03:50:11 UTC
    2893
  9. Chapter 8: "It's much harder to escape than it is to break in" 2014-06-02 11:01:34 UTC
    3384
  10. Chapter 9: Her 2014-06-03 20:02:03 UTC
    2628
  11. Chapter 10: Memories of the Forgotten 2014-06-06 10:33:24 UTC
    2314
  12. Chapter 11: A job request. 2014-06-12 05:30:36 UTC
    1543
  13. Chapter 12: A snowy day 2014-06-26 00:01:12 UTC
    2305
  14. Chapter 13: The Heart of Equestria 2014-10-14 02:07:31 UTC
  15. Chapter 14: Estefania 2014-10-14 09:03:53 UTC
  16. Chapter 15: History is written by the Winners 2014-10-14 16:33:41 UTC
  17. Chapter 16: Charlie and Delta 2014-10-14 21:07:02 UTC
  18. Chapter 17: The Therapist 2014-10-15 16:06:54 UTC
  19. Chapter 18: The Battle of the Victims 2014-10-16 16:34:54 UTC
  20. Chapter 19: The King Unicorn 2014-10-17 17:24:32 UTC
  21. Chapter 20: The Tomb 2014-10-19 23:13:31 UTC
  22. Part 2: Chapter 1: Charlie. 2014-10-20 17:28:38 UTC
  23. Part 2: Chapter 2: A fiend In Need 2014-10-21 14:45:00 UTC
  24. Part 2: Chapter 3: Revenge is a Dish Best Served Cold 2014-10-22 23:00:36 UTC
  25. Part 2: Chapter 4: I hate Dogs 2014-10-23 18:30:16 UTC
  26. Part 2: Chapter 5: Nova 2014-10-25 21:37:51 UTC
  27. Part 2: Chapter 6: You have been out for 48 hours 2014-10-26 06:21:33 UTC
  28. Part 2: Chapter 7: Father and Daughter 2014-10-27 15:47:05 UTC
  29. Chapter 28: An Old Tool 2014-10-28 17:55:16 UTC
  30. CHARACTER BIBLE 2014-10-26 19:27:14 UTC
  31. Chapter 29: Every Utopia is a Dystopia 2014-11-04 21:02:04 UTC
  32. Chapter 30:The Penalty of Homosexuality 2014-11-07 17:31:57 UTC
  33. Chapter 31: Confusion. Depression. Realization. Rage. 2014-11-13 18:09:01 UTC
  34. Chapter 32: A Close Friend's Teacher 2014-11-17 20:53:06 UTC
  35. End of Story 2014-11-29 12:46:39 UTC