Disloyalty and Punishment

by Deshamable

Disloyalty

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Rainbow Dash was sitting within her cloud home, warm and cozy on her couch. It was another late night for the weather ponies, and the soft, gentle feeling of her cloud-made furniture was more than welcome as a good end to a busy day. A pleasurable tingle washed into her when she stretched her tense wings out.

Eventually she settled back into her half-sitting, half-lying position. She reached down beside the couch and took a fairly generously sized book into her hoof, lifting it into her view. A content smile spread over her face as she read the cover; "Daring Do and the Golden Feather," one of the newest, rarest additions to the series that she totally didn't blackmail Twilight into giving her first dibs for.

Rainbow was just reaching the end of the proglogue when there was a knock on the door. Not bothering to hold in her disappointed sigh, she dragged herself over.

Who the hay would be bothering me at this time of night? She rolled her eyes. If it's Fluttershy wanting more cuddles.. She stopped in her tracks, thinking about that. I guess I'd be cool with that.

But when she swung the door open, Rainbow didn't see her adorable yellow pegasus-pal, nor did she see a purple bookworm unicorn. In fact, the thing she saw was so far less than any pony she'd ever known, she closed the door and turned away from it as soon as she saw it.

A recognizably masculine voice came muffled from behind the door. "C'mon, Dash, don't be a dweeb! I just wanna talk for a sec."

Annoyance filled Rainbow's tone. "Get out of here, Gilda. I don't need friends like you."

Gilda pushed the door open, glaring at Rainbow Dash. "Is that how it is? You're just gonna leave your old, awesome friends behind for your new dweebish ones!? After all that I've done for you!?"

Rainbow turned around, shouting. "All you've done for me? Gilda, you've hardly done anything for me, and what you have done has gotten me into trouble!"

Stopping to think about that, Gilda shook her head. "Don't you remember back in Junior Speedsters? You were getting bullied all the time, and I stood up for you!"

With a snort, Rainbow rolled her eyes. "You only helped once! Then you asked to keep the lunch money they stole for me! When things were actually bad, I saw you bucking watching it all happen!"

Gilda looked offended. "That didn't happen!"

--- Some Years Ago ---

It was the final week that Junior Speedster's Flight Camp would be open before fillies returned to school. Rainbow Dash sat on the bottom bunk, the top of which belonged to her new griffon friend, Gilda. She did nothing but sit on her bed, thinking about the bullies that had been welcomed into the camp. She sighed. "You'd think being a blank flank didn't matter for somepony as awesome as me."

Gilda peeked her head down and smiled surprisingly sweetly at Rainbow. "Aww, don't worry about them! They wouldn't know awesome if it bit them on the flank!"

"You're acting cheerier than usual.. is something up?" Rainbow's voice squeaked. Her question earned a nervous chuckle from Gilda.

"Hehehe.. don't I always act this way?" She looked around, as if making sure there was no one watching. "Okay, you caught me, I need a few extra bits." She pouted a little. "Please?"

Rainbow rolled her eyes, unable to help smiling. "Alright," she decided, "my saddlebag is outside. You wanna go get it for me?" Turning her head to look at Gilda, she saw nothing but empty space. Above her, a faint snoring was audible. She face-hoofed in frustration. "Dumb gryphon falls asleep faster than anything I've ever seen..!"

A hop, skip, jump, and a few pegasus-wing-flaps later, Rainbow was walking out of the tent she shared with her group, most of which was out doing flying exercises. Gilda and Rainbow Dash were both exempted from the exercise program due to their natural abilities. Well, and the fact Gilda's a gryphon and their wings are strong enough to do all kinds of things with no exercise or warm-ups at all. Rainbow was the one with true, natural-born talent.

The campfire site was a tiny distance away from their tent, which is why Rainbow felt comfortable leaving her saddlebags there when she didn't need them. She could easily hear anypony in the general area, and if she couldn't, Gilda definitely could. She approached her bag and picked it up, when two voices suddenly right next to her made her jump in surprise.

"Hey there, Rainbow Crash!!" Rainbow felt her IQ dropping just from how obnoxious the voice sounded.

"Heheh, yeah, Rainbow Crash!" The other echoed. It was deeper, stupider, and somehow even more obnoxious. Rainbow felt like her mind was vomiting.

"That's a nice bag, Rainbow Crash!" The colt walked around and grabbed her saddle bag. She yelped.

"H-Hey, that's mine..! Buck off, you losers!"

"Sorry, it's a nice bag, Rainbow Crash!" The other colt echoed yet again, clearly completely following the first colt's lead. "That means it belongs to us!"

"I said give it back!!" Rainbow lunged at the two bullies, but they both stepped aside, causing her to hit the ground with a painful whack followed by several less-than-desired somersaults. Her back smacked into a tree, effectively stopping her momentum while also sending jolts of pain through several parts of her body. Dizzy, she sat upside-down with her back against the tree for what seemed like several minutes.

She spat, trying her hardest to regain her thoughts through the agonizing pain. Had the two flankfaces moved a half-second later, she would have knocked them both out. As she was about to get on her hooves, her vision was blocked by two large hills with a crevice in the center. Two plump, round things sat in a sack of similar color to the hills, and a slightly darker, winking donut sat in the northern area of the crevice. It only took Rainbow a few seconds to realize she was staring right at the plot of one of the colts.

At the descent of the entire structure, Rainbow's world was thrust into musky, smelly suffocation. A scent that could only be properly described as ass stung her nostrils. Laughter erupted from outside of her filthy hell.

"That's a nice look for you, Rainbow Crash!"

"Yeah! Nice look, Rainbow Crash!"

The echo in the area was starting to get on her nerves. There was nothing at all she could do about it, though, with her face stuck in this flankface's flank. She struggled and grunted, desperately trying to get out of her prison, but her efforts were fruitless. Her captors must have been at least four years older than her, which resulted in her being easily overpowered. All she could do was groan and cry out as loud as she could until somepony arrived to save the day.

Unfortunately, though, her screaming stopped when the colt on top of her shuffled his position a little. Eventually, when he settled his full weight back onto her muzzle, she felt that puckered hole enter her mouth, the colt's slightly fatty flanks sealing off any exit. Able to now taste the colt's disgusting plothole musk, Rainbow now struggled more and more violently, but still had no luck.

Finally tired of Rainbow's attempts to flee, the colt grunted. She heard a small murmur come from inside of the stallion's lower belly, before a grotesque gas began to quickly fill her mouth. Rainbow found herself dry heaving. To her dismay, this only resulted in the inadvertent stimulation of the colt's anus. More torturous gas flew into her mouth; the vibrations of the colt's flatulence shook her face uncomfortably. She wanted to vomit, or at least get some fresh air, but the colt's rump remained firmly planted on her muzzle, keeping her in place.

It was about this time that the colt felt a solid, discomforting feeling in his gut. "Hey, Rainbow Crash, did you know that if you eat from stronger ponies, you can absorb some of their strength?" The other colt smirked, quickly understanding his friend's intentions. "Well, eat up!"

Rainbow didn't predict the colt's actions as well as his friend did, and thus didn't expect it when a slimy, bitter mass pressed into her mouth and against her tongue. The flavor immediately cut away at her every sense. Tears welled up in her eyes, but she hadn't the strength to fight anymore. She felt the waste slide down her tongue, covering it in vile residue. All the while, the massive log the colt was producing was still attached to his tailhole, and he was still pushing more fresh, warm-hot manure out.

All of the scat settled down into her throat, quickly forming a round lump that stuck to the walls of her esophagus. She would have given anything to spit it out at that point and eat a pound of dirt, but had no choice but to keep it in her throat where eventually her reflexes forced her to swallow the entire serving.

Even after swallowing, however, the fumes of the shit attacked Rainbow's sinuses, keeping her trying to vomit. She held it back, though, knowing that if she did vomit it would just be pushed back down her gullet by the ass blocking her exit. The colt's flank on her face was a problem, too.

After what felt to Rainbow like many hours, the colt cut another thick, heavy gas pocket into her mouth before standing up. As the colt stood, Rainbow noticed a fairly large creature standing at the doorway to her tent. There Gilda stood, watching the entire event go down without a word of protest. The poor, abused filly was about to call out to her gryphon friend when her mouth was filled with a meaty, thick rod. A salty, sweet-yet-sour juice dropped onto her tongue from the tip of the rod, which she quickly recognized as colt-number-one's rock-hard member.

She obviously considered biting down on the stallion's private weak point, but she knew the result would only be further, more cruel treatment. The colt worked his dick deeper into her mouth until he was content with the depth. Rainbow could feel the tip poking against the the back of her throat.

His hooves held on the back of her head to keep her in place, the colt began to urinate directly down Rainbow's throat, causing chokes and gags to come from the violated pegasus. The warm fluid flowed down her throat with little resistance, and came to a stop pretty quickly, to Rainbow's luck.

Soon, he pulled out of Rainbow's mouth and wiped his lubricated stallionhood all over her face, giving it a thin layer of her own saliva and his piss. The first colt turned and looked back at the second. "You wanna use her?" A gleeful smile answered his question. However, when the two colts turned and looked back at the tree where Rainbow dash was pinned, they found that she was nowhere to be found.

"Buck it!" The first colt yelled, galloping in a hurry around the area to search for the filly.

"Her bag is gone, too." The second observed.

Meanwhile, a safe distance away, the rainbow-maned filly sat atop a tree, saddlebag in hoof. She sniffled, shaking her head.

"They raped me..! And she just stood there..!" Rainbow Dash couldn't believe her friend's negligence, despite seeing it with her own eyes. What kind of friend would just stand there and watch as you got forced down and used as a toilet by two bullies? Rainbow could accept pretty easily what had happened to her; those colts were flankholes, and she knew for a fact that she was better than them. But the disloyalty of Gilda didn't sit right in her head.

She lifted her saddlebag up to her face and screamed into it, using it as a pillow to muffle the sound; the last thing she needed at all was the colts to find her again. She wailed for a long time, the moon starting to disappear at the horizon for its place to be taken at the sun.

Rainbow glared at her hooves, running the moment she saw Gilda standing there run through her mind over and over. "I'm never talking to you again.."

--- Present Day ---

Gilda scratched her head with her talon. "I didn't even think you remembered that.. and I thought you got over it! You said you forgave me!"

Rainbow Dash sighed. "Gilda, my best friend stood there and watched me get raped and shat on, and you expect it to be as simple as forgiveness!? Are you that stupid!?"

Gilda looked off to the side, blushing. "No, I hoped you were." The truth was, she had a personal reason for not helping her friend out of the complicated situation. She couldn't deny that watching the attractive mare get forced to eat and drink that young stallion's waste contents got her.. hot. Not with embarrassment, and not with anger, but a heat so much deeper and more pleasant that she found herself frozen when she saw what was going on. Even to that day, she remembered the whole scene.. she made it top priority for a week to memorize every detail she'd witnessed. "Are you gonna let me talk to you or not!?"

Rainbow shook her head stubbornly, and Gilda knew from the look in her eyes that she wouldn't be getting a moment more of her time. An exasperated sigh escaped her lips as she made made her way back toward the door. However, she was surprised when Rainbow Dash flew ahead of her and closed it, locking it.

"What are you doing, dweeb? I thought you wanted me gone?" Gilda questioned, starting to get frustrated at the situation.

"I didn't say that.." Rainbow scuffled her hoof, looking off to the side in a shy, cute manner, as if to distract GIlda. Then, without warning, hooves went flying. The pegasus's stronger-than-the-average-mare collided with Gilda's face twice in quick succession, causing the gryphon to yeild and fall onto her back due to the mix of surprise and pain. Rainbow Dash lept onto her, pinning all of her limbs with surprising strength.

"Let me go..!"

"Not until you went through what I went through." Rainbow spat in Gilda's face, making her cough and sputter. "And a hell of a lot worse." Trying to look back into Rainbow's eyes, Gilda was met with the forehoof again. This time, the collision made her vision fade to black.


Author's Note

The second chapter is going to be much longer than this one. Don't expect it to be out immediately after this one.

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